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After her parents are killed in a plane crash, a young girl is rejected again & again by foster families for being too old. She wishes on a star nightly, but will she find what she seeks? Will the Cullens be that family?
NC-17 for later chapters. Warning" Violence, and sexual aggresion may be part of this story.
Winning Summary:
"I wish I may, I wish I might, have the wish I make tonight." With that one hope Isabella Swan faces life as best as she can. The tragedy of her parents' death, leaves her alone in a system where her age leaves her undesirable for adoption. That is until one day two people come into her life offering her a chance at hope. The Cullen family takes to Bella like a long lost sister. What happens when Bella is taken from the Cullens by a lost relative? Will Bella's hopes be destroyed? What happens when fate steps in years later to reunite Bella with the one's she loved and who loved her so long ago?
Bella knew what she would say, "Don't you want to be my sister?"

Thanks to Mrs C for the above Banner and my beta readergoof for the below Banner!
Thanks to Sleforever for below banner!

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 40 Completed: No
Word count: 137752
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2011
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: September 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Halloween
Oh my. I was starting to wonder when the evil James would show up, and in true fashion he made his presence known. Lets have him beaten to a pulp soon!!
I love the girls' plans for Tanya, especially when they kept switching the spaghetti so Edward thought she was crazy.
Keep up the great writing, and please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: October 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 24: The End's Beginning
What a great chapter. I think you got Bella spot on in blaming herself for what happened. Edward is a massive idiot! I can't believe he still hasn't trusted his family, but I guess he always does think he's right no matter what.
Please get Tanya out of the picture soon.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: December 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: We Agree
Nice to have you back. Poor Bella is tying herself up in knots trying to figure Edward out. Love the idea of them all heading off to France.
Summary: 
What if Bella’s thoughts on the plane flying back to Seattle from Italy take her in a different direction from the plot in New Moon? Just where could a little twist of fate take the characters? An indepth look at Bella's thoughts and feeling at the end of New Moon and into an AU Eclipse.
Canon couples, and rated NC17 just to be safe. I am Bella and Edward all the way, so if you like Bella and Jacob, then I am afraid this is not the story for you.
Dying By Degrees on discussion forum. http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=19&t=9136
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 106997
[Report This] Published: January 03, 2009 Updated: June 19, 2010
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: June 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
I have missed this story, I'm happy about having a long chapter to feed my addiction.
I loved the notes, espeically Emmett's ones, they had me laughing, in particular at the Winnie the Pooh reference.
Edwards biology gesture was definitely dorky but very him.
A great chapter. The next one soon please!
Summary:  
Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: October 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Poor Edward, he was so mortified at the start of the chapter when Bella caught him. You gotta love his turn of the century attitudes to talking about sex.
Loved the Buffy reference.
Summary:
Edward left Bella, forcing his family to stay away from her. Six years onwards, the Cullens are a mess without Bella and Emmett decides to get away from his angry, angst ridden family and let loose. What he finds in the meanest biker bar in Seatle will send shockwaves through his entire family.
All canon couples!
Categories: New Moon Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Word count: 112765
[Report This] Published: April 07, 2009 Updated: December 04, 2009
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36:Boy Scouts(TB)
You gotta love Miss Congeniality references!
Another good chapter. Looking forward to when the Cullens finally meet the new and improved Izzy
Summary: 

It's been almost 5 years since that terrible day in the woods. Bella and Edward have both struggled with the devestating aftermath of their last conversation. Both have found solice in music, only in ways neither of them could have imagined. Can they find their way back to one another or is there just too much that time will not erase?
Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No
Word count: 119923
[Report This] Published: April 09, 2009 Updated: April 06, 2010
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: January 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14-Emotional Eruption
Talk about emotional whiplash. I really don't know what way to feel about that other than it is an amazing chapter.
Love Chip's role in this chapter, especially threatening Edward.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: January 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18-The Evil Wonder Twins, Gestures and Obligations
Still loving Chip who gives it to Edward straight and doesn't baby him with things he wants to hear.
Had to laugh at Edward lying on the floor, his reaction to Bella waking up and their communication through the floor - it was priceless!
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21-Breakdowns and Revelations
Brilliant!
I loved the hangover breakfast tray for Edward - very ingenious!
Can't wait for the concert. The music just makes everything so much more intense.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: April 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31-Epilogue-Temporary Goodbyes
I'm so sad that Everclear is over - it was one hell of a rollercoaster ride, but I can't wait for the sequel!
Summary: 
Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist. Why did Edward leave Bella? And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?
Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?
THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes
Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed    
Date: August 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - Darkness and Light
Wow... just wow!
I sat up most of the night reading the story and am completely spellbound by it. I'm normally not a fan of all-human fiction but you have definitely changed my opinion.
You have led us all on a rollercoaster of emotions, and I will continue to have faith that you will resolve the story with a happy ending. If you don't I fear that a large crowd of readers with pickforks will be baying for your blood.
Keep up the good work, and please update soon!! Author's Response: Lol! I know the angry mob with torches are on permanent standby! I am so glad you gave my story a chance and have enjoyed it so far! Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: January 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always
Loved the wedding from Emmett's view point - wasn't too slushy like many weddings in other fics! Author's Response: I am so glad you enjoyed it! Emmett wanted to tell the tale and I figured there were a thousand E/B weddings out there if you wanted a really detailed wedding to read. I just wanted the spirit of it to come through.
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Summary: 
Bella Swan applies for the job of PA to the rude, arrogant Hollywood film star Edward Cullen.
Can Bella keep her feelings for her boss in check so she can do her job?
A/H, OOC, luscious and graphic lemons and bad language.
A million and one thank yous to Rachel1313 for the spectacular banner! You are my hero, bb!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 52 Completed: No
Word count: 473901
[Report This] Published: May 26, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2011
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: In the Blink of an Eye
Wow what a perfect moment. How romantic!
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: December 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 25: Playing by the Rules
Love it! Oh Jessica really deserved that.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: December 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: In the Know
You gotta love Seth!
The Whitlock Wednesday embarrassment was brilliant and I loved Jasper's final comment to Bella.
Well written.
Summary: When Edward, the son of the rich, multi-billionaire Carlisle Cullen is kidnapped by terrorists, a secret organization puts Agent Bella Swan on the case. It's her job to go rescue him and take down the terrorist group without becoming to involved. Will this mission be too much for her to handle?

