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Summary:

The Vibration of Love

The third story in the Trilogy about Rob and Bella. (The first story was "The Sound of Love."  The second story was "The Look of Love.")

Bella Pattinson finds herself shifting realities between her world with Rob and Edward's world.  Here are the opening lines of:  The Vibration of Love - Chapter One: "Welcome To The Twilight Zone:" 

I opened my eyes and jumped. Rob was staring back at me, but he was in full makeup, contacts, and all, as Edward.

“What are you doing? God, you scared the crap out of me!” I said.

“I’m sorry, love,” he said in his Edward accent. “What did I do to scare you?”

“Rob, stop it. You’re freaking me out,” I said.

“Rob?” He looked at me confused.

I sat up and started to say, “Why…,” and I stopped talking. I looked around, and I was not in my room. I was on the Twilight movie set for Bella’s room.

“OK, I said. “Apparently I’m still asleep. But this feels so real. I feel wide-awake. Wow, this is one weird dream.”

“Love, you’re not dreaming,” said Rob or Edward or whoever he was supposed to be in this flipped out Freudian adventure I was having. He reached out to touch my cheek, and I leaned away. The idea of him touching me was just too creepy. He pulled his hand back, and looked hurt.

I stared at him. He didn’t look like Rob in make up. His skin looked like it was that pale. And his eyes didn’t look like he was wearing contacts; they looked like they were golden brown. I couldn’t help myself; I reached out to touch his cheek. I pulled my hand back and gasped as soon as I did.

“You’re freezing!” I said.   

He chuckled. “Yes, love, vampires are freezing."

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 52740
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2010 Updated: February 17, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Welcome to the Twilight Zone

the longer you write this the better it gets missed you



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for such a nice complement - that's exactly my goal - to keep getting better :)

 
Hate Me by xrxdanixrx Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 736]
Summary:

*NOW COMPLETE*

 

 

Awkward Bella had only ever had a crush on one guy,
the one guy known for stringing girls along.  When Bella's
advances were rejected, her world was flipped inside out. 
Several years later, she's now the female version of the catalyst
that changed her life and now it's her turn for payback.

 

A Fanmade banner and blinkie by iDrinkBloodshake! Thanks so much!

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 168369
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2010 Updated: October 29, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Shadow

well that was very good   i like them when they are playful   and sexy  

 
A Labor of Love by lizconno Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 761]
Summary:

2010 SHIMMER AWARD WINNER & 2010 INDIE TWIFIC FINALIST

Bella returns to Forks, WA to start her life over. Edward is a widower raising twin daughters. When Bella starts to work for Edward, the two develop a close bond that may be ruined by their secrets. LEMONS-- real & imagined Rated-M for a reason AH/OOC.

THIS STORY NO LONGER AVAILABLE ON TWILIGHTED. Head to my blog.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2417
[Report This] Published: February 07, 2010 Updated: October 14, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 12, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

good god woman do you really have a death wish    the last  chapter you had  towns folk with pitch forks  after you this time i dont think any one can save you from your fate    i hope you have a quick turn  around prepared  while your still in one piece   i just believe he sent them away   mistake after mistake   what is wrong with the both of them     i hope you have another chapter in thr wings  iam about ready to give up on this story   its just to much  

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 22, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I can tell you now how pisssed i was at you for several chapters actually mad at how stupid 2 people could actually be    mad at her for huring him and the kids  mad at him for keeping the truth at bay  mad at emmet for hurting his brother

the addition of sam was priceless though   what they both threw away they cant get back   but your wonderful come back it was all kinds of perfect

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 11, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL BEGINING TO THIS TALE   I THIKN SHE WOULD BE A PERFECT NANNY   WITH THE TEACHING BACKROUND   OUR POOR EDWARD    HE REALLY NEEDS HELP AND THE GIRLS NEED A MOTHER FIGURE    SO CONTINUE

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 19, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

I LIKED YOUR INTERVIEW THIS WAY MUCH MUCH BETTER    OH COME ON YOU KNOW HE WANTS TO HIRE HER    THINK OF ALL THE FUN THEY CAN HAVE AT BATH TIME   

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

a taste of lemon is better than none at all

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 22, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

just shoot us why dont you    just one more paragraph  you couldnt  give us at least one more

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 27, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

WHY DO YOU DO THIS TO ME    I THINK ITS TO TORMENT ME TO DEATH COME BACK QUICK

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 16, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

i really love this story  i have from the first chapter    but we both know that emmett cant tell him    hippa confidence and all that but i say screw hippa and make emmett tell  him about the baby      please 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

i am so beyond sad that thing are like this      I was so hoping even if she  was not giving him the option to be a part of all this that she would at least let him know that he was having another child i know he said and she said and they both had their reasons but i am sad that he will never be a part of this and she may not be a lone but she might of at least told him     i know you have a plan   your story is wonderful by the way I just need to let you finish telling it your way      i have faith in you

