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I'm a history teacher who was introduced to everyone's favorite vegetarian vampires by my students.


I'm just starting to write my own stories, but for now I fill my time reading all the good stuff on twilighted.


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Sugar and Spice by alaskangirl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 534]
Summary:

banner for sugar and spiceWith Bella's love of cooking and Alice's flair for parties their dream comes true of owning their own business. Both Bella and Edward have pasts to deal with. Will love help them and can they help each other?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 65 Completed: Yes Word count: 271821
[Report This] Published: December 17, 2008 Updated: April 26, 2009


Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

I'm so proud of Edward here!  I hope he's finally ready to accept new love and warmth from Bella!



Author's Response:

 you are the only one that has said that and i appreciate it.  he finally came out of his grief shell and is opening up! thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Little do they all know... mwah ha ha.



Author's Response:

LOL thank you. i hope you are enjoying this!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Oh dear.  What did Alice write?  Why did Bella fall?  I hope that they're okay!



Author's Response:

thank you for reading. the next chapter explains what happened.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

I'm glad it was just a ruptured appendix.  Now that Edward knows her pain, I'm looking forward to the two of them relying on each other a little bit.



Author's Response:

i wouldnt dispoint you all and kill her off or anything like that. i love them to much! thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Ugh!  The torture of the two of them not realizing how perfect they are for each other is excruciating!  I want them to be together, and soon!!!  Sorry for the impatience :)



Author's Response:

i am sorry for putting you through so much torture. everything will come out i promise! thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh my goodness that is hot.  I can't wait for the upcoming chapters of this and for the happy ending I'm waiting for!

Umbrella Princess indeed.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Oh boy, here's to good healing.

And BxE ASAP.

love it still, even though the wait is driving me nuts :)



Author's Response:

i love to torture but it is comming maybe this week if i can update fast enough. thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Hurray for Bella at the cabin, and doing so well.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Yes yes yes.

This is all coming together so wonderfully.  I'm glad Rosalie gets to have a baby, that Edward knows it is Bella, that Carlisle and Esme are going to be so happy.

To me, this story can just go on forever and ever.  I think I'm okay with you taking your sweet time developing ExB so long as once their together, this doesn't have to end.  Please?!

 



Author's Response:

thank you for saying that. it wiill get sweet i promise!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Ugh the slow torture is so delicious.

 



Author's Response:

LOL i know i am evil LOL

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 07, 2009 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

It is very nice to see the better side of Edward - now that he knows the identity of his mystery woman he can better identify.

Another great job.

Can they kiss sooooooon torture lady?  Just kidding.  Maybe.

 



Author's Response:

LOL the kissing will happen i promise you are just going to have to wait a little while longer.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Ah Bella, you're falling for the same person in two ways.  Yay!

This was a beautiful chapter with enough detail and plot to make the slow torture very worth it.

More soon please!



Author's Response:

ahhhh thank you. i am so glad you are enjoying this. next chapter comming up soon!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Ugh Edward if you feel like this then just FIX IT!

Great chapter! 



Author's Response:

i am not going to say anything. i don't want to give away to much LOL i know i am evil MUAHAHAHAHA. thank you for reading

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Of course they are soul mates!!!

I can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

thank you for reading!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38

So, I was away for the weekend and missed your story so much!  Now I see that I have delicious, plot-moving chapters to catch up on!  Yippee!!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

I love Carlisle/Esme!  They're just so perfect for each other!  How could anyone mind at all?

Sweet chapter!!

 
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Date: January 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Oh no!  damnit  Bella, your two men are one!!!!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

lol  kansas you idiot!

sweet and wonderful, as usual

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

he love her, he loves her, he loves her!

please stop the torture - get Bella to her man, and soon!



Author's Response:

they will be together i am not saying when though LOL thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Okay.

1.  Jasper and Alice together is pure magic, and you wrote it beautifully.

2.  Bella and Edward are going to meet! She took his admission of love very well - I can only hope that she'll be ready to accept that her real life Edward is her love.

3.  YAYYY



Author's Response:

thank you for saying that about this chapter.  for someone that has never written sex scenes before i just try to make it romantic and special.  thank you for reading. it is reviews like yours that keep me going.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Bella, don't be so darn stubborn!

Poor Edward... although he does sort of deserve it.



Author's Response:

she is not being stubborn she is dealing with everything from her past. i promise things will come together and then all happiness and what not.

thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45

I accidentally left my chapter 44 comments on chapter 1.  Sorry.

This is so sad... to see Edward finally willing to let go of his saddest "might have been" and start to hope again is beautiful.  I want Bella to come around! 



Author's Response:

everyone will come around. i promise i wont leave this full of angst andheart break.  i am so glad you are enjoying this.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Excellent chapter - Angela IS a great friend for Bella, and I'm glad Bella has her. 

In all of her excitement, Alice can be a little bit selfish - I'm glad you fleshed that out here.

 



Author's Response:

yes alice is selfish but in her eyes it is how she puts herself out there.  thank you for seeing that. thank you for reading.

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Edward is still so perfect.  I'm (again) proud of both Bella and Edward for being so adult, and here I'm also proud of Alice.  She's reined herself in and that should allow Bella to flex herself out.  Great job!



Author's Response:

thank you for loving this so!! thank you for your awesome review too they keep me going!

 




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