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Summary:

Bella takes a vacation to Hilton Head Island in South Carolina to meet Alice's new boyfriend, Jasper. Rosalie and Emmett come along, too, just in case Bella didn't feel like enough of a fifth wheel. With Jasper's roommate out of town, Bella has his nice big bed all to herself. Until Edward comes home in the middle of the night...

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: Always Human , SMUT - Best of the Best - Edward and Bella
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 163211
[Report This] Published: March 01, 2009 Updated: December 21, 2011


Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play

Great chapter! Can't wait to read the next and I do hope they decide to move to HH permanently! He's not happy in Seattle and I don't think Bella is either. Maybe that restaurant offer will come around again for her.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 Jasper's Outtake: Family Lost & Found

Being a mother of four myself, I couldn't help but cry for poor young Jasper. To be treated like unwanted garbage dumped to the curb like that just broke my heart. The way the Cullens took him in and made him feel like he was part of their family speaks a lot for them. He was so much better off witht them than his birth parents... I started to say his "real" parents but I can't call them that. No loving, caring parent could do such a thing to their child.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 Sorry the Hard Way

Thanks for the update. Great chapter, I loved it. Can't wait to see what is in James' head and what he does. She hasn't told Edward yet where the new restaurant is to be located and I am thinking that Edward would jump at the chance of moving back there in a New York Minute! haha. I don't think he's happy in his new position. Just sayin'. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

It's now 2:50AM and I have got to get to bed and some sleep. I kept saying to myself, 'one more chapter' because I couldn't wait to see what happens between Bella and Edward. They seem so right for each other! But now I can't read anymore so it'll have to wait until tomorrow morning. You are a wonderful writer and I'm glad things are moving along at a good clip, that's the way I like it. hehe. Thank you.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Just a Few Bones (V)

The reason I love this story so much is the way you take the time to develope each characters' story and avoid using them to just cut to the sex. That kind of writing really turns me off. How you write allows the reader to form a connection between the themselves and the characters. I'm not a writer and sometimes I have a difficult time finding the right way to express myself with the written word but I do know and appreciate good writing and character deveopement when I read it and you are very good.  I have become involved in their lives through you and all I can say is well done, I can't wait for more. :) Thank you. Oh, and by the way, I loved the lollypop analogy. ;)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Get What You Need (V)

Uh oh, something tells me this isn't going to end well, in the short term anyway. But I have hope for them. Don't let me down. :/

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 So Far Away From Me (V)

As i said before, you make us really care about these people and it shouldn't come as a surprise when I say that I shed a few tears for Jasper and Alice as well as Bella and Edward. Great chapter. I had a feeling that something bad was going to happen when they went to Florida.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed
Date: October 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

I just reread this last chapter to refresh my memory. I wish you would post another chapter soon as I really love this story and how you give the characters so much personality and truth. Edward and Jasper are so well written that I know I would fall in love with them myself if I met them! Can't wait to read more and find out what Bella will do about the new job offer and how Edward is going to handle the news.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Outtake: Tattoo You

I've just re-read this last chapter and can't wait to see what happens next. I am hoping you will update the story soon. :) Pretty please? With Edward on top? hehe.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Spoiling for a Fight

"It was a bit like sharing a home with an alien who has studied our culture and does a damn good impression of human life on earth, but just doesn’t really get it. Things that seemed like absolute common sense to me, made Edward frown in deep concentration trying to understand."


I love this line! Truer words were never spoken/written. :O It really proves the 'Venus/Mars' theory, doesn't it! Although I've already reviewed this chapter, when I read it again this morning, this line just jumped out at me and I had to comment. Great writing! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, and am in hopes that she tells him about the offer.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Coming and Going

Great chapter. Oh I'm sure Bella's gonna be pissed! Big time but when the dust settles I think she'll be grateful he's finally behind bars. I hope they do a mental test on the bum to find out that he reallly is totally nutso!! LOL. And as for Alice, I truly hope she's not preggers yet. It's hard enough being newly weds and learning to live as man and wifey without the added pressure of a baby along the way. Can't wait for the next chapter, please don't make us wait too long again? Hope things are going a little easier for you and you get your groove back. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Oh please don't cry Wndrngy, sure we would have like an update a little sooner but I understand RL can sometimes rear it's ugly head and get in the way of the best laid plans. Be that as it may, this chapter was a humdinger! Loved it! Alice preggers, all but Edward and Emmett back east feeling the love there and I am hoping that by the time this wraps up they are all back in the land of Hilton Head as happy as clams and one great big happy family. Edward doesn't need the headaches and from the looks of his bosses marriage, he and Bella don't need that strain either. Thanks! You are a great story teller.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29 Another Day in Paradise

Don't worry, I won't tell you you suck! LOL.

