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Penname: historicvampirelover [ Contact]
Real name: Danielle
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Member Since: November 23, 2008
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I'm a history teacher who was introduced to everyone's favorite vegetarian vampires by my students.
I'm just starting to write my own stories, but for now I fill my time reading all the good stuff on twilighted.
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Summary: Ever since she can remember, Bella Swan has spent Christmas with the Cullens. Ever since she can remember, Christmas has been full of strange Edward-related complications that remain unresolved year after year. Last Christmas, it seemed like their strange affair had finally ended. Bella is keen to resolve her "relationship" and move on with life. But will her feelings remain the same, especially after she finds out that Edward has a new introduction to make?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: No
Word count: 60805
[Report This] Published: January 09, 2009 Updated: August 26, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed 
Date: January 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5
Oh my goodness. I was muttering throughout this entire story: Here's a brief play by play - Enough Bella! Go Rosalie! Oh Edward. HAHA to the Vanquish. No, yes, no , yes, no and finally one very big YAY.
So howsa bout these two crazy kids get over themselves and their history, and ditch Tanya. I love this story so much :) Author's Response: haha. i like that play by play ;)
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6
Love their loving, and a gold star for Edward for being a giver and not a taker. Good for him.
However, they still have a lot of talking to do... harumf.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7
Well, other than update soon (because that always makes my day) I have the following to say:
1. Hurray for Edward! He finally comes right out and says what has APPARENTLY been on his heart for years. Good for him.
2. Geez louise, Bella... she is one messed up woman to have so little self-esteem to think that he could never want her in a relationship.
3. I don't think I could possibly hate Tanya any more.
4. Excellent Chapter all around.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 16, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8
Aw Bella, just tell him!
Tanya = loser.
Chapter = awesome.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9
Why do I always feel like when I get to the end of a chapter in this story, I have a million more questions?!
I'm glad Edward chose Bella, but it came off more as he was choosing "not Tanya" instead of affirming his love for our girl. I'm so proud of her for owning up to her own feelings though.
Love!
Summary: "I spoke to Carlisle after you and I made our bargain, hoping he could help me." --Edward, Breaking Dawn.
What really happened when Edward talked to Carlisle about his deal with Bella?
Edward POV, all canon.
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Alice, Carlisle, Edward, Esme
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 3082
[Report This] Published: January 10, 2009 Updated: January 10, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 11, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: The Talk - One Shot
I LOVE it. Your take on everything that Edward hears is wonderful, and everyone is exactly as they should be.
Hurray.
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2009 Updated: February 15, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
A wonderful last chapter :)
I enjoyed this very much, and wish that there were more than five times!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Very sweet. Also, very nice to see Nessie acting like a child - I love these kind of stories, and you did a great job!
Hmmm. I'd like to see her throw a tantrum when Edward and Bella leave for a Mommy and Daddy night out, perhaps one with Jacob trying to make her happy but not understanding what she wants, and I'd LOVE to see Aunt Alice and Nessie duke it out over her next Halloween costume!
PS your Daddy Edward is HOT. Author's Response: Your PS just made me laugh out loud. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
YAY for another chapter!
Nessie is the perfect balance of precocious and acting her age in this installment - and you use her gift perfectly (again).
Would it be wrong for this PS to be that Grandpa Carlisle is hot too? (I'm going to go sit in a corner now ;) ) I just love a man that can handle kids!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
So, Daddy Edward is definitely my favorite.
You did make me feel a soft-spot for the imprinted Jake - the poor guy is in for quite the 7 years waiting for her to age!
Nessie is once again her perfect self. I love that you're filling in what she would be like as a toddler. Most of the ff doesn't cover that period realistically, and I love you for it.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Another fabulous scene with awesome Daddy Edward.
Looking forward to the final chapter :)
Summary:
Jasper Hale and Robert Whitlock are blood brothers. They had a deep bond. But now that there's no blood, only venom pumping through their bodies, what does that mean for the born siblings?
Out of the blue, Robert reappears in Jasper's life, revealing his brother's sins from the human life he thought he'd left behind.
Will you love him, or will you loathe him?
Are you Team Robert, or are you Team Jasper?
