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Penname: historicvampirelover [ Contact]
Real name: Danielle
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I'm a history teacher who was introduced to everyone's favorite vegetarian vampires by my students.
I'm just starting to write my own stories, but for now I fill my time reading all the good stuff on twilighted.
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Summary: It's been three long years since Edward left Bella, and things within The Cullen family have changed epically. After Edward's final stand off with Victoria, Emmett is left heartbroken and alone. A chance vision sends him back to Forks, and into the healing arms of the one person he never expected. Why fight with fate?
New Moon AU - Bella/Emmett.
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse, AU Characters: Alec, Alice, Angela, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Carmen, Charlie, Demetri, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Kate, Laurent, Leah, Marcus, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Tanya
Challenges: Series: Emmett Stories
Chapters: 23 Completed: No
Word count: 64433
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: February 22, 2011
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed 
Date: February 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Gravity
Oh Emmett. He and Rosalie are my favorites after Bella/Edward, and I feel his pain so strongly in this story. He loves wholeheartedly and that is beautiful.
Great start!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Dare You To Move
YAY
Is Edward going to give into Tanya? Oh my goodness!
Emmett and Bella are going to be so sweet and happy together. I can't wait :)
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - With Arms Wide Open
Love this... and i would LOVE more Emmett POV. He's always so entertaining!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 21, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Fix You
Oh boy. The pain that Emmett is going through is unbearably difficult. I'm glad you see a love story for Bella and Emmett. I don't think I ever want to see Edward again, but if we must, then I hope you write in a character named Danielle - who looks shockingly similar to Bella. *tee hee.*
Wonderful chapter!
Summary: Edward and Bella talk. Bella is sleepy. Nothing really happens.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 871
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed 
Date: January 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
So sweet and lovely.
Thanks for writing this!
Summary: An in canon retelling of Breaking Dawn from the perspective of the thoughtful and pensive Edward.
Time passed, and I was blissfully unaware. I existed only in this moment with her. Hope burgeoned deep within me as I gazed at the sleeping enchantress. She was my salvation… my reason for carrying on what I had once believed to be a pointless and cursed existence. Through Bella’s love, I was redeemed. Through her, I’d finally found the peace that had eluded me for so many years. And so it was here, in our bubble, that I remained for as long as time permitted. Lulled into a state of relaxation by the steady pounding of Bella’s heart, and the rhythmic crashing of the waves.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 34486
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: March 28, 2010
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Engaged
EPOV is so wonderful. I hope you take this through the whole of Breaking Dawn - if you can do that you'll be one of my heros :)
Great job so far!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Bachelor Party, Cullen Style
Another excellent job, and makes me want more!
I think the fleshing out of this book is going to be quite wonderful... in this chapter, I especially appreciate the depth of the other male Cullens, since at this point in the books, we didn't have that from Bella.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Big Day
Yaaaaaaaaaay! The emotional moments that Edward has with his family before the wedding are perfect. Everyone is exactly as they ought to be. Rosalie even, is finally showing that she can accept Bella. The Mom and Father bits are especially great.
Wonderful!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: In Retrospect
The filled in blanks were wonderful! EPOV is always enlightening. I especially enjoy his perspective while dancing with everyone. You did a really great job of explaining just how happy they really are. Well done!
Summary: As Edward's wedding approaches, he has a lot of questions. Carlisle takes him out to have a father-son talk.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4985
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I think you did a fabulous job on this "talk" between father and son. It always makes me so happy to see Carlisle and Edward in their father/son relationship, since that relationship is strongest with them.
Wonderful! Author's Response: I agree; I am so fascinated by Carlisle's place in their family. I mean, they all stay with him out of love and respect; they could all leave any time, but they stay because of him. Thank you so much for reviewing! I appreciate your comments.
Summary:
Edward loves Bella, but he's the 'best friend.'
Will he ever get over his insecurities that he feels about telling her how much he loves her?
Or will he just be the best friend for the rest of his life?
Rated for later chapters, and Cannon pairings later on.
EXB fic.
AH very OOC.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 11216
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2009 Updated: July 22, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Not bad. I'm glad that she already knows that she belongs with Edward... so all that has to happen is that they tell each other. I'm sure you'll take us on an ansgty ride to get there, but I am looking forward to it.
I hate Jake, and as soon as he can be gone, I'll be happy.
Author's Response: :) Yes, it's very angsty, but i think it'll be worth it :P
He'll be gone very soon! and thanks for the review!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
They're so in loooooooooooove. Now howsa bout one of them blurts it out while they're both awake!
love it! Author's Response: hmm.. have you been reading on fanfic!? lol.. hehe :)
Glad ya love it, and thanks for the review! :)
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Love the fill in information from the flashbacks, but in the present: Everyone cowering on the floor? I'm a bit confused.
Why is James back? I do not heart cliffies.... more soon? Author's Response: :)! i did something right with the info...
And everyone cowering on the floor and james have a connection... Well, James has a gun... and He wants what he can't have.. which is bella.... so..... now, you know, a big shebang! going on soon.
