I liked it. Bella and Alice's talk and morning shopping was good. They do need to talk some much more, but they don't seem to be able to yet. They'l have to find the time, between customers and oranges.

Where will this go? Will they get to talk? Bella has certain insecurities and Edward has some too. They are both working adults who are loners. They don't feel good around too many people, lets hope they get to spend time together, get to talk and some more ... would be nice :)

Who to hate? Joseph? Nope, he justs takes care of his boss. Bella? Neither, she simply was born there. Edward? nope, he is in a way a victim of the circumstances. Charlie? quizá, he was about to hit a small child, that, at least in my book, isn't right.

About Bella and Edward's conversation. He is proud, really proud, or too sure that Bella is going to save him. Or he has lost his mind in the beating he got. Those are the only explanations for him to react as he is doing now.

He has had interest in Bella for such a long time, I don't think he ever intended on killing her. She saved him, so he owed her his life. Twice now so, how could he want to kill her? Maybe make her disapear along with him. 

Quien sabe, mean while, it was great. Última ¿en qué estaba bien Joe? What was Joe right about? and Who stayed?

He really meant she is to be left alone. Otherwise she wouldn't have been able to leave her room or even get out of bed unsupervised.

At least her dog is with her, that should give her some peace and a sense of not so much lost.

However who ever has her, really means business and won't mind as her father to use force. He is intelligent, he is using the one thing any man can't let go of, his daughter. Especially in this case were her life had been so well guarded.

The need, the desire for power and control over another person usually involves hurting them, humiliating them. That was Edward's motive behind his actions. It was an awful but strong statement saying clearly he thinks he can rule and control anything and anyone he wants. He likes to play mind games that is how he got Bella to it. But he also uses threats, something that I think diminishes his mindgames, he still hasn't got all the control he wants. He uses anyone he sees can help him get what he wants, no matter the consecuences. He may have felt powerful and Bella's owner with this, but it will come back to hunt him in the future I think.

Yes you chose a hard, difficult topic and many people will not like it, but as you said, we can decide not to read. I am interested in how these two characters will move on after this.

They really are strange people. Marked by their pasts, their stories, their fears and of course their desirees.

Why did he stay away? Why did he arrive late to dinner? And even more why did he agree to all that she asked? That was a surprise. Was he feeling guilty, or not at ease from what happened? He clearly enjoyed it then and now, and so did she. He is silent. He entered the room when she was thinking it wouldn't happen again. They didn't need words, but both knew what the other wanted.

Will Bellar really feel bad with herself tomorow morning? Will they ever talki about all this?

So many questions. This is a twist I didn't think would come to the story and especially at the time it did. It shows us two individuals who even if they come from the same background, they have dealt with it in such different ways and yet have come to stand at the same place and at almost the same time.

Bella is living in a glass house created, it seems, especially for her by Edward, for how long?

"Verde que te quiero verde" of course it had to be something like this that would get in Bella's head. And also Edward had to have it. I don't think he has it for the reference to the color, but none the less, he has the book and the poem. Will Bella go and get the book again? Read the poem? What will she write to her father? As she said, it will be something kind of public, her letter will be read at least by Edward.

It's interesting that in a way Bella has become the misstress of the house, even taking over the horses. She was just holding the reigns nothing more, and Edward just let her ride his horse and even rode behind her almost all the time.

Then in the woods firstly he was being dominant over her and I guess he must have been surprised when she tried to kiss him. He again gave into her and allowed the kisses and even actively participated.

Of course his and Joseph's argument can't be forgotten, Bella will have to be very careful and attentive now he is leaving.

You said this is the last chapter she will be there, why? Is she running away? Let free? Randsom paid?

How long until she is out of his house and until she sees him again?

Actually, I don't want to murder anyone, but would have loved to be able to throw something at someone like Bella did, who? all of them probably.

So she is hurting and Mary and Joseph know and were probably waiting for something like this to happen. Trashing the room was a good idea, it caused a comotion in the house and gave Joseph the chance to "really talk with Edward".

