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Breathe Again by Ysar Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5438]
Summary: Feature

You know those fics where Edward doesn't come back and Bella forgets about him and five seconds later she's in bed with Jacob and none of it makes any damn sense?
Yeah, this isn't one of them.

This story picks up from the moment in New Moon when Jacob has driven Bella home after the cliff diving incident, right before he catches the scent of Alice. Only in this telling, Alice wasn't looking, so there's no sudden appearance at Bella's house, no Rosalie calling Edward and sending him on a suicidal mission to Volterra, and no reason for Bella to do anything but believe that Edward didn't love her anymore. This is simply a story of what might have happened if everyone stayed mostly in character and Edward's return was delayed. Yes, delayed. Because we all know that he was "this close" to coming back on his own anyhow.
So what would have happened if Bella had tried to move on with her life?  Would she have found happiness with Jacob?  And would Edward be too late?

* First in a series of stories


~I thought of Jacob’s warm arms wrapped around me, his infectious laughter, and his ability to keep me from falling to pieces again… The pain choking my heart relaxed and I could breathe.~

 

~“More than anything,” I whispered, not caring what I'd just agreed to. When it came to Bella, it didn't matter what the question was. I just wanted.~

Winner of:

Best Author, Most Romantic, Favorite Jacob, Most Suspenseful, & Best WIP in the Wolfpack Awards | Best Non-Canon Pairing (Incomplete) and Best WIP in the Moonlight Awards | Best During the Series in the Razzle Dazzle Awards | The Storyteller Award in the Shimmer Awards | Best JacobxBella in the Silent Tear Awards  


Categories: Twilight, New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Bella, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: A Blazing Sun
Chapters: 76 Completed: No Word count: 164405
[Report This] Published: December 07, 2008 Updated: September 11, 2010


Reviewer: jdmathis Signed
Date: July 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 54: Nuisance: Jacob's POV

Thank you for not  making me wait any longer!!!  You have forced me to read other stories, which are good, but not as good as yours!!  And there aren't near enough stories about Jacob and Bella, which I LOVE!!!  Thank you!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

 
Summary:

All trace of torment fled from my body the moment I thought of Jake. Of course. Jake was the one good thing that had been given to me after Edward had left, again, for the second time. But then...hadn't he been here all along? Each day Edward had been missing from my life Jake had reached out with his hands, as well as with his heart, and had taken a hold of mine without hesitation, without a second thought as to how it could have affected him. He didn't realize just how much that little deed had done for me, how even those small signs of affection had meant so much.

 

Emptiness. The one thing Bella thought she would never feel again - but she did. Edward has left for the second time, and for the same reasons he had before. He backed out of their plan once and for all and has refused to turn her into a living blood-sucking monster. Bella is miserable, and she is positive this time that she'll never again feel the touch of happiness. But with Jake still in her life to patch things up, maybe things won't be so bad after all. Edward may have had the power of an eclipse, but sun can shine through almost anything...including a shattered heart.

A story in which Jake finally gets his happy ending.

 

Special thanks to Anne Cullen for the banner!

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Edward, Embry, Emily, Eric, Jacob, Lauren, Leah, Mike, Other Character, Quil, Renee, Sam, Seth
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 42188
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2009 Updated: November 18, 2009


Reviewer: jdmathis Signed
Date: July 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue: Shadows of the Sun

Awesome story!!!  I am sooo Team Jacob, don't get me wrong, I love Edward too.  I just think I love the story of Bella and Jacob more.  They are in a whole different realm of love and that's what I enjoyed most about your story.  You showed that level so well!  There really needs to be more Bella/Jacob stories on here, so you should take your other ideas and write another one!!!  Awesome, awesome, awesome!

 
Summary:

Special thanks to mellyfrisco6 for this new and improved banner.

Post Eclipse.  Breaking Dawn never happened.  Bella and Edward are engaged to be married, but Bella can't seem to ignore the feelings she still has for Jacob.  Will she stay with the vampire who broke her heart, or will she run to the werewolf who put it back together?

Coming Full Circle has won praise from The Wolfpack Awards:

MOST SUSPENSEFUL

MOST ORIGINAL PLOT

BEST IMPRINT

Winner of "Most Loved Imprint Character" in the Summer JBNP Awards!

 

*And special thanks also go out to precioustandi for this banner as well.

 


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 46 Completed: No Word count: 415372
[Report This] Published: January 31, 2009 Updated: September 24, 2012


Reviewer: jdmathis Signed
Date: July 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I LOVE this story!!!  I used to be Team Edward and here lately, man oh man, I am Team Jacob.  You just have a way of making him so manly and responsible and gosh, just really love your story.  MORE MORE MORE!!!!



