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Real name: Danielle
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I'm a history teacher who was introduced to everyone's favorite vegetarian vampires by my students.


I'm just starting to write my own stories, but for now I fill my time reading all the good stuff on twilighted.


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Produttore by marve Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 712]
Summary:

Bella is convinced that Edward has fallen out of love with her.  His constant disappearances, his avoidance of her touch - there are so many signs that it's true.

But when she starts to notice some strange changes in Edward and Alice, Bella starts to suspect that something else is going on.


Categories: Post-Eclipse, AU Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Marcus
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 21093
[Report This] Published: November 20, 2008 Updated: February 28, 2009


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Date: January 18, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

WHOA

First of all, worth the wait.

Second of all, SO SHORT!  Just enough to tantalize, and then it's over :(

I missed you!  Update soon please?

 

 
Cloven by McQueen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 381]
Summary:

Bella never thought things would get this way. It had never crossed her mind. The hurt and betrayal from all parties stung like constant bee stings, but something more important is at stake.

 

**Rated for violence and rape and takes place between New Moon and Eclipse.**


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 39771
[Report This] Published: November 24, 2008 Updated: July 29, 2009


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Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Black as Midnight

He just can't leave.  I'm looking forward to seeing this work out.

 
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Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Work Shift

I hope they aren't going to fight, although I have perfect confidence that Edward would emerge victorious.

 
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Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Jingle Bells

Ugh.  I don't want her to go, but I have a feeling she's going to.  Blech.

 
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Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Rules and Regulations

Ugh.  I wish she wouldn't go.

 
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Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Tears of Humiliation

Oh my goodness!  I didn't ever imagine that I could hate Jacob Black any more.  But you've done it.

What a jerk!!!

 
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Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Tears and Cashmere

Jasper is so perfect here, and I wonder what Rosalie is thinking.

I hope bella is ok.

 
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Date: January 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Promise?

Oh dear.  I hope Bella makes good choices about how to deal with this awful situation.

 
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Date: January 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Charlie

I don't understand why she can't tell Charlie it was Jacob.  It would make it so much clearer to Charlie that the Cullen's are in the right when it comes to Bella.  I hope everything goes well in the next chapter.

 
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Date: January 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: No, no

NO NO NO!  Please no!

And if she is, please no abortions, no matter how much I don't want her to be pregnant.

Oh my.  This could be awful.

 
Summary:

Ten years later five happy couples live in the Cullen household. What if Bella finds out a little family secret that has kept those couples happy for so long?

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Rated NC-17 for very graphic lemons with non-canon pairings including BXE, BXJ, BXEM, BXC, BXRXA, and BXJacob. OOC just in case.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Nessie, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 30441
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2008 Updated: March 20, 2009


Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Bergdorf Goodies

Bring on Emmett!

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to leave a review. Emmett will definitely be coming! Haha!

 
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Date: December 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: The Parthenon

MMMMMM.  That was an exciting installment.  I like how Bella reflected on what the sex was for her with all the different people - that to her she gets something different from everyone.

Are we getting closer to naughty Carlisle?  Is he going to punish Bella for stealing a cop car?

I can't wait to see whatever is next!



Author's Response:

I loved writing that paragraph. And I love the thought of Carlisle punishing Bella about the car!

 
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Date: January 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: What Alice Doesn't See...

Who could totally hate this?  I mean I love J/B/E stories of any kind.  Add that to how much I love the premise of this story, and there is only love. 

Yum!



Author's Response:

I love JXBXE stories too. That's why I just had to add this chapter! Thanks for the review!

 
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Date: January 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Mr. Blue

Wowie Zowie!

I can't wait for the Carlisle chapter - I'm getting quite an educqtion from your story!



Author's Response:

So am I. Researching this stuff can be quite a shocker. Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Yes Father.

Way back in the beginning, you said something about this not turning into a crazy orgy.  I want you to go back on your words!  Maybe they enter a "make it at home video" competition, and they use the hospital as the setting?  Maybe Bella could spend some time with her husband and brothers at the same time?  Like "Queen Bella and the Servant Creatures" or something.

I'm  a sick, sick woman... now off to find Mr. Historicvamp... :)

 
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Date: January 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Bella's Box O' Bad Girl

lol to the last line.

This has been a fantastic ride, (pun intended, natch.) and I'm looking forward to whatever delights you bring :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

 
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Date: February 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: What Does Seth have To Do With It?

Holy moly!

Who would have ever thought that Jake and Edward could... TOGETHER!

I voted for the orgy over this, but you did not disappoint. 

Yum.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it! I think you will really enjoy the next chap though. It's right up your alley!

 
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Date: February 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 13: Movie Night

You do not disappoint Sirena... I would have never imagined actually enjoying such a story, but by golly you had me hooked from the very beginning... It takes major cojones to see this through - good for you.

and yum.



Author's Response:

When I first posted  I braced myself for the flames. Not only was I worried that people would have a fit about defiling such beloved characters but this was the first thing I've written ever. I mean if you don't count my research paper in high school! But everyone has been so supportive and positive. Even the very few reviewers that didn't like the story still had positive complements on my writing. Thanks so much for the constant feedback and support!

~Sirena

 
Finding the Key by eibbil Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 571]
Summary:

Bella woke up in the Phoenix hospital and couldn't remember how she got there. A year later, she's living in Jacksonville with her mother, but she still has no memory of her four months in Forks. Can she recover what she lost by returning?


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 49326
[Report This] Published: November 25, 2008 Updated: March 18, 2009


Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

I do have faith, I promise... Bella MUST realize soon exactly what's going on or I think I'll cry!

I can't wait for them to be together again :)



Author's Response:

Faith is good, I don't want ya crying, after all ;) 

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

I will happily take that awesomesauce, even if it does contradict with my new diet - because you are awesome.

I just love your writing so much!  This particular chapter is great because you've captured Bella's off-kilter reactions to things so well.  I'm shocked that Edward is kissing her, but I'll chalk it up to the face that he's overwhelmed with happiness to have her back.

Great job!!



Author's Response:

Very, very overwhelmed and just couldn't stop himself.

Thanks, though! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

Was it her lullaby?  I love this so much!

Great writing, and way to go making Edward so perfectly patient with her.

Great job!

 
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Date: January 16, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

The doors are open!  Does that mean she's going to wake up without the amnesia?  I hope so!

Edward and all the other Cullens are just so magical... I love them :)

 
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Date: February 01, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

Oh Edward.  why are you such a stubborn jerk.  Eventually he'll come around, I hope.

Charlie is impressive here - I love that he's willing to do and accept whatever it takes for Bella to be happy.

 

 
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Date: February 21, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Well THAT is a very interesting way to start a change!!!

I think it's a brilliant idea, and you wrote it very well!

 
Mind Over Matter by SubtlePen Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1378]
Summary:

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Bella challenges Edward's limits of self control by insisting that he build up his tolerance level to intimacy.

Set in the 6 week 'blank period' at the end of Eclipse / beginning of Breaking Dawn, between the battle, and the wedding.  Bella and Edward expand and deepen their physical relationship in preparation for their impending marriage.


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 70976
[Report This] Published: November 26, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Alice's Gift

Tee hee with pink... I wonder if Bella's going to be brave enough to tell him about the party :)



Author's Response:

he may have to experience some massage oil, but somethign tells me he has an antique dog eared copy of the kama sutra of his own somewhere...  you know, as reference material.  for his library.  ahem.

 




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