Violence, language, lemons eventually
Thank you to readergoof for my completely amazing banner!!!!!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 47059
[Report This] Published: July 06, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2010
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: July 29, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
Alice and Emmett as your siblings at the same university as you ... scary!
Nice addition of comic elements to lighten the tone.
Good chapter
Summary: 
Bella Swan had big dreams. You know what they say, the bigger they are the harder they fall. When her life takes a sad turn she is forced to do whatever she can just to keep her head above water. Edward Cullen's life is perfect. Well, almost. Perhaps these two can help each other out in an unorthodox way.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 54 Completed: No
Word count: 326924
[Report This] Published: July 07, 2009 Updated: May 24, 2011
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: August 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 37: Advent and Events
woohoo! He was finally honest.
Great writing and thanks for the fast update.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 46: Interlude
Loved the aqdded dash of Riley in my day - he'd make anyone smile with his antics.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: August 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: Dinner Plans
Wow that boy sure knows how to put his foot in his mouth ... a lot!
Another great chapter. Author's Response: Yeah, I should really write him a bottle of ketchup for that foot.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: December 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 43: Plans
Two updates in quick succession - I am feeling very lucky!
So much intrigue. Love the twist with Sam and Kathleen.
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: December 12, 2010
Title: Chapter 44: The Smelly Brown Stuff Meets the Whirling Blades
Ding dong the wicked witch is dead! Well not quite but at least she has been seen for the vile, lying, manipulative woman that she is.
Summary: When Bella's unit is ambushed in the jungle and she is taken captive, an elite team is sent in to save her. As events unfold, Bella finds herself caught in the web of this mysterious team made up of elite, and unique, people. Things become even more interesting when she discovers that the leader of this group is a man she thought had dissapeared forever.

Props to Annamorphos for her awesome banner making skills!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: No
Word count: 124260
[Report This] Published: July 19, 2009 Updated: October 06, 2010
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: January 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Flight to Phoenix
Bella's little scene in the hotel was priceless.
But what does Rosalie want?
Summary: 
Ten years.
Ten years have passed since Edward left Bella that day in the woods. He doesn't know what happened to her. He doesn't know if she's happy. He doesn't know if she's had the life that he intended for her.
Alice has developed a new talent closely related to her precognition, and she finally prevails upon Edward to check up on Bella, for her and Esme's sake if nothing else.
And what they see will destroy the fragile peace that Edward has lived in for the past decade.
(Note: this is most definitely not a Bella/Jacob story. In fact, it is at its heart a Bella/Edward story.)
The rating is for violence and character death, not erotica. If you're looking for erotica... sorry. Wrong place.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Word count: 39016
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: October 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4
Another excellent chapter. You've gotta love a little Emmett POV. What crazy plan is Bella gonna come up with ? Please don't leave us hanging too long!! Author's Response: Lily: This time the craziness isn't Bella's fault - she's taken her promise much too seriously for that.
Velvie: Lily, shut up! Make them wait and see!
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Woohoo it's back! I was worried you have given up on this fic.
Another brilliant chapter, but please don't keep us waiting as long for the next one.
Summary: 
Thanks to TellyTubby101 for the fantastic banner!
What if Bella realized Edward was planning to leave her after the incident at her 18th Birthday party? Could she let his family give up the one place where they could be truly comfortable? Would she be able to disappear to give the Cullens a chance to live normal lives? She has to find the strength to walk away before Edward has a chance to break her heart – something she is certain she would not be able to survive.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 65697
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: June 03, 2010
Reviewer: UnoriginalThoughts Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Invitataion
I'm so glad Bella hasn't just run straight back into Edward's arms and that he has been feeling so dispondent. An unsure of himself Edward is much nicer than cocky Edward.
Keep up the good writing.
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