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Penname: twirl1 [ Contact]
Real name: Sucia Dawn
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Member Since: August 03, 2009
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Summary: 
Jacob stopped Bella from jumping off the cliff in New Moon and Edward never returned.
After 22 years, the Cullens move to Seattle for yet another fresh start and Edward winds up with yet another surprising lab partner... Bella's daughter.
She's so like her mother and yet so different. Is it possible to love both a memory and its reincarnate?
And does Bella's daughter have a few secrets of her own?
*Rated for language, sexuality and awesomeness.
SM owns Twilight but check me out if you're into sex and sarcasm.
Sloppy wet kisses to Kris (aka Mkystich) for the new banner!
Categories: AU Characters: Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 86339
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2011
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: November 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Cherry
You took the words right out of my mouth in your chapter end notes... hahaha... And again she has been thrown... I thk Emma is gonna get enough of this being tossed.... Wow Edward was completely suckered into that....GO EMMA!!!!... update soon... Author's Response: lol thank you, i can only hope that people get my sense of humor (bc a lot of them dont haha). emma is... extraordinarily benevolent with edward, but i cant say the same for her response to other characters. you'll understand what i mean next chapter ;)
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Bella's Bed
Who he just made love to!!!!..OMG.. this can not be good... I wonder what was Emma thinking while he was pounding into her with such intensity...she had to be thinking something just not directing it at Edward.. she has to know something was completely off with him... I think all those feelings he had for Bella just beat the crap out of him and he didn't even get to throw a punch... He should have left when he got to Charlie's... big mistake... With Emma being at Charlies in Bella's old room.. what happens if she finds that loose floor board with all the stuff Edward hid from Bella when he left.. the shit is about to hit the fan... I can see it coming... Great chapter.... looking forward to the next one... wow.. So tell me are you going to let Jake find out about all this or save him for the inevitable heart break? Author's Response: you know, i thought about keeping jake out of this entirely. it creates another loose end to tie up before the story concludes, but SO many people have been asking about him, anticipating his response ect, and i might have had a stroke of genius the other day in regards to him so im gonna try to work that out. stay tuned.
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: November 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Stir the pot
Oh wow..I love Emma's go get it attitude (Get um girl) LOL ....with Bella, Edward was in charge but Emma is like uhuh..I'm in control of this... and I love the personality that she is bringing out of Edward....I think Emma truely has Edwards number..... great chapter :) Still trying to figure out why Emma is so completely free with Edward...its something their, but hidden in plain sight....Update soon... Author's Response: its on the way! thanks so much for loving emma, she loves you too :)
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: I'll huff and I'll puff and I'll blow your house down.
OMG... why does it seem like Jacob has some kind of insite into the type of company his daughter has been keeping...I love Mom Bella...Wow I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.. How is Emma gonna deal, what is Edward gonna think.. the upcoming meet and greet is bound to happen... wow... so exciting.. update soon.... Author's Response: ask and you shall receive. its updated. now go read and review :)
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Durability
Wow...FABULOUS!!!!! chapter.... LOVED IT!!!!.. Ok so why did Bella not put Jakes azz on the couch for his litte rampage of snide comments...OMG he did NOT call her an IDIOT!!!! WTF????? I was reading chanting to myself slap him Bella...slap the shit out of him!!!!! She went all off on Emma and said not even a peep to Jake about his verbal abuse...I was offended for her....aaahhhh..LOL.. Look at me all emotionally charged because of your story.... that can only mean one thing...YOU ARE AN AWESOME WRITER!!!!!!! Okay so let me digress on Jacob and Bella... I love the way the Emma has completed embraced her wolf form and is completely excited about it.... and how her first thought is to charge up Rosalie...hahaha... Wow how is Edward gonna deal with this change..I wonder if she will smell differently to him??? In any case Edward has no idea what he is about to be dealing with.. a horny teenage girl that is completely (unbreakable)....let me just say " Now that's how u level the playing field!!!!" LOL.. Update soon.....:) pleeeeeaaaasseee..
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: October 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chemistry
OMG...I am completely caught by your story... I'm snagged...and completely loving it...can't wait for an update... Author's Response: I'm so glad! I've really been working hard on it, and it makes me so happy that people are responding to it. I bought a new computer chair today so that I'd spend more time working on my original novel... but I have the sneaking suspicion it will only encourage fanfic :)
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: November 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: The taming of the shrew
OMG..this story is getting better and better..I love it!!!! I love the character you have created in Emma.. fantastic... is all I gotta say... Emma flows very well into the Cullen family... perfectly....wow...I was almost fearful that Rose was gonna slip up.. I know eventually Emma's gotta find out about Edwards past... she has been completely surprising so far in her reactions so thats a positive....I can't wait to read how she deals with that paradox... Update soon... Author's Response: thank you so very much. i was worried about the story losing steam, but im glad that you think its getting better :) ive got a TON more stuff on the way, so thanks for sticking with me and of course for reviewing.
