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Hello, I'm a 34 English Teacher / Psychologist. Married, no children however two extreamly spoiled and adored goldenretrievers. Moka and Maya are my babies, both girls around 8 human years both of them.


I live in the city of Puebla in Mexico. It is a colonial city near the volcanoes. I give English lessons to children and adults.


I love reading since I was a little girl I read almost anything within my reach. I enjoy reading historic novels and biographies but adore a good novel and mystery. I would love to write, but I'm not good yet. I begin something and then have no idea how to finish it. So I have tons of little stories and things that go through my head in the computer and notebooks. I hope to one day make something out of all of it.


I got hooked in Fan Fiction thanks to the Twilight series which I loved. I enjoy reviewing stories and try to think my reviews and make them nice.


About my Favorite things.- Reading of course, both in English and Spanish. Favorite Authors, in Spanish, Gabriel García Marquez, Angeles Mastretta, Paulo Cohelo. In English, in no particular order Stephenie Meyer, J.K. Rowling, Michel Crichton, Agatha Christie. These are the ones I can think of now.


I also love cooking and I'm good at it, at least that's what family and friends tell me.


I also enjoy sewing, needle point, cross stich and such.


That's it for now I think. I hope that the authors whose stories I review enjoy them I try to make them good. Since I don't feel I can write a story yet at least I can try and write good reviews.


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Reviews by mayams
 
Summary:

Bella is a stripper who meets Edward, a doctor, at the club, Jane's Coterie, after an unfortunate incident. The fates draw them together. Rated NC17 for lemons and violence. FYI, coterie means club or clique. AU/AH/OOC

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 53757
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2010 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Royce is not the nicest guy or boss, but the girls do have Emmett there. He really looks after them and wants to keep them safe. That's being a really nice guy. Bella is keeping Royce calmed, but she wants to be able to be free of any commitment to him. She needs to find out and figure how much she still owes. 

Her day was better than fine, she was happy and enjoyed Edward's company, so much, they are going out and hopefully soon. His text is a good indication.

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

The movie didn't stand a chance!!! What ever is there between them is strong, so strong they didn't have to say much, they just knew that the date wouldn't go as planned over the phone. Neither was against the changes, in fact they probably are more than thankful for them.

Edward has seen Bella's work and likes it. He even considered it worthy of getting it out to sell. Lets hope he is right.

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Edward really thought he didn't do good enough. But he did, Bella told him but he still needs some extra encouragement. Bella is also required to believe more in herself.

It was an amazing night. Okay Tanya would have wanted something else, that's how it is

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I guessed the lines at the beginning of some of the chapters had to do with someone we still don't know about. The one in this one, confirmed it. It seems all the girls are sharing a stalker and one that's a bit out of his mind, but who seems thorough. This isn't good.

Bella and Edward are connecting so great, it's amazing. Jasper was really nice and it seems he will be able to help Bella. Of course Royce has been taking advantage of her, but they have to be careful in how they handle it.

Alice was more than nice and seems to really want to get to know Bella. 

About Victoria, scary, lets hope they find her soon, before someone else goes missing.

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This was unexpected, and i don't think it was an accident. The conditions might lead on to consider it, but it's just too odd. There have been lost of things going on around the club. If it was one or two, they could be ignored, but it's too much too close together. And it's starting to be not only odd, but scary. 

Bella has had a terrible day, most of it. Her encounter during her run. The news about Tanya, having a strange man hanging around the club and now her house? 

One thing that is going around in my head. The stalkier wasn't at the club today, he had no idea Bella would be staying later. He probably guessed she would be home and he planned on taking her in a rather unusual and violent way. 

Poor Bella, all she had has just been crushed. She is alive and well and Edward is right there next to her, but the shock, has to be a lot to handle right now. Who is behind all this?

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Poor Bella, she worked so hard and with such effort to keep the house, just to see it leveled down by a tree and a storm. It might seem as just a house for some, but for Bella it was her haven, her memories, simply a piece of her life. A piece she will have to leave behind. it can't be easy to have to pack your life, and not even all of it, just the parts left. Thankfully she has Edward there to help and support her. She could have done it alone but it would have been too much.

As for Victoria, they found her, sadly and have no clue to what happened. But things are getting weirder at Jane's first with the photoshot, then Victoria goes missing and now Jenks making everyone uncomfortable. Something fishy is going on.

 
Enchante by rpgirl26 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 371]
Summary:

1858- Edward wins a plantation during a poker game and he and his father decide to begin a new life in New Orleans. What happens when Edward is introduced to a peculiar custom and a beautiful girl at a private ball? AH,OOC,mostly canon couples.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 115195
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2010 Updated: May 27, 2011


Reviewer: mayams Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

It was different, yes, but I think it fitted perfectly into the story. This is where Bella and Alice come from, it's part of who they are. I think Edward witnessing it was good. He will have a better knowledge of Bella and of women in general. And perhaps even a bit less dislike for children.

Also seeing him enjoying his work, the labor he is doing is also great. His life had drifted to a not so good path, his father's orders are helping him be the man and gentleman he can be. He just needs to get used to all of it again.



