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Penname: Chickey [Contact]
Real name: Nikki
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Member Since: November 29, 2008
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These Dreams by jbluvs2sing Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 954]
Summary:

It's been three years since the day Edward left Bella in the woods...she is moving on but is still plagued by nightmares from time to time. Will someone from her past help her get through her difficult times? What danger lies ahead for her? Will her dreams eventually come true? Please read and review!

Dream sequences based on the hit song by Heart.

Thanks to the fabulous Mrs.C for the banner!

These Dreams Banner


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Irina, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 70891
[Report This] Published: August 14, 2008 Updated: April 05, 2009


Reviewer: Chickey Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Ahhhh!!!! LOL

How can I love you and hate you at the same time.....haha

You don't realise how much power you have over all of us awaiting your wicked words! LOVE LOVE LOVE IT

That chapter was excellent! CAN NOT WAIT for the next one,...and the one after that, and the one after that... so on :D

By god that "Honey I'm home" comment had me in tears... love Emmett's humor, you nail it perfectly... you're doing so well on this story sweetie, I just might cry when it comes to an end. Assuming we let you ..*evil grin*

Ah my mind is already going wild at thinking what your going to do for this next chapter... BRING IT ON!!! lol

XOXOX



Author's Response:

I am glad you are enjoying my story. It has been fun to write. The next chapter is waiting for approval...hopefully it will be up soon.

 
Vertigo by FallenFlowers Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 227]
Summary:

Alternate Universe

Bella has had a less than perfect childhood, and due to certain circumstances she is now the human pet of James's coven.

Now the Cullens have kidnapped her to lure James out. How will Edward react to her blood? Will Bella ever find love again?

In various POVs, rated NC-17 just in case.

 

Vertigo is officially on HIATUS LEAVE

because I have gotten slightly bored of it and I think everyone else has too.

I will continue (and finish it; I think in several more chapters - maybe 5?), when inspiration chooses to pop back into my mind.

Please check out my other stories!

(if you don't mind a little advertising... ;))

XX/XY: The Story of Cesario if you like AH and/or Hana Kimi

Seraphim, if you like AU Twilight/Fantasy-Scifi themes

Charcoal: A One-shot if you like AH/JasperXBella pairings.

Orange if you like AH and a significant age difference between Edward (older) and Bella (younger)

 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 58371
[Report This] Published: September 01, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2009


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: January 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: 14: Eggshells

I'm dying to hear whats going to happen...

you've done such a fantastic story, thats only getting better.

I would be eternally greatful if you continued :)



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so much! I am, in fact, continuing this. I've already started on the next chapter but I haven't actually written past two paragraphs. Thanks again :)

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up.

NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: March 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Covering and Junk Food

Great chapter, LOL loved it when you mentioned your lemon dedication! classic!

Please please please don't make it too harsh when Jasper confronts and most likely finds out about the girl in the shower being Bella....

 
Eight Years Later by jmeyer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1238]
Summary:

It has been 8 long years since Edward left Bella on their wedding day. Bella has finally come back to Forks to visit Charlie, only to find that Edward has also returned, and he has been keeping a big secret from her.

Banner by allycubed

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 115303
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2008 Updated: August 05, 2009


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: January 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

WWWWHHHHHHAAAAAAATTTT!!!

I-.....but....NO~!!! no no no no no

*cries* YOUR SOOOOO EVIL!!!!

I NEEED to know what's going on! Is he a vamp? how is he a vamp? what the hell is going on!? lol

Please oh please don't let him leave!!! I beg!!!!



Author's Response:

Hi

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I am evil. I know. I'm sorry. Well, not really. As a writer - I LOVE LOVE LOVE putting in cliff hangers. As a reader, and I do read a lot of Twilight fanfiction, I hate them. So I understand your pain! You will get the answer to all of your questions in the next chapter.

Jess

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: February 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 (v)

BBBAAAAAAAAA

That went wwwwaaaaaayyyy to short....might of been me speed reading through it to find out what's happening...

You're killing me here!!!! .....i love it!

 
Summary:

 

Laurent manages to bite Bella before the wolves can stop him.  Now she is changed and alone and wants to find her way back to the Cullens.  She immerses herself in the music industry hoping that someone will hear her message.

Thanks to readergoof for the awesome banner!


