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Hello, I'm a 34 English Teacher / Psychologist. Married, no children however two extreamly spoiled and adored goldenretrievers. Moka and Maya are my babies, both girls around 8 human years both of them.
I live in the city of Puebla in Mexico. It is a colonial city near the volcanoes. I give English lessons to children and adults.
I love reading since I was a little girl I read almost anything within my reach. I enjoy reading historic novels and biographies but adore a good novel and mystery. I would love to write, but I'm not good yet. I begin something and then have no idea how to finish it. So I have tons of little stories and things that go through my head in the computer and notebooks. I hope to one day make something out of all of it.
I got hooked in Fan Fiction thanks to the Twilight series which I loved. I enjoy reviewing stories and try to think my reviews and make them nice.
About my Favorite things.- Reading of course, both in English and Spanish. Favorite Authors, in Spanish, Gabriel García Marquez, Angeles Mastretta, Paulo Cohelo. In English, in no particular order Stephenie Meyer, J.K. Rowling, Michel Crichton, Agatha Christie. These are the ones I can think of now.
I also love cooking and I'm good at it, at least that's what family and friends tell me.
I also enjoy sewing, needle point, cross stich and such.
That's it for now I think. I hope that the authors whose stories I review enjoy them I try to make them good. Since I don't feel I can write a story yet at least I can try and write good reviews.
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Summary: Just a small town girl, livin' in a lonely world
She took the midnight train goin' anywhere
Just a city boy, born and raised in south Detroit
He took the midnight train goin' anywhere
After multiple chance encounters can two strangers find their missing pieces within each other?
Or will their past mistakes hold them back?
Two strangers passing in the night, searching for nothing, but maybe finding everything.
A story of learning to trust and forgive, finding a way to risk opening yourself up.
Inspired by Journey's song Don't Stop Believing.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4669815/1/A_Person_of_Worth
Banner by AngstGoddess003
banner by: Heaven's Immortal
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 107099
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2008 Updated: July 10, 2011
Reviewer: mayams Signed 
Date: December 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: The Plan
It would be so great to find people like Alice and Rose, so willing to help someone who seems as lost as Bella. It was a fun chapter, you were right, without the angst, but still it showed a lot of the people in the story. I just hope this doesn't back fire on them. Author's Response: We will see where this will lead...Jasper is scared and rightfully so...Bella is a private person...so they may all be in for a little "trouble" in the end!
Reviewer: mayams Signed 
Date: January 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Phase One
Wow Bella really got to him. I just hope she doesn't freak out or he does the same while everyone is trying to get them together. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Update soon Author's Response: bwahahahahhahaha.....the mystery is boggling...
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: A Change
It was very good. It's great Edward is feeling he is supposed to be with Bella, now all he has to do is get close to her and convince her that they both need this. Not exactly an easy job :) Author's Response: Nope, it will NOT be an easy feat! But it will be fun to watch...
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: February 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Car Rides and Libraries
Edward will put all he can think of to get Bella to like him and open up, lets hope he is able to do so before the wedding. With Hope's help I think it may be easier, lets hope that she will be around until then. Author's Response: :-) I can't really answer to what you've said without giving away to much! But I think you'll like it. At least I hope you do!
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Pie's and Promises
Bella is starting to think about Edward, Jasper seems to be fishing for information about this and letting Bella hide.
Bella is also thinking she may work with Edward in the wedding a little more. We start to learn a little more about Bella, at least a time frame of why she feels so bad about herself. She really has a terrible opinion but something inside her is begining to stir and make her see things from another perspective maybe?
Poor Edward he thought finding Bella would be easier, he didn't give up though, he almos blew it by snapping at her but he didn't and he got to share pie with her. I loved the pie trying, it was really sweet and I think a good way for them to get to know a little more about each other.
What will happen at the bar? will they all go? Author's Response: You are very observant. Although I'm not sure that Jasper is really letting Bella hide...if anything he's helping her see what's around her, but he knows Bella...you can't make her see it. She has to get there on her own.
Edward is waking something inside of her...
The bar...well to be honest, I haven't got a clue! This wasn't in my outline...Edward just kinda took it there...now I gotta see where it's going to lead!
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: April 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: I Was Broken
As you said at the begining this was a fun chapter. It was great to see Bella having fun, laughing, enjoying herself, and doing it with friends, especially Edward.
Teddy reallly enjoyed kicking the fanclub out of their regular table. And in the middle of all these, Edward remains oblivious to everything. Well everything but Bella. And Jasper was also impressed on the changes she is going through thanks to Edward.
What could Teddy and Bella be talking about? Will Edward ever find out? What about us?
And Edward will finally get Bella's number, along with free breakfast all week. Emmett will have to come up with something better next time, will he ever make it?
Summary: Ten years later five happy couples live in the Cullen household. What if Bella finds out a little family secret that has kept those couples happy for so long?
Rated NC-17 for very graphic lemons with non-canon pairings including BXE, BXJ, BXEM, BXC, BXRXA, and BXJacob. OOC just in case.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Word count: 30441
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2008 Updated: March 20, 2009
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: December 02, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Ness knew and I didn't!
