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Penname: amg98 [Contact]
Real name: Aimee Gurrola
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Member Since: July 05, 2009
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Summary:

Bella is a witness in peril. Emmett Cullen is the deputy assigned to protect her. When the witness protection program proves unsafe, Emmett has Bella pose as his brother Edward's fiancée. ExB. AU/AH.

 

 

Hiding in Plain Sight

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Emmett
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 138506
[Report This] Published: September 14, 2008 Updated: June 14, 2012


Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: June 20 - June 24, 2008

Glad you are back.  Thanks for the post. 

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: February 18, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: September 4 - December 23, 2008

Great chapter!! At first I thought it was Emmett, but I am glad it was Edward.  Can't wait to find out how he found her and where they are going.  Thanks for updating. 

 
Resident Geek by cdunbar Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 700]
Summary:

Geeky Edward thinks he has absolutely no shot with the popular, beautiful Bella. Is he right, or will she be one of the many girls who thinks geeks make for better lovers? M for language, sexuality and some underage drinking. A little OOC… okay, a lot OOC.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 71582
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2008 Updated: December 08, 2009


Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Fun chapter.  Interested to see the rest.

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved it.  Great chapter.

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

The whole party scene was great.  I love a jealous, overprotective Edward. 

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: December 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 (SA)

Wonderful chapter; very playful.  I figured Bella was going to have to say it first.  His response was great.  Looking forward to the next update.

 
Summary:

Edward, the new, fresh meat at Bella's office, is a complete geek, which is ultimately her undoing. She fantasizes about him at work constantly... Will her fantasies become a reality, or will real life get in the way? Original O/S now extended. BxE, AH


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Geekward and Nerdella
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 9931
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: January 26, 2010


Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Tuesday: Pipe Dreams & Post-Its

Sexy, confident Edward is fuck hot!!  Thanks for the story and the last line.  Both were great.

 
Change of Heart by LuvCullens Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 855]
Summary:

Bella, has spent her life hating and loving the arrogant Edward Cullen. When she returns to Forks after ten years, will she fall for Dr Black, or will Edward see that he wants her to have a change of heart?

Thanks to heatherdawnc for her amazing banner work.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 201161
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Thanks for the update.   Looking forward to the next chapter and the proposal.



Author's Response:

The next chapter should be up soon. Thank you for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: February 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Epilogue

I have really enjoyed your story.  The last few chapter especially.  Thanks for sharing. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your review. My writing has definitely improved every chapters because my betas are amazing. All those that love fluff love the last few chapters the most ;) I am glad you liked the story.

 
Summary: Feature

 

Edward Cullen needs to pass Statistics. Bella Swan is his tutor. She thinks he's a flighty, arrogant--albeit sexy--asshole, and he thinks she's Bipolar, but tries to win her over, anyway.

Can he change her mind, or do first impressions really last?

 Thanks to my baby momma, Maximista, for the banner! <3


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Other Character, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 258464
[Report This] Published: February 20, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2011


Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 23: Space

I'm much better now.  Thanks for posting.

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16: Airplane hunks & Store chumps

My six year old is named Jace.  I love it!!!  Great story so far.  I just found it a couple of days ago and am making my way through all the chapters.

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24: Giving In

Good to see you back.  Love your story.  I am glad Bella called Edward to talk.  Thanks for the update.

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: January 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 25: Amends

A lot covered in this chapter.  It is not looking good for Edward right now.  I trust that in the end it will all work out.  I do love the name Jace.  That is my son's name.  Thanks for the update.

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: February 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Coffee and Severing Ties

Thanks for the update.  I really enjoy this story. 

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: April 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 27: Surprises

Progress is good.  She knows the difference in feelings she has for Edward and Jace, now she just needs to come to terms with it.  Thanks for the update. 

