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Thanks Roo, for the amazing banner! 

And more keep coming in!  Thanks to m81170 for this lovely piece of art:

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Here's another amazing pic that fits in with Dark Side of the Moon perfectly -thank you to JohannaL for ID'ing the author:  http://smirks-works.livejournal.com/ check out her (I assume) other manips - she's a genius!

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Updated November, 2009

This story is now COMPLETE!

Dark Side of the Moon is my version of New Moon from Edward’s point of view.  Witness how Edward agonized over leaving Bella, hunted for Victoria, faced the Volturi, and came to realize that with Bella was where he was meant to be. 

This tormented story has been a part of my life for about a year and a half – and what a ride it’s been!  Meant to be canon and in character, I hope you enjoy angsty Edward and his suffering during New Moon.  As unhappy as Bella was during this time, Edward suffered so much more (I think).  So be sure and crack open a fresh box of tissues before reading!

 Thank you to everyone for all the reviews, especially to those of you who reviewed each and every chapter!  Your support and loyalty have been the driving force to me getting this project finished – and I hope it’s lived up to all of your expectations.

Love you all,

blondieakarobin

PS.  As one last thank you, I’ve posted a formatted, printable copy of Dark Side of the Moon at http://bit.ly/2vLHMi, as will also post as an electronic version suitable for viewing on a kindle or MobiReader.  I’m also posting a ‘Director’s Cut’ that includes citations of all of Bella’s quotes from Twilight, research notes, and even funny comments from my betas in this version in the same directory.

blondie

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Use of the dialog from the series is just for clarity - Stephenie Meyer owns all things twilight!  I'm making absolutely nothing from this work.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 163080
[Report This] Published: May 09, 2008 Updated: February 26, 2010


Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Birthday

I'm looking forward to reading this since it's from Edward's POV instead of Bella's, which is what I've tried to imagine. What did he do, where did he go and more importantly, how he felt after leaving her in the woods. I can surmise but it will be nice to actually hear his thoughts. Great two first chapters. Thanks!

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Stitches

I found that reading this from EPOV was very interesting. The devasting conclusion he arrived at to keep Bella safe and what it is going to cause him to suffer. What he doesn't seem to get is how much she will suffer as well. Tragic. Great writing...I'm hooked! 8-)

 
Summary:

Just a little pre-Breaking Dawn speculation on what Bella and Edward's wedding night and honeymoon would be like.  Mature themes.


Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6094
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2008


Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Edward's Room

That was just beautiful! Thank you.

 
Sanctuary by Jfly Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2144]
Summary: Feature

Edward faces a monumental crisis and finds Sanctuary in the one place he refuses to look for it. All Human.

This story contains Religious themes and Mature themes: Edward is a priest struggling with his role in the Church and as a man.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 99900
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2008 Updated: February 03, 2010


Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Focus

I've read all day afternoon and night and want you to know that this in one fantastic story. You are a very gifted writer and very talented. You give such color and depth to your characters. Mesmerizing, really. I've fallen in love with All of them and care what happens to them. I hope Edward finds his way and discovers who he really is and what he wants. He's a good man.  I can't wait to read more.

 
Perspective by ekimmuh Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2527]
Summary:

Edward seeks out the counsel of his father and brothers after agreeing to be with Bella after their wedding. What will Edward do with that advise and how will he and Bella prepare for their upcoming wedding night.

Thanks to Anne Cullen for this beautiful banner.

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Categories: Post-Eclipse, Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 132792
[Report This] Published: October 18, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2010


Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

It's been a while since I've read the update to this wonderful story of yours. I am a big fan of your writing (and also love Finding Bella). I think your story here is so beautiful because you really get into how much they mean to one another and how deeply Edward loves Bella. I can't wait to  read more and hope you update again soon. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

The next chapter is just waiting for validation and hopefully will be up soon.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Well Bella and Edward may be handling these practice sessions well, but that's not the case with me! LOL. Great sexy writing.



Author's Response:

lol. Having a bit of trouble are we? ;)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Beautiful chapter. The last three lines brought tears to my eyes. Very moving. Thank you. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

I sure hope we are going to Seattle after all, and soon.  Please don't disappoint me! LOL.

I love all these "practice sessions". Sigh...



Author's Response:

lol. We do get to Seattle but it does take a while. For those who are current with the story, we are there now.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

He's stronger than he thought! ha, ha. Edward is such an innocent, it seems to me, and that coupled with the fact that he knows he could, in effect, kill her in his throws of passion, must be horrifiying to him. Very good writing, I'm loving it and can't leave my computer at all until this is finished!! Yet I don't want it to end yet! Bravo.



Author's Response:

That he is. He loves her way too much to cause her harm. Doesn't mean he'll stop worrying though.

Well I can't say I don't love to hear that you can't stop reading it. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Those Cullens sure are pushy and nosey!! I know they are just thrilled tod death (pardon the pun) for Edward that he's found the love of his eternal life and the way you are handling their efforts of exploration without doing the deed is pretty wonderful. Thank you for that. It makes it that much more exciting and erotic.



Author's Response:

lol. Yes they can be. Especially Alice and Emmett.

