Really, really big huge please update asap!!!!!!!

Forget the door he was just about to say it!!!!!!!!!!! And now the moment is gone :( Lets hope he gets the guts to try and tell her, no matter who may be at the door, probably Jacob by the way.

So back to the chapter, I liked you using the phrase form Breaking Dawn of atention being somewhere else, and liked even more that now Edward was the one not noticing things.

Edward has fantazies of Bella in his life filled with details, big and smaill, he really wants all of it with Bella. He just needs to tell her and see what happens from there.

So please get back to writing :)

It was a great chapter, and it needed to be this long. You were right, there was no way of cutting it, but I don't think we minded that much ;).

So they were about to loose each other out of what? fear, insecurities, what ever it was, thankfully Edward snapped out of it in time. Well maybe Alice would have tried something else, but it wasn't necesary.

If Edward really just came up with all that plan, he is amazingly fast and smart, good traits for a therapist. And he has a new great receptionist. So many things are going to be changing for them and so fast, but somehow they are ready for it, had been for a long while, they just didn't know it yet.

Jacob behaved really well, he was polite and nice and things there ended in good friendly terms. I'm sure they will be returning frequently to the cabin, so it's great things ended up well.

Tomorrow they'll have to say good-bye for not long, but still.

About your last question, you can count me as a reader outside the US.

Great to have you back, both of you and the story.

Edward in this chapter was like a kid in a candy store or a toystore the day before Christmas. He was so excited, nervous, happy, thrilled to have Bella finally coming to Seatle. It was really adorable, how much effort he has put on making things for her as easy and pleasant as possible. Knowing that certain facts, like his living in a penthouse might make her a little edgy. 

It was an amazing welcome and it has just started.

What was on the mantle... I guess some kind of Bella's memorabilia or keepsake that Alice sent Edward without Bella knowing of course ;)

Yes please continue it, I want to know what Edward thinks during the family meeting. it is good.

Really good, I loved it.

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Wow, so Edward may not be as traumatized as his family thinks. And Bella may not go to the waterfall so often, poor frog will miss her :(.

will they go to the dance together? I hope he asks

update soon please

Really good, I like the idea that the Cullens and Jake are friends, well almost all of them. It was fun reading about Bella trying to outrun someone, especially Edward. I hope you post soon.

ok, yes this was a funny chapter, but I'm even more confussed than Bella. I imagine it's what you intended, for readers and her to have no clues, but the chapter ended and I'm sure Bella is less confussed than I am. I don't understand the dressing code, but it was fun or why Emmett made that bet. However, I'm sure you'll clear some of this in the next chapter, so please post soon.

Great chapter, honest, confusing but very good. I loved the cheesecake part, will Emmett get back at Bella?

Will Gnome be angry with Bella, or will he be understanding and share her with Edward? I really hope so.

It was great, lots of funny stuff and important stuff also. I loved that Edward was playing funeral music and then Christmas songs I understand why that was making Carlsile crazy.

update soon please

Okay the first person that came into my mind was Tyler, then maybe Jessica. Or there is something in the story I'm forgetting.

I loved this chapter it was fun to read, Bella's poeam was really good. Charlie being proud of Bella throwing good punches too, she had to get detention, that was her goal, and really punching people, they may deserve it, but don't do it where you may get caught. :)

Update soon please!!!!!

Wow Edward is going to defend Bella's honor, that is so sweet. What will happen in Phenix?

We'll just have to wait

Yes, it was great how they took care of Lauren, the picture threat from Alice included of course. The restaurant thing I hope it was Rosalie that Edward was with, and what about James? what's his part in this story? Eventhough I love plots thikening and twists and turns, I hope nothing bad happens to Bella.

Up date soon please

Sorry for the Cubs, but I loved the chapter, it was a great idea to go to a ball game.