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Hello, I'm a 34 English Teacher / Psychologist. Married, no children however two extreamly spoiled and adored goldenretrievers. Moka and Maya are my babies, both girls around 8 human years both of them.


I live in the city of Puebla in Mexico. It is a colonial city near the volcanoes. I give English lessons to children and adults.


I love reading since I was a little girl I read almost anything within my reach. I enjoy reading historic novels and biographies but adore a good novel and mystery. I would love to write, but I'm not good yet. I begin something and then have no idea how to finish it. So I have tons of little stories and things that go through my head in the computer and notebooks. I hope to one day make something out of all of it.


I got hooked in Fan Fiction thanks to the Twilight series which I loved. I enjoy reviewing stories and try to think my reviews and make them nice.


About my Favorite things.- Reading of course, both in English and Spanish. Favorite Authors, in Spanish, Gabriel García Marquez, Angeles Mastretta, Paulo Cohelo. In English, in no particular order Stephenie Meyer, J.K. Rowling, Michel Crichton, Agatha Christie. These are the ones I can think of now.


I also love cooking and I'm good at it, at least that's what family and friends tell me.


I also enjoy sewing, needle point, cross stich and such.


That's it for now I think. I hope that the authors whose stories I review enjoy them I try to make them good. Since I don't feel I can write a story yet at least I can try and write good reviews.


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Reviews by mayams
 
Summary:

Bella is the police chief’s perfect daughter.  Edward is the troubled doctor’s son.  When Bella catches her boyfriend cheating on her, she gives in to impulse and hops on the back of Edward’s motorcycle and travels across the country learning about life, love, and how to change a flat tire.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 29559
[Report This] Published: January 05, 2010 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Catch Me

Bella dialed with little clue as to how her conversation with Charlie might go. She had expected him to be angry with her, but not to so openly distrust her and be so blunt in his decisions. Bella wanted to feel supported, trusted, and she wasn't, that's what hurt so much. She thought Charlie would want to try and listen to her.

She is trying to be her own person, to do what she wants not what's expected. It isn't an easy task, but she seems to have enough will to go for it.

 
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Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Untouchable

Carlisle is much more open to discussion and chances than Charlie is. He still spoke his mind and told Edward what he thought, but he supported the decisions Edward and Bella are taking at the moment. He is letting him go, but asking him to come back. Edward will go back, eventually and hopefully with Bella by his side.

They are both stubborn and wanting to do things their way, and it seems neither is too good at compromising, so it will be an interesting journey.

Can't wait to see how the shopping goes and where they go to now...

 
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Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Georgia

They never ended the 20 question game did they? Not that they needed to, the truth came out, rather easier and faster than they ever imagined.

So Edward has liked Bella for four years??? And he is a really sweet guy, he found the way to help Angela and Ben get together. 

And he won't kiss her . . .  yet... Can't wait for it!!!!!!!

 
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Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: To Those I've Left Behind

I loved this chapter. I can imagine Charlie going balistic at the hospital because of what Carlisle said. Of course he wants to see Bella as the victim and Edward as the bad guy, but the truth is, he can't be sure. Take into consideration they are both adults, and the only thing left for Charlie is to scream at someone, Carlisle being the best candidate.

Esme is understanding and loves Edward, she knows he won't do anything he shouldn't and isn't okay with both of them. Still she worries about what may be okay for both, and then she had to of curse  laugh with what Carlisle told her.

As awkward as Carlisle and Edward's conversation was,it's amazing how much trust there is between them to talk and react as they did. And then, Edward texting asking about Bella's wrist, that's adorable. And it let Carlisle know where are they planning to go.

 
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Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Clarification

It was fun to see them fighting like that. They both got angry and defended themselves. Once things began to straighten out, it all went back to their comfortable camaraderie they had been enjoying. Not that both wouldn't want to stir things a bit more ;) Hope they do.

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Oh My My

This was sweet!!!! They found a nice lady willing to help and put them in for the night, with a story from way back not so different to theirs. That had to give both of them hope, and make them see things that hadn't been considered before. 

What did Edward think of Ms. Maddie and her kindness, what did they talk about before Bella woke up?

She didn't judge them, just asked them to follow her rules while under her roof and to be careful. 

It's a new day, it might seem similar to the day before, but something has been set in motion, when will it catch up with them?

