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Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2242]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 - At the Rink

I think that they are all going to get along alright.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 - Family Barbeque

Things seem to be going great for all of them and I think that Edward and Bella battleing against getting to know each other is just going to backfire on them.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Far From Home

Well he really isn't making friends with Bella like that. I wonder what kind of fight they are going to get into when Edward goes knocking on her door wanting a place to crash.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 - Far From Normal

Well I think that they are moving at the pace that they need to. I can't believe that Bella gave up her dream interview for him that must say something about the both of them.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 - Going Home

Well that was interesting wasn't it? I thought that they were going to be caught right there with all of them except Esme and Carlisle... I wonder how long they are going to be able to keep that secret.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10 - Late Night Activities

HaHa she should have rememberd that she could see Alice and Jasper's apartment from hers so it makes sense that Alice could see Bella's. I wonder what Alice is going to do with her new found information on them.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 - Confessions

Well she didn't expect that!! I really hope that Angela is joking and she isn't going to do a story on Tanya.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 - Drama

Wow I thought that they were going to get into a fight! It is terrible that Bella is still sick after drinking the night before.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 - Rivalry

It is good that Bella got to blackmail Tanya right out of their lives. It is terrible that Edward got hurt but hopefully he will be back soon.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14 - Recovery?

I think that Bella is right to think about what is going to happen when her job is done. I just hope that she can get Edward to open up an talk about it.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15 - Planning

It is sad that it is going to be the elephant in the room until someone brings it up and they talk about it. I really  hope that it comes soon.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 - Almost Time

Edward needs to talk to her and tell her what is bothering him before it eats him alive and he snaps.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Wedding Day

It is sad that Rosealie's family did that and made Bella feel out of place. they are just jealous that Rose didn't include them in the wedding party.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 - Christmas Surprise (v)

Well I guess Emmett called that one. I think that everyone is glad that Bella's parents didn't walk in on them but it is just as bad that they were in the living room and heard everything.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 - Morning

How cute are they now that they have told each other that they love the other. It is good to see them finally getting use to talking about the future that they want so badly together.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 - Back on the Ice (V)

It is good that Bella has girlfriends that she can talk to about her and Edward's relationship and that they understand what she is going through because they are right there with her.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 - A Night to Remember (V)

Well I think that Tanya better run because Alice and Rosealie and probally even Edward and the rest of them will be out for blood now. I wonder what Bella is going to do aobut her relationship with Edward now that she has to answer to people above Angela.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 - A Disaster of a Night (V)

I wonder how long Bella is going to be in the dark about James. I hope that Edward and Rose can come up with a solution to that problem.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28 - Playoff Hockey

Well at least Edward got an awnser to his question now it is just a waiting game for him. I wonder if he is going to be able to wait til then...

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 29 - Old Enemy, New Battle (V)

Well I guess that Edward and Bella are going to be outed by her! I am glad that Bella decided to do something before any of the Cullen's could be hurt.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 30 - Nothing Left to Hide (V)

Well at least she gets to finish the articles and that is thanks to Esme. Who wants to kiss her right now for that.

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 31 - A Center Ice Finale (V)

Awww.... That was so sweet!! Edward and the team finally got what they wanted and Edward and Bella are going to be together!!!!

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: January 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Epilogue (V)

I can't believe that Mr. Denali hired Bella I would have thought that even though Bella was a good reporter I didn't think that he would have done that. I am glad that Bella and Edward are going to get to spend the rest of their lives together.

 
Summary:

This is the sequel to Can’t Let Go. Emmett just opened up Emmett’s Daily Grind, a coffee shop/cereal bar, and Rosalie and Emmett just had their first kid, Emmett Junior aka EmJ. Bella and Edward are now married and are trying to start a family. Original characters carry over, Hal, Coley, Eli.  Humor/Fluff/Lemons

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 113022
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2009 Updated: August 02, 2009


Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: March 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: But Wait! There's MORE!

wow two chapters and two lemons!! You are going to spoil all of us into wanting a lemon in every chapter! I can't believe that they gave away another dog!!! that is funny

 
Reviewer: I_CULLEN_80 Signed
Date: April 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: How Do You Like Them Pineapples?

Ok is he trying to make sure that Bella doesn't tell about him trying to still get to name the baby??? But 7 pineapples on the counter is pretty funny!! you are right you gotta love Emmett!

 




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