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Penname: I_CULLEN_80 [ Contact]
Real name: Tara
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Member Since: December 02, 2008
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Summary:
While trying to survive office politics and prove that she has what it takes to be successful at her new consulting job, Bella can’t help but be drawn to her gorgeous bronze-haired manager. Just when she starts to think he may also see her as something other than a co-worker, Bella is accused of a serious crime. Will her new friends stand by her when she proclaims her innocence? But what if Bella is not innocent…
FYI: THERE IS A DETAILED RECAP OF THE FIRST 15 CHAPTERS AT THE BEGINNING OF CHAPTER 16 (FOR THOSE OF YOU WHO STARTED THIS STORY BEFORE MY UNPLANNED HIATUS). YOU CAN EXPECT REGULAR UPDATES GOING FORWARD.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, James, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 57805
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2008 Updated: March 08, 2010
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: March 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: When It All Falls Apart
I think that they should stake out the mailbox and see who is the person that is checking the mail there because I am sure that it is registered to Bella but since she had no clue about the mailbox it probally isn't hers. Also I think that they should see if anyone knows a description of the person that opened up the account I bet they don't fit her description. Also maybe they can track which computer this was done on and see if it was any but Bella's at her desk. I think that James or Lauren is behind this. James was the only one that was around when she came up with her password for the system. I think that a bank should require workers to change their passwords every month. I work for Kroger and we have to change our passwords that access the computer systems and the texlon guns that change prices and order product every month it is kind of a pain in the ass but at least I know that noone is doing things on my numbers.
Summary:  "Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."
A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.
Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!
Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639
Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: November 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28
Ok I would have to kill Nikki if I were her!! She is suspose to be a friend and that is not what true friends do to each other. Author's Response: As the writer, I cringe when I write the Nikki stuff! I really do. Thanks for reading and leaving a review! It means so much to know what readers think of each chapter! Thank you!!!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: October 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 ~Part One~
wow that was a great chapter! I am so exctied ad can't believe that November is almost here!!!!
Summary: All his life, Edward has been hiding a secret that nobody outside his family and girlfriend knows. It mentally tortures him, but he refuses to acknowledge that it is really there. When the mental images come to face him again in reality, how will he handle it? Does everyone deserve a second chance in life?
All Human, Canon Pairings. Underage drinking/drug use/sex. Language. Violence.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 50001
[Report This] Published: December 26, 2008 Updated: May 14, 2009
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: March 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Sharp Object?
Wow now I am starting to get worried for Edward.. Is he ever going to get back to the people that love him? I hope so because I wouldn't want to be caughyt up in all that stuff for very long either.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: March 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Silence
ok so he excapes just to be arrested? well at least he is free from them for now. It was too easy so I am thinking that we haven't seen the last of James,Victoria and Elizabeth.
Summary: 
(beautiful moving picture thingy of awesomeness by the one and only Icelandgirl812!)
It's been nine long years since Graduation and everyone has drifted apart. When it's decided to spend two weeks together again, getting to know their friends and old flames again, complications ensue, and everything that caused them all to drift apart is thrown back in the midst of a fun-filled vacation in Napa, California. AU-Human, ever so slightly OOC, but still a lovely, lemony story :D
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 60430
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2009 Updated: March 10, 2010
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: April 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Difference in Love
Wow he sure has alot of family!! I don't know if I will be able to keep up with all that! But I love this story and want to know what is bothering Edward so I can't wait till the update! Author's Response: Well, darling, I'll be nice, and offer you the extra for this chapter... I usually don't offer them to individual people, but since you said it was confusing, this will help. the extra for this chapter is an outline of each of Edward's family members, key traits about them, ages, spouses, kids, and all that fun stuff. It will help you keep everyone straight. Sound good, yeah?
In the future,feel free to ask for any extras I offer if you think they'll give you insight. I mention them in my authors notes. So far we have an EPOV excerpt from the prequel of this story telling his side of the stroy when they hooked up nine years beforehand, we have a Lauren character study (wondering why she acts the way she does? That'll tell you), and a MikePOV of him seeking help to set up his proposal to Jessica, and him being frightened of Alice. Lol? But I'll send you number 4 later tonight, dear ^.^
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: April 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: All In the Family
Man I think Edward just let his brother go so that Bella didn't see what he was going to do to him!! I think that I would have to kill him though. I thought that it was Edward though and then thought that he gave in too easily and then screamed that it was anthony! Author's Response: Lol, anthony will definitely have battle scars the next time we see him... Edward just didn't want to do anything violent in front of Bella. He seriously considered kicking him when he was bending down to pick up his clothes though... A nice crack into his ribs until he was on the floor, and then three more fluid kicks into his stomach, and then maybe he'd stomp on his face and then-- okay, enough information there. Edward has a vivid (and quick) imagination haha
I'm glad that you have such an enthusistic response to this story and this chapter... I tuough people would hate me for it XD
thanks for reading and reviewing, hon!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: September 09, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: The Silver Lining
I am so glad that another chapter got put up of this story. I was about to give up hope that I would ever get to see the end of this story!! Author's Response: no! Don't give up hope! this story WILL be completed, it just takes a hell of a long time between periods for me to A) finish chapters B) be able to come to the library to post them and C) decide which fic of mine to work on.... you know? I have thirty-freaking-one stories in different processes of completion on my laptop right now? Aren't you glad that I focus on only about ten of them that I work on frequently and put the rest o the back burner? Lol....
