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Penname: twirl1 [Contact]
Real name: Sucia Dawn
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Summary:

Bella and Edward are "buddies" and while Bella wants more, Edward pulls away every time she tries to make things more official.  Then one evening, she meets a tall, dark, handsome man out in a club, and he promises her everything she always wanted.  Will Bella take it, even if it's not with the person she thought it would be with?  And what will Edward do when his friend is suddenly no longer available?

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 36646
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010


Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Ch 17: Moving Forward

Awesome...a happy ending...

 
Summary:

Jacob comes back just before Bella's wedding, and she is quite excited to see him. When she gets morning sickness on her honeymoon, everyone believes that it's Edward's baby... but Bella isn't so sure.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 3826
[Report This] Published: December 08, 2009 Updated: January 09, 2010


Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Welcome Home

This is a great start..I'm am so loving it right now... hopefully it will continue to be Jake and Bella..but I'm fair game... I can't see why both couldn't be perfect for Bella..I always thought if wrap Jacob and Edward 2gether you definately have the perfect man...LOL :)

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Never Ends

LOL... that was cute and funny... hahaha... great chptr it was really lite...I would assume at some point this situation is going to get really serious..I mean did he really just ask her if she liked it...LOL....that is so Jacob...I am totally taken by surprise with Alice's actions WOW!!!... I can't wait to see where this goes... update soon :) Happy New Year

PS.. Don't hate Jacob he is truely the best character.. you can go in so many different angels with his character.... you just gotta love him...:)

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: It's Simple

Nice!!!!.. Who does Bella think she's fooling... common sense would tell her if she has questions about who she's spending the rest of her life with maybe she wait and figure things out.. Like her feelings for Jacob...I am glad Jacob pushed her away... teasing her is unfair....but wickedly nice... Great chapter by the way... I definately can't wait to see whats up next...:)



Author's Response:

Thanks! :)

 
Another by Wilwaren Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

Bella still suffers from the loss of Edward and she has invented a new method to keep her distant lover close. But she didn't count on two things. One - her plan could cause her to lose her best friend forever. And two - she is starting to realize that maybe he is more than just a friend. Jacob/Bella


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 11347
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2009 Updated: January 09, 2010


Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Plan

Loved it!!!!!

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Date Night

Great chapter.... What in the hell is Bella doing???Has she completely slipped off her rocker... why would she intentionally hurt Jake...(because she thinks Edward would approve of him "Jacob" .,...hahaha.. funny ...I would think Edward would be more approving of Martin completely safe and human... she is so blind to how she feels about Jacob...I hope Jake plays that "I don't give a shit" card...LOL...I don't want to see him hurt... he should back off and let her come to him.. :) Update soon...Totally loving your story...

Happy Holidays

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Falling Out

Awhh..poor Jacob...so sad...my heart goes out to him...Bella needs to get it together..before she looses the best thing standing right in front of her...great chptr...update soon:) Happy New Year

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Moment of Joy

Oh Bella.... what are you doing????..Everything that you could ever want and need is right infront of you..But she's doing everything in an attempt to get Edward to come back... what happens then??? and to pull poor Martin into her delirium.... Wow I can just imagine the anger in Jacob at her confession... pls update soon..ppppllllllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaassssssssee..:)

 
Summary:

During the kiss Bella and Jacob have right before the fight with the newborns, something happens and because of an untold legend, Bella's life is changed forever. No one is prepared for just how much change will come and why.



"It was the last thing I could have ever imagined happening. It was the last thing I thought was possible. Here I had been worried about what I would turn her into; never in all my years would I have ever thought he would turn her into a monster too." ~ Edward


 


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 95916
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2009 Updated: June 23, 2010


Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I totally think Bella is right... and Bella's right again about her and Jakes relationship....they definately need some alone time... I'm curious to see what the Cullens have to say.... I'm totally enjoying the updates...

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Awesome chapter....and the Baseball game with the Cullens... way too cool... it would be nice to see the Cullens and the Wolf Pack play a game of baseball...  can't wait to see what happens next...update soon

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awh how sweet.. great chapter.. can't wait to see how Bella will handle Edward... and what's with Carlisle? Update soon :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No matter how many fics I read...in diffrent AU's or canon I never get passed how sad it makes me when I read about Jacob getting hurt during the Battle with the newborns... even knowing he's gonna heal..that point of the story always crushes my heart knowing the turn of events that will follow after... At least here it seems that the outcome maybe slightly different where Bella is concerned...but we shall see.. Great Beginning.. looking forward to reading more...:) 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I had to add that part in because I wanted to keep it a little bit like SMs version at the beginning.

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Great chapter.... I'm curious to find out how Bella is going to deal with everything... I love Charlie is this story.. you captured his character totally.. Update soon... :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

GREAT CHAPTER!!!! I am so glad to see that Bella is trying to deal with her sudden change of feelings for Jacob and Edward...:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wow.. I am curious to see where you're taking this story.. here I'm thinking Jacob imprinted Bella..but it looks like its the other way around.. interesting and very different storyline.. I am intrigued..:)



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'm glad you are liking it. =)

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Whoa... maybe because of the imprinting her and Jacob are kinda sharing his heightened sense.. by him being alpha... hummm...update soon :)

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow..this is so very interesting and original...so Bella is a shewolf.... I can't wait to see what happens when the Cullens find out..and how is she going to explain this to Charlie.... and wow she imprinted on Jacob...and she has alot of control...I can't wait to read more...update soon ...:)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you like it!

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 (angelicwish)

Wow..so Bella's got to phase....even though Jacob can't he should still be able to be there to talk her through it.. I can't wait to see how it goes... I love the reasoning that was provided for the reason why she is a shewolf now... I am curious to see how long it will last..and what the happen between Bella and Edward..since she is destined to be with Jake now... I love it!!!! update soon....:)



Author's Response:

Lol. Thank you!

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Bella was able to escape...but now they have to figure out a way to rescue Edward....update soon... awesome chapter

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

OH MAN... did Bella just have a vision... I totally cracked up at Charlie in this chapter...but truly it is understandable.... update soon...looking forward to the next chapter...



Author's Response:

It wasn't really a vision so much as her brain putting the pieces together. Kind of like the way she dreamt about Jacob in New Moon when she remembered what he was. Something she should have known, but she never really thought about. That's sort of what I was going for, something like that anyways.

 

Thank you for the review!

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bella's first patrol went off without a hitch...lol....update soon



Author's Response:

Will do. =)

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

OMG...who is at the window??? update soon

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Gold star for Charlie.... awesome chapter...



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Oh man.... who's there...update update update....very suspenseful

 
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Go head Bella...I totally understand her reasoning for wanting to save Edward...but she has to understand she's part of the pack now....and they have to work as a team.... looking forward to the next update...

 




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