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Member Since: November 30, 2008
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*I love dancing in the rain and playing in puddles


*I don't tolerate idiots very well


*I'm blunt


*I abhor spiders


*I'm a southern girl


*I love to watch movies and use movie quotes


*I'm superstitious


*I listen to music all the time


*I enjoy reading in bed


*I'm very family oriented


 


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Summary:

 

Jacob Black has been in Renesmee's life from the beginning - emerging gradually from the role of protector to best friend. 

 

When Nessie's feelings for her best friend begin to shift in a decidedly more-than-friendly direction, will Jacob be prepared to meet the requirements of the imprinting and respond to that shift?  Or will the fact that he literally helped raise her inhibit their relationship from progressing forward?

 

 

Sexy CoA banner by the awesome, amazing, beauitful achelle131. Imprint Me banner by the fantastic artbeatsandlife.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles, Imprint Me: The Jacob and Nessie Archives
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 41069
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2010 Updated: October 31, 2010


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Consummation

I will donate money for a new power cord! You need to update ASAP!

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 12, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Tampons, Condoms, and a Mission

As usual, I need MOREMOREMORE :)



Author's Response:

Haha, more more more is coming soon!  ;)

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 14, 2010 Title: Chapter 6: Mother of All Things Holy

Ahhh! So cruel to end the chapter there. Your betas had better get Chapter Seven out FAST. You can pass along my threat ;)

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Stilettos, Thongs, and a Date

I'm so sorry you've had such a negative experience. I too have dealt with immature people (who actually turned out to be a good deal older than me ironically) in the Twilight community. I am so very glad that you have decided to finish your stories and that you are preparing to move on to original fiction; I hope you have the greatest of success because you certainly deserve it and are extremely talented. I will admit that I am very sad you won't be writing any more Jake/Nessie fanfic because you definitely have a place as one of my favorite authors in that genre. Hopefully, this unfortunate experience in the fandom doesn't eventually lead you to leave writing altogether. I'll sadly say goodbye and wish you the best of luck in all your endeavors :)

 
Betrothal by Abimaddevil17 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 72]
Summary:

Banner made by CrimsonIceGoddess - she's truly amazing! :) 

The agreement was made; Edward, the Crowned Prince of England would be wed to Isabella the Princess of France, upon her sixteenth year. 


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Benjamin, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Jessica, Lauren, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 16645
[Report This] Published: April 11, 2012 Updated: May 22, 2012


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstar
Date: May 02, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: A Long Time Coming...

Your story has a lot of potential, and I find the storyline to be interesting. However, I just want to recommend that you find a beta who can assist you with your story. As a reader, it can become difficult to read a story that contains numerous punctuation/grammar mistakes. I'm truly not trying to be mean by telling you this. I am just simply trying to give you an opinion that I would hope someone else would give me. No one is perfect, and we all learn from our mistakes :) I hope you continue writing the story and good luck!



Author's Response:

I am sorry that the errors in my story have annoyed you, but as it was accepted without being told to edit any, I didn't see a problem with it. thank you for letting me know, however, beta's are difficult to find, and I'm not the easy person to work lol

Thank you, abbie 

 

 




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