Thanks for the review! and i will try to type it asap! :)
Summary: Bella Swan always thought she hated Edward Cullen, until she spends an afternoon with him that changes her mind. After that fateful outing their relationship blooms and she falls for him. When they spend a night together and he leaves without a word, can Bella ever mend her broken heart and prove to Edward that she doesn't need him?
Warning! slightly OOC, It's a B/E story-usual pairings but there is some B/OC too, and rated NC-17 for crude language, underage drinking/smoking and smut in later chapters.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 28027
[Report This] Published: January 14, 2009 Updated: February 26, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-Wake Me Up When It's Over.
It is definitely time for Jake to be kicked to the curb! I don't like him, and youdo a great job in giving me a new reason why :)
bring on Edward! Author's Response: All my characters are like onions... but this was for making me mad during eclipse.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- What I Least Expected
Good for Bella opening up and letting Edward actually see what's been bothering her. That took guts. Good for Edward for listening properly.
I love them both. Next chapter sounds like a doozy - I hope there's some set up of the siblings starting to think that Edward will be good enough for our Bella. A girl can dream! Author's Response: :D I hope I can keep you happy. I've only known a few guys to listen properly. I based this Edward off one.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3-Spill The Beans A.K.A. Sleepovers With Alice
I do not want any more Tanya, but I won't mind it if you torture her a bit more!
I am so excited about the developments between Edward and Bella - and I really am looking forward to their eventual coupledom.
I'm excited for Rose/Emmett too, especially since Rosalie defended Bella so nicely.
Great chapter :) Author's Response: First Thank you! I hope you continue to like it!
Second while I can promise she will get tortured some more...um *hides*
And I love Rose/Emmett. I'm surprised no one has asked about Jasper/Alice yet...
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4-I'm in a Bit of a Pickle.
Hmm. A redeemed Tanya? Well, you're right about Bella being too forgiving for her own good. I guess I understand it. The way you talk about their group of friends is really nice - they're popular, but welcoming. I'm glad to see Angela, and it was awesome to have Lauren be dismissed like that.
Yay Edward and Bella :) Author's Response: I'm glad you like the dismissing of Lauren, I don't really like her. In the books, in fanfiction, girls like her in real life. I like dismissing her, and Rose is so awesome at it. Just because kids are popular doesn't mena they have to be mean, unless you deserve it. I based all that off of the way my friends were, except they wouldn't have welcomed Tanya back with open arms, they weren't as forgiving as some. LOL and I promise Bella is too forgiving for her own good but it's about to change and I needed to have Tanya redeemed. She's a normal teenage girl and sometimes they make mistakes.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5-Hook, Line and Sinker.
<3 this chapter. I love that she decided to go for the kiss even after what Tanya said.
Great again :) Author's Response: Thank you. And I love my Bella, she's a bit of a masochist though.
Summary: 
The year is 1921. Esme Platt Evenson, depressed at the loss of her
son, throws herself off a cliff, and Carlisle Cullen finds and changes her.
Can she ever learn to forgive him for damning her for all eternity?
Pre-Twilight. Canon with a dash of AU. A re-envisioning of Esme and Carlisle's story intertwined with the genesis of Edward's bitterness.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Word count: 69793
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2009 Updated: April 12, 2010
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Bethaboo -
Esme's POV is spot on for what and when she was... at least I think so!
Carlisle's internal struggle is beautiful, and perfect, and so very Carlisle... I think this is going to be great, and the fact that you forsee it as "longish" makes my night.
Yay!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
What a well-written change and intriguing "wake-up."
I'm looking forward to reading more on the Carlisle/Esme relationship (obviously) but also how they develop the environment where Edward feels like a son to the two of them.
So good!!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Nothing would ever change that? Bite your tongue, Esme!
Edward is very compassionate here, and I like that about him... Carlisle needs to man up, admit he's selfish, apologize and then start to help this poor woman heal!
I love your writing!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Edward is wonderful! THIS is why the mother/son relationship between the two of them is so much stronger than with the others. THIS is what I've been missing out on and waiting for!
WONDERFUL, Bethaboo!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh boy. Edward is going to be all protective of Esme now. He's just so ANGSTY.
I want Carlisle and Esme to be happy :( I know we'll eventually get there, and I'm loving the ride Bethaboo.
Summary: J.Jenks' thoughts when Bella went to see him in 'Breaking Dawn'
"The woman left standing in front of my office door was breathtaking, just like Max had described. She had long dark hair falling down past her shoulders and down to her waist. She was definitely a Cullen; unbelievably pale, ghost like, scary as hell, yet at the same time she looked like an angel."
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Other Character
Challenges: Series: The Forger
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4305
[Report This] Published: January 15, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Forgers Greatest Fear
I really enjoy how you do Jenks POV. You write it so true to how I imagine him.
Great job! Author's Response: Thank you.
I'm glad you like it. I think he's a good character and it's fun to write from his POV. Shame he wasn't in more of the book.
Alice.x
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Word count: 0
[Report This] Published: December 31, 1969 Updated: December 31, 1969
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 24, 2009
Title: None
So far, I'm in love. I have a feeling that our own Isabella Swan is going to change Edward around... at least I hope so. And the rest of the gang is absolutely perfect so far. Very very true to themselves.
Keep going, and quick!
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