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Birthdays and Boundaries
Oh..WOW..I am so caught up in your story.. this is the first story that I have come across that is totally unique.. It has a life all its own..I love it.. u have me very curious to see what will happen next. I wonder when will Jacob and Bella find out?????....yes I know I am pushing far ahead..but that just goes to show you that.. the story line and plot is not lacking at all... I completely love the character you have created in Emma.. omg she is such a cross between Jake and Bella its amazing..I love how you gave her some of both of their personalities.. but making her a character all her own..love it.. Update soon.. I'm on the edge of my seat!!!!! Author's Response: your review made my day! im working really hard on the story and feedback like this keeps me going. im just waiting for chapter 4 to be validated by my beta, it will be up soon. thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: If music be the food of love, play on.
Oh I see now...Jake used to hold Bella's hand as a show of affection.. so it makes perfect sence for Emma to carry some of the same attributes of both parents.. How totally fantastic... Clearly Emma is completely taken away by Edward...but her ability to not it show on her face no less that is "priceless".. Why is it that Edward can hear some of her internal thinking and not others???...(hummm).. Also I am so glad that Edward is finding himself liking Emma for herself and not just as a link to Bella.. that would just be cold!!! Can't wait to see the progression of their friendship...I wonder also if Emma have the whole wolf thing going on??? (hummmm)..this chptr definately opened the door for lots of questions...Update soon!!!! Author's Response: youre touching on SO many important things in this review, and i promise, all will be revealed in time. im working on ch 13 right now and by that point, a lot of your questions have already been answered. youre very bright! good work picking up on some of my foreshadowing. ch 5 is on the way, waiting to be validated.
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: November 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Blurry
Oh wow... Edward... careful ... soon as u start blurring those lines...its hard to reverse...hahaha.. Is he really gonna be able to resist...Emma is just perfect.. will Edward find himself in the same position as it did with Bella leaving to protect her.. crap if that is the case.. this could keep going in circles..generation after generation... but that wouldn't be fair..Edward deserves to find love... Update soon... Author's Response: i think edward is going to get exactly what he deserves ;)
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: November 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Floored.
Hahahahaha...lol..that is just too too too funny... Great chptr "“Oh, honey… did you think you were passing for human?" this has got to be the best line in this entire chapter.... I honestly cracked up laughing..(loudly)LOL... Wow so I'm taking that Emma knew..but when did she realize it??? Dang and how Edward just gonna throw her like that???? I am so loving how Emma, she is so determined and extremely bold and not afraid to speak her mind... Edward has totally met his match... still trying to figure out why that is....I have some assumptions but I will wait for the next chapter... This is going to be pretty hard for me waiting..:) I can't wait to see what Edward has to say about this new found information and how perceptive/intuitive Emma is... update really soon...pleeeeaaaasssseee... Author's Response: ok ok ok its in the queue, and i promise almost all of your questions will be answered in the next chapter. thanks for reading and reviewing, it makes me happy and it inspires me for sure... i wouldnt do it just for me, but with you guys waiting on it, it really lights a fire under my ass to write.
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Lemon
Hahahahaha...lol...that last sentence was too funny....Great chapter...completely loved it.....OMG.. what is gonna happen now? They have had unprotected sex... whoa this can't be good....is she gonna end up prgnt? Of course you can't say...but wow....Is her parents gonna find out the real deal...what is Bella gonna think and Jacob...I can not wait for the next chapter...update soon :) PLEASE!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: thanks love! NO BABIES i will tell you that straight up. update's in the queue of course.
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Too Dirrrty To Clean My Act Up
OMG....she should have taken a small pinch off of Rosalie..but her phasing in front of her was more then enough to do the trick... update soon... :) Author's Response: haha i know, i considered it but i dont think thatd go over well with rose. the next chaps pretty decent, i think youll like it.
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: All the King's Horses and All the King's Men
Awesome chapter.... Emma went straight at Tanya...Rite Rite!!!.. and then still had some left for Edward....hahaha....lol... bet he dropped that leg...hahahaha...awesome...I loved the way Emmet paraphrased the whole situation...lol...you had me cracking up OMG...I can't believe he is going to tell Emma that it was Bella...I can't wait for the next chptr :) Author's Response: i love that youre laughing at my stuff, it makes me so happy. the next chaps on the way!
