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Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 56: Overwrought: Jacob's POV

Damn. That was so hot! Poor Jacob definately needs a cold shower, and so do I...  ;*



Author's Response:

LOL! Thank you!

 
Summary:

 

This takes place in New Moon toward the end of Chapter 16.  Bella has just been saved by Jacob from nearly drowning and he’s taking her home.  Imagine if Bella had the courage to make the choice she was afraid to make. That instead of just thinking of the words she wanted to tell Jacob she actually said them.

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Jacob, Jared, Quil, Sam
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 20855
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: September 09, 2010


Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good first chapter. I'm really liking this. Nice and steamy...

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Yup, very steamy! lol very good

 
Summary:

Edward's phone call during New Moon goes a little bit differently, and Bella finds herself wanting more than just friendship from Jacob. Rated R for language. 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Angela, Bella, Charlie, Embry, Jacob, Jessica, Mike, Quil
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 58186
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2009


Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed starstarstarstar
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Rain drops

That was really awesome and very cute and fluffy.



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you!

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Mop

Hilarious insanity! I love it!

 

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Monk

This has me in fits of giggles...it's adorable   :D

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The line

That was absolutely terrific! I really enjoyed that and I love the way you portray the relationship between them. Nicely done transition from "just friends" to something definately more while keeping it light and funny with the right amount of steam. Hope to see more from you...

 



Author's Response:

woo! Thanks for all the reviews; I really appreciate them! So glad you like the story. More will be in the queue in a few days. Glad you liked the amount of steam... hehe!

 
Fix You by Dahlia Black Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 193]
Summary:

**CURRENTLY ON HIATUS**


Two roads diverged in a wood

And I took the one less traveled by
And that has made all the difference
~
Robert Frost

 

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Devastated by Edward's departure, Bella is left broken and alone in the small town of Forks.  She turns to Jacob Black for friendship and comfort.  Instead of shirking his advances, Bella finds herself wanting more and embarks on a relationship with Jacob.  Will their fledgling relationship be able to withstand the trials of fate?

 

Meanwhile, Edward is tracking Victoria in South America, but he soon discovers that the hunter of one may become the prey of another...

 

When you're broken beyond repair, what will it take to fix you?

 

 

Non canon pairings, twists on existing New Moon events with some surprises along the way.

  

Rated for later chapters.

 

*Nominated for the Indie Twific Awards*

 

Indie

 

 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 50748
[Report This] Published: July 09, 2009 Updated: January 31, 2010


Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: I Caught Myself

Brilliant, beautiful, lovely, perfect... The way it should have been



Author's Response:

Thank you thank you thank you :)

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Near to You

I absolutely love your writing and the easy relationship between Jacob and Bella is perfect. I am a huge fan of them together and your portrayal of their characters is dead on! Awesome job!!!



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled every time JxB fans like more portrayal! Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed
Date: July 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: My Curse

Heart wrenchingly good. So very Edward. Brilliantly descriptive, I was right there in the jungle with him...



Author's Response:

Mmmmmm your review makes me feel warm and fuzzy inside.... Thanks :)

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Right Where We Left Off

AAAHHH!!! You can't leave us hangin' like this! I'm going to have a psychotic episode!! *faints*   (terrific chapter, as always) ;)



Author's Response:

Lol! I love my cliffies :) Thanks for a seriously awesome review! I'll try not to make the endings that painful in the future... (or maybe I'll continue to be evil, who knows :P) <3<3<3

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Right Where We Left Off

AAAHHH!!! You can't leave us hangin' like this! I'm going to have a psychotic episode!! *faints*   (terrific chapter, as always) ;)

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Closer

And the evil cliff hanger award goes to... DAHLIA BLACK *hands over golden trophy of a cliff with a chain of people hanging onto the edge* >:O

Why must you torture us so? Leaving us all in a state of hysteria, my son is threatening to call the white coats on me!!!  :P

Maybe Edward has found somebody to help him step out of the angst zone, although that might really interfere with his plans of serving eternal damnation on earth. poor Edward...

I am sooo ridiculously, madly in love with Jacob, seriously, I need more! I hope you'll be giving us more sexy Jakyness soon, love the way you write him! HURRY please? ;*



Author's Response:

Oh, sweet Gemini, how I adore your reviews!

Lol @ poor Edward's potentially interrupted eternal damnation. It's definitely going to be an angst-ridden struggle for him.

Thanks SO much for the awesome compliment!! I'm also ridiculously in love with Jake. I'm a Switzerland girl myself, but writing this story is definitely tipping the scales in his favor :) 

A little inside scoop, just because I adore you, chapter 6 is Bella and Jake again and it should be up by next weekend ;)

Looking forward to your next review!

xoxo

 
Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Earthquake

Did I mention that your my favorite writer and I love you to itsy bitsy bits?! I passionately love me some Jake!!! Thank you for generously sharing him... I'm gonna miss his gorgeous, sexy hair but I'll take him any way I can get him... (preferably naked)  *wink*



Author's Response:

Have I mentioned that you're my favorite reviewer and I love you also? :)

It was painful to cut Jake's hair, but it had to be done... Hopefully there will be some nakedity in the future to compensate *double wink*

 
Safe Harbor by zaiche Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary:

Bella is devastated. After another heartbreak, after all the tears and loneliness, what her heart needs is a safe harbor...

What she doesn't expect is how wonderful it feels to have what you need and more...

A Bella and Jacob story.

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 27903
[Report This] Published: July 12, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: GeminiSun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: You are not alone

Beautiful, really. What a lucky girl Bella is...Please continue soon



Author's Response:

Thank you! I've already submitted the next chapter, so expect it very soon:)





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