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 09, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Change

well i love new and fresh stories my favorite topic is bella edward and baby   I think I may have hit the jackpot here so to favorites you go   and I will be waitng her for you to dazzle me

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 11, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

well that last chapter really caused a shit storm     i think people were really planing on stringing you up  but we have had a week to calm down     I still think she is acting unfairly to him he has the right to know he fathered a child but I am glad that they are finally working together to   at least get them in the same room together      did emmett ever ask his brother how he felt about ever having another child??????maybe if he knew he was ready to have a full life and have all thoes thing he would try harder to let him know that life is just within his grasp    i hope you fix this soon      if not what kind of flowers do you like   just kidding

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 14, 2010 Title: A Labor of Love

ok so now that i have had a chace to calm   i can see that he  is just distraught  missing her needing her caring for his girls who were just as heart broken knowing now she choose to do this because of his missleading her  but it was a lot to accept  i only hope he can but he is a wonderful father and he will do what ever it takes be be that to his son I am sure but he is hurt that she would keep this from him and be feels betrayed but his brother   he understand HIPPA  privacy act and all that but I hope they can get past all that    all the bad        the girls will be elated with the news of their new brother   i hope she will be able to bond with the girls again     kids are so forgiving     but its your trip so we wait for the ride to start again

 
Taken by BellaLovesEdward729 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1181]
Summary:

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Edward and Bella go to tell Charlie about their engagement when something happens that changes everything. Love is tested, friendships are torn, but how can Edward save Bella from someone they all trusted?


Categories: Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 88773
[Report This] Published: February 10, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

OH THIS IS GETTING EXCITING      I LOVE YOU READING SELECTION SOME ARE ALREADY MARKED AS MY FAVORITES SO I WILL GO AND READ     THANKS



Author's Response:

thank you so much!!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 29, 2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7

i hope they are getting closer to finding her    jacob need the shit beat out of him    i always wanted to see rosalie  do it   let edward find her first   but alice and rose will kick his ass



Author's Response:

they are getting very close! and my lips are sealed on who does what to jacob :)

 
A Rough Start by itzmegan73 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 877]
Summary:

Overnight, irresponsible Edward goes from bachelor to father of a 5 yr old boy. Meanwhile responsible, prepared Bella begins her first job as Kindergarten teacher at Forks Elementary. When irresponsible meets the epitome of responsible, sparks will fly!

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: Yes Word count: 250550
[Report This] Published: February 11, 2010 Updated: August 31, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - In Your Eyes

that is just the sadest thing i ever read       misunderstanding this could cause big problems  did alice think that  this information was really a good topic at dinner amoung strangers i usually do a happy dance at alice and her interventions but this not so much 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - It's the End of the World As We Know It

WHOA  NO FULLY PLOT HERE    THIS WAS AN AMAZINGLY WELL TOLD STORY   I LOVE MYSTERY   AND THIS WAS OVER THE TOP      WELL DONE

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - With This Ring

ah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  tha t was so perfect I want to cry...........Anothy is such a pefect child I hope everyon votes for him

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 Please Come Home for Christmas

All th Christmas cheer was wonderful but the end nearly broke my heart...poor anthony

oh I hope you don't leave us hanging for long on this

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36 - Our House

kids have a way of making everything so simple   that why   we love Anthony so much    he has such a beautiful soul  

 
Summary:

An old, dilapidated hospital residing in the outskirts of Forks, Washington, sits untouched - other than being the occasional setting of a teenage party. Everyone knows the rumors, and it's because of those rumors rebellious teens are lured there. They want to be the first to spy the young man who supposedly lives inside its walls, the man who's either a ghost or crazed maniac that murders those courageous enough to enter the building.

No one has ever seen him, or at least no one that's ever lived to tell the tale. But it's all just rumors, right? Well, Bella Swan is about to find out.

 

Rated for subject matter and content. OOC. Canon pairings.

 

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Warning: There is mention of physical abuse in this story.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Jessica, Marcus, Mike, Rosalie, Tyler
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 89825
[Report This] Published: February 13, 2010 Updated: July 12, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 17: Realize

i truely love this. and the fact that you have not rushed  makes in all the more beautiful. I dont think there is any thing more lovely than the discovey kisses between to people trying to find love with each other I can still remember the countless hour when i was a teen sitting holding kissing. kissing till you couldnt breath lost in each other for ever with eyes open watching each other, sure i am amoung the masses that want them to be together  totaly but i want to see them take the steps touching kissing exploring  I am a total fan and have faith in your story to be wonderful written when the time comes  for them both to make love to each other    

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Don't Go

stay no  get  out bring back clean clothes  food a warm blanket    

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 22, 2010 Title: Chapter 13: Discern

thank you for printing that    i am holding my breath till the next update   

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: A Piece of Beautiful

LOVELY SLOW BURNING JUST THE WAY IT SHOULD BE

 




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