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Laurent, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 4672
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: August 12, 2009


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ohhh this sounds really good, I'd love for you to keep adding to this!!!

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: May 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Ohhh this sounds really good, I'd love for you to keep adding to this!!!

 
Summary:

What would Twilight have been like if the roles were reversed?

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Edward, Emmett and Jasper Swan are humans living in Forks with their dad, Charlie and they all work at the police station under their father.

Bella, Rosalie and Alice Cullen are vampires, sent to Forks by their vampire parents, Carlisle and Esme, as punishment.

Banner by Anne Cullen

 


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 65420
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2009 Updated: January 15, 2010


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: April 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Awakening

Bah!!! You can't leave it at that!
Please please pplllleeeaaassseee post the next chapter, I'd love to know Edward thought!

I pray you not to keep us all waiting!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO!!  I do love a cliffy!  Thank you for reading and please, stay tuned!!!

 
Summary: Feature

 

Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

WHOOOOO HOOOOOOO

THAT WAS AWESOME!!!
Seriously loved this chapter, had the threating heartbreak of break-up but the gave the wake up call for both Bella and Edward of what they have....
Verrrry veeerrryyy awesome :D

I hope Edward keeps this connection in mind and doesn't to and fro between their relationship

 
Summary: Feature

OOC Banner

 

Bella is devastated by the loss of her mother and is forced to go live with Charlie, her Mom's best friend, when there is no one else to take her in. She gives up on living, too lost in her own anger to let anyone close to her. Enter Edward, the handsome teenage vampire, and the beginning of a complicated love-hate relationship. Neither can deny the connection between them, but can their love survive the fear that rules her and the secret he hides from her? AU and OOC, Rated NC-17 for language and sexual content.


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: Yes Word count: 292396
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: December 25, 2009


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: March 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Falling

NOOOooooooo Why has it stopped here!

I've been waiting so DAMN long for something to happen between them it's frustrating as hell!!

Neeeedddd moooooooorrrrreee



Author's Response:

Sorry :o) I don't mean to make you frustrated. The pace of the story is slower than some, I realize this. I'm hoping the next chapter that is now up makes up for it for you. Thanks for your comment.

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: March 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Ignorance

Bah! please tell me he takes off after her!!!
Loving this story more and more.. keep it sexin!



Author's Response:

If I tell you what Edward does then you won't come back and read the next chapter ;o) Thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: March 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Reminders

Weeeeeee Bella/Edward high!!
Loved that chapter! Can't wait till the next little evil sexy situation...

Your a legend!



Author's Response:

Thank you LOL. I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter. Lots of little evil sexy situations to get into yet! Thanks for your comment!

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: March 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Rubicon

OH I love it! You little genius....
Bout time Bella turned the game *rounds of applause*



Author's Response:

Tee hee hee, thank you. Yes, Bella needed to turn it around a bit and get out of her own way, didn't she? Thanks for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: May 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Connection

Wow.... you just wrapped up the perfect moment in that chapter...

DAMN IT! where's Edward when ya need him, like all the time?



Author's Response:

Thank you. I think that's the problem. We need him all the time LOL. Thanks for the comment!

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: April 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Rescue

oh you have made me a happy happy woman, it's about time Bella stop being all stubborn and acting like such a bitch



Author's Response:

Well I'm glad the latest chapter made you happy. You had to know she would give in eventually. I mean he is Edward Cullen ;o) Thanks for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: April 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Subjugation

Ooooo can't wait for the next chapter....
I really hope it's not Edward that makes her upset, I may as well just read chapters 8-16 all over again



Author's Response:

You mean you don't want to read chapters 8 to 16 all over again? ;o) I kid you. I can't say much about Alice's vision without wrecking a big part of the story. I hope that you enjoy the update! Thanks for the comment.

 
Summary:

He is drawn to her scent, seduced by her taste. He would make her belong to him, through whatever means necessary. E/B AU Adult Content.

thanks to Cullenitis for the banner!


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 10974
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2009 Updated: June 11, 2009


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh please please pretty please, you must continue with story...

What you have going is a great thing, I'd LOVE to read more of it!!!!

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: March 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh please please pretty please, you must continue with story...

What you have going is a great thing, I'd LOVE to read more of it!!!!

