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Penname: VampyreAngel [Contact]
Real name: Terry Lee
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Member Since: July 30, 2009
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Cold Case File by i-was-broken Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

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Bella is investigating a rash of serial killings in Rochester, NY when Edward Cullen crosses her path and raises her suspicion. Is there more to Edward than meets the eye? Can Bella fight her attraction to a man who might be her suspect?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 52255
[Report This] Published: September 08, 2010 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: July 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Unfulfilled

Uh oh, is the killer leaving a personal message for Bella? ;)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: 9. What's Your Poison?

You are a really good story teller, this is a great detective tale!

 
Summary:

Vampire Edward, having abstained from human blood for so long that he is almost densensitized to it, moves to Seattle as a 1st year pediatric resident. What happens when he foils James' lunch plans by saving Bella, a strangely intriguing human grad student?

Cascade Effect


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, James
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 47256
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2012


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Alice

Fast paced reading and really good!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I TRY to keep things moving, although I'm not sure I succeeded in the last chapter (Ch 6).  Ch 7 should be more along the lines of the earlier chapters, however.

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: August 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Seriously

Looking forward to the party! Great story!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  Party coming soon :-)

 
Everlasting by SirenSongx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary:

 

If it wasn’t for Victoria, life in Forks would be perfect. But no, the stubborn red-head has to interfere with our lives, again. Talk about the camping experience from hell! 1 crazed newborn+1wolf pup+1vengful nomad+1 protective vampire boyfriend+1 frightened human = blood and death. I never thought it would be my own.

Excerpt from chapter 1: I felt the fist pierce through my chest. I looked down at the bloody appendage stretching from the wound in my chest then my eyes slowly lifted to the ruby red orbs as they beamed down at me. A wicked and ecstatic smile curled her lip.

I gazed across the clearing to the pools of honey, they were traumatized and hurt. I felt the hand retract from my chest and I fell to the ground with a thump. My eyes drifted closed and I vaguely remember the enraged growl and the sound of metal being stretched beyond its limits.

I was dying, soon I would be dead and the red-headed bitch would have succeeded in her revenge and I would never see those loving topaz eyes again.

Thump, thump…thump……thump………

everlasting

A story of having your cake and eating it too.

Starts on chapter 24 of Eclipse. Alternating PoV between Bella and Edward.

everlastingButton made by MsRason for winning the Guess that Banner contest on TwiNetwork.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34200
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2010 Updated: November 18, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: 4: What Is With My Angel?

This story has definately caught my attention!

Author's Response:

^_^ good, I'm glad it caught your attention. Thank you for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: 5: Eviction

Is Bella Immortal, like if she got shot through the Aorta she wouldn't die? Or, has she just stopped aging, but could still die from other causes?

Author's Response:

^_- you'll find out. I won't leave you hanging. Bella's identity will be learned. Thanks.



Author's Response:

^_- you'll find out. I won't leave you hanging. Bella's identity will be learned. Thanks.

 
Sunset Riders by twiharder2 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 56]
Summary:

 

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It is six years since the Volturi failed to fight the Cullens on the battlefield at Forks. Existence is sweet and all is well, except... Alice hasn't been feeling well lately. Edward knows Carlisle is very worried and with good reason... because they both know Vampires don't get Sick.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Chelsea, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie, Stefan, Tanya, Vladimir
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 30163
[Report This] Published: December 01, 2010 Updated: January 19, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Goodbyes

Wow, really good! I'm glad Edward is going with her, I think?

Author's Response:

It's the ancient Chinese proverb...how can we tell what's beneficial when we can only see such a small part of the BIG picture...

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Choices

Oh so delicious! Intriguing!

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm so glad I could interest you!!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Plan

OMG! Edward will be beside himself!

Author's Response:

You think? LOL!! Thanks for taking your time to review!!

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Charades

Well done with a cute ending to boot!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your time and your review!! :)

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen. He's a gorgeous, football playing, hottie, but has a massive ego. Then there's Bella Swan. The gorgeous, yet incredibly shy girl, with low self-esteem. Will opposites attract, or will things go up in flames?


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 810
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2010 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: January 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sitting and Waiting

Sounds good! ;)

 
Midwinter by Woodlily Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

On Christmas Eve, 1929, Carlisle, Esme, and Edward contemplate love and loss, and Christmases past. An indulgence to satisfy my obsession with Edward's dark years during the Depression. More vignettes will be added in the future.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2048
[Report This] Published: December 27, 2010 Updated: January 22, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

But Edward never took an innocent, he could read their minds. Does yours? Otherwise a well written and good story beginning!

Author's Response:

That's right; he didn't. But who's to say he didn't contemplate it? Once he gave into temptation and drank human blood, how difficult was it for him to stop, I wonder? How far must the avenging angel fall before he finds his way back home? That's what I love about fanfiction: the possibilities!

Thank you very much for your review. Please keep in touch,

~Woodlily

 

 
Summary:

Bella and Edward take a wild walk through the woods. Continuation of the 'Bella, your number was up the first time I met you' deleted scene on the Twilight DVD.

Originally written for Smut Mondays.

