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Hello, I'm a 34 English Teacher / Psychologist. Married, no children however two extreamly spoiled and adored goldenretrievers. Moka and Maya are my babies, both girls around 8 human years both of them.
I live in the city of Puebla in Mexico. It is a colonial city near the volcanoes. I give English lessons to children and adults.
I love reading since I was a little girl I read almost anything within my reach. I enjoy reading historic novels and biographies but adore a good novel and mystery. I would love to write, but I'm not good yet. I begin something and then have no idea how to finish it. So I have tons of little stories and things that go through my head in the computer and notebooks. I hope to one day make something out of all of it.
I got hooked in Fan Fiction thanks to the Twilight series which I loved. I enjoy reviewing stories and try to think my reviews and make them nice.
About my Favorite things.- Reading of course, both in English and Spanish. Favorite Authors, in Spanish, Gabriel García Marquez, Angeles Mastretta, Paulo Cohelo. In English, in no particular order Stephenie Meyer, J.K. Rowling, Michel Crichton, Agatha Christie. These are the ones I can think of now.
I also love cooking and I'm good at it, at least that's what family and friends tell me.
I also enjoy sewing, needle point, cross stich and such.
That's it for now I think. I hope that the authors whose stories I review enjoy them I try to make them good. Since I don't feel I can write a story yet at least I can try and write good reviews.
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Summary:
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Isabella Swan learns that she's been traded like chattle by her own father. She's sent to England and married off to one Edward Cullen, asshole extraordinaire, but there's a reason for his temper problem and Bella's determined to break down his walls.
They told me on my eighteenth birthday, after Jacob had left. They told me that in a month I would be moving away, to live with a man a decade older, and run a household that I had never seen half the world away from home. I was given a blank manila envelope. It contained two pieces of paper; one was a contract, the other was a letter.
Mostly Bella POV, but other POV's are given periodically.
NC-17 for language, violence, and sexual themes in later chapters.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Word count: 19893
[Report This] Published: December 22, 2010 Updated: June 27, 2011
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Bella has arrived in London, and she isn't alone. She was surprised to see her family and friends there.
She met Alice who was very nice and excited about the wedding, Angela was also nice. Sadly the one person who matters the most is the one who seemed less than thrill to meet her. Things might not be as fine as she thought and hoped. Author's Response: Its great to know that my story conveys what I meant it too! Sometimes I'm certin that it's all a garbled mess! :)
Thank you so much! -Krys
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
There are so many things I would love to find out. Yes, the contract, the letter, Alice's thrill with the wedding and Bella. Whomis or was James. Why is Edward so upset about finding Bella atractive. He is putting such a big effort in disliking and staying away from her, why? Will Bella and Edward talk to each other before the wedding? And will they remai. In separate rooms after it?
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Bella and Edward found neutral ground to talk. The kitchen at two in the morning while munching cereal, odd, but a start.
Renee doesn't know about the arrangement? Why and how? Those are the two questions that popped first into my head. How much does Bella know? What about Alice?
I guess it's going to be a rather interesting fitting.
Reviewer: mayams Signed    
Date: February 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
There is going to be a honeymoon? Where and how? The groom has been absent the entire week, the bride isn't exactly thrilled about the marriage, much less the honeymoon I assume.
How did Jasper figure Jake so quickly? He is a very good judge of character it seems. Not much goes unnoticed by him. Something Bella and us need to keep in mind.
Why are they still keeping Renee in the dark? There has to be a good reason, part of it must be related to one of Aro's sentences in the letter. Charlie chose his wife over his daughter. Aro's letter did give us some insight but it also left out information and raises new questions. I am sure they will be answered gradually as the story goes on.
Carlisle disappeared and it seems Edward knows something about it, or at least that's what Esme thinks. She will try to help Bella as much as possible. That will probably make them become closer.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: February 26, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I can't wait for a drunk Bella, she needs it, a lot. Edward is late, I dont't think the bride was too worried, and Alice was worrying enough for everyone involved. Carlisle is alive, but he was taken. Edward is planning something of which he is part or at least knows about it. What will Edward say when he sees the bracelet?
Summary: A boring study session turns into something far more interesting. J/B/E.
Birthday fic written for tuleangel.

Thanks to the lovely Robrator for the banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4479
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2011 Updated: January 06, 2011
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 06, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: The Study Group
They had been here once before and ignored it afterwards. Although all kept thinking about it but weren't brave enough to say anything. What made them go for it again? Who knows, at least this time they are not trying to avoid it, on the contrary, they want to keep what they have.
Summary: 
Millionaire Edward Cullen fell quickly for small town Bella, and their dreamy romance soon led to wedding bells. But their relationship’s foundation is anything but sturdy.
When their new marriage is about to fall apart, Bella inexplicably goes missing. Edward is determined to search for her, but does Bella want to be found?
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A time-jumping romance filled with love, heartache and intrigue. Rated for language and some sexuality.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Word count: 44664
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2011 Updated: May 13, 2012
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: November 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25
Realizing Bella's current situation wasn't planned, worries me. Her captor seems lost, confussed, worried by his actions. But it doesn't seem he is planning on changing things. Bella decides to wait, not that she could do much else, but it will be stressful.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: October 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
Edward has so much guilt from so many things he is having a very difficult time trying to sort through it and figure what to do next. Marcus seems like a nice guy who really wants to help Edward, but is at an even bigger loss as to how.