 
Stolen HeART by Wordy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 285]
Summary:

Bella Swan was planning her latest heist in the art world. A sixty million dollar Picasso hung on the wall of one of the richest men in the world... he is the only person standing between her and a vast fortune.

 

Along with her team of artisans, Bella has six weeks to finalise details of the operation, and familiarise herself with the movements of the infamous Edward Masen.

 

Nominated story at The Indie Awards 

 

 


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 167928
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Broken Hearts and Stolen Paintings

OMG, you've made me cry, look what you've done.. :)

That chapter was awesome, I'm really hanging out for more. Want to see what Edward are Aro are up and what Bella is gonna do about Edward. I'll be checking everyday till you put the next chapter up, and the next and the next :D
You've got a great story and I looooove you're writing from the very beginning!



Author's Response:

Hello Chickey

You don't need to wait too long the next chapter is in the queue waiting to be validated. I'm sorry I made you cry, that wasn't my intention...

I've never experienced this kind of encouragement before, it's my first time writing and I find it all a bit overwhelming and dare I say odd. I am not a confident writer; I can't churn out stories, this story alone has been my obsession for nearly a year. Last November was when I first drafted a few words and I never thought in my wildest dreams that it would be like this. Full of exciting experiences and adventure.

Thank you so much for your kind words, especially the lovely comments about my writing.♥

 
Cryptic Love by blkeyes_redlips Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Handsome. Intelligent. Irresistible. A Gentleman.

Plain. Sarcastic. Complicated. A Loner.

It takes dedication, patience and extreme curiosity to decode a masked introvert.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 22415
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2009 Updated: May 12, 2009


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: March 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

BAHHHHH Nooo....It can't end there *zombie* moooorreee brraaaiinnnss
Loving your story, can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Shucks, thanks =)

 
Winter by Sagie14 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 336]
Summary:

It's been a hundred years since Bella was changed in the meadow. Now she sees Edward for the first time...


Categories: New Moon, AU, Other Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 16983
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2009 Updated: October 16, 2010


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Ice (EPOV)

I definatley think you should continue.... you have my vote 100%

I've been hanging out for this chapter and the ones to follow, I think you have something good going here.

I'd love to hear a happy ending :)

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: April 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Bitter

Love love love love love love....

I'm beggin here, please please pppllleeeaaassseee keep going with this fic. It's been so awesome and I'd love to see more of it!!!

The passion in this fic is only beginning and I hope you have the passion to keep going....

 
The Cullen Girl by evieeden Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1103]
Summary:

Bella's family is attacked by vampires when she is young, leaving her the sole survivor. Rescued by Dr Carlisle Cullen, she is adopted into his 'vegetarian' family, consisting of him, his wife Esme and their three sons Emmett, Edward and Jasper. Struggling with her trauma, Bella finds herself developing special bonds with each of the Cullen boys.

This story has no Alice or Rosalie (or at least, not as vampires or Cullens).

The Cullen Girl Banner

Thanks to m81170 for the banner.

Cheers to the lovely ms_ambrosia and CatMasters for the gifs.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61118
[Report This] Published: September 03, 2009 Updated: March 23, 2012


Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: January 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Blood Red

I looooooooove this story, I always get so excited when I see you update.
I really like the way Bella is adapting to the Cullens, especially Esme, despite what she's gone through because of vampires.
Any encouragement that can be given for you to continue this fantastic story, it's there! Please please please bring on more of your work...



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you. That's such a lovely thing to say. The updates will probably be every other week now, but I will try to get them out as quickly as possible. Cheers for the support, I appreciate it.

Happy New Year :)

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: The Human in the House

Oh I'm really loving this fic, you've got me bouncing up and down when I see an update.

If I poke you will you work faster like a monkey? lol jk

Fantastic story! Keep it up!



Author's Response:

I love that you're bouncing. Thanks for the enthusiasm. If you poke me it might make me work like a monkey, but from my understanding, monkeys aren't really that reliable as workers. Thanks for your comments :)

 
Reviewer: Chickey Signed
Date: October 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: I Know What You Are

So far, it's been really enjoyable to read, I'd love to have more of it!

I like what you've got for a story line and how you've used the characters...

Without sounding like Oliver Twist but "please? can I have some more?" :) ;)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing. Hopefully the next chapter will be out in the next week at some point.

 




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