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Real name: Terry Lee
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Cold Case File by i-was-broken Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Bella is investigating a rash of serial killings in Rochester, NY when Edward Cullen crosses her path and raises her suspicion. Is there more to Edward than meets the eye? Can Bella fight her attraction to a man who might be her suspect?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 52255
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2010 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: July 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Unfulfilled

Uh oh, is the killer leaving a personal message for Bella? ;)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: 9. What's Your Poison?

You are a really good story teller, this is a great detective tale!

 
Summary:

Vampire Edward, having abstained from human blood for so long that he is almost densensitized to it, moves to Seattle as a 1st year pediatric resident. What happens when he foils James' lunch plans by saving Bella, a strangely intriguing human grad student?

Cascade Effect


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, James
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 47256
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2012


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alice

Fast paced reading and really good!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I TRY to keep things moving, although I'm not sure I succeeded in the last chapter (Ch 6).  Ch 7 should be more along the lines of the earlier chapters, however.

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: August 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Seriously

Looking forward to the party! Great story!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Party coming soon :-)

 
Everlasting by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 96]
Summary:

 

If it wasn’t for Victoria, life in Forks would be perfect. But no, the stubborn red-head has to interfere with our lives, again. Talk about the camping experience from hell! 1 crazed newborn+1wolf pup+1vengful nomad+1 protective vampire boyfriend+1 frightened human = blood and death. I never thought it would be my own.

Excerpt from chapter 1: I felt the fist pierce through my chest. I looked down at the bloody appendage stretching from the wound in my chest then my eyes slowly lifted to the ruby red orbs as they beamed down at me. A wicked and ecstatic smile curled her lip.

I gazed across the clearing to the pools of honey, they were traumatized and hurt. I felt the hand retract from my chest and I fell to the ground with a thump. My eyes drifted closed and I vaguely remember the enraged growl and the sound of metal being stretched beyond its limits.

I was dying, soon I would be dead and the red-headed bitch would have succeeded in her revenge and I would never see those loving topaz eyes again.

Thump, thump…thump……thump………

everlasting

A story of having your cake and eating it too.

Starts on chapter 24 of Eclipse. Alternating PoV between Bella and Edward.

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Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34200
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2010 Updated: November 18, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: 4: What Is With My Angel?

This story has definately caught my attention!

Author's Response:

^_^ good, I'm glad it caught your attention. Thank you for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: 5: Eviction

Is Bella Immortal, like if she got shot through the Aorta she wouldn't die? Or, has she just stopped aging, but could still die from other causes?

Author's Response:

^_- you'll find out. I won't leave you hanging. Bella's identity will be learned. Thanks.



Author's Response:

^_- you'll find out. I won't leave you hanging. Bella's identity will be learned. Thanks.

 
Sunset Riders by twiharder2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
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It is six years since the Volturi failed to fight the Cullens on the battlefield at Forks. Existence is sweet and all is well, except... Alice hasn't been feeling well lately. Edward knows Carlisle is very worried and with good reason... because they both know Vampires don't get Sick.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Chelsea, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie, Stefan, Tanya, Vladimir
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 30163
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2010 Updated: January 19, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Goodbyes

Wow, really good! I'm glad Edward is going with her, I think?

Author's Response:

It's the ancient Chinese proverb...how can we tell what's beneficial when we can only see such a small part of the BIG picture...

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Choices

Oh so delicious! Intriguing!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad I could interest you!!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Plan

OMG! Edward will be beside himself!

Author's Response:

You think? LOL!! Thanks for taking your time to review!!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Charades

Well done with a cute ending to boot!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your time and your review!! :)

 
Addicted by lizzylillyrose Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 282]
Summary:

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Her life was uneventful until she met a stunning, mysterious, obsessive man with a monstrous hidden past. What happens when the past catches up with him and throws them both into the unknown?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 262583
[Report This] Published: December 19, 2010 Updated: August 15, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: May 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Drained

Great story! I would rather believe James killed Ms. Krenshaw, not our Edward!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: May 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Glamoured

Edwarrd will be enraged if he finds out! And I sure hope he does! James needs to be torn apart and burned, by Edward. Is Bella an Answag-creature? Sorry about mutilating the spelling!

 
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Date: August 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - Awakening

Very cool!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: August 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Vamarests

That's really different!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Vampire Concerto

Okay, that's quite frightening!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Edward's Bed

That was a great chapter! ;)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Complications

What a wonderful, interesting and dangerous place... inside Edward's head. Can't wait to visit there again!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Encounter

Really good beginning! ;)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Too Hot to Handle

Wow! Super Hot!!!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - The Morning After

She's hooked! ;) Would love to hear EPOV, 'cuz I'm hooked too! :)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Creepy's Desk

Great chapter! But really, what is Edward's problem?!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Attacked

Love naked Edward in Bubbles!!! ;) I think the mysterious texter is Jacob and the new character will either James or Aro, just guessing. Really interesting story! :)

Author's Response:

Hey!

Thanks for taking the time to review the chapters as you read them. It's always interesting to see what people think as they read. 

I have to say, I was so tempted to let Bella have her way with bubbleward, but the poor 'man' was exhausted...we'll find out why in a few chapters time.

The mysterious texter is also the 'new' character. He knows an aweful lot about Edward...

Glad you are enjoying the story.

lizzy

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Cats and Kittens

Really did not like the way Puss'n'Boots was handled. Edward would have empathy with Bella. Otherwise, James? Bring it on!

Author's Response:

But would Edward have empathy with Bella over a cat? He had no emotional attachment to the cat and had practically attacked it the night before. Regardless of how Bella was feeling, he had urgent things he had to attend to that were sparked by the appearance of Puss'n Boots appearing like he did. His thoughts and actions were clouded by what he felt he had to do.

And I can assure you that he doesn't see any animal as a pet or an animal to become attached to...he has a completely different view of them!

James? Bring it on... I think you'll like the next chapter, but get your cushion ready - he's not pleasant...

Cheers

lizzy

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - The Aswangs

This is getting more and more interesting! I hope he didn't kill Mrs. Krenshaw, I feel he didn't.

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: May 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Forgiven

Wow, just wow! Looking forward to Edward's views.

 




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