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Penname: starla_1979 [Contact]
Real name: Liz
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I will be 30 this year!  Old enough to be a Twi-Mom but I have no kids.  About to start graduate school and I am on this site to READ so I am not writer.  That's ok though, there are so many great stories here and I only wish I could read them all!


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*Eternal Sun* by YborJen Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Eternal Sun

THIS CHAPTER CONTAINS A SHORT PREVIEW OF A FULL NOVEL WHICH WILL BE POSTED IN 2011 BY THE AUTHOR OF WANING MOON.

The entire family will have to face Egypt's Eternal Sun and the more traditional underground covens that control the region, keeping to the shadows as they search for kidnapped Bella with a little help from their werewolf friends. Ancient and modern horrors will be revealed, morals will be tested, Renesmee and Edward will have to face the possibility of going on without Bella, and Carlisle will begin to feel serious effects of the shadow of his own mortality...


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 3363
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2010 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: starla_1979 Signed
Date: January 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: *Preview*

I am so excited to see how this story turns out!  I think you told me previously that it was a "Lost Symbol" type story, right?  Will it really span 36 hours?  That concept is too cool and I know you'd be able to pull it off.  I'm guessing you'll probably address lots of unanswered questions on Nessie's conception and carlisle's condition.  Can't wait!



Author's Response:

LOL -- yes, it's intended to be a 36 hour mystery, but I'm not gonna totally lock myself into that just yet.  It definitely would NOT be more than a few days.  Yes, there will be a LOT of geek talk about genetics and physiology, but not so much to weigh the story down I hope ;)  I'll be working on it more in a few weeks, but I like to finish full drafts and then edit them before posting, so it's gonna be a bit of a wait for this one ;)  I hope you are still around!

 
A Brave New World by youngmei Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 990]
Summary:

Edward and Bella

“Bella, I’m going to give you some privacy. I won’t go far, but I won’t listen either. I know you don’t want an audience, no matter which way you decide to go.”

Three years after his mysterious disappearance, Edward’s final words to Bella still haunt her every waking moment. For her parents, Bella tries to put the past behind her and start a new life but one phone call shatters her fragile new world. Bella must then choose between her new life and the potential heartache of her past.

All canon pairings. NO CHARACTER DEATH. This is an Edward and Bella story.

I'd like to thank ms_ambrosia for the awesome banner!


Categories: Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No Word count: 161635
[Report This] Published: February 09, 2010 Updated: May 06, 2013


Reviewer: starla_1979 Signed
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: The Fight

Hi there!  I found your story through the Edge Girls blog and I'm hooked!  I usually read stories on FF.net and it had been awhile since I came back to this site.  Have you considered posting over there?  Even if you don't you are still on my alerts.  Great premise.  I am sure Bella is feeling a bit rejected right now but their interactions are so spot on.  You are doing a great job sticking to cannon.  Lots of luck with the rest of your story.  I will be eagarly awaiting your updates.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. I don't know much about FF.net I really only got hooked on fanfiction when I found this website. I'll take a look and see what I think. I'm really trying to stick to cannon in the personality of the characters. I'm so happy that you noticed.

 
Reviewer: starla_1979 Signed
Date: August 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Instinct

Thank you for responding!  If you every do decide to go to FF.net here is my profile:

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2167351/starla1979

I'm not a writer but I do enjoy quality stories and those in my profile are my top picks.  I hope some of them interest you.  I'll include you under the heading "Favorite story not on FF.net" the next time I update my profile :-).



Author's Response:

I just signed myself up at FF.net and submitted the first few chapters of this story. Thanks for the suggestion. My penname is Mei Li Young, but the story has the same title "A Brave New World."

I'll check out some of the stories that you are recommending. :)

 
Reviewer: starla_1979 Signed
Date: November 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: The Awful Truth

Such a great chapter!  wil the next one have EPOV right before and during this conversation?  I am sure people want to read the lemon but I think lemons should only be used when appropriate.  Your story is strong enough w/o them.  Not sure how Edward will trust Bella or any of the Cullens after this but I am sure you will take us on an amazing ride.  Glad you posted your story on FF too.  Not sure what I can do to get you more reviews but I do share my fav stories with my other Twi-hard friends.  Your's is now my fav Post-Eclipse AU.  Can't wait for the next one!



Author's Response:

Yes, the next chapter will be Edward's point of view. I just couldn't include it in this chapter because it would have detracted from the intensity of the conversation with Carlisle. It is strange about FF. I have a lot of people who have put me on their favorites and alert lists, but not many who are reviewing. Oh well, I have my loyal reviewers on this website! Thank you for the review!!!

 




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