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Penname: Skittlelili [Contact]
Real name: leslie
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Member Since: July 30, 2009
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Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: Skittlelili Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Quiet: Bella's POV

DO NOT GIVE IT TO EDWARD. You have come so far and I have spent all of my time reading this in hopes of Jacob!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: Skittlelili Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 57: Discovered: Bella's POV

Nonononono!!!!!!! You have to post Jacob's POV. ;-; I love him andandandand YOU CAN'T STOP DAMN IT.

Good job by the way <3



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Skittlelili Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 59: Panic: Bella's POV

Please, oh, please, keep up the amazing work <3 I love this fic and I want you to keep writing it :D



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Skittlelili Signed
Date: September 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 61: Confessions: Bella's POV

i love, love, love you :D



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Fix You by Dahlia Black Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 193]
Summary:

**CURRENTLY ON HIATUS**


Two roads diverged in a wood

And I took the one less traveled by
And that has made all the difference
~
Robert Frost

 

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Devastated by Edward's departure, Bella is left broken and alone in the small town of Forks.  She turns to Jacob Black for friendship and comfort.  Instead of shirking his advances, Bella finds herself wanting more and embarks on a relationship with Jacob.  Will their fledgling relationship be able to withstand the trials of fate?

 

Meanwhile, Edward is tracking Victoria in South America, but he soon discovers that the hunter of one may become the prey of another...

 

When you're broken beyond repair, what will it take to fix you?

 

 

Non canon pairings, twists on existing New Moon events with some surprises along the way.

  

Rated for later chapters.

 

*Nominated for the Indie Twific Awards*

 

Indie

 

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 50748
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: Skittlelili Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Right Where We Left Off

Omgomgomgomg!!!!!!!!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE. I love it <3 One of the first GREATLY AMAZING  fanfics I have read <3 I give you kudos!



Author's Response:

Wooo hooooo :) That was one seriously awesome review :D Thank you thank you thank you! I look forward to hearing more from you in the future!

 
Summary:

After Bella imagines what her life could be like with Jacob, she begins second-guessing her decision to marry Edward. Something clicked during that second kiss with Jacob. Where will this lead for her and Edward? What lies ahead when Bella Swan chooses Fire over Ice?

 

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 25778
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2010 Updated: July 07, 2011


Reviewer: Skittlelili Signed
Date: July 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Announcement

D: I wish your chapters were so much longer :(( Good story though

 
Reviewer: Skittlelili Signed
Date: July 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue: Rebirth

NONONONONONONONONONO!!! Jacob died D: I love Jacob! I cried when I read this D:



Author's Response: I'm sorry!!! I love him too! I honestly didn't have any intention to kill him when I started this. Somehow it just happened. :( thank you for reading though!

 
Reviewer: Skittlelili Signed
Date: July 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue: Rebirth

when is the sequel coming?!?!?!? D:



Author's Response: Soon! I've been busy lately lol. It's only a o/s. Thanks for reading!





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