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Penname: Foxtrot [ Contact]
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Member Since: November 29, 2008
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*I love dancing in the rain and playing in puddles
*I don't tolerate idiots very well
*I'm blunt
*I abhor spiders
*I'm a southern girl
*I love to watch movies and use movie quotes
*I'm superstitious
*I listen to music all the time
*I enjoy reading in bed
*I'm very family oriented
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Summary: 
Inspired by Taylor Swift's 'You Belong With Me'.
Bella has been Edward's best friend since third grade. Now it's senior year, and nothing [not even his girlfriend Tanya, or the creeper James, or even her own insecurities] is going to stop Bella from making Edward see that he belongs with her.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 53887
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: July 04, 2010
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: December 18, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Tuesday
I'm intrigued. I will definitely be checking back for more.
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed    
Date: December 22, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Party 'n Park
Okay, next chapter NOW. :D
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: December 24, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Bleachers
I don't particularly see how Jacob would fit in this story (and it's Bella's fault that Jacob's in love with her, she led him on!), but it would be interesting to see how you incorporate him. Anyways, I love the story and would definitely enjoy an update soon. :)
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed    
Date: January 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: The Other Woman
I love this story! But Edward and Bella need to communicate! Hopefully some things can be answered in the next chapter, because it's very frustrating to deal with the lack of communication. Ugh, people are idiots. Great job and update soon!
Summary:  "Once upon a time, there was girl that just wanted to get swept off her feet. Little did I know my co-star would be the one to do it. And with texting no less."
A fictional tale of Rob and Kristen realizing their feelings for each other and getting their signals crossed.

Thanks to falconcranelove for the banner!
Sequel: Behind the Lens http://twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=11639
Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: The Robsten Files
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 193022
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2008 Updated: April 09, 2010
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed    
Date: May 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
"Yeah . . . I do. It’s . . . my coat." He sounded like that bit of information was a confession, and one I wasn’t meant to hear.
"Oh."
I giggled like a small child. :D
Summary: Bella Swan is devistated after Edward leaves her in the woods. After he leaves, she experiences some of the worst pain imaginable, but not all of it is from her broken heart. 80 years later, the Cullens return to Forks, Washington to begin fresh. But even Alice couldn't see what would turn the Cullens' peaceful world for a spin. AU for new characters and a completely new story line.
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 4777
[Report This] Published: January 28, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2009
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: February 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: When In Biology
Interesting...I'll be checking back for updates!
Summary: If you ask me to describe Quil in one word it'd be "Sexy-Quileute-Warrior-Man". Now I know, its not technically one word, so if your going to be picky, I guess I'd have to say "unattainable". I'm Claire: utterly average 16 year old, in love with Quil Ateara, a mystical sex god.
Excerpt from Those Chicken Breast Thingys:
I felt his warm arms encircle me, and although I was already sweltering in the heat, I didn't complain as he carried me bridal style to the water. The whole thing felt so much like a romance novel cover— stud werewolf and olive skinned damsel— that I imagined myself momentarily clad in a flowing gown of some sort, heaving my non-existent bosoms to his chest.
I got caught up in it all when the first splashes of cold water hit the small of my back. I shrunk away from it, wrapping my arms around Quils neck tightly and pulling myself up higher, pressing my cheek to his. His cheek was on fire, but it felt so natural on mine. I realized that I had never had so much of my bare skin touching his and I felt my own cheeks blush hot. I pulled my cheek away, scared that maybe he would be able to feel it, or somehow know with his werewolvy senses that I was more turned on then I had ever been in my entire life.

Humor/Romance/Drama.
Thank you Crescent so much for the banner!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Claire, Quil
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 54528
[Report This] Published: February 03, 2009 Updated: April 01, 2009
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed   
Date: February 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Bout Time, Man!
Nice. :D Update soon, the story's interesting.
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: February 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Hit by the WTF Bus
It's probably best Claire's stomach and Emily interrupted them, imagine the chaos that would have come from them getting it on! Enjoying the story, update soon. :)
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: The Beast with Two Backs
coitus (It's so fun to say!), a bit of the ole in and out, pickle in the pail, fertilizing the flower bed, monkey eating a banana, traversing the fjord, fuel injection, harnessing the underwear unicorn, just made a tight connection, butter the muffin, dip the wick, dip your pen in the ink, hide the salami, parting the pink sea
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: February 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: A Full Length Feature Film
Definitely inject some humor into your lemon. Sex is humorous; think about it!
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: February 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Girlmones
Ummm...update...NOW! :D
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 03, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Wolf Cubs
Check out the general discussion board; you should be able to find a banner from there.
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 08, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Sister
Not acceptable. Update, NOW. :D
Summary: When she joined the Cullen family, Rosalie was its most damaged member. Would asking Carlisle to make another vampire be her salvation or her undoing?
A look at Rosalie’s perspective on Emmett’s transformation and the challenges of their new life together.
Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Word count: 6398
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed    
Date: February 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Miniature Disasters
Very well written; I'll definitely be checking back for more.
Summary: Bella falls in love with Edward, the sweet, disfigured boy she grew up with. When he dies in the Spanish influenza epidemic, she flees, completely heartbroken. Five years later, she returns and meets an inhumanly beautiful, yet strangely familiar bronze-haired man who seems to hate her from the moment he sets his topaz eyes upon her. ExB Alternate universe.

Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Word count: 13151
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: April 12, 2009
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 07, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really like the story so far. It looks very interesting.
Summary: When a virgin is kidnapped in the jungles of Isle Esme, a daring anthropologist rushes in to the rescue. But will they be able to escape the island before falling victim to the predators, natives, and pirates? AH EdwardxBella

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 34386
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2009 Updated: April 23, 2009
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed    
Date: March 14, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
I'm so looking forward to Plan B. :D
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed    
Date: March 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Aww, man. I can't believe Edward didn't go for Plan B; it was awesome!
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11
If they're not careful that wonderful little puddle could glue them to their bed. LOL :D
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12
haha, "I was in love,"
Loved the update. :D
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
What an idiot, who gives if she was "going to change the plot after a few chapter," that's still plagarism. Anyways, loved the update as always!
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: April 13, 2009
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
"Mom, Dad...I'm a virgin."
I don't think that could have been anymore embarrassing, unless Esme had walked in on Edward jerking off.
Summary: Bella Swan is a writer for a Women's Magazine in Florida, a magazine that she writes the self help column for...Something she really wants to escape. The good news, she is escaping self help, the bad news, she's covering the lives of women behind sports stars...In Denver.
Here she meets three amazing women; the girlfriend, fiance, and wife to two players and the coach of the team, but what will happen when the team superstar, Edward, takes an interest in Bella?

Warnings: It's NC-17, so basically... Smut, Language.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 129668
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2009 Updated: January 18, 2011
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed    
Date: March 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 - A Not-So-Hot Start
Oh, I loved the toy part. It was hilarious!
Summary: 
John F. Kennedy said once that the courage of life is often a less dramatic spectacle than the courage of a final moment; but it is no less a magnificent mixture of triumph and tragedy. A man does what he must, in spite of personal consequences, in spite of obstacles and dangers and pressures, and that is the basis of all morality.
I couldn't agree more.
Courage was the reason I was here. Courage and love.
We know Edward and Bellas story during Twilight, but what if it was different? What if Alice was the new girl, and Bella was already a vampire? Would Jaspers self-control hold out when he meets a girl whos blood smells so intoxicating to him?
Mostly AxJ, all canon pairings.
Thank you so much to MoonSpinner for the amazing banner!!
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 4088
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: April 18, 2009
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed   
Date: April 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: First Sight
I'm liking the story so far. It will be interesting to see where you take this.
Summary: Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapter 23: Comfort Bella skips lunch, and misses out on some very interesting conversation. ~ "Whatever," said Jessica, rolling her eyes. "You know Bella. She just has to have any guy I like." ~ 
But Angela's there to see and hear it all.
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Angela, Bella, Ben, Jessica, Lauren, Mike
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1309
[Report This] Published: April 08, 2009 Updated: April 10, 2009
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: April 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Gossip
I like the companion stories and I would love to see Lauren get knocked on her ass; it would be hilarious if she caught Bella and Jake making out and a bunch of people witnessed Lauren getting knocked down a peg or two...I also think the same thing should happen to Mike and Jessica, or something similar, what egos. And I love Angela and Ben, they're so sweet and pleasant. Author's Response: Thank you! Everyone will definitely be getting what's coming to them soon!
Summary: Companion story to Breathe Again, written as a side to Chapters 33 & 34: Mischief.
What kind of friend would Embry be if he just stood by and let Lauren come in between Jake and Bella? (One-shot)
~If you asked me, Jake was lucky Bella even bothered to come to him about it instead of just dumping him. And now he was too scared of stirring up trouble and upsetting Bella to do anything about it.~

~The pack was lucky, too, because dealing with Jake when he and Bella were on the outs was no picnic. But a call to Leah and a trip to Forks High would solve everything.~
Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Embry, Jacob, Jessica, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Quil
Challenges: Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2590
[Report This] Published: May 07, 2009 Updated: May 14, 2009
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed    
Date: May 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Loyalty
:D I love Embry. Author's Response: Thank you!
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