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Purgatory by spaniard Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 357]
Summary:

Seven original members of the Olympic Coven, and seven deadly sins. Coincidence? Edward has lived too long to believe in coincidences.

He reluctantly relays the deaths and subsequent turnings of each member of his family to his new bride. Each death represents a deadly sin.

An astounding amount of praise and thanks to MrsC for the beautiful banner!


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 42807
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2008 Updated: June 03, 2009


Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Greed (2)

That chapter was something else. I am absolutely bawling,so well done I guess even though it sounds morbid.*WC68*



Author's Response:

Wow, thank you.  I'm glad to see that you liked greed!  It was most most uncertain tale!

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Lust (1)

I too am guilty of attempting to live in my own little bubble at times so I was hoping, even in the book, that it was a bad beating only and not rape though I know it was heavily implied without actually saying it.  Anyway, I totally agree with your end notes and I thought you had a good balance of guiding us through her thought process without giving too many details of the actual event (or memories) which I was grateful for.*WC68*



Author's Response:

Geez, now I really feel guilty of being incredibly morbid.  I didn't once doubt that it had been rape.  In fact, my mind jumped straight there.  Wow...I'm pretty sick, now that I think about it!  Sorry! 

But I'm so happy that it didn't get too graphic for you.  Rape is a slippery topic to write, and I didn't want to fall into the gratification category.  Thanks for letting me know that it wasn't too tough.

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Lust (2)

I'll be honest, I skipped this chapter after your warning at the beginning so thanks for putting it there and I hope you're not offended.*WC68*



Author's Response:

Not offended at all...that's what the warnings were for!  I'm aware that not all people are as morbid as I am!

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Through the Forest

I've always thought Esme is quite under-represented in the books so I'm looking forward to reading your take on her.*WC68*



Author's Response:

I'll admit, the story that is already set up for her is a hard one.  I hope you thoroughly enjoyed it!  Thank you for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Canto Final: Redemption

Brilliant.  Completely original.*WC68*



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the rush of great reviews.  I always love checking my email and finding a group of reviews.  I hope you find many the hundreds of other stories worth reviewing on this great site!

 
Summary: Bella is a newborn vampire in Volterra with no human memories and an aversion to human blood. Aro decides to send her to live with the Cullens. Will Bella ever uncover her past? will she find what she is missing? What is Aro's master plan? Story came in second place for Best Vampire Bella at the Twilight Awards.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 135619
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: November 11, 2008


Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Plans

You've said a couple of times that Bella isn't as strong as someone,like Edward, but faster but that shouldn't be the case if she's a newborn or is that a part of your AU?*WC68*

 
Summary:

We always want what we can't have, but their love for each other was so much more than just temptation. He was the eager young teacher, Bella's friend and her inspiration in a high school world where she didn't quite fit. She was the bright young woman who took Edward completely by surprise, his saving grace after years of closing himself off from life and love. When their days are turned upside down by their secret relationship, will they find a way to be together?

 

 

Rated for subject matter and sexually explicit material in later chapters. Huge thanks to Anne Cullen for the awesome new banner and to m81170 the beautiful fan art/banner below! You are both amazing!  

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 64999
[Report This] Published: December 04, 2008 Updated: May 07, 2010


Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Glue for Broken Pieces (vjgm)

Awww. Not too much of a cliffie to be left on.  I'm really enjoying the story.  Hope you have a chance to update soon.*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Tears and Fears

Yes!!!  Let's hope that time comes soon!!!*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Together

Brilliant.*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Dangerous Encounters

Oh my god!!! That was such agood twist with the dream thing.  I was in total shocked when they walked in and then it was all good again.  Phew!  Really enjoying the story.*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Changing Perspective

So was the whole thing a set up?  I'm a little confused?  I thought yes but then I didn't think you'd be saying that she knew he was a rapist and then went with him to clubs and recording times as she went along knowing women were getting raped?  Really enjoying.  Wake up Bella!!!*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Early Birthday