Okay, naughty, strange, taboo, some of the words that could apply to this story, also, amazing, very good, interesting. Wow, you answered a review saying writing is how you get things out, keep them coming. About who's next, Bella and Emmet should be interesting....
Author's Response: Yeah this story has run the gammet of reactions. I'm excited (pun intended) about writing Emmett.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: December 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: The Parthenon
It was a lot of fun. Bella and Emmett playing and betting against each other. I really liked that neither won or lost the bet, that probably means a rematch, I hope soon. Author's Response: I really wanted Emmett to fun and playful. I'm glad that it came across.
Summary: Officer Edward is sent to check on Chief Swan's daughter while she's home visiting from college and seeing a creepy guy. He's nervous to see his true love again, but troubles arises as her date is not so nice, but Bella fights back. Lemon and fluff. One shot Only I do not own Twilight or song Gun Powder and Lead Thanks to kellyam for swift work on betaing this for me
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward, James
Challenges: Series: Song Based One Shots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3254
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2008 Updated: December 03, 2008
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: December 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
It's good to sometimes see Bella take action
Summary: 
Truth or dare, sex education, and one wicked little girl lovingly dubbed lil' red! What could be more silly? *Won Honorable Mention for Twilighted's second original fiction contest: Silly, Sexy and Supernatural* 
Categories: ORIGINAL FICTION Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3037
[Report This] Published: November 27, 2008 Updated: November 28, 2008
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: November 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very good, funny and whitty. Really liked it
Summary: Bella travels to Alaska to vacation in the cabin Alice loaned her. What happens when Bella finds out she is not the only person staying in the cabin? 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 88293
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2008 Updated: January 01, 2010
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: December 09, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Good Morning
It's fun, I'm liking it. Will Bella ever get in touch with Alice? and what will Jacob's part will be?
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: December 10, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Staring
It's going good, but we need more, story and action, I guess finals must take a toll on your time, so, I'll have to be patient, I just hope they end up soon.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: December 14, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Tour
Please continue getting good grades, so you can update more. I like how the story is going, that Bella is so relaxed and Edward so nervous. What might come next? are the roles going to change?
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: December 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Spark
I loved the description of the "charge" between Edward and Bella, but the chapter was too short, please up date soon.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Humiliation
The water fighting was great. It's nice they both can cook. I wonder who will try something more? If Edward isn't too embarrassed in the morning it should be him again, I think Bella is too shy, or maybe she'll try something.
Post soon
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Twister
Finally!!! games was a great idea and twister even better. And it seems they both like each other. One question, why did Edward try to call Alice?
And now what? I guess the power will be out, for how long? what will they do? Please update and tell us
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Lights Out
Go Bella! I'm glad she took over at the end, that was great. Of course Edward has to not like Jacob, so that could mean he may be out of the picture, especially with Bella's actions at the end of the chapter. Now they'll have to stay pretty close to each other, maybe even play twister again.
Please up date soon, even with school and life
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 12, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Burning
Congratulations!!! you deserve it, this story is great, and this chapter was awsome, the Twister mat thing had me laughing. Everything was sweet and nice and hot.
Can't wait for the next chapter, please up date soon!!!!
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Coming Clean
It was so sweet!!!! They are comfortable around each other. Bella being taken care of, especially by Edward, and both enjoying it. It wouldn't be so bad if the storm doesn't disappear for several more days, more if they can fix the generator. Update soon please!!!!
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: January 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Acceptance
How sweet that Bella has enough confidence in Edward to ask him that, and that she doesn't care about his past, something that was bothering him. And Edward trying to play handyman, he was really lucky it was as simple as a plug, lets hope it is.
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: February 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Intimacy
Sex is amazing, but intimacy is something even better, as Bella tells us in this chapter, being in bed with someone you are begining to care for that much gives you room to think like Bella, you are giving all of you not only the physical part, your mind and heart, and that will turn into love.
Edward is really a gentleman, taking care of Bella's needs before his, making the experience better for her. That is amazing!!!
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: February 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Bella's Turn Part I
I really, really hope Edward finishes figuring out what is going on and tells Bella, and that her will also figure it out :)
Meanwhile, I wish there's more cream and strawberries in the house, or something that can be so entertaining and nourishing.
I like how you slowly take each thing they do step by step letting the reader feel like part of it.
Can't wait for part 2
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Bella's Turn Part II
Edward really shocked Bella with what he read. She tought she had all under control, but I'm sure she didn't mind that much loosing it because of that.
I hope the snow storm lasts more!!!! so the story can be longer :)
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: Tongue Tied
Edward is putting too much thinking into it, it isn't that bad it's interesting to see him "analize" what love is and feels like. But he needs to get moving, in finding how to tell Bella, time is moving and snow will begin to melt. He needs to do something incredibly romantic soon!!!
Maybe after her punishment :)
Reviewer: mayams Signed
Date: March 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 23: Punishments and Salads
It's great to have you back. Enjoy your spring brake!!!
Bella is acting so mental right now, it should be scaring Edward so much, but in a way he may just be in the same place Bella is. The only problem neither one knows the other is there, they should look around and... oh yes! talk!!! They have to and soon please!!!!
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