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Unwritten

Bella needed someone telling her to take action and the next step. Edward is being too cautious and that is preventing him from really seeing Bella and her feelings. She should take the next step, what better way to show Edward than with actions, right?

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Won't Back Down

Mama Whitlock really over did it this time. Taking his money to buy the costume!!!! She is quite a character, but she is now out of their lives, Jasper and Alice's too. Who would have imagined that being arrested was what would make Jasper react and finally leave his mama?

As for Bella and Edward, she is getting bolder with the innuendos... And Edward is enjoying them and wanting to take them to the next level. Will that happen in Spokane?

 
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Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Love Game

Bella turned out to be quite the temptress!!!! She left Edward speechless and hot, hot, hot. Until certain song began to play. Bella will never feel the same about it, and neither would Edward. 

She is certain they would have gone all the way and without protection. Somehow i think Edward isn't exactly unprepared... Bella needs to bring the subject into conversation soon. 

She broke her wrist! Only Bella can do that, and still be sexy, even if she has no clue about it.

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is an anomaly as far as Bella Swan is concerned, defying all her preconceived notions about the whorishness of hockey players. Through incessant stalking and persistence, can Edward wears down Bella's resistence and teaches her to embrace her inner hockey hooker? A ridiculous love story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
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Series: Always Human
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 14519
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2010 Updated: August 19, 2010


Reviewer: mayams Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-WTF Makes Violence Hot

I was told I should read your story asap, by a very good source and friend, so I did. I'm glad, it's funny, snarky, I love Bella's mind and answers. I love she doesn't care and brings her book to the game, okay, that wasn't the smartest move, but it was her decision to try at least.

As much as Bella and Emmett bicker, they care for each other, in their fighting ways of course. Will he really try to kill Edward now? What will Phil say?

Loved the broccoli eyes!!!!

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Emmett was angry, Bella even more, and Edward had no clue what to do. I do think he did ask her to stay, but she didn't stop to realize it. She was so angry and tipsy she ended up doing what Emmett wanted, not what she wanted. This week-end hasn't gone at all as she thought it would.

Bella wasn't paying attention to her packing, no doubt there, she would have never chosen those pj's. She was certain Edward would never call again, but he did and he even was cute and funny over the phone. Leave it to her to lock herself out of the room. 

So he doesn't seem as such a whore as she thought he was...

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Yes it did happen a lot sooner than it usually does, but I'm not complaining. It was hot and sexy and tender. Edward was always gentle and considerate, asking her about it the entire time. Not at all as she had expected a hockey player to act. They were both enjoying it, a lot it seems. Bella has told us it had been a while, but what about him? 

Will we get to hear from him eventually? It has been a great night, but daylight always catches up with darkness, how will it be?

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Okay, his actions do not seem like those of a hockey wh... he was considerate, thoughtful, tender, sexy, hot and yes extremely big... 

Bella let herself go and enjoyed every second of it. Until she woke up and reality started hitting her hard. So hard it seems she even forgot her glasses in his room. Reality hurts, almost as much as she does, so what now?

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

A guy who was asking so many questions and being so concerned can't be that much of a wh... He, along with most of the team have an image to keep, they might not love it, but that's the way it is. It's sad he has no one he can trust with this, not even Jasper. 

Does Emmett still have feelings for Bella? Or is he just sloppy and never deletes his emails? 

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Edward has been tense, there is good enough reason. Bella has been avoiding his calls and texts, Jasper is suspicious and he is trying to get information about Bella, not to mention the hacking and stalking tendencies.

Bella was already feeling remorse that night, and now with those pictures, no wonder she got drunk on a Sunday afternoon. At least Edward was able to focus on the game and play well, if he hadn't things would have been worse.

I wonder what will happen when the rest of the team sees those pictures?

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Since it seems Edward looks like shit, I can't be sure, but at least some talking will take place. She has a heart and won't close the door on him. And she probably has some kind of a clue as to when everyone will be back home.

So, Edward is still trying and trying hard, sending all kinds of gifts, cards, messages. But when Bella tells him to step back a bit, he does. At least for a while. Why is Bella having such a difficult time accepting Edward might have some interest in her? I hope he is able to make her see it and soon!!!!