Then there's Bella. Her heart is broken, shattered. She feels lost, unable to go back to the life she was leading. But clueless as to how to pick up the pieces and move on. Small, slow steps, that's what she decides. However she began by hopping and going at a quick pace, things seemed to be clearing up. Someone saw her, or maybe followed her? Someone who might know who she is. But she doesn't seem to know or recognize him. I think Bella's plans have been changed, and not by her own choice. I am starting to worry about her.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: August 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
It's not so important to ask "why" Edward went into the bar, the key is "what" is he going to do there. He is well aware of how things can turn out according to his answer to the boy behind the bar... I can't decide which will be his decision.
It seems as if Edward never felt truly worth of Bella. So, hurting her by letting her go is for him the reasonable choice. And since Bella had similar feelings... It's heartbreaking to see all the wrong turns and choices, the misunderstandings and the loneliness they both share.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: May 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
So he didn't propose just after the "thing" incident, but he did make up his mind just then. It seems that with things related to her he first reacts, feels and then thinks. I don't mean this as a bad thing, but as a particularity for them. He can't explain his actions, reactions, emotions. They are bigger and stronger than him.
He is also realizing he knows little about the woman he loves. Author's Response: Thanks for your thoughtful review! They're both new to this love thing, so your comment definitely makes sense.
Arabella
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: August 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
It's not working... Three words that shattered Bella's life, hope and dreams. Whatever made Edward say them, whatever his reasons they made Bella feel guilty and responsible for them. And sadly it wasn't the first time she felt that way.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
It takes so much more than love to make a marriage work. Sue is right, a lot of work needs to be put into it. The thing is, if there's just one making the effort, it won't do it. According to Sue, Bella was working hard, very hard, sadly without Edward's participation it didn't do much. She is upset and partially blaming Edward. Edward knows there's truth in that.
Author's Response: Yep, you are very right. I think Edward deserved to have Sue chew him out. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 22, 2012
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
For now all Bella has are dreams and memories. Seeing her so down, scared, affraid and knowing the end isn't near yet, makes it painful. She needs to keep dreaming, to keep remembering. She can fall into dispair...
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 22, 2012
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
Love isn't the problem here, it never has. But love doesn't make everything inl ife work in perfect sincrony, that's part of the problem here. But, it's one thing to addmitt it to yourself, another to have it said by someone else. Then there's that bit of information Bella didn't expect, the one about the heavy drinking... She has time to think about it, will she?
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 05, 2011
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Bella can't say the words to him, unless he is sleeping. She hesitates, she wants to but something is holding back. However, her actions show and prove that love.
He changed her life in such a way and so quickly, she is trying to adapt, even if it isn't always easy. She will do her best, give her biggest effort to make things work, or so it seems so far. What happened?
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
She wouldn't leave Benny!!!! I have to go with Edward and see hope, it's better than the alternative. However, I do understand why Marcus has to go the other side in this one. Sadly that's what Edward needs, even if at the moment it makes him feel worse yet.
He has been scared of being left alone, behind, for a long time. He wasn't afraid or ashamed about telling her about it. She got him, probably because of different circumstances, but she got him. She said it, where would she go?...
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
It's probably been asked already but stilll, if she willingly left, why did Benny stayed behind? To keep Edward company, as a reminder? He seems awfully important to both of them.
Author's Response: Thanks for your reviews! Benny will be in the next chapter. It just needs to be validated.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Edward needs people on his side, not to defend himself to the outside world only, but to stand by him and help him find out what has been going on that he has so clearly missed.
Talking... it's under-rated, over-rated, under-estimated and most of the times simply isn't taken into consideration when it should be one of the most important things. A simple assumption can make things go so good and so bad...
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Both were nervous, unsure and it does seem didn't go out much, so at least the awkwardness is something they both understand and feel. Was this strange start an omen of what was to come next?
Edward feels lost, even in a small and well known place like Forks. He realizes he isn't seen as a victim, he isn't liking it. But he isn't helping his case either....
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: September 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
Worries and regrets, one of things past and the other of things to come, both cause pain, anxiousness, and seldom bring anything good. Bella and Edward have plenty of both. I wonder if it would have been posible to avoid a bit of both...
What about the ring Edward had in the drawer? I assume it's not the one on Bella's hand during her conversation with Rosalie... There's probably a big story behind it. When will we find out more about it? Author's Response: Edward will explain more in the next chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Arabella
Reviewer: mayams Signed    
Date: February 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Sounds very promising and interesting. I liked how it is structured and how you are leaving us wanting to find out more, much more....
I hope you keep writing it and update soon :)
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: February 24, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
He got what he wanted. It wasn't too easy and it took some thinking on his part. He was surprised it didn't work out fast and simple. She is worth it, though.
His idea was a good one, and by being observing her, he knew it would work, and it did. Now, how long until he calls?
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
It isn't odd for Bella to cry. Very different situations can cause tears. Edward is clueless as to what to do just then. He tries to make it better, to stop the tears sometimes. Others, he just opes it will pass. Not the smartest move...
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