Thanks to roroduff for the banner!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, Other Characters: Jasper
Challenges: Series: Eternal Hope: The Alice and Jasper Archive
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 21716
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2009 Updated: December 24, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: VISITOR
This is a very promising start - I can't wait to find out why Jasper is so full of mixed emotions about his brother.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: PAST
Well, I feel badly for Robert, but not enough to forgive him for hurting my Jasper.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: TRIGGER
Oh my goodness! So Jasper was a Daddy? Can he still track his relatives? There are a lot of possibilities here.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: WORDS
OK, well this short chapter definitely raises more questions than it answers. Despite that, I love the fluffy part in the cottage. Author's Response: Thx so much for reviewing 4 times! I really like it when readers take the time to review every chapter - and it certainly boosts my numbers AND makes my day!
Thx again! And I hope you keep on reading! Btw I won't be updating very soon, probably within the nxt two weeks though, because I'm on holiday in China atm and then I have a load of exams waiting for me back home!
Summary: What happens the first night Edward goes hunting after returning from Volterra? Bella deals with issues involving becoming a member of a family.
Categories: New Moon, Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Charlie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 2122
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed 
Date: January 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
So far, I think you're doing a really nice job with our girl's POV. It's just right... I'm hoping that this will continue, but I'm not quite sure where to take it?
Very nicely done!
Summary: Fanfic-novel style. Post Breaking Dawn. All cannon pairings. Not OOC. In Bella's POV with Jake's occasionally.
Now, into a year as a vampire, will distance put a strain on Bella's relationships with Charlie and the Quiluetes or will it be something else? Just after a few months since the battle against the Volturi, Bella is once again faced with new problems. However for the first time ever, it's not her life at stake, but someone she has never met: her singer. Will Bella's self control be enough or will she succumb to her thirst? And, will the Volturi make another interference in the Cullens' lives yet again? Inner battles, uxexpecting news, waging wars, life-changing choices; Bella isn't living the fairy-tale ending she had hoped, yet.
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 9274
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2009 Updated: July 16, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 25, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: BIRTHDAY
An excellent job! I look forward to you fleshing out a post BD world for us.
Keep going!
Summary: "I may not be human, but I am still a man."
What does Edward think about while he watches Bella sleep?
Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Private Moments
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1657
[Report This] Published: January 11, 2009 Updated: January 22, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: One shot- First story in Private Moments series.
Sweet mother of lemons, that was delightful!
Poor Edward, having to amuse himself for hours every night while the woman of his dreams gets to dream lemony goodness.
Love it!
Summary: *Comedy* Charlie insists Bella go camping with the Cullens, in order to acclimate herself with the great outdoors. After all, the Cullens are practically revered in town for their family camping trips, so they must know what they're doing, right? *Post Eclipse
Banner by Anne Cullen
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes
Word count: 32070
[Report This] Published: January 12, 2009 Updated: March 25, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
LOL Alice always finds a way to spice things up. I hope the Cullens aren't actually going to be eating on this trip, unless they're going to prematurely change Bella. That would be A-OK in my book! Author's Response: Lol. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I love love love the way you up the ridiculous factor with Alice all the time. She and Jasper are too cute.
This is just fantastic, and I can't wait for canoeing, and everything else you come up with! Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I have to admit, Alice is my favorite, so yes, I'm guilty of making her to crazy things...but it's nothing she wouldn't want to do anyway, lol. Thanks for the reviews.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
HAHAHA
Bella's lavatory... you're so wonderful.
And the series of very unfortunate events made me giggle too. I don't think I ever want this to end! Author's Response: Aw - thanks! I'm glad you like it!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
Most def. worth continuing... you can't leave it off on the first night! That's cruel and unusual punishment.
I love that Bella is coming into her own just a little bit here. Great storytelling on your part, Leesa!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Oh dear. I sense some poison ivy coming on. Poor Bella!
Another wonderful chapter Leesa! Author's Response: ;) Lol. Thank you!!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Oh no, not a Charlie intrusion!!
Hopefully he'll find the poison ivy amusing... I know I do! Author's Response: "Charlie intrusion" - LOL!!
Summary: It's halloween and the 'younger' Cullens, plus Bella, have been invited to Mike Newton's party. What will Edward think of the coustume Alice has chosen for Bella? What will Bella think of the coustume chosen for her?
Categories: Other Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Word count: 1456
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2009 Updated: January 23, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1; Life-sized Barbie Doll
She can't resist or object to something that's going to put a chink in Edward's prude-armor!
Please go on!
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