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Member Since: November 29, 2008
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*I love dancing in the rain and playing in puddles


*I don't tolerate idiots very well


*I'm blunt


*I abhor spiders


*I'm a southern girl


*I love to watch movies and use movie quotes


*I'm superstitious


*I listen to music all the time


*I enjoy reading in bed


*I'm very family oriented


 


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Reviews by Foxtrot
 
Summary:

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Inspired by Taylor Swift's 'You Belong With Me'.

Bella has been Edward's best friend since third grade. Now it's senior year, and nothing [not even his girlfriend Tanya, or the creeper James, or even her own insecurities] is going to stop Bella from making Edward see that he belongs with her.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 53887
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2010


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: December 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Tuesday

I'm intrigued. I will definitely be checking back for more.

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Party 'n Park

Okay, next chapter NOW. :D

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: December 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Bleachers

I don't particularly see how Jacob would fit in this story (and it's Bella's fault that Jacob's in love with her, she led him on!), but it would be interesting to see how you incorporate him. Anyways, I love the story and would definitely enjoy an update soon. :)

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Other Woman

I love this story! But Edward and Bella need to communicate! Hopefully some things can be answered in the next chapter, because it's very frustrating to deal with the lack of communication. Ugh, people are idiots. Great job and update soon!

 
Behind the Reel by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1460]
Summary: Feature

"Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."

A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.

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Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!

Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

"Yeah . . . I do. It’s . . . my coat." He sounded like that bit of information was a confession, and one I wasn’t meant to hear.

"Oh."

I giggled like a small child. :D

 
May It Be by LilyHale Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 154]
Summary:

Bella Swan is devistated after Edward leaves her in the woods.  After he leaves, she experiences some of the worst pain imaginable, but not all of it is from her broken heart.  80 years later, the Cullens return to Forks, Washington to begin fresh. But even Alice couldn't see what would turn the Cullens' peaceful world for a spin. AU for new characters and a completely new story line.


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 4777
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: February 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: When In Biology

Interesting...I'll be checking back for updates!

 
Summary:

When she joined the Cullen family, Rosalie was its most damaged member.  Would asking Carlisle to make another vampire be her salvation or her undoing?

A look at Rosalie’s perspective on Emmett’s transformation and the challenges of their new life together.


Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6398
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Miniature Disasters

Very well written; I'll definitely be checking back for more.

 
True Beauty by everwondering Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Bella falls in love with Edward, the sweet, disfigured boy she grew up with. When he dies in the Spanish influenza epidemic, she flees, completely heartbroken. Five years later, she returns and meets an inhumanly beautiful, yet strangely familiar bronze-haired man who seems to hate her from the moment he sets his topaz eyes upon her. ExB Alternate universe.

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 13151
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: April 12, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really like the story so far. It looks very interesting.

 
EARTHQUAKE! by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 240]
Summary:

When a virgin is kidnapped in the jungles of Isle Esme, a daring anthropologist rushes in to the rescue. But will they be able to escape the island before falling victim to the predators, natives, and pirates? AH EdwardxBella

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 34386
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: April 23, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm so looking forward to Plan B. :D

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Aww, man. I can't believe Edward didn't go for Plan B; it was awesome!

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

If they're not careful that wonderful little puddle could glue them to their bed. LOL :D

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

haha, "I was in love,"

Loved the update. :D

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

What an idiot, who gives if she was "going to change the plot after a few chapter," that's still plagarism. Anyways, loved the update as always!

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

"Mom, Dad...I'm a virgin."

I don't think that could have been anymore embarrassing, unless Esme had walked in on Edward jerking off.

 
Overtime by Dreamrider Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2245]
Summary:

Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.

Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

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Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start

Oh, I loved the toy part. It was hilarious!

 
Summary:

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John F. Kennedy said once that the courage of life is often a less dramatic spectacle than the courage of a final moment; but it is no less a magnificent mixture of triumph and tragedy. A man does what he must, in spite of personal consequences, in spite of obstacles and dangers and pressures, and that is the basis of all morality.

I couldn't agree more.

Courage was the reason I was here. Courage and love.

We know Edward and Bellas story during Twilight, but what if it was different? What if Alice was the new girl, and Bella was already a vampire? Would Jaspers self-control hold out when he meets a girl whos blood smells so intoxicating to him?

Mostly AxJ, all canon pairings.

Thank you so much to MoonSpinner for the amazing banner!!

 


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4088
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: April 18, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: First Sight

I'm liking the story so far. It will be interesting to see where you take this.

 
Gossip by Ysar Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapter 23: Comfort


Bella skips lunch, and misses out on some very interesting conversation.


~ "Whatever," said Jessica, rolling her eyes. "You know Bella. She just has to have any guy I like." ~



But Angela's there to see and hear it all.