Thank you to the gorgeous FrozenSoldier for the lovely banner that she made me.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4041
[Report This] Published: December 31, 2010 Updated: January 05, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Want A Taste?

Aw, so frisky and so very cute! Well done!

 
Expecting Choices by LisaDawn75 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Bella and Edward are enjoying a day in their meadow when something surprising shows up. One-shot. Set between Eclipse and Breaking Dawn.

Warning: Contains some delicate material related to pregnancy. If you are sensitive to this topic, please think twice before reading.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2274
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2011 Updated: January 23, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: January 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! That was really good! I'd like to suggest, take out the part about "filling a cavity" and just say "at the dentist" instead. Probably just me, but all I could think of was 'dental pain' instead of cool 'nitrous spin'. ;)

Author's Response:

LOL...I have such a dental phobia, but never thought of that! Good idea! Thanks so much for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

 
Morning by Carson Dyle Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 166]
Summary:

Morning finds Edward and Bella happy to live in each perfect moment. Surrounded by loving family and loyal allies. Their path to a bright future seems clear, but the darkest nights cast the longest shadows. What happens when the past refuses to die?


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 246835
[Report This] Published: January 23, 2011 Updated: October 27, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Hobbies

You write very well! .Edward and Bella came to life right from the page. Excellent! Please write more, it's a great story! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm still trying to figure out this site, and I noticed that the only character listed in my story is Edward. I'm so glad you noticed Bella's there too! If I could figure out how to add the usual suspects to the list, I would, but my techtardedness makes it a challenge for me to even sign on. Hope you get this reply. 

Carson

 
Oh Bella by ginamr New! Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Twilight from Edward's point of view.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 18450
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2011 Updated: July 24, 2014


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The New Girl

I am in complete agreement with the previous comment from "Saydonee" and really looking forward to more of your story!

 
Summary:

 

Just another day

 

Thanks to Frozensoldier for creating this for me. Absolutely amazing!

 

A little one shot for Valentine's Day.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1393
[Report This] Published: February 12, 2011 Updated: February 12, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: February 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Just Another Day (one shot)

Oh, that was wonderful!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed it.

 
Summary:

Edward Masen is a rising star, number three leight weight boxing champion and on top of the world. No one knows the reality of his dark past, though. Isabella Swan is the leading reporter at a dead end newspaper in New York. How will Bella react to her first huge story: Edward Masen.


Categories: Twilight Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 34377
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2011 Updated: July 27, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: March 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Blood, Sweat and Tears

This sounds like a very good beginning!

 
Soothe Me by Sic Et Non Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Bella Swan has a sore throat. And she’s trapped in a lift. Can the beautiful man she’s stuck with help soothe her pain? One-shot AH AU.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4216
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2011 Updated: March 04, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What a cute story! Now I'm ready to hear about Edward and Bella's date. Are you going to write more, it's very good! :)

 
Sacrificial Lamb by MCGT Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

 

Summary:  Isabella’s name had been spoken by the great shaman Alissandra.  What happens when she’s been chosen as the virginal sacrifice to save her hamlet from utter destruction?   


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Esme
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9520
[Report This] Published: March 22, 2011 Updated: April 06, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sacrificial Lamb

That was wonderful, magical!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. I adored writing this story and it means a lot that you enjoyed it.  Thanks!

 
Summary:

Bella goes to the top of the cliff, prepares to jump... and stops herself.  But it is enough to set a series of events in motion that lead to an unexpected visitor and hopefully a happy ending.  This story explores an alternative ending to New Moon.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 11803
[Report This] Published: March 25, 2011 Updated: June 08, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm enjoying your story. Please, let Edward really be back with Bella, don't try to make it into only a dream!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story!  Those dreams are pesky things, sometimes they seem so real, sometimes they actually come true!  Don't worry, I won't leave you in the dark for much longer...

 
Rumors by lion-lamb17 Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

This O/S is for Betti, as a thank you gift for the amazing banner she created for my story Addicted to You.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1448
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2011 Updated: April 14, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good, passionate! His running hot and cold so frequently was a little confusing, but it had a nice finish. ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. I just saw this, sorry.

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

 
Summary:

When Bella Swan was nine years old, her mother was murdered and her life was irrevocably altered forever. Now that Bella is all grown up, she has joined the FBI, and is determined to bring those who stole her life from her to justice.


Categories: AU Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 34171
[Report This] Published: March 26, 2011 Updated: August 23, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: April 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

What a well done and exciting beginning! Looking forward to more! :)

 
Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

This is a good story, very interesting! This chapter was really enjoyable~ cute, funny and heartwarming! :)

 
Summary:

Carlisle's family members get in touch with their human sides when they take jobs.  My predictons on how the illustrious Cullen family would fare in the work force.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, AU, Crackfic Characters: Carlisle
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5429
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2011 Updated: April 03, 2011


Reviewer: VampyreAngel Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Now that was cute and funny, I really enjoyed it! Edward and Alice were the best! ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks, VampyreAngel---for the review AND the stars. :)  I'm so happy you enjoyed the story, particularly Edward and Alice.  It was great fun to write, and I have to admit, I probably laughed the hardest through the Edward part.

 

-LiLa

 




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