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Penname: voldemortperfumes [ Contact]
Real name: Candy
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Member Since: November 27, 2008
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What I write depends on the day. The genres I use most in my work are angst and random, kick-ass humor. Those are just my faves. Personally I write mostly canon pairings, but I HAVE written a little non-canon pairage before and quite enjoyed it. As for reading, I read both canon and non-canon also. Smut = love, don't try and tell me any different. My motto: Don't like; don't read!
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Summary: Bella Swan is now a teacher at Forks High school. She's been gone for six years, and now she's back. What old and new friends will she find? What happens when she is reunited with an old crush? A realistic look of life, love, and the pursuit of happiness. Is true love only found in fairytales? Find out! Special thanks to Manyafandom for the Banner!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: No
Word count: 216661
[Report This] Published: October 20, 2008 Updated: September 19, 2009
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Forks
This is a really great introductory chapter. I could visalize it all so well, and it was very realistic. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the story. -Candy
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Orientation
Another really good chapter. When I read it, it makes me feel like I'm there, like I'm settling in just like Bella is right now.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Faces
Well even if Edward was lying to Emmett, he did it so well I believed it. I like that Edward isn't instantly trying to chat her up or anything like that. Its more genuine.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Alice, Students, and Bears! Oh My!
Yeah, I can definitely see how you're setting things up, and I can't wait to see how it all pans out!
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Oops
LOL. I love the fact that he's a cop. He's such a rules-stickler already, it's perfect for him. Ah, but Embry needs to go. Bella & him just don''t "click."
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - The Story of My Life
Oh yay! It's so great to see an author that does their research. Most people get lazy... I have to admit. So props! I did love the banter, and I can't wait to read about Edward cooking her late-night breakfast. Yum!
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Scrambled Eggs
Yeah, Embry seems alright. I might have given him a second chance, but it would depend. I'm not really sure. Haha I do love the part where Alice was like "Yeah I'd totally do you if I was into that sort of thing." Priceless! Yeah, Edward... I don't like him at the moment. He needs to chillax. Seriously.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Unexpected
Jacob planned it! I just have a feeling. It was very unexpected, but a nice surprise. Regardless, I liked the date w/ Embry. I would have really enjoyed it myself, loving Chinese and baseball.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Peace Offerings
Nah, I completely understand. One of my good friend's mother was bi-polar, and i've been there to see the moodswings. Even my grandmother has her moments where I think she might be too....
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Dinner is Served
I loved Jake and the dinner party, the kiss w/ Embry however wasn't all that good for me. If I was that unsure about a guy, I'd probably just tell him I wanted to be friends.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - This is Bad
Oh my goodness. Poor girl, that would be so terrifying! -takes deep, steadying breaths- She really ought to listen to Alice's theory though. Sparks are important.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Epiphany
Okay, I have a theory, and it may be wrong... but I think Edward's mom died in a car crash. It would make sense that he would want to be a cop---to keep an eye on the citizens and make sure nothing like that happens to anyone else. It would also explain his rudness and avoiding Bella after her car accident. He was probably really torn up seeing her like that after he went through something similar w/ his mom. And now that I think of it, his comment to Bella when she gave him a ride home from Port Angeles would make sense too, because he was glad someone drove the speed limit. So my guess is that there was a speeding, possibly drunk driver that hit his mom while she was driving.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - White Flag
Wow... that was intense. I bloody loved it. I could feel the energy between them, and I'm sure their friends have to have had picked up on it by now.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Thankful
Wow. I really enjoyed this chapter. It was very heartfelt, and I am enjoying his lighter side.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Truth in Expressions
Aww, he's helping her through her flu. Nice guy!
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - The Perfect Medicine
Ah my god it was magical! I cannot wait to see their talk in action. Esme & Carlisle's story was great, and very believable. I loved it, and it almost made me cry too. OOH! I love "Hanging By A Moment". Seriously. A guy could sooo win me over w/ that song.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Black Holes and Revelations
Well my guess was wrong, but his story was really excellent. I can tell you really thought it out, and that's great! ;)
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Afterglow
Ooh, so she is a virgin? Well now that I think about it, with her dating history, it would make sense.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 - Ripple Effect
Ha, me and my boyfriend almost walked in on his cousin and the the cousin's girlfriend going at it. We were walking downstairs into the basement to get some drinks, but then we heard these ODD noises...lol. Needless to say we sat on the stairs to wait it out...
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 28, 2008
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - Acceptance
Aww, poor Bells. I hope Edward and her aren't back to square one again...
Author's Response: I've been waiting until you got to this chapter! I have to say, I've enjoyed reading your reactions for each chapter. Thanks for reviewing
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Heartbeat
Aww, I'm glad they're on the road back to normalcy. They're not quite there yet, but making good progress.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: December 06, 2008
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Resolutions
Sexy. I definitely understand Bella when she talks about her dormant teenaged mind being in the gutter. Heck mine fell off in the gutter and has taken permanent residence there!
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: December 14, 2008
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Blush
Ha, that's both hilarious and sad for her. Personally I would have said the same thing as Alice. Bella needs to just let go of her inhibitions and just start off...slow. Do some research if it helps.
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: December 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Pop
Aww, sad but good all at the same time.
Summary: Bella is convinced that Edward has fallen out of love with her. His constant disappearances, his avoidance of her touch - there are so many signs that it's true. But when she starts to notice some strange changes in Edward and Alice, Bella starts to suspect that something else is going on.
Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Marcus
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Word count: 21093
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2009
Reviewer: voldemortperfumes Signed
Date: November 30, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Wow, Aro's dastardly scheme. I wasn't sure he had it in him. This is a very intriguing storyline, I can't wait to see how it pans out.
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