I'm glad you said that. Most people are happy to have this more realistic version of events but I've had a few want me to push it farther. I have a very real boundry in my head that I'm not crossing though until the first night on the island so not to worry. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Poor Edward, he's so frustrated and afraid. Jasper needs to have a little more ebb and flow with sending his surges to Edward, in order to temper the intesity of his feelings. No? Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

My thinking on that is that Jasper knows that isn't want Edward wants. For Edward, sex is an unknown variable. He'd rather push himself beyond his abilities with Jasper, where it's safe, than experience something totally new in Bella's presence.

Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Well, I'm just a mush ball right now! The tension so strong and palpable. You are fantastic! Thanks.



Author's Response:

lol. Sorry. I tend to be a pretty dramatic writer overall. The next chapter has already been submitted so hopefully you won't have to wait too long for the next chapter. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: July 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

I really wanted to tell Alice to "Go Away" and leave them alone this weekend! I want issue!! lol. Can't wait for the next chapters E. Very good.



Author's Response:

trust me Edward did too. lol.

Thanks. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

I'll have to check out your new story when it's posted. Loved this chapter of Perspective and how they are handling "getting used to each other". :) Can't wait for the update. I've been away for a while on vacation and hadn't read the last three new chapters so it was nice having a long "catch up" read.



Author's Response:

I'm hoping it's up soon. Chapter 37 is written, but I can't submit it until the new story posts.

Wow, you did have a nice long read. The last two chapters were not short. lol.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Thanks for the update. Great chapter, only I'm getting a little bit impatient for them to finally reach their big day. I'm hoping it will start in the next chapter or if not the next one after that. And I'll certainly look forward to your new story Finding Bella...any hints as to what it will be about? :)



Author's Response:

Believe it or not you being impatient is a good thing, it means you're feeling their frustration. lol. The wedding will hopefully take place in chapter 40.

The first chapter of Finding Bella just posted to Twilighted earlier this week. It is a complete 180 from Perspective. Bella is Aro's slave. Edward rescues her, but in a very unconvientional way.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Thank you for the much awaited chapter, it was wonderful and worth the wait. I am looking forward to the honeymoon on Isle Esmee because I remember when reading BD how disappointed I was that we weren't going to read anything about their first night "together". Having come to the Twilight saga late, (after only seeing the movie on DVD. Yeah, I can't believe it either!) then buying and reading the books, and finding the web sites devoted to it, not to mention fanfic (hehe), I realized SM just couldn't do that and came to appreciate her view. However, that said, I want to read about their wedding night in all it's glory!! LOL. So please don't disappoint me. :)

Loved this chapter, as I've loved each and every chapter you've written so far.



Author's Response:

I think there are more people out there than you think that have come to the saga after the movie.

As for the wedding night...well you will get an actual love scene, I don't fade to black. I'll try not to disappoint. ;)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Thanks for the update, I loved it. I'm getting a little impatient for the wedding day, just as Edward and Bella are, though I hope you aren't going to do to us what SM did when it came to their wedding night. That would be criminal! LOL.

Boy that Renee is something else, haha.



Author's Response:

lol. You're welcome. The next chapter will go up to the wedding, so not much longer to wait. And not to worry, the wedding night will not be a fade to black moment. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

This was so good and I'm panting for the next chapter or two. :)

Do you plan on doing a sequel?



Author's Response:

The next chapter is in the que waiting on validation so it should be up soon.

A sequel is a good possibility, but not until I finish Finding Bella.

 
Summary:

Bella Swan is twenty-seven years old, newly single, and mom to an adorable Kindergarten student with a knack for accidents. On a typical, fall afternoon, she experiences the shock of her life during a casual conversation with her son. When an unexpected revelation leads to the most emotional reunion imaginable, how will Bella reconcile the path her life has taken with the past she never chose? Takes place nearly ten years post New Moon. Canon - AU. ExB


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No Word count: 61197
[Report This] Published: October 19, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Beautiful, just beautiful. Thank you. I like fluff! :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

I loved this chapter and especially when they got to the Cullen's home. Tender moments when Chris woke up ill and what followed brought tears to my eyes, it was so well written. I love how Edward has gotten to attached to Chris. At first, when I started this story i wasn't sure how I'd feel with Bella having a child but you have done such spectacular job of endearing him to Edward that I love it now. On to Chapter 16.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, you've got my attention, that's for sure. On to the next chapter. I noticed that you haven't updated the story since August and I'm just wondering if I want to get involved in a story (recommended by feathers_mm) if you are not intending to finish it.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

This is good. Can't wait to read more. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

That was brilliant! Loved this chapter.

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Your story is really good! I'm loving it very much. I can't wait to see where this all goes and how it will work out for them. So much pain in the years lost to them and now they have a second chance at love. Sigh, lovely. You write very well. :)

 
Reviewer: shichi Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 31, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Wow, I didn't see this coming yet. I thought to myself that would it at all be possible that Chris could be Edward's child? but no how could that be since it has been nine years since Edward left bella. Can't wait to get to the next chapter. I loved this one!!

 




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