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Penname: historicvampirelover [ Contact]
Real name: Danielle
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I'm a history teacher who was introduced to everyone's favorite vegetarian vampires by my students.
I'm just starting to write my own stories, but for now I fill my time reading all the good stuff on twilighted.
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Summary: The sun snatched Edward in Volterra, and Bella's journey without him is tough. The grief, endless nightmares, and utter shock of a lost love takes on a heavy toll. Not all is lost to true love; It's What He Would Have Wanted. Alternate New Moon. ExB READ!
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alec, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Irina, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Marcus, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Word count: 70383
[Report This] Published: October 27, 2008 Updated: February 22, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed 
Date: January 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Temper Tantrums
Thanks for the email and previews... This chapter is wonderful, mostly because the pain Bella is feeling is not only true to character, but true to life. When you lose a soulmate, there just is not a recovery. Not possible.
Anyway, I cling desperately to an eventual E/B reunion, if it takes 5 sequels
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed 
Date: January 20, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Tanya
I'm so sad. So so sad.
Holding myself together until the sequel... Author's Response: Just hold on a little bit longer. I think, including Epilogue and an Author's Note at the end, there was 15 chapters. So you aren't that far from the end, in reality. We're already 1/3rd of the way there! :) Just keep smiling. I promise it'll be worth it. We had a reviewer just like you on fanfiction, and we convinced her to stay and wait it out until the sequel and she hasn't regretted it yet. She reviews every chapter of every story we've written. :) So just keep your head up, I promise it'll be worth it.
Thanks!
cALLIEfornia BENches
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 23, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Heartbeat Lost
Oh boy. I won't hate. I still believe in E/B. I really really want to have faith in it!
I'm glad Bella's asked for this - and I know she'll be a Cullen forever. Thank goodness.
More soon please!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 24, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Tingling Sensations
Oh goodness. What the hell does that dream/numb scene mean where they're both human? How interesting!
So much potential here, and you keep promising that my questions will eventually be answered, so I'm not going to freak.
As usual, great chapter!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 27, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: A Blazing Fire
Oh my goodness! Bella needs to kill Victoria. She needs to KILL VICTORIA. Do you two hear me?
I am trying so hard to stay full of hope and be willing to accept the crazy twists and turns. You aren't making it easy!
Are you SURE this isn't a Jasper/Bella story?
Ay yay yay... let's get going! Author's Response: Oh, there is noway it's a Jasper/Bella story. Trust me, Ben and I are hardcore BxE fans. Questions will start being answered next chapter, which I'm just about to post. :)
Thanks for sticking with us!
cALLIEfornia BENches
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Little Ashes
Oy. I'm so glad that you killed Victoria, Ben. She deserved it. She deserved every moment of misery that you wrote so well.
Now, Bella is leaving. Great (sarcastic.) I know there's a point. I want to understand the point.
Keep going! I'm hooked.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Revived Past
The sharing of pain between Jasper, Bella and Carlisle is exquisite. I don't know what the hell is going on with Alison/Alice, and I don't want to feel stupid later, but dear God am I glad that there are only 5 chapters left of this. I need me some Edward!
Great chapter, lots of open ends. Need more!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Silence
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuugh. You want crying, you got it.
Even Esme turned against her. So sad... so incredibly sad. Now Bella is in Volterra. Is that where she'll eventually find our boy?
And WTF is going on with Alice/Alison. ugh.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 12: Fortuitous Home
Oh for heavens sake. Is Edward there or not?
TORTURE.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 13: Phoenix
I'm not even going to try and answer the questions, but maybe you'll send me the prize since I've been so loyal in reading and reviewing? A girl can dream.
Actually, at this point, I don't know if I want a sequel... the ending here is sad, but complete. Who am I fooling, I'll read every word.
Thanks for a great story.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: February 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Epilogue
Oh boy. It was only a dream... not? The most fabled way to end a story, then you take it back partially? WTF. I always feel like an idiot when I finish one of your chapters.