So I'm sorry it takes so long for chapters, but know that I'll always complete what I start, even if it takes a while.
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Much Love!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Fireworks and Bangs
Maybe it is a good thing that they just got cockblocked! Author's Response: It is! thanks for thinking so, too! If Nessie had arrived later.... even, like, FIVE HOURS LATER, she would have seen more of her sister than she'd have liked. I personally thinkk she has great timing ha ha ha
Summary: Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?
Thanks to heatherdawnc for her amazing banner work.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010
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Date: December 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Now that she has to go back she gets to see Alice!! While the reason for her visit is a terrible one at least she has someone to talk to when she gets there and be there for her. Author's Response: I love, love the Cullen family. I loved reading about them almost as much as the Bella and Edward relationship. So there will be a lot of not just Alice but all of them, paricularly Emmett he is my fav he cracks me up. Thanks for reviewing.
Summary: Scarred by events in her past, Bella relies heavily on her best friend and roommate, Jasper. When Jasper falls in love with a girl named Alice, Bella is excited for him but can’t help but wonder – where will she fit in? Her answer partially arrives in the form of Alice's older brother, Edward, but as their friendship grows, Bella comes to realize that she may be too broken to give Edward everything he needs. Canon pairings, AH/AU
This contains explicit content, elements which may be offensive to some, and dark themes. It is intended for a mature audience.
Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No
Word count: 256064
[Report This] Published: February 21, 2009 Updated: March 09, 2010
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: February 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Meeting Alice
I like this story but I am confused as to what could have happened to Bella that would cause her to have nightmares like that. Hopefully we will get to see that soon! Author's Response: I'm afraid it's not overly soon, but clues will be dropped along the way :)
Summary: Bella and Edward are reunited after breaking up five years ago. Can Bella move beyond the pain he caused her to accept him into her life again or is the past too painful to overcome.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 64200
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: April 29, 2010
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Mistakes
Poor Bella. I don't know what happened in their relationship but I am sure that is was messy they always are.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: A Visit with Charlie (VJGM)
Wow!!! I think that visit went really well!! I can't believe that the first time after they have gotten back together Edward asks charlie for permission to marry Bella. I thought that the gun would have been brought out right then and there.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 19: Meeting the Family
Oh now that they have met with Edward's parents there is one meeting left and that would be Charlie!! I can't wait to see how that goes. I am glad that Bella got Edward to shut up so that she could tell him that she loved him.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Lunch
Um....... I am kinna surprised that Edward walked out of Emmett's house without a blackeye. I am glad that he stood up to Emmett that shows him that he is willing to fight for her and willling to take all of his shit that is going to be thrown his way to be with her.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: The Next Morning
I think that they are going to be late to meet Emmett for lunch. I wonder if it is just going to be Emmett or if it is going to be the whole gang.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: I Want Forever
Well that date didn't go like I thought that it would. I thought that she would have waited a while but I guess that was too much for her to stand.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Take a Chance on Me (VJGM)
Ok How could he not like Phantom of the Opera!! I love that I I actually got to see it when it was in town!! My mom got us awesome seats for my birthday! Best Birthday present ever. I am glad that they seem to be going along well with mixing some of their past in with the present.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Please Let Me Go
Ok so we now know what happened and that really sucks! I can't believe that he would just not tell her about Tanya! that is stupid and did he really think that it wouldn't affect her badly when he did. But what James did was even worse he told her bits and pieces of his conversation with Edward and didn't even look remorseful when he saw the look of shock in her eyes. So now we know how they got to be working at the same place because I was wondering about that one too.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 -
That is a good step that he wants to say he is sorry to Charlie. Even thought I know that Bella is right and he would probally be there waiting for Edward with a shotgun. Oh and lets not forget that he is probally going to want his chance to say sorry to Emmett and that might be kinna funny to see.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: The Moment My Life Began
I am glad that we are getting to know what happened in the past even though it wasn't a whole lot every little bit helps.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: You Can Pretend
Wow that was exactly what they both needed to get out. They needed to tell each other what they were feeling and to be listened to. I am glad that they both got that out but now where do they go?
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Going Through the Motions
OK now that I know what is going on that is really sad. While I don't really blame Edward he really should have talked to Bella and told her the truth and not lead her to believe that everything was ok between them. He knew that he was breaking her heart but he really didn't do anything to stop it.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Hope
He should have to work hard to get her back. He broke her heart in little pieces and then stomped on them. While I am glad that Edward thinks that he has gotten a victory there I really think that it isn't one yet. She is still avoiding him at all cost and to at least get her to talk to him at work would be a victory. I am glad that Bella is staying strong and not giving into what her subconcious is saying.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Coming Clean
I am glad that her friends are there for her no matter what. Bella needs that right now because she is going through a very difficult time and I have a feeling that it is going to get worse for her before it gets better.
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