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Penname: VampyreAngel [Contact]
Real name: Terry Lee
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Member Since: July 30, 2009
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Midwinter by Woodlily Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

On Christmas Eve, 1929, Carlisle, Esme, and Edward contemplate love and loss, and Christmases past. An indulgence to satisfy my obsession with Edward's dark years during the Depression. More vignettes will be added in the future.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2048
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2010 Updated: January 23, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

But Edward never took an innocent, he could read their minds. Does yours? Otherwise a well written and good story beginning!

Author's Response:

That's right; he didn't. But who's to say he didn't contemplate it? Once he gave into temptation and drank human blood, how difficult was it for him to stop, I wonder? How far must the avenging angel fall before he finds his way back home? That's what I love about fanfiction: the possibilities!

Thank you very much for your review. Please keep in touch,

~Woodlily

 

 
Expecting Choices by LisaDawn75 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Bella and Edward are enjoying a day in their meadow when something surprising shows up. One-shot. Set between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.

Warning: Contains some delicate material related to pregnancy. If you are sensitive to this topic, please think twice before reading.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2274
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2011 Updated: January 23, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! That was really good! I'd like to suggest, take out the part about "filling a cavity" and just say "at the dentist" instead. Probably just me, but all I could think of was 'dental pain' instead of cool 'nitrous spin'. ;)

Author's Response:

LOL...I have such a dental phobia, but never thought of that! Good idea! Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

 
Morning by Carson Dyle Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 167]
Summary:

Morning finds Edward and Bella happy to live in each perfect moment. Surrounded by loving family and loyal allies. Their path to a bright future seems clear, but the darkest nights cast the longest shadows. What happens when the past refuses to die?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 246835
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2011 Updated: October 28, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hobbies

You write very well! .Edward and Bella came to life right from the page. Excellent! Please write more, it's a great story! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm still trying to figure out this site, and I noticed that the only character listed in my story is Edward. I'm so glad you noticed Bella's there too! If I could figure out how to add the usual suspects to the list, I would, but my techtardedness makes it a challenge for me to even sign on. Hope you get this reply. 

Carson

 
Oh Bella by ginamr Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Twilight from Edward's point of view.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 20835
[Report This] Published: February 02, 2011 Updated: September 17, 2014


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl

I am in complete agreement with the previous comment from "Saydonee" and really looking forward to more of your story!

 
Summary:

 

Just another day

 

Thanks to Frozensoldier for creating this for me. Absolutely amazing!

 

A little one shot for Valentine's Day.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1393
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2011 Updated: February 12, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Just Another Day (one shot)

Oh, that was wonderful!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it.

 
Summary:

Edward Masen is a rising star, number three leight weight boxing champion and on top of the world. No one knows the reality of his dark past, though. Isabella Swan is the leading reporter at a dead end newspaper in New York. How will Bella react to her first huge story: Edward Masen.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 34377
[Report This] Published: February 18, 2011 Updated: July 28, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: March 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Blood, Sweat and Tears

This sounds like a very good beginning!

 
Soothe Me by Sic Et Non Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Bella Swan has a sore throat. And she’s trapped in a lift. Can the beautiful man she’s stuck with help soothe her pain? One-shot AH AU.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4216
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2011 Updated: March 04, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a cute story! Now I'm ready to hear about Edward and Bella's date. Are you going to write more, it's very good! :)

 
Sacrificial Lamb by MCGT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

 

Summary:  Isabella’s name had been spoken by the great shaman Alissandra.  What happens when she’s been chosen as the virginal sacrifice to save her hamlet from utter destruction?   


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9520
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2011 Updated: April 07, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sacrificial Lamb

That was wonderful, magical!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. I adored writing this story and it means a lot that you enjoyed it.  Thanks!

 
Summary:

Bella goes to the top of the cliff, prepares to jump... and stops herself.  But it is enough to set a series of events in motion that lead to an unexpected visitor and hopefully a happy ending.  This story explores an alternative ending to New Moon.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 11803
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2011 Updated: June 09, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm enjoying your story. Please, let Edward really be back with Bella, don't try to make it into only a dream!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!  Those dreams are pesky things, sometimes they seem so real, sometimes they actually come true!  Don't worry, I won't leave you in the dark for much longer...