Author's Response:

Wow, that is music to my ears.  I've said before that I'm not trying to recruit followers to Team Jacob's side, but if that happens as a result of my story, then I really am HAPPY!  Thank you so much for your review and your wonderful praise.  I love it! :)

 
Fall For You by Live720 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 672]
Summary:

 

Banner made my the wonderful, my hubby is no edward.

 

What if Bella never jumped off that cliff?  This story picks up from that part in New Moon.  It gives Jacob his chance, finally.  If Edward decides to come back, who will Bella choose?  Who is Cole and what are his motives? Bella/Jacob and Bella/Edward

 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob, Other Character
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 128687
[Report This] Published: March 10, 2009 Updated: October 12, 2009


Reviewer: jdmathis Signed
Date: July 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: So Much For Taking Things Slow

I love me some hott Jacob too...mmm...need more story NOW!!  :)  Love your story by the way, I can't help it, I am a converted Team Jacob!!

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is Big Man on Campus at his high school in Port Angeles. Bella Swan is a quiet, sarcastic, marches-to-the-beat-of-her-own-drummer girl at Forks High. A part-time job brings them together, and an unlikely friendship and surprising feelings develop. Neither is brave enough to do anything about it, however, and they part ways when Edward heads off to college. Their paths cross again after a year of no contact, and Edward is determined to not only rekindle their friendship, but to man up and actually do something about his ever-present feelings for Bella.

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Banner by the brilliant Anne Cullen

Come visit over on the forums! http://www.twilighted.net/forum/viewtopic.php?f=44&t=3850


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 144739
[Report This] Published: April 02, 2009 Updated: October 08, 2009


Reviewer: jdmathis Signed
Date: August 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Holy cow, I love your story!  Definatley one of my very favorites and I just absolutely love how you have told the story.  Need more story now!!!!  Please update soon and I will have Edward visit you!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much! I'm working on Ch 19 as we speak, so you can expect an update within the next day or two. :)

 
Reviewer: jdmathis Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE this story!!  Please keep writing, please please please!!!!!  I'm still reading and I have fabulous taste!  So you are doing wonderfully!!  Love you!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! :) I'm still writing, I promise! In fact, the next chapter should be up tonight or tomorrow - is that quick enough? ;-)

 
Summary:

Then Direct You Into My Arms

Then Direct You Into My Arms opens during New Moon. Bella is hunted by Victoria, haunted by Edward, protected by the pack. Amidst the chaos of constant danger, the growth of her relationship with Jacob Black and the difficult beginnings of a new friendship, the Cullens will return to Forks to turn Bella's life upside down again... and again. 

 


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jacob, Leah
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 61415
[Report This] Published: May 10, 2009 Updated: November 01, 2009


Reviewer: jdmathis Signed
Date: July 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

LOVE your story!!!  Please post more soon, I need my Jacob/Bella fix!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it! The next chapter is in the queue :)

 
Summary:

Edward's phone call during New Moon goes a little bit differently, and Bella finds herself wanting more than just friendship from Jacob. Rated R for language. 

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Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Angela, Bella, Charlie, Embry, Jacob, Jessica, Mike, Quil
Challenges:
Series: The Bella and Jacob Chronicles
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 58186
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2009


Reviewer: jdmathis Signed
Date: July 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Sonnet

I am really enjoying your story, more more more!!  You know, there are people who thrive off of these stories.  I'm not saying I'm one of them....ok maybe I am  :)  Please post more soon!!!  Now!!!

Team Jake all the way baby!!!!



Author's Response:

I will update soon, promise! Jake for the win (-:

 
Summary:

******THIS IS A SERIES OF ALTERNATE POVS FROM THE STORY SHOW AND DON'T TELL. IN ORDER FOR THIS TO MAKE ANY SENSE, YOU MUST READ SHOW AND DON'T TELL FIRST!  http://www.twilighted.net/viewstory.php?sid=3995 EPOV moments from Show & Dont Tell

 

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Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and Twilight plot lines that may appear in this story.  The remainder is my original work.   No copying or reproduction of this work is permitted without my express written authorization. Copyright 2009 by Brits23.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 86153
[Report This] Published: June 16, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2010


Reviewer: jdmathis Signed
Date: August 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Soulja Boy and Shakespeare

Girl, you got a gift!  Love your stories and love the way your portray all of the characters.   I am so ready for Edward and Bella to get some yum yum!  Keep up the awesome story, update now!!!!  You rock!





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