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With Teeth by TalulaBlue Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5900]
Summary: Feature

Edward is a 27-year-old alcoholic/addict struggling with his recovery. Bella is a 23-year-old who's moved back home after college. This fic chronicles how they meet, fall in love, and struggle with the complexities of their relationship. Not nearly as maudlin as it sounds (I hope).

Rated NC-17 for graphic (and sometimes non-romantic) sex, drug and alcohol use and abuse, profane language, and brief (very brief) suicidal ideation (although NO suicide attempts). No sexual assault, no cutting.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 183053
[Report This] Published: August 07, 2009 Updated: August 22, 2010


Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am anxiously waiting for them to finally get to speak with one another and something to happen between them. I hope I don't have tow ait too long. Nice build up though. :)

 
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Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Well, now we're getting somewhere. LOL.

 
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Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

That was such a sweet chapter. Edward is such a shy guy when he's sober.

 
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Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm really loving this story now. They are so sweet and trying so hard to not say the wrong things to each other.

 
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Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

They are so damned cute together! Love them.

 
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Date: March 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

That was such a hot scene in her bedroom. They are finally showing each other how they feel. Great!

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Oh you beast! What a way to leave us hanging! Gah!! Is  he doing this for her sake?  I'm so afraid he's going to be so broken by it that he'll slide back into his addiction. God I hope that doesn't happen. And my God your such a great writer. I love this story, even through all of his pain, I love this Edward so much and hope he doesn't do a downward spiral. He's been doing so well, until he's faced witht he fact that she really is leaving him soon. Hurry with another update please. I'm dead.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

These last two chapters ripped my heart out. I knew she'd see him in the bar and yet I felt every emotion, all the pain she was feeling when she saw him with the bottle and then when he sneered at her like she was nothing to him now. After writing that letter, opening her heart and spilling out all her feelings to him and then never hearing from him, seeing him drinking again and the sneer, it's all too much for her to bear. Maybe if she just gets so damn mad and confronts him it might help her in some way. Maybe she should try going to Al Anon, which is what she should have done when they were together.  It may help her understand why he acted as he did. Love your writing.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Thank God he has Jasper! I'm hoping he can find his way back and Jasper is his life line. Great chapter. You really painted a scary picture for us as to what it must feel like to be in that terrible place. My heart aches for him, for Bella to witness his fall and for Jasper, who's been there and knows all about the pain, self hatred and how it must feel to be reborn. I hope Edward is able to overcome all that pain and find that place that Jasper has found.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 15, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Just reread this last chapter you wrote and it still broke my heart. I can't wait for an update. Hopefully he will find his way back and after time back to Bella. I hope she waits for him. Isn't Seth the bartender Bella's friend? The one she used to fool around with but never go all the way? I wonder if it is him if he knows the connection between Edward and Bella? Hurry.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Thank you for the update, I've been really missing this story. This was a wonderful chapter and I love reading that Edward has been doing well for so long now. I hope when they do meet to talk they can come to terms with their painful past and reconcile somehow. She has a lot of pain to forgive him for inflicting on her and I hope he is strong enough to withstand her anger. Can't wait to see what happens when they meet. Please don't make us wait too long...it's such a great story.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed
Date: June 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

This shapter was so bittersweet. My heart aches for both Edward and Bella because there is so much that hasn't been said and still so much pain in their hearts. I am hoping for some resolution for them soon. I think the Jasper's wedding is going to be a turning point for them. I still hope for the best. The back and forth between him and his therapist was brilliant. 

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

This was good in that Bella and Edward had a productive talk and didn't lose their cool at all. I get the feeling that he is so sad, which I guess is understandable. But then again he seems to have found a path back to a normal life and I surely hope that Bella will be waiting there when he's ready. It would be nice if they did some things together that were fun...he needs some fun in his life, along with sobriety.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Another great chapter. They are beginning. I hope for more. I hope this trip back to his childhood friend proves to be a catharsis for him, to help him move on with his life and put all the painful memories behind him.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

My belly is all tingly after reading this chapter. Crazy, I know, but Edward is just some kind of wonderful, agree? You wrote another beautiful, heartfelt chapter and although I am not looking forward to you ending this, I really want to see them have a HEA because they've been through so much pain and agony together and apart...they deserve it. Please be merciful and not have us wait too awfully long. Hugs!

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

As much as I hate that there will be no more chapters is their lives to look forward to, I believe you ended it in just the right place. Such a sweet and tender way. I loved every word  you wrote here and will count this story among my very favorites! Thank you for making them among the best Bella and Edward. My heart ached for Edward when he thought back upon how his mother and father neglected him yet there was a lovely memorie for him with his Dad.

 
Need to Escape by lostluggage Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5723]
Summary:

 

 

When Robert Pattinson needs to escape the crazy life of stardom- he finds an unlikely ally to see him to safety- a quiet bookshop owner who is secretly infatuated with Twilight, and a certain young British actor.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 97 Completed: Yes Word count: 829399
[Report This] Published: September 07, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2012


Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33- A Night out in London

Wow, that man is not only the sexiest thing on wheels he's insatiable! That was HOT Steph. Now you've got me all worked up and I need to get some sleep. How am I going to do that now, huh? I knew I shouldn't have opened that email notification until morning! LOL.