Something is going around in my mind, and you will probably half answer, but still I have to try, Joseph said the door wouldn't be locked the next night, did Bella do something with that comment? Or did she wait and Edward came back before she took the chance?

Edward was enjoying his time with one of his collectibles, whom acording to Mary won't be coming back to the house. That doesn't mean he won't see her again. How many of those does he have? And if Bella doesn't fit in that category, where does she fit?

How long until someone goes talk to her?

Okay, I'll try to review without asking too many questions, yeah I know, good luck.

It was a long, long night, Bella went from angry, to upset, to sad, to furious, to scared, to resigned, to unsure, to happy, all in one night. And Edward went even further probably. I would love to know what Joseph told Edward, that must have been an interesting shouting match. What ever it was... it made Edward realize he is lost. He lost all power over Bella, wanting to have it all, he gave it all to her. And Bella... was surprised when she realized it. Happy too, she had already fallen in love and only wished for him to feel something more than lust for her. Seeing him voulnerable, trying to scare and threat her, probably gave her such a high... He was determined to be wrapped around her little finger and she was too.

But as you said, stories with this kind of twists, even if they may upset us, are good. About who the men who entered the room where. The simplest answer would be Bella's father's men, but another possiblity is Joseph did something. The thing is now... we don't know if and when they will see each other again. Who ever took Edward, was probably thinking it was for Bella's sake. Once she speaks up, who knows, what will be arranged.

Hola Chica

sin el ping-pong dónde está la diversión?

You know that without all the questions... what else can I say?

Still thanks for answering...

And yes Robbie didn't have to be sedated last time... I wonder...

yep until next chapter...

gracias mil

Of course Bella wasn't going to let Edward meet his fate at Charlie's hands. She has too many feelings for him. Yes mixed, strange and even not healthy feelings but still there.

Joseph is a great guy, and Bella knew he was good and would try to do what would be best for Edward and her. Even if Edward was reluctant. Good thing he wasn't in a position to argue or not be taken. I'm worried he is seriously injured but at least they were able to get him out.

So Sarah and Mary have been working together. Yes they "need to stick together" especially with the kind of bosses both of them have.

What now? What is Bella going to do? Charlie could eventually get suspicious if Bella doesn't make a decision about her life. And even after she does, I'm quite sure Charlie will have her followed and taken care of, especially after what happened. So yes, meeting with Edward seems complicated. 

Fortunately she is her father's daughter, and as it was shown in this chapter she has learned a few tricks from him, are there any more?

And Alice... we are going to meet Alice, lets hope they like each other and find a way to ... get Edward and Bella to at least talk. 

As much as I love reading your replies, if they haven't come because you're writing, no hay problema!!!!

Thanks for bringing Edward and Robbie back, I missed them both. Edward is really in bad shape, Charlie's men really did a big number on him. But he is there on Bella's bed, waiting for her to wake up literaly and figuratively. He has known all along, how? Can he read her mind? And still knowing all along he is there, why? How much has Alice told him since Bella got to her house? What are his feelings for her? 

I really hope they can talk, really talk after this chapter. They both need it so much. Not only for us to find out what has going on with Edward, but for them to figure out what they want and need from each other.

Again thanks for remebering Robbie

One last question. lo del waterboard fue inspirado por tehuacanasos?

¡Sigues por aquí! ¿'onde andabas?

Hey! Great to have you back, you and the story have been really and truly missed. Let me tell you, what a come back! Simply heartbreaking and shocking. Edward is far worse than I thought. He really thinks there's no salvation, hope or chance for him to even try to repent and change. He is so wrong, once more. A long time ago he misjudged Bella, now he is misjudging her and him too. Yes it's true it is almost impossible to save someone who doesn't want to be saved. But a piece of Edward, deep, deep inside is shouting, screaming to be saved. His last hope? That Bella would figure it out, hopefully in time? I really hope she and Alice get to him on time. The thing is where could he be now? 

Please don't make us wait this long for next chapter, it has been excruciating!!! Es en serio ;)