I'm always dissapointed when I see 'Completed- No' but the plot was too good to resist and I just finished reading 'Power of Destiny' so I thought I'd give it a go. (No,sorry,I didn't review,I'm in too much of a rush to get onto the next chapter with completed stories but at least you'll get plenty of reviews with this one holding updates to ransom =])  Really enjoying so far,can't wait to read on.*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Boundaries

I love 'Authoritarian Emmett'. =] *WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Killing Me Softly

Very echoey of New Moon. Very good read but I'm looking forward to when it all blows up really.  Masochist I know.*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Words of Wisdom

Haha.  Awesome rant from Alice.*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Pain Killers

I laughed that the Enlgish Language teacher would lower himself to text language. Hah!*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Reconciliation

What a coinci-dink.  Seattle on the same weekend. =] I love how fiction is such a small world.*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: A Month of Solitude (VJGM)

Nice bit of bribery there.  =]  Good thing there was a catch up at the beginning because I think I would have forgotten everything; 6 months is it?  Right, guilt fest over, brilliant as always and definately looking forward to some normal interaction in the next chapter.  Outake please?*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed
Date: November 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: A Month of Solitude (VJGM)

Please update!*WC68*

 
Daybreak by Missa Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 555]
Summary:

Bella Swan's been a vampire for around a century, and has been with the Cullens since the 1920s. When the Cullen family moves to the sleepy town of Forks, WA, she finds quite a few things she never expected, including a human boy that turns her world on its side.

 

rating for later chapters (non-explicit sex and violence)


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 96333
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2008 Updated: May 12, 2009


Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I would definetly read any sequel you've got planned. Excellent story.*WC68*

 
The List by Laura Cullen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13655]
Summary:

Four weeks before her wedding to Edward, Bella is frustrated. She knows there's little-to-no chance of getting him to bend his rules and boundaries now, but there's no harm in fantasizing about what could happen later. So she begins compiling a list of things that she and Edward can do together once they're happily married. She's surprised to find she might be able to cross some things off earlier than she thought...

Story contains mature themes and is not intended for younger readers.

Thanks to Mandi, aka m81170, for the great banner!


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 187877
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2010


Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Frustrated

The reasoning was so good in the AN I had to review so I guuess it served its purpose =]  Really good so far.  Im just wondering whether Edward will indulge her at all or whether...uh...it will be all her?  Let's read on. *WC68*

 
Another Day Dawns by Panda1499 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 865]
Summary:

Seventy-five years is a long time if you're human.  For an immortal its a drop in the bucket!

It is seventy-five years after Renesmee was born, and the Cullen family is moving back to Forks.  How do they react to being "home"?  And what do they do when yet another once in a lifetime (or rather existence) event occurs?  And how do the Volturi take to this development?

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Marcus, Nessie, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 75236
[Report This] Published: January 20, 2009 Updated: August 12, 2009


Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-The Bet

How come she can have lessons with Bella and Edward when they're in different grades but not Jake? Loving how this is going so far.*WC68*

 
Summary: Feature

Seeking to escape a dangerous memory from her past, Bella moves to Forks her junior year with every intention of getting a fresh start.  With a little self-assurance and a whole lot of attitude, she shakes things up at Forks High without even intending to.  When a mysterious new student turns her world upside down, will Bella have the strength to resist him, or is she destined to repeat her old mistakes?  Will he be able to save her when the past catches up with her?

Rated NC-17 for criminally hot cars, graphic sex, and language...

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 82359
[Report This] Published: March 15, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2009


Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Mistakes

Hahaha. That's inventive enough that you HAVE to leave a review anyway.lol. What a prig Edwards being. I'm too eager to read at the moment to leave a review after all chapters but I will try to go back and comment when I've got to the end.*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Bitch is Back

I loved Alice and Bella's little back and forth in Trig. Hah. Sporks.*WC68*

 
Reviewer: welshcakes68 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Breakable

I loved how Edward has been compared to a lion and Bella a lamb. Not likely to be a coincidence.=]*WC68*

 




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