Author's Response:

You've summed it up quite well!

Thanks so much for reading--Chap 19 is in the queue :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Bella held her place when meeting and dinning with the Cullens. Dinner went okay but not as well as it could. Edward has to make tough choices. Choices that will change his life in an extreme form. His and Bella's. He acted cowardly, but that's something he has done before. Lets hope things go as they hope and that Bella understood him.

How long would it take for her to reply and it to come back to Edward. Yes, it's a long time, but I don't imagine she would just not reply or say something to him.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review!

Chapter 22 is ~finally~ in the queue :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: October 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Edward is a lucky man. Bella had plenty of reasons to be upset with him, and even turn him away. However, she admitted she can't leave him. That brought Edward lots of joy, but there are still plenty of things they need to work on.

Sadly the time isn't the right one to do so. Edward has work to do. So he has been doing what he must outside the house. Bella understands, but misses him at the same time. She decided to go see him, even from a distance. All was going fine, until she saw James, and he saw her. His threats, should she ignore them or take them seriously? Tell Edward she was by the shipdocks today? 

All of this might have to wait until we find out what's wrong with Tanya.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading :) You always sum it up so well!

Chap 18 is in the queue and should be posting soon!

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: October 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

It took the singing of not very honorable women to make Edward realize he won't regret doing the honorable thing with Isabella. Lets hope this realization helps him see he needs to put order in his life. And that she will let him back in...



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!

Chap 17 & 18 will be posting soon :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: November 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Edward wasn't very happy sharing Bella's time and attention, especially seeing how much she is wrapped with the babies. He isn't very comfortable with the idea of them, not even if they are his and Bella's. But Bella's tender ways are showing him there are possibilities, even if reality still lurches around. Bella is certain of who she is, and proud of it. She doesn't want to hide, that's commendable. 

Edward's life is taking its pace, he is content with his life. He would love to be able and do certain things differently, but for now it seems impossible.

Who can these people be? Why did they contact him through Emmett?



Author's Response:

Excellent summation as always :)

Chapter 20 is in the queue!

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

They have met, but sadly Edward seems to have lost his chance, and is regretting it now.



Author's Response:

Oh Edward, he just doesn't always know what's good for him, even if it's right in his face :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Bella's situation is not common, she is in a kind of middle ground. It doesn't bother her much, except for the fact of loosing her sister, since her brother is already gone. She doesn't see eye to eye with her mother, and sometimes with Alice, but for peace she goes along with them.

This ball had no interest for her, but plenty for Alice, she found herself in the middle of another predicament, which seemed to have resolved in her about to sign an agreement with a man who thinks similarly to her. This looks interesting.

 



Author's Response:

Bella's a pretty smart girl, though very introverted...she'll get her time to shine away from her family :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This chapter was enlightening. Edward had little clue as to what he had gotten himself into. Jasper gave him a small explanation first but then told him a bit more. Edward was surprised with how much Jasper is into this agreement. 

Meeting Charles Swan was an intimidating task, for both men, more for Edward though. He had to be impressed with Jasper vouching for him. Jasper really wants Alice and that made him do it. Perhaps he believes Edward will stay and do the right thing.

All this experience seemed a bit too much for Edward, he took a huge risk by taking Bella into the other room and with his actions. He is tense and going to look for a way to relax.

How long will they court the girls? Where will they live? I don't think taking Bella to be in the same house as James would be a smart move.



Author's Response:

Putting a pretty girl (or probably any girl) near James is never a good idea...he's just not a nice dude. 

Edward is certainly a risk-taker...he doesn't consider anything too far in the future.

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Excesses are finally catching up to Edward, he wanted to release tension, to relax and feel better. The first part of the time spent there wasn't what he expected or wanted, not at all. The second part... that went better. His body was able to get what it wanted, but he didn't feel as he usually does, something was odd.

He has convinced himself for a long time now, that he wouldn't grow an attachment to anyone, but he seemed to have already began forming one to Bella. How will it go?



Author's Response:

Edward is definitely wary of any kind of attachment, and he prefers not to think in the long-term. He's going to try and fight the attachment to Bella, but she's certainly going to try and force it :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Edward's father isn't too happy with Edward's decision, and he made it known. In return the son wasn't happy with his father's opinion either. They both parted not too pleased with one another. It seems Edward's father doesn't have a very good opinion on women. 

But Jasper and Edward are getting along with each other really well. So much they even got houses close to each other, and I don't think they did that with only the girls in mind.

Edward seems to not be able to control himself with Bella and she is having similar difficulties. 



Author's Response:

Ed Sr sees only one real use for women, on this he & Edward will certainly disagree.

Jasper will be a good friend to Edward. He's more grounded and willing to show emotion, which Edward isn't used to.

ExB together certainly have control issues :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: August 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Uppss..... that was... unexpected, awkward, shocking and yes, funny. Katie was enjoying the sight in front of her. She could have shouted and made a scandal, she preferred to just stare and scare Edward from the room. 

It was a bold move on his part, Bella should have been shocked and asked him to leave, but she was somehow pleased with his boldness. But they will need to find ways to keep a distance now, they are risking things and that's not a good idea.