I'm just happy you updated and we found out Alice is preggers and Bella learns that Edward really does want to marry her. :D

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Sweet Tea & the Southern Inquisition (V)

HI, I've already read this story and love the updates but I wanted to reread their beginning because I remembered how sweet, hot and beautiful it was. I think I may have read the last three chapters several times. hehe. Thanks for a really great story. You write lemons so well!

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 All Work and No Play

I hope this all leads to them all moving to Hilton Head. I think they will be so much happier there, once they get James out of the picture.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Don't Fear the Reaper

I loved how you let Bella be the one to take out James. And yeah, the frying pan was the perfect weapon! LOL. I'm hoping Edward agrees to move to HH. It's where they belong. Great chapter, great story, I really love it and always am excited when I get mu update notice. Thanks and big hugs.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 Epilogue

Aw thanks for this peek into their future. Still the loving, perfect couple. I hope you keep looking into their lives down the road because I dearly love them all and feel as if I know them. You create such realistic characters and embue them with a dignity and respect that we would all like to posess. A closeness in their families that you just know will never be torn or damaged. I also loved that essay about what a true gentleman is and am thinking of writing that down and giving it to my grandsons. Thanks.

 
Captivated by Paulette_Marie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 341]
Summary:

 

 

 Captivated

A story of how Kristen and Rob's relationship progresses while filming Twilight.

 Rob is a big fan of Kristen’s works; his main reason for auditioning was so he could be in a movie with her. Kristen is amazed by Rob’s humbleness and dedication to his work; she sees something in him that captivates her. What started out as just another movie turns into something much more as Kristen and Rob’s undeniable chemistry propels them from ‘co-stars’ to ‘friends’ and possibly…. ‘lovers’?

Things are not always so simple in Hollywood and the two stars have to face some harsh reality. Is Kristen willing to leave her first love and longtime boyfriend, Michael? Does Rob want that? How can they make a long distance relationship work with Rob living  in London and Kristen in L.A? 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 109712
[Report This] Published: April 21, 2009 Updated: August 04, 2013


Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: I've Just Seen A Face

Wow! is right! I loved this chapter and can't wait to read on. Great job!

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: I've Just Seen A Face 11

I really liked this chapter as well, especially from Rob's POV. It's like being inside his head and witnessing the whole scenario through his mind's eye.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Classifieds

This was interesting but I was surprised Catherine didn't put Robert's name out there because she seemed so enthusiastic when he finished his audition. But then I guess you wanted it to be Bella, oops, I mean Kristen. :) Another great chapter. Thanks. You are terrific!

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Hero/Herione

F**k me swinging! Does anyone have a fan?  lol. That was HOT Paulette and I loved it so much. Especially when he fell off the bed!! Great writing. Can't wait for more.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Jude Law And A Semester Abroad

I sure hope you are busy writing your little fingers off because I can't wait to see what happens next! It's like being an insider watching the whole process of making Twilight come to screen with a little spice added to the mix. Loved it. You seem to have Rob dead on and Kristen too. I love that huge laugh of his! lol.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!! I cannot believe you actually reviewed every chapter. That's so wonderful of you! Thank you,thank you, thank you!And yes, I'm hard at work writing the next chapter. I hope to have it out before the weekend is over.   ^_^

Thank again,

Paulette

 
The Hunter by kaybebaby Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 688]
Summary:

When Catherine Hardwicke hires a young, unknown actor to play the lead in her new vampire movie "Twilight," Kristen Stewart is convinced from the start that something is not quite right about him. The team laughs off her bizarre theories - but what if she is right? What if the actor playing Edward Cullen is just pretending to be Robert Pattinson? What if the true identity of this man is not that of a young aspiring actor from London, but something completely different - an ancient Transylvanian vampire on the prowl for revenge and blood?


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Peter Facinelli, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 102578
[Report This] Published: April 28, 2009 Updated: December 08, 2009


Reviewer: shichi Signed
Date: November 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Well I have to say it, I hate this ending, if that is the way it wil be. I know rationally that their love is impossible and hopeless yet I had hoped that they would find a way. I guess I'll have to console myself with the altrnate ending you plan on posting. Sorry, I am nothing but a pile of mush right now and will go off in a corner and lick my wounds. sniff.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, I likey. Can't wait to read more. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you!! Hope to see you again! :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my. This is good but very disturbing to think of RP as this monster. Interesting read though and now I am really looking forward to the next chapter. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing - glad you'll stick around for more. :) x

 




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