 
Summary: Feature

 

Bella begins working for the elusive and distant Edward Cullen who she discovers is hiding behind an elaborate charade to maintain his secret lifestyle. Bella is determined to find out the mysteries of Edward Cullen but with what results? AU. Mystery/Humor/Angst


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 173201
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2009


Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: August 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Great chapter.  I can't wait to read what happens next. 

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: August 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I loved the extra long chapter.  I was very surprised that he killed Bree in front of Bella.  That was an interesting twist and I can't wait to find out Bella's full reaction to all that she has learned.

 
Summary: Feature

 

While hunting one afternoon, Emmett, Jasper and Carlisle stumble upon what appears to be a corpse.  When they learn it's a severely broken vampire, they take him home to do what they can to help.  But of course, fate has plans for this man.  Canon Couples.  AU.  DARK Themes.


Categories: AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 32 Completed: Yes Word count: 158872
[Report This] Published: February 26, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011


Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: The Vision

I am still here and with this story.  It is haunting and beautifully written.  I hope the next update is soon.  Thanks for sharing.

 
Stolen HeART by Wordy Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 286]
Summary:

Bella Swan was planning her latest heist in the art world. A sixty million dollar Picasso hung on the wall of one of the richest men in the world... he is the only person standing between her and a vast fortune.

 

Along with her team of artisans, Bella has six weeks to finalise details of the operation, and familiarise herself with the movements of the infamous Edward Masen.

 

Nominated story at The Indie Awards 

 

 


Categories: AU, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 167928
[Report This] Published: February 28, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010


Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: November 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Edward

Very good chapter.  Edward angry and heartbroken, not a good combination.  I wonder what is first reaction to seeing Bella will be.  Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

His reaction, well let's see!!  He won't be all singing and all dancing that's for sure.

:)

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: September 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 The Wishing of a Dying Man

Great chaptere.  Can't wait to see how everything plays out.



Author's Response:

The excitement is nearly here!!

Thank you ;)

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: October 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Broken Hearts and Stolen Paintings

That was a very good chapter.  I liked the way you have taken this story.  I don't mind James as the hero and Bella's protector.  I can't wait until all the pieces have fallen into place. 



Author's Response:

I have a little crush on James which is probably obvious to most that are reading this story. You read my mind when labelling James. He is indeed the hero in my eyes, Author Notes in next chapter will comment on that. Next chapter is in the queue, so not long to wait. :)

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: October 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 James

Very good chapter.  I enjoyed James' POV.  I have liked him in this story.  A nice change from most stories.  I would like to know what has been happening with Edward since Bella left.  Thanks for posting.  Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response:

Your question will most definitely be answered in the next chapter. The next chapter, which is rather large, is all in Edward's pov.

I have a weakness for James so it was an enjoyable chapter to write; actually these last few chapters were all outlined and prepared before the beginning of the story. I started off with the end before I had written the start of the story, weird. I know!

Thanks for reviewing

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: December 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Six Months of Sunshine and Every Day a Downpour

This chapter was worth it to get to the end.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

 
Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: January 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Time

Very sweet and moving chapter.  Can't wait to find out how you wrap everything up.  Thanks for updating.



Author's Response:

I'm working on the epilogue as I write this. It's written but I'm editing and adding. it's another big chapter and it seems to be growing.

Thank you.:)

 
Summary:

Edward Cullen is a vampire living alone, away from the rest of the Cullens, with nothing but his music to fill the emptiness of his lonely heart. Little does he know that his quiet seclusion will never be the same again when the shy, beautiful Bella Swan comes into his life. Quiet but inquisitive, Bella is more than curious about Edward and his strange habits. Little does she know that his secret could threaten her very life. Will Edward be able to control his appetite for her blood and satisfy his yearning for this enchanting young woman?

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Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34559
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2009 Updated: August 14, 2009


Reviewer: amg98 Signed
Date: August 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

I just stubled upon your story yesterday and have read all nine chapters.  I really like the way you have set it up and the direction you are taking.  Can't wait for the updates.



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you found it. Keep in touch. Let me know what you think. I aim to please.

 




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