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: December 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Bait and Switch
OH my DAMN!!!! totally didn't see that coming.....WOW....I am completely out of words... you can not possibly update quick enough for me.... again WOW!!!! :) Author's Response: thank you thank you! i worked pretty hard on this one, im glad you like it.
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Recipe for Disaster
OMG....... wow...I can not wait for the next chapter... I can only imagine what is going through Bella's mind....waiting impatiently for the next update..:)
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Once Bitten, Twice Shy
OMG....wow I almost expected her to be terribly mean and filled with rage..but she held a very calm facade... GO BELLA!!! even though she's coming apart on the inside...this chapter was written brilliantly.. I love Momma Bella... {you have every right to protect your young by any means necessary} I so can't wait for the upcoming conversation between her and the Cullens...AAAAHHH I CAN'T WAIT ..I so hope Bella tells Jacob... Is she going too???? Update soon :)
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: January 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Evolve... O
I don't know if I should be pissed with Bella or heart broken for Bella...but I am glad that she won't be apart of hurting her daughter..but all this time with Jacob and he is still not enough for her... that is just I don't know.... my face is on the floor....there is always first loves that you will never forget but at some point you remember that love and you bestow that love onto the one that took you as you were flaws and all unconditionally...I am looking forward to the next chptr.. update soon :)
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed 
Date: February 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Discovery Channel
OH WOW... Great chapter!!!! I can't wait to find out where the conversation with Jacob and Bella goes. OMG Emma found the stash. Update soon.. I can't wait.... I need more...
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Unchained Melody
WTF...OMG..YOU CAN NOT LEAVE IT RIGHT THERE....WOW...WOW... when did this happen... between the confrontation with Jacob, Bella and Edward screwing and Emma walking in on it..... I can not believe this... OMG...please don't wait too long to update...please!!!!!!
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: April 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Humanity
DAMN!!!!!! I am so loving Emma....and appreciate how she is sympathetic towards Bella...but Bella has to shoulder the consequences of her actions....
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: July 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 23: You Can't Go Home Again.
OMG... that served Bella just right....to put everything she has in jeopardy to try and capture what was in the past is very selfish...ignoring everything...here daughters feelings...and her husbands... wow...goodness you can't update this soon enough for me.....
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: July 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Ten Things I Hate About You
Oh I so don't want her to just sleep with some random guy...but then it would serve Edward right....ugh....kinda on the fence with this one....but of course the likely hood Edward would even let it happen...yeah not likely...update soon... awesome chapter
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: August 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Full Moon
OMG....no u just did NOT....leave it there...I am going out of my mind right now...and this fool that has Emma...dang it...I need an update soon...
Summary: 
"Don't forget me, Bella. I can't forget you."
"Jake."
Why couldn't she say that she wanted me?
I wished she'd say something other than just my name.
I needed to hear her tell me that she wanted me.
I wanted to hear her tell me that she loved me. Just once.
Even if it was only in a dream. Even if it'd never really mean anything.
I didn't want to be a wolf. I didn't want to imprint.
I just wanted to be Jacob, and I wanted Bella Swan to be mine.
The edges of my dream began to blur.
Everything felt so indistinct, the quality of Bella,
of my feelings and her touch, going bland and unimpressive.
Even in my dream world, I couldn't touch her.
I couldn't be with her.
"Jacob," Bella called my name.
"I love you." It was Renesmee's voice.
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Driven away from his home by the sight of a wedding invitation,
Jacob Black has fled far from the boundaries of La Push to the sandy beaches of Florida—miles away from Bella Swan and the pain of his past. Cutting himself off from his old life, Jacob has become a new man, and he has also, consequently, lost the ability to phase.
Regardless of his own sacrifices, Jacob has found peace and a new life
outside of Bella, and spends his days carelessly free in the heat of the sun.
That is until a new and unusual presence stirs up the ghosts of his past and reawakens something inside of Jacob that he had hoped would lie dormant forever:
Love.
Icon Created by: ms_ambrosia
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Jacob
Challenges: Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 34 Completed: No
Word count: 105279
[Report This] Published: October 08, 2009 Updated: April 05, 2010
Reviewer: twirl1 Signed
Date: March 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: I Died For You Once
WOW... totally didn't see that coming.... I am completely awe struck...mouth agape :O...lol... fab chapter... I can't wait to see what happens next....this is so uniquely riviting...
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