The house was a total surprise to me! The dress: I knew  which one she'd wear. The surprise tomorrow? Well, there's that little turquois box I mentioned way back, perhaps that? or a reasonable facsimilie? I think he's going to pop the question. He's totally gone with her and she him.They are meant for each other.

Great chapter! I loved how she decked that goon in the club. And Rob ripping her undies off is a scream! Especially since it was Nick who paid for them!!!! LOL. Oh I can't wait for the next update. When?????

Love you girl! and a big MWAH back at ya!



Author's Response:

HAHA! he is insatiable isn't he... goodness. he's got to wear out at some point right?!

ah the house... touring it in the next chapter... 

and the surprise... hahaha... goodness... so many thoughts on a ring... hehehe... we'll just have to wait and see.

so glad you like them together... i simply adore RobJEN...

the decking of the perv.... hehe.. i am happy people enjoyed that... it is important for everyone to realize Jen is going to be a lot more agressive from now on... hehehe

next update you say? very soon... maybe 4 days? but very soon!

thanks so much my dear for all your reviews in the last few days! simply awesome!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 28, 2010 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47-Surprises

Sorry it's taken me a few days to get around to reading this update but I've been otherwise occupied...by your new story OtT, which I love! Well, you already know that. hehe. I can't wait to find out what that dasterdly bastard Nick really said to Rob and it's got to be so vile for him not to be able to share that with Jen. He'll be a wreck on wheels when she leaves for the States! I think what should happen is that Nick and Jen should have a showdown/pow wow and clear the air once and for all. What say you? LOL. Big Hugs...for giving us Rob's POV!



Author's Response:

Thanks shichi!

well..in regards to Nick... youknow i go by pictures for inspiration. we know we have seen Nick around a little at the big events...so Jen being jen.... And going back to the States... she might get her game on.... we'll just have to see... but i have VERY BIG PLANS for Nick. I have since he first opened his mouth to Rob on Orcas... killing me I have gotten this far....

Yes. Rob may have some issues while he is separated from Jen. Let's hope she can wrap things up and get back to him... at least they will have their phones...and internet... and skype... and and...

so glad you are liking OTT. I am having a blast writing it. 

thanks for being such a wonderful supporter! 

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- Say It, Out Loud

Thank God they finally got to a place where they could say it, out loud. :) Very well don, I loved it. And the words to the song were lovely. You are one fantastic writer.



Author's Response:

Thank god indeed!  they needed to talk... sigh... 

I am so glad you liked the song... and thank you so much for your sweet words... 

You guys give me so much inspiration to keep going!

so thank you!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50-You Are My Rob

I'm not sure what to think about Theatergirl, to tell you the truth. She seems to know so much. She could be a plant, perhaps by Nick? That's way out there, I know! LOL. Hell, maybe she is Nick!! BWAHA. Great chapter. Can't wait to read what happens when she goes back to settle everything. I hope she doesn't sell the house on the island. That could be a refuge for them.



Author's Response:

HAHA! she COULD be Nick! oh gosh that would be a twist! heheh. we'll see about her though. not to worry!

She definietly won't sell the house on Orcas. it's too special, and you are right. a perfect getaway.

thanks my dear!

mwah!

steph

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51- Green-Eyed Monster

I've finally caught up with all the updates after being away for over 2 weeks. Great chapters and now I must wait to see how they do apart from one another. I'm sure there will be some angst in store for both of them. Hugs!



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! 

u know me... gotta have a little drama, right?

we'll get thru it tho. we have to get to Water 4 Elephants!

thanks so much!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51- Green-Eyed Monster

Angsty but sweet at the end. How will  they manage without one another while she's gone? I can't wait to find out! I just got home after a two week holiday and am trying to catch up to all my stories and was happy to see your update Steph, I loved it. Hugs!



Author's Response:

thanks my dear! how WILL they manage... we will see!

thanks my dear! hope you had a great holiday!

more soon!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 04, 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57-Mum is here

I had a nice and very long review written and somehow it got erased! Here goes.

I am so looking forward to Jen going back home to Rob. He needs to know what happened and even though he'll be heartbroken to know that they lost a baby, hopefully they will have the promise and hope of being able to have another try when all is well again. How he reacts to this tragedy is something I'm really looking forward to reading. No doubt he'll be heartbroken, not just by what happened but that he wasn't there for her when she needed him the most. Hopefully Claire will be able to help him deal witht that pain. Thanks for another great chapter, it brought tears. Just get her home to him, toute sweet! Thanks dear, and big Hugs!!



Author's Response:

thanks so much my dear. i hate when the reviews fall to the ether! 

i an looking forward to them being together again as well. they can only deal with this together, no matter what Jen thinks is right for him, it is important that they are together to deal with it. 

i think you will like his reaction... i'll leave it at that.

Clare will be such a wonderful support for both of them. 

thanks so much my dear. for all your support, it means so much!

MWAH!

steph

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Hostage Situation

This is a really cute start. Can't wait to see where it goes.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much and Welcome to NTE!

glad to have you!

thanks for the read and review!

steph

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Introductions

She's adorabel! Darjeeling. Rob sleeping in the back room, how cute is that?



Author's Response:

Awthanks! she is pretty spunky.

and sigh... Rob in the back room... sleeping... i could watch him sleep all day and night!

thanks for the review and rating my dear!

MWAH!

steph

 




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