Bring on the sequel! Author's Response: No, no, no. Haha. We had a lot of confusion with that when we posted it on Fanfiction, too. What He Would Have Wanted was not a dream. It definitely happened. (Well, in fanfiction world, I mean.) But, to clarify, and I cannot say this enough, What He Would Have Wanted was not a dream. You'll see more in the sequel, but if you think really hard about it, it will make more sense. Think about previous deaths in the story, and what happened to them.
I've already said too much. :)
cALLIEfornia BENches
Summary: Edward Cullen made Bella Swan’s life a living hell from age ten to twelve. Finally fed up with the torment and teasing, she moved to Phoenix. Now she’s seventeen, beautiful, and has a new sense of confidence. When her mother sends her back to Forks for her senior year, she is determined to shake things up. 
NC-17 for sexuality, underage drinking, and language. OOC, just to be safe. Some canon pairings, some absolutely the opposite.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Laurent, Mike, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 55461
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: August 21, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Pwetty as a Little Pwincess
This story is fabulous! Edward deserves nothing but the worst torture!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:Texan Twangs and Salad Dressing
Excellent chapter!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Vinyl and Interruptions
Please let it be Laurent!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 20, 2008
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Bikini Strings and Testing
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYY Laurent!
And I secretly am hoping that Edward and Bella find their way together!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Linen Closets and Calls Accepted
Edward definitely is a dick, but somehow he'll be redeemed... Jasper will have his turn at being a dick soon I think.
And our Bella... oh Bella.
Yay for updates!
Summary: A one shot (maybe two if well received) on what could have happened if Jasper couldn't control the emotions around Bella in Chapter 13 of "These Dreams". Thanks to the lovely Mrs. C for the banner!!! 
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Word count: 7091
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2008 Updated: November 05, 2008
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 23, 2008
Title: Chapter 1: Heaven on Earth
yummy!!!! Author's Response: Well said! Thanks for the review...Isn't Jasper the best?
Summary: When Bella is seventeen she is brutally attacked for weeks. She escapes and is saved by Edward Cullen. Six years later, adjusting to normal life is difficult for her. Edward enters her life, shaking things up.
Thanks to pixieyow for the banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Jacob, James, Jasper, Laurent, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 67075
[Report This] Published: October 29, 2008 Updated: January 30, 2009
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 19, 2008
Title: Chapter 15: Formulating a Plan
I am so afraid of where this story is going... I don't know if I'll even be able to read the eventual James scene... You write it so well though, so I know I'm looking forward to more chapters.
Thanks! Author's Response: Don't worry, it'll all work out. Thank you and I'll post again soon.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 21, 2008
Title: Chapter 16: Showing the Pain
So let's get this straight:
1. James is coming for Bella.
2. His cousin Tanya shares stalkerish tendencies and wants Edward AND probably hates Bella for stealing him.
3. Their bodyguard Laurent is a double-agent but they're pretending they don't know in order to entice psycho-man.
Oy vay! A girl needs some resolution and a good fight scene... keep writing! Author's Response: It's all coming. I won't leave you hanging. I promise.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 27, 2008
Title: Chapter 17: Lines may be Crossed
oh boy. this is going to get very tense in the next few chapters... I'm ready! This is so well done!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: December 29, 2008
Title: Chapter 18: Patience is a Virtue not easily Learned
She's going to be fine... she's going to be fine.
If I keep repeating this in my head, it's easier to imagine that nobody has to get hurt along the way to the happy ending.
More soon please! I love this so much.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 19: Peaceful dreams wakeful Nightmares
How did he find her!??!?! Is it a dream, God I hope it is just a dream.
The Carlisle/Esme story is perfect... Carlisle is such a gentleman!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: Welcome back to Hell
I hope he isn't too late too! James is a dirty disgusting animal who doesn't deserve to breathe.
Edward needs to fix this, and soon.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 21: Killing me Slowly
Oh my goodness my heart is beating so fast!
Go Cullen men, go!!!!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover Signed
Date: January 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 22: A fresh Start
DING DONG, the jerk is dead.
AMEN.
Thank goodness for Cullen's. I am looking very forward to new chapters and sequels.
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