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Jessica, Lauren, Mike
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1309
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: April 10, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: April 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Gossip

I like the companion stories and I would love to see Lauren get knocked on her ass; it would be hilarious if she caught Bella and Jake making out and a bunch of people witnessed Lauren getting knocked down a peg or two...I also think the same thing should happen to Mike and Jessica, or something similar, what egos. And I love Angela and Ben, they're so sweet and pleasant.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  Everyone will definitely be getting what's coming to them soon!

 
Loyalty by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 42]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapters 33 & 34: Mischief.

What kind of friend would Embry be if he just stood by and let Lauren come in between Jake and Bella? (One-shot)

~If you asked me, Jake was lucky Bella even bothered to come to him about it instead of just dumping him. And now he was too scared of stirring up trouble and upsetting Bella to do anything about it.~

~The pack was lucky, too, because dealing with Jake when he and Bella were on the outs was no picnic. But a call to Leah and a trip to Forks High would solve everything.~


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Embry, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Quil
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2590
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: May 14, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Loyalty

:D I love Embry.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Confrontation by Ysar Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again Post #s 37 & 38: Questions.  Charlie receives a call from one meddling Mrs. Newton, and Jacob's reaction leaves his head spinning. One-shot.

 

~ Well…crap. Bella had told me that I didn’t need to worry about…that. And Miranda Newton was certainly not the best source for unembellished facts, but half-dressed and making out in a parking lot? I was in my car and headed to La Push within seconds. ~

 


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Billy, Charlie, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1471
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2009 Updated: May 31, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Confrontation (One-Shot)

Aww! Imagine little Jakes and Bellas running around; they would be adorable!



Author's Response:

They'd probably be big & clumsy! ;-)

 
Pursuit by Ysar Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 28]
Summary:

Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Post #43: Waiting. Victoria pieces together the circumstances behind James's disappearance and plans her revenge. One-shot.

~ He was my killer and my savior. And now he was nothing. ~

~ A part of me was gone. I could still see his soft red eyes and feel the gentle curtain of his blond hair brushing against my cheek. When I breathed deeply enough I could imagine his sweet scent filling my lungs. I had to find him. ~

 

 


Categories: AU, Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse Characters: Victoria
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1503
[Report This] Published: June 09, 2009 Updated: June 09, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Pursuit

Dark; I like it :D



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:


A girl caught between two destinies… She must find the strength to choose.

A boy caught between two worlds… He must find true balance if he is to lead.

 

As if I never existed, Edward Cullen promised when he abandoned Bella Swan. 

But some things can never be undone. 

The vengeance of those left behind.  A father’s quest for redemption.  The obsession of a damned soul.  A love that should have died. 

The sunlight beyond the shadows of twilight. 

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A Jacob/Bella AU FanFic set during the events of New Moon.

 

 

 

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Mad props to xXSizzlingGirlXx and Oceanwaters2006 for the parade of AWESOME banners!


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Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Charlie, Jacob, Jared, Leah, Sam
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 48566
[Report This] Published: July 02, 2009 Updated: December 08, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Jacob

Okay, so I found this story a couple of days ago and I absolutely love it! Can't wait for the next update. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review.

Just finishing up some stuff (mostly editing) on Chapter 8 and should submit by Saturday.

--at5115

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Jacob

I have to admit, I'm a little confused about the time line...could you clarify?

 



Author's Response:

I actually had to repair Ch 8 since I was a day ahead.  Here's what I got (from Twilight Timeline):

 

Wednesday, March 15 (2006):

Alice has vision of Bella jumping, travels from Denali to Washington State via plane/car

 

Thursday, March 16 (2006):

Bella jumps off cliff (from book timeline);

Sam/Jacob lose Victoria in the water;

Seth/Leah Shift;

Harry has his heart-attack;

Bella ends up back at Jake's;

Alice meets Charlie at the Hospital

 

Friday, March 17 (2006):

Victoria leaves "gift" (very early AM)

Bella/Charlie breakfast;

Harry dies;

Jacob/Jared in car - finds out about Alice's return;

Bella/Charlie to hospital;

Bella finds "body" in her house (later that day)

 

Saturday, March 18 (2006):

Harry's funeral (as per book)

 

Sorry it's confusing.  I actually have an excel spreadsheet to keep track of who's doing what when. Maybe I will put my modified timeline on my bio page for future reference?

 

--at5115

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Jacob

I have to admit, I'm a little confused about the time line...could you clarify?

 

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Jacob

Ooooh, loved this chapter!

 
Destined by Ysar Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 52]
Summary:

Companion story for Breathe Again. Written as a side to Chapter Fifty-Three: Nuisance. Jessica is convinced that she and Embry are destined to be together. One-shot.

~"Finally a guy that was worth it. And just in time for prom.." ~


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Embry, Jacob, Jessica, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2130
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2009 Updated: July 20, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Destined

AHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!

I was willing to bet he'd have a much sweeter title for me.

Um, yeah, I can think of one right now: booty call! OMFG, I loved this companion story, but now I'm really craving an update of Breathe Again.




Author's Response:

Thank you!

 




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