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I'm a history teacher who was introduced to everyone's favorite vegetarian vampires by my students.


I'm just starting to write my own stories, but for now I fill my time reading all the good stuff on twilighted.


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Sugar and Spice by alaskangirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 534]
Summary:

banner for sugar and spiceWith Bella's love of cooking and Alice's flair for parties their dream comes true of owning their own business. Both Bella and Edward have pasts to deal with. Will love help them and can they help each other?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 65 Completed: Yes Word count: 271821
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Yes yes yes.

This is all coming together so wonderfully.  I'm glad Rosalie gets to have a baby, that Edward knows it is Bella, that Carlisle and Esme are going to be so happy.

To me, this story can just go on forever and ever.  I think I'm okay with you taking your sweet time developing ExB so long as once their together, this doesn't have to end.  Please?!

 



Author's Response:

thank you for saying that. it wiill get sweet i promise!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Ugh the slow torture is so delicious.

 



Author's Response:

LOL i know i am evil LOL

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

It is very nice to see the better side of Edward - now that he knows the identity of his mystery woman he can better identify.

Another great job.

Can they kiss sooooooon torture lady?  Just kidding.  Maybe.

 



Author's Response:

LOL the kissing will happen i promise you are just going to have to wait a little while longer.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Ah Bella, you're falling for the same person in two ways.  Yay!

This was a beautiful chapter with enough detail and plot to make the slow torture very worth it.

More soon please!



Author's Response:

ahhhh thank you. i am so glad you are enjoying this. next chapter comming up soon!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Ugh Edward if you feel like this then just FIX IT!

Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

i am not going to say anything. i don't want to give away to much LOL i know i am evil MUAHAHAHAHA. thank you for reading

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Of course they are soul mates!!!

I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

So, I was away for the weekend and missed your story so much!  Now I see that I have delicious, plot-moving chapters to catch up on!  Yippee!!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I love Carlisle/Esme!  They're just so perfect for each other!  How could anyone mind at all?

Sweet chapter!!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh no!  damnit  Bella, your two men are one!!!!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

lol  kansas you idiot!

sweet and wonderful, as usual

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

he love her, he loves her, he loves her!

please stop the torture - get Bella to her man, and soon!



Author's Response:

they will be together i am not saying when though LOL thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Okay.

1.  Jasper and Alice together is pure magic, and you wrote it beautifully.

2.  Bella and Edward are going to meet! She took his admission of love very well - I can only hope that she'll be ready to accept that her real life Edward is her love.

3.  YAYYY



Author's Response:

thank you for saying that about this chapter.  for someone that has never written sex scenes before i just try to make it romantic and special.  thank you for reading. it is reviews like yours that keep me going.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bella, don't be so darn stubborn!

Poor Edward... although he does sort of deserve it.



Author's Response:

she is not being stubborn she is dealing with everything from her past. i promise things will come together and then all happiness and what not.

thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I accidentally left my chapter 44 comments on chapter 1.  Sorry.

This is so sad... to see Edward finally willing to let go of his saddest "might have been" and start to hope again is beautiful.  I want Bella to come around! 



Author's Response:

everyone will come around. i promise i wont leave this full of angst andheart break.  i am so glad you are enjoying this.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Excellent chapter - Angela IS a great friend for Bella, and I'm glad Bella has her. 

In all of her excitement, Alice can be a little bit selfish - I'm glad you fleshed that out here.

 



Author's Response:

yes alice is selfish but in her eyes it is how she puts herself out there.  thank you for seeing that. thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Edward is still so perfect.  I'm (again) proud of both Bella and Edward for being so adult, and here I'm also proud of Alice.  She's reined herself in and that should allow Bella to flex herself out.  Great job!



Author's Response:

thank you for loving this so!! thank you for your awesome review too they keep me going!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

FINALLY.

And thank you for keeping it so realistic.  For all their love, the two of them have a lot to deal with.

I personally am looking forward to as many more chapters/sequels as you see fit to grace us with :)



Author's Response:

thank you for saying i am keeping it realistic. bella and edward are not going to jump into sex for awhile.  it will happen and soon but i am giving you all some sweet moments before that.  they both need to figure out what is going on in each other's heads. thank you for reading

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 49: Chapter 49

As always, I love EPOV!



Author's Response:

thank you!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Emmett and Rosalie are sweet and wonderful and perfect, and Bella coming to her senses is lovely as well.

Excellent chapter!



Author's Response:

thank you for your review.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Twins!

So wonderful, in every way :)  I wish WE could know the babies' gender though.. even if Rose and Emmett don't.

Yay!



Author's Response:

thank you. no one is going to find out what gender the babies are till they get here. at this point i dont even know what i am going to do LOL thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Wonderful chapter!  Healing all around - baby anticipation - friends who love each other.

I love where this story is right now - and I have high hopes about lovin' between our E/B.

Great job!



Author's Response:

thank you for reading. your review makes me keep going.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Another sweet, wonderful chapter.

I like the way Alice is coming along, and Bella too.  They're feeling out their situations a bit better, and I'm proud of them.

Good for Bella with the Palmer woman and her big decision. 



Author's Response:

thank you for reading. i am glad you are enjoying this!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 54: Chapter 54

YAAAAAAAY first date.

But I wish Edward had slept over with her... too bad.

Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

thank you for making my day a little brighter!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55

So, I'm terribly sad that this story is coming to an end... I feel so close to these characters after so many chapters!  I am definitely down for a sequel, if you can find the time.

Alice is my hero in this chapter.



Author's Response:

ahhhh thank you. you made my day so far!  there will be a sequal. there are so many things comming and i cant wrap it up in the chapters i have planned. i think you would all hate me if i did it that way.  thank you for reading.

 




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