 
Rumors by lion-lamb17 Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

This O/S is for Betti, as a thank you gift for the amazing banner she created for my story Addicted to You.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1448
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2011 Updated: April 14, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good, passionate! His running hot and cold so frequently was a little confusing, but it had a nice finish. ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I just saw this, sorry.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
Summary:

When Bella Swan was nine years old, her mother was murdered and her life was irrevocably altered forever. Now that Bella is all grown up, she has joined the FBI, and is determined to bring those who stole her life from her to justice.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 34171
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2011 Updated: August 24, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What a well done and exciting beginning! Looking forward to more! :)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This is a good story, very interesting! This chapter was really enjoyable~ cute, funny and heartwarming! :)

 
Summary:

Carlisle's family members get in touch with their human sides when they take jobs.  My predictons on how the illustrious Cullen family would fare in the work force.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU, Crackfic Characters: Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5429
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2011 Updated: April 03, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Now that was cute and funny, I really enjoyed it! Edward and Alice were the best! ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks, VampyreAngel---for the review AND the stars. :)  I'm so happy you enjoyed the story, particularly Edward and Alice.  It was great fun to write, and I have to admit, I probably laughed the hardest through the Edward part.

 

-LiLa

 
Summary:

Don’t go into the woods . . . That is the simple rule in Forks and all obey. No one questions it, no one challenges it. No one goes into the woods. Except, I have . . .


There’s a lot of secrets in Forks and Bella Swan is about to stumble into the biggest one, altering her life and all those around her.  


 


IYGITWT Banner


 Huge shout out to Najo for all the help with my first proper banner!


 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emily, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Paul, Quil, Rosalie, Sam, Seth, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 42682
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2011 Updated: November 05, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - There's Lots Of Conflict Ahead

I think Edward placed her ribbon there so that she would Not go back into the woods. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Hmm, we'll have to see, who knows what could happen, lol. Thank you for the read and the review! Chapter Three will be up in a couple of days so here’s a little teaser:  I paused. Right on the tree line I stopped. This time was serious, this time I was deliberately going into the woods, deliberately going against my word to my father.

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1 - You'll Never Believe Your Eyes

This is a really interesting and well done story!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - There's Something About You

I hope you had a wonderful vacation and are ready to give us lots of updates! ;)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: May 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - You Should Go In Disguise

I love this story! Mystery and Suspense! ;)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: August 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1 - You'll Never Believe Your Eyes

I love this story, please update soon!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue/Chapter 1 - You'll Never Believe Your Eyes

Please, Please update! Even a little note to let us know you haven't given up, please! It's been almost a year! Love this story!!!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - This Is the Day

Ok, I'm hooked! I sure hope you are as excited to share their meeting of each other, with us as we are to read about it! Update soon please? :)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - What your Eyes Tell You

You have me falling in love with Edward all over again!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - With My Words

I love how they are speaking with each other now!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - I Do Discover

I'm greedy, I want longer chapters! More, more, more! Just as I relax into the story, it's done and the interminable waiting begins again for the next chapter. Really ruins the mood! ~ This is a great story!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - There's Something About You

Yes, I really like this! Love the reveal/discovery of Edward by Bella... Soon to come?

 
Planet Twilight by melanieintn Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

On a far distant planet, Bella and Edward find love. A true love in a modern society that steps back into the recesses of time, where dominant males seek out submissive females to complete their households.

No vampires, but plenty of aliens. This story includes:

Edward/Bella, Carlisle/Esme, Jasper/Alice, Emmett/Rosalie, Marcus/Didyme and the majority of characters that are involved in the original series.

AU, in-cannon, lemons, E/B, A/J, R/E, C/E

 

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Didyme, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 4122
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2011 Updated: April 22, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The New Age Begins

Very different! I'm curious as to how you are going to handle this story. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks, I hope you enjoy it!  Thanks for the review!

 




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