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Is it really that necessary and important to keep that image for his teammates? It seems to be. A part of Edward seems to be really into Bella, trying as much as possible to get close to her. To get her to talk to him and give him a chance. But another is always trying to keep up the image of the hockey wh... The two don't mix well and were bound to eventually crash, sadly they did in the worst of times.

Bella had her doubts and questions about him, sadly what she just heard made all her fears and doubts come true. 

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 05, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

She better not bail on him!!!! Or he will seriously consider hiding under her bed and maybe even get Renee's assistance in doing that.

He has in a way lost his mind, he is crazy about her. And the funny thing is no one seems to realize it. He is a good actor, but he is starting to slip. 

And Bella? As upset as she might be with him, she still feels something, not to say a lot for him, she can't deny it, and she needs to figure out what to do about it.

I hope he is able to convince her to at least hear him out.

I do hope Edward finds a way to get back to Ben.

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 07, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

Life on the public eye is very extreme and images count a lot. So Edward went along with it, it was easier and at a time it helped him a lot. And he never imagined it would come and haunt him later. 

Bella is confused, she never imagined to be where she is now with any hockey player, she is doing things she had sworn never to do. Changing your mind so drastically has to be difficult.

At least her boobs are certain and helped the rest of her and Edward.

Can't wait for the date!!!!!

 
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Date: April 07, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

So size matters? It depends on what you're talking about of course. Filling Bella's truck gas tank has to make you want to go smaller ;)

She had no idea how much Edward would have put on the card. I wonder what she'll get next?

Renee was... as expected, making Bella uncomfortable.

I loved Bella's tale of her getting ready for her date, it was hilarious, you are clever and witty. 

The date was more than nice, and it was just half of it. 

Can't wait for next Wednesday!!!!

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11, 2010 Title: The Misapprehension of Bella Swan Regarding the Inferior Intellect of Hockey Whores

This has been one of the best chapters in this story. There haven't been any not good ones, but this one was simply... just too much.

Bella trying to be independent and taking care of herself, while Edward keeps trying to get her to be mature in other ways, while at the same time taking care of her, getting her stuff for her apartment, spending time there, giving her space.

Then the computer incident, that was just one of a kind. I do hope Edward kept his word, hacked back into Emmett's computer and erased the pictures.

Bella realizing she can be grown up while living with Edward. 

Lets not forget Edward's cleverness into getting into the no go area.... 

I can't believe we are that close to the end...

We are going to miss monster c... and the beaver!

 
A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 761]
Summary:

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

Bella returns to Forks, WA to start her life over. Edward is a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for Edward, the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets. LEMONS-- real & imagined Rated-M for a reason AH/OOC.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2417
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2010


Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: February 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Change

Interesting. Bella wants a clean break and a new life and the reason she is giving herself is friends and family. 

Rose said she has an apartment waiting in Seattle? With her and Emmett?

Emmett is a doctor, I like the idea. And what about Edward? 

He is a widow who loves his daughters, and seems to be coping well with life, why would his family plan an intervention? What else do we need to find out?

 

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Bella had made up her mind. She expected James to react as he did and try, something, anything, he was starting to weaken her, but she snapped out of it and left. 

She had a plan and hopes that were suddenly and abruptly shattered with one phone call. She is still moving, but not how she had thought. She is okay with the change, she knows what she needs to do and where she has to be.

As for Edward, his family is worried, and as much as he appreciates their concern, he is still adamant on not following their advice, even if it came from his daughters. However, something tells me no one is really going to give up so easily, so this will get interesting.

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Bella came alone into Forks, but she isn't alone, she has people with her who are in pain just as she is, who will help her through this, along with Alice, who is more than thrilled Bella will be staying in Forks.

So Jacob married Leah, something that has brought them and Bella to be closer now. They are her family.

As for Edward, his stuborness from last chapter is changing, perhaps his family's idea isn't so bad. Angela's mother was clear he has to move on. Can he really?

 
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 22, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

Edward should ask Alice to outline the job requirements, although she is adamant the position goes to Bella, so there wouldn't be much use of it, anyway. 

Alice covered every aspect of the job, including the dog!!! And Bella is interested in it. But it's all up to Edward and Alice who I am sure will find a way to meddle.

it was luck that didn't get Bella and Edward to crash into each other, I think it will be better this way.

 




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