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Penname: twilightgma1954 [ Contact]
Real name: cris
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Member Since: June 29, 2009
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Summary: A dark angel visits Bella Swan in her dreams, filling her with lust and unparalleled pleasure, but what happens when the line between fantasy and reality starts to blur?
 
Banner by @Miztrezboo
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 39 Completed: No
Word count: 263309
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2010 Updated: August 16, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Night Visitors
that was one hell of a cliffie not mad about that but they couldnt have wait what 15 more minute and let them finish come on it was getting pretty hot there need release please hehe
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Night Visitors
that was one hell of a cliffie not mad about that but they couldnt have wait what 15 more minute and let them finish come on it was getting pretty hot there need release please hehe
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Unexpected Admissions
I just love how witty and snarky these two are with each other i love reading their banter back and forth and you do write the hottiest lemons
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 16, 2011
Title: Chapter 30: Hidden Clues
this shit is getting serious ...they better act fast before he has Jess for brunch
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Contagious Lust
so if you ever wondered why we nominate you for lemon awards well go back and re read this chapter I thought we would have to call the fire departmentto put esme amd carlile out there for a while excelent if they keep this up mom will make them live in the woods where they can't break the furniture lol
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 09, 2011
Title: Chapter 29: Interview with a Vampire
after all the hot sexy oarts this was so light and sully I love it
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Prey
well you did an amazing job writing this chapter its probally the best wrtten chapter yet but this is reality james knew him so well knew it would take him over but you would never really kill her right???? hence the title grasping darkness now you have about 1 day to update before i let the villagers loose on you with pitchforks and tourches no bullets nesasary
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 32: Prey
threre is no way you would lead us here only to kick us so we know there is something coming the next chapter to make this all betterb
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 31, 2011
Title: Chapter 36: Plan B
i will just stay quiet for now and enjoy the ride bumps and all
Summary: *NOW COMPLETE*
Bella wanted Mr. Perfect, but he didn’t want her. When Mr. Imperfect comes along, can she look close enough to see just who is more perfect for her?
A story about falling in love with the imperfections.
Blinkie by the uber talented RoseArcadia
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 153293
[Report This] Published: September 09, 2010 Updated: May 12, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: He Met Me
your blinkie really tells it all i love that , jasper doesnt know what he wants but it is for sure he doesnt want her to be with anyone else he steps just close enough to keep the string attatched I hope she comes to her sences and realizes she doesnt have to settle for second place in any ones heart Rose and Emmett are always such a joy to read and this out door woodsy Edward is hot nice suits and fancy cars don't make you perfect jasper a kind and open heart is perfection
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 22: He Vied for Me: Part Two
I still have faith in Alice maybe this time when she comes she will have grown up a bit and realize Jasper is perfect for her ...his mom will love her seeing her son so happy will make her happy
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: He Bailed on Me
that is really sad,but unless it was an emergency a phone call would have been nice....and polite, but assumeing theb worst is never a good thing either so we will have to give him a chance to explaine what was up with just leaving her hanging....
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 11, 2011
Title: Chapter 19: He Shocked Me
I am glad she stayed to watch over him....they still could be friends right.....he was quick to come after jasper...for kissing her...and he knows now that was not what she wanted
that might be the clue to the fact that he over reacted to her being in Jaspers appartment....but the girls he was with ????? holding my breath waiting on an explanation maybe we can get some sleep talk out of him????? some real honesty
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: He Moved on from Me
gee...that kind of made me want to cry...looks like he really did move on ...in a really big way..but I am glad she and jasper got all that all on the open and they are still friends ...he is to trying to get back into her life romanticly he just must not feel that way about her ... and i will wait out epic cant wait
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: He Broke Down on Me
STILL WANT TO KNOW WHO THE OTHER DRINK BELONGED TO EVEN IF SHE IS AFRAID TO ASK I STILL CAN
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 28, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: He Left Me
ouch...that was hurtful ...well if you really want him go get him don't take no for an answer go get your man put your self out there don't hold back.....go you have make him see...... make him feel....... now........ no waiting no Jasper rebound...he so di not want you for the long haul he choose Alice...he is settling for you ......Edward need you undivided attention...naked...hehe
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 04, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: He Avoided Me
omg this about broke my heart...i hope that it is not what actually meets the eye and I will keep an open mind till the next chapter...just keep telling your self bella I don't need a man in my life to be happy make life more interesting though
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: He was Perfect for Me
beautiful story wonderfuly imperfect ending
Summary: For Bella, it was love at first sight, and to this day, he still owns her heart. For Edward, he barely knew she existed until a chance encounter brings her into his life and into his heart. Life gets in the way and he breaks her heart. After children, marriages and 10 years have passed, can they find their way to each other again, or is it too late? She knows she'll never love anyone the way she loves him, but can he ever envision a life with her in it?
**Rated for language and sexual content.**
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes
Word count: 110997
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2010 Updated: August 08, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - Give In To Me
I think if he was kissing her back after all the drama they went through to get to this point I would have to kick his ass my self Author's Response: Right! Edward would be a dead man!! LOL xoxox
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 28, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - Call Your Name
I love the way you weave past with present never giving to much away at once....I am dying to know what broke them up....leaving her with the need to move on so quickly...I know when break ups first happen even a few day with your heart being broke feels like forever and if he was in jail for months with no contact..she was probally feelin he would never come back ..so needing to move on with jake ...I bet he was to ashamed when he was in jail to call and let her know...but he was to late when he did finally reach her...face book you gotta love it ...going to see him wow that got to take some kind of courage I just love this Author's Response: Thank you so much!! xoxo
Summary:  After years of surviving in her arranged marriage, Bella hears some news that shatters all of her hopes and dreams. Can she and Edward discover what it means to be together after all? Set in the modern day. ExB
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Word count: 220375
[Report This] Published: September 17, 2010 Updated: April 26, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Firsts
come on girl show her what your made of. I think i would have licked jelly off his finger tip right in front of that blond haired b---h Rose and Alice should teach her the meaing of foreplay and how to tease her man Author's Response: LOL! She teases him quite a bit when she is unaware. I can't wait until she does it on purpose! Thanks!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Confession
are you trying to break my heart into little pieces...cause you are...but they had a really good talk right????and they can move forward to something a little more husband and wife like i hope please go let her teenaged hormoned kick in soon Author's Response: I'm sorry this broke your heart. It was a good talk for them and a turning point in their relationship. Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Changes
i was kind of mad she refused to get on a plane and go to him but I like this much better much more dramatic .....now we just need to see the bitch sneak in his room and find them both wrapped up to together half naked in his bed .....it would serve her right Author's Response: That would serve her right, wouldn't it? Tanya's such a piece of work. She did need this time and the wake up call. Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 30, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: A Trip Home
this has been the longest acts of foreplay ever...... what a time for he to decide to get frisky reall with her dad down the hall I hope she enjoyed that taste and will be ready soon for the whole meal I wonder what her dad will find our about her land??? Author's Response: As soon as she's ready for the full meal, he'll be all over that! LOL! Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Christmas
oh i just loved the new turn around it Grandma .I was blessed the the best Gram in th e whole world and I have tryed to be just like her I so glad that they included her it seemed to make her day .....babies I love babies .....and james lets go get Grandma she can beat him over the head with her new racket Author's Response: I would so love to see Janice beating him with her purse and the racket. Priceless! My grandmother is the best in the world too.
Thank you!
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