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Penname: Foxtrot [Contact]
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Member Since: November 29, 2008
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*I love dancing in the rain and playing in puddles


*I don't tolerate idiots very well


*I'm blunt


*I abhor spiders


*I'm a southern girl


*I love to watch movies and use movie quotes


*I'm superstitious


*I listen to music all the time


*I enjoy reading in bed


*I'm very family oriented


 


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Dear Diary by alice_laughed Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Quil gives Claire a diary for her 10th birthday.  See their relationship grow through her eyes.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Quil
Challenges:
Series: Claire and Quil series
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 50261
[Report This] Published: May 13, 2008 Updated: May 13, 2008


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

"He's weird." OMG, I love that! It's really nice to see a Claire and Quil story and you've done such a good job. :)

 
Summary:

 

Bella Swan spent the first two years of her life in Forks developing a friendship with Jacob Black that finally turned into something more.  As she begins her senior year of high school, a new family moves to town and Bella slowly begins to question the path she thought her life would follow.  Sometimes there is a difference between what you think you need and what you never knew you wanted.  Takes place during the timeframe of New Moon and Eclipse.  J/B at first, but eventually E/B. 

 

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: No Word count: 170230
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2008 Updated: July 19, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Bonfire

I completely agree; Leah has the most tragic of stories! I can't even imagine what she went through. That being said, I love this story. It's very well written and I'm really enjoying it!

 
Broken by alice_laughed Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 131]
Summary:

Claire's mom took their family away shortly after finding out about Quil.  The implications of a broken imprint are far reaching and can impact you - body and soul.  The bond is deeper than anyone ever realized.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Quil
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 39574
[Report This] Published: July 30, 2008 Updated: September 28, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ahh! You need to update!

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: January 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Yay! You updated! Congrats on your baby girl and make sure to update soon. :)

 
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Date: March 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Update update update!

 
Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: April 27 - May 5, 2008

This story is amazing!! I cannot wait for the next chapter, so update soon. :D

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: January 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: May 18 - May 20, 2008

Jasper isn't being targeted by the Volturi, is he? I really hope not. That would just be bad. I like that the story is heating up and the day of the trial and deposition draw ever closer. It's exciting!



Author's Response:

I can't answer if Jasper is being targeted... but thanks for reviewing :)

 
Summary:

The Olympics have been known to harbor peace, create lifelong friendships, and even save lives. But at the games I won more than in all my wildest dreams. I won love.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 29374
[Report This] Published: October 21, 2008 Updated: July 07, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Smallest Battle Won

At first when I started reading the chapter I was like, "What? Did I miss something?!" Then I realized it was all a dream...a very nice one. :D So glad you updated, please do so soon. Great job.



Author's Response:

haha! Yeah, a couple people requested to see the dreams that Bella lost herself in at the end of Chapter 7...and I took them to heart! Glad you liked it!!! Hopefully the next chapter will be out fairly quickly!

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: January 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Moist and Buttery

You could have Edward and Bella pull a Billy Bob and Angelina. I think that would effectively get rid of Tanya. :) Love the story (so sorry it took me forever to get around to reading the update) and hope to see another chapter soon!

 
Summary:

The trauma suffered by Bella for three years has left lasting mental scars.  Esme and Carlisle are finally offered the chance to be true parents to a teenager that needs them.  Surrounded by the support and love of the Cullen family, Bella begins to grow and finds out there is more to life than simply surviving.

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Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: No Word count: 91654
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2008 Updated: August 19, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Somehow Emmett going into the shop only equals trouble in my mind. :)

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

That was mean; I hope you update soon. :D



Author's Response:

I know it was mean, but it was that or a 20+ page chapter and even longer between the last update and this.  I promise the next chapter will make up for it.

 
Impossible by float_away Rated: R starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary:

Liz is forced to move in with her aunt in Forks after her father’s death and is determined to not like it until she meets Seth Clearwater. Suddenly, she’s pulled into a world of supernatural myths and when a group of super-powered vampires called The Volturi show up, she doesn’t think she can make it to her seventeenth birthday alive.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Other Character, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 87403
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2010


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstar
Date: December 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love stories about the wolves! This one seems really interesting and I can't wait to read more. Are you going to switch between POVs? Because I would love to know what was going on in Seth's head.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it! :)

I think I'll be keeping it in Liz's POV, but I do have some extras from Seth's. I don't know how I'll work them on this site but I do have a couple, haha.

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

OMFG, Claire is so freakin' cute! I can just picture the little pint-sized kid with her hands on her hips, shouting at Seth. Great characterization. :D And, yay! He told her and now things can really get rolling. :happy dance:

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Finally! A sane reaction to finding out someone is a werewolf. I liked that you created a really realistic scene, because, honestly, who is going to react well (other than Bella) to finding out someone can morph into a huge, furry beast? Great job. Can't wait for the next update! :D

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: March 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yay, I'm so glad you updated! I love this story, so update again soon. :)

 
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Date: April 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I love Aunt Emma, nurses and doctors have no inhibition when it comes to the sex talk...shudder.

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed
Date: April 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

uh oh...there had better be an update soon, like, TODAY!

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Hmm, intriguing. Can't wait for the next chapter, as usual!

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

And the next morning Emma barges into Liz's room with a shotgun! Jk

Great chapter, so glad you updated. :D

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

More, more, more!! I always get so excited when you update this story. :)

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I'm quite aware of the dangerous combo of alcohol and laptops (my brother's friend spilled beer all over mine) and hope you're able to scrape together the funds for a new computer soon!

Great chapter, I'm really sad it might be a while until another update; I love this story. :)

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Mean cliffhanger; update soon. :D

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I absolutely loved this chapter because Seth was back and a little imprint love was goin' on! I think we need to keep Seth in all the next chapters. Update soon :D

 
Summary:

 

When Charlie catches Bella and Edward in a compromising position how will he react?

What tactics will Edward and Bella have to resort to in order to get time alone together again?

 

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Categories: Twilight Characters: Bella, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: Yes Word count: 134267
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2008 Updated: December 07, 2009


Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Monkey Man

Ahahahaha! That was freakin' wonderful. Emmett giving Edward a sex talk and making him take notes. Amazing!



Author's Response:

He was hoping that if he took notes that Emmett would let him out of there faster.  Emmett was quite prepared though, he has been waiting for this moment for quite a while now!

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

 
Reviewer: Foxtrot Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: A Mutually Acceptable Agreement

Love this story...but have you met my father and brothers? Charlie is eerily like them...



Author's Response:

Ha...yes I have four brothers of my own so I know what you are talking about. 

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

 




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