Emile's story is really sad, she was naive and James took advantage of that. He isn't a good man, and there was reason enough for Jasper and Alice to worry about Bella. Now she will stay as far from him as possible, I guess. Did Jasper tell Edward this story? If not, will he?



Author's Response:

Nope, James is def not a good guy, pretty much completely immoral I would say. Emilie will make an appearance later, and Edward will know the connection.

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

It was a chapter filled with shocks and surprises. First being found by Katie, Edward's quick departure and then... his absence. It surprised everyone, he seemed to have been a man of his word, but Charlie might be doubting that now. Bella felt lost, everything was crumbling right in front of her eyes and there was nothing she could do, so she waited. The party arrived filled with surprises. Not all from Edwrad, some others had their own agendas.

Edward's visit to the plantation was a big surprise. One thing is to have heard about things and another to be confronted by them. Edward has his way of thinking and won't allow things to go against them. He took harsh measures, but they are the correct ones.

What will happen now between Bella and Edward?



Author's Response:

Edward really needed to see what he could become if he let himself...it's a good thing he realized that's not how he wants to be :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Edward is clever, and so lost at the same time. His intentions are good. He wanted to help Seth and Tanya, but the way he expressed himself gave Bella a certain idea, which isn't correct,but Edward has no clue as what she is thinking at the moment.

After such a wonderful and interesting morning. Discovering Bella's naughty side, he is going to be surprised when he gets to their room. What will he find?



Author's Response:

In regards to Bella, he does have good intentions, and he really doesn't want anything bad to happen w/ Tanya & Seth :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: September 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Edward has no clue as to why Bella is so upset. Things look really different to each of them. And unless Bella speaks in English and tells him clearly, I doubt he will realize it. Apparently, that won't be happening soon since Edward has other ideas in his mind and Bella seems to be reacting to him, in the same manner.

Edward met Emmett's wife and found out about her and Emmett, who is a brave man. More than Edward had expected him to be. It seems they might be able to form a nice friendship.



Author's Response:

Emmett will be a very good friend to him :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

All that was needed was an explanation, a clarification of interpretations. After Bella and Edward talked and understood what had happened, it all was fine again. More than fine. They need each other in such ways and manners, I am certain impress them both.

Edward shared part of his past with Bella, a part he isn't too proud of. But his affection for Bella made him be honest, realizing with her, it's the best policy.



Author's Response:

Yes, they really need to keep working on those lines of communication to prevent future issues :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

If Bella wasn't comfortable with the early arriving guest, Edward was even less. He wasn't pleased or happy, but at the time there wasn't much he could have done, at least he was occupied with other things. That helped ease the tension, but didn't get the situation cleared. Edward needed to go out with his father. Bella didn't think much of it, but Alice... she has a special talent which is being placed to use at the moment. What will the consequences be?



Author's Response:

LOL, so annoying when the 'rents show up unexpectedly and ruin a great morning :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: September 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

To say Edward and Jasper were surprised would be an understatement. They must also be impressed with the girls, they  showed them they too can play games. The guys fathers had to not be too pleased with what was going on, but I am certain their opinions don't weight too much.

Edward kept his word and got home in good time. He knew he wouldn't be received with the most welcoming arms, but his reception went rather well. That is until the end, when his actions and thoughts truly seemed to have hurt Bella. Will they discuss it? I think they should.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to review each chapter; it's very much appreciated!

Chapter 16 has finally been submitted for posting, so you should be receiving it soon :)

 

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: December 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

What intrigues me more is that Edward's father, began to be less and less in New Orleans just around the time Edward met his mother. His father rarely comes to town and keeps little contact with his son. 

They did leave Edward alone, hoping time would make him reconsider. Bella tried to make him re-think things, but only to certain point.

They have found balance and rythym in their life. Yes, there are certain things that still need to be done in secrecy but it's okay for them.

Business has been good for Edward, so much he can afford very expensive gifts for Bella. That's good for both of them. Shows Edward is a good and smart man.

They haven't been able to get pregnant, has it been because they have tried to prevent it? Or is there something else?



Author's Response:

They've def found balance & rhythm with time.

No, they haven't been doing anything to prevent it, but I suppose things don't always happen when you want them to!

Thanks so much for reading!

Chapter 21 is in the queue :)

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

This has been a long, nerve-wrecking, excitement filled chapter. And a really good one.

I had been thinking about Emilie. She seemed to be important at the beginning of the story but then she faded away. You had all this planned I am sure. It was good to see her back. What about Angelique and Zafrina? They had to be somehow part of the hidden plans. 

Bella was so sad and feeling so lost, she never considered what was happening to her. In a way it was good, if she had realized it sooner, she would have probably risked a lot more. Emilie in her own unique odd way is a good person. She has been helping Bella and Edward for a long time now. I am glad of her actions in this chapter, especially when James showed up. 

Alice is safe and happy in France, with Jasper and the rest of the family. Bella will always miss her but it's the best thing that could happen to Alice.

So... we only have the epilogue left? We'll be waiting for it. :)

 




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