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Penname: I_CULLEN_80 [ Contact]
Real name: Tara
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Summary:  
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During her freshman year, Bella Swan's mother forces her to join the Forks High band. Instead of the torture Bella was expecting, she actually meets the five people who will become the best friends of her life. But amid the flirting, jokes, and pranks, something unexpected happens to Bella. She finds herself unable to escape one devastating mistake and fears her life is over forever...at the age of fifteen. AU/AH.
One is not free to make mistakes in a small town like Forks. The tiniest misstep, the smallest indiscretion is fair game for the gossip mill for years. And the mistake I had made was certainly not a small one. I would never be able to escape the shadow of what I had done; and worst of all, absolutely everyone knew about it.
There will be no teen pregnancy or illegal drug use in this story. Anything else that could realistically happen in a high school setting is a possibility.
Finalist for Best Secondary Characterization and Best Action or Drama Story:
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes
Word count: 177490
[Report This] Published: November 09, 2009 Updated: August 20, 2010
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: June 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Journey of Self-Destruction
Um.... wow I can't believe that Bella actually told him what she was thinking I thought that she would only talk about things like that with Edward.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: June 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 - Flirting with Disaster
I really hope that Edward doesn't listen to Heidi or Jane and listens to what Bella has to say first.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: June 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 - You'll Be My Downfall
I am not going to say that I liked what happened in this chapter but I am understanding what she is doing. Bella is doing what her mind is telling her because she thinks that she is too messed up to be with Edward but being with someone else is easy.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: June 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 - Hangovers and Hang Ups
This chapter was hard to read but I am thinking not as hard as the next one is going to be because now she has to go and break Edward's heart. I really hope that she isn't going to do something that is going to hurt her more than she is right now but I think that she is.
Summary:
The lovely blinkie thanks to Jaime Arkin
 
What do you protect, your family, your career, your heart?
Edward Cullen and Bella Swan were never more than simple acquaintances in high school. Besides some common classes, the same lunch period, and walking on the same stage during graduation, Edward and Bella never crossed each other’s paths.
How deeply rooted are the demons from their past? Will loving each other be enough to bring them out of the suffocation? It all starts with a reunion…
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129592
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2009 Updated: March 05, 2011
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27: Destiny
I really thought that Edward would have gone after Bella I am shocked that he didn't. I wonder what he was thinking when he didn't.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Gone
I didn't think that she would leave over that but I guess that I was wrong. I really hope that they got through this and one or possibly both of them will ofpen up their eyes and see that they need each other.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Resolve
It is good that Edward came to Rose and Emmett's wedding even if he missed the ceremony. I really hope that he puts himself out there especially if he wants her back.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Blissful Reunion
Well I guess that things are going to get interesting!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Obligations and Pleasant Conversations
That is terrible that she went to this and didn't even have someone to lean on. I didn't go to my high school reunion but in my defense thanks to Facebook I talk to those who I want to. And I guess that we all felt that way because most of the people that I still talk to didn't go either LOL...
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: World: 1, Bella: 0
Poor Bella it seems that the more she wants to get away from him the more that he keeps popping up.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Labels
That was a really sad story that Rose has endured and I think that Emmett might just be the person to get her to finally tell her family what happened and start the healing process between her and her family.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Running
Well I really want to know what Edward's problem is because he really doesn't know what Bella's thoughts are and I think that he should give her the benefit of the doubt here.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Going Down Swinging
Oh man I wonder what Ailce is going to do to Edward when they see each other. Is she going to help him or hurt him for what he has done to Bella.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Putting Up Walls
So Bella is going to play hard to get. I really hope that she lets Edward in because she deserves to be happy. Author's Response: thanks for your reviews! I hope you are enjoying the fic!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Giving In
I wonder what Jasper and Alice are going to since Edward and Bella are busy for the night. Where did Emmett go? I thought that he was coming too.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Woman that is Marie Masen
I wondered if he was going to let Bella know that he knew about the books that she has written.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Life Routine
Oh the things that they could do in a hospital. Oh and Emmett if finally coming!!
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Hospital Adventures
Well I guess that they are going to meet Emmett now! I wonder what Edward is thinking...
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Introductions
So Emmett isn't getting on Edward's good side anytime soon for the comments that he is making about his sister.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: The Old and the New
I am not sure how that is going to go but it may help Bella with what seems to be bothering her and haunting her.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Confession
That is his big secret I really hope that Bella listens to what he says and doesn't just run.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Behind the Green Eyes
It makes sense how he is so different from how he use to be in High School. It is a good thing that Jane came into his life and I think that she would be happy that he is getting a second chance at a happy life.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Officially Official
How are Esme and Carlisle going to help them find Renee? Did they know her and where she went off to? I really hope that Renee doesn't smash Bella's heart into little pieces.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Demons
I really hope that if things don't go well with Renee that Esme will help Bella pick up the pieces because she is such a caring soul.
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Homeward Bound
Oh man I really hope that it isn't time for her to say goodbye to Charlie because I don't think that she is ready for it. Not that anyone is ever ready to say goodbye to someone that they love.
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