Your donations help keep this site running, thank you very much for the support!
Penname: twilightgma1954 [ Contact]
Real name: cris
Status: Member
Member Since: June 29, 2009
Website:
Beta-reader: Yes
avid reader career nurse loving mother and grandmother love to travel enjoy reading and support new authors host a wonderful reading group that love to discuss twilght and fanfiction which has become our newest passion
[ Report This]
Summary: 
I had known him my whole life, but it had only been five months, two weeks, and six days since I’d realised I was in love with my best friend, and I still hadn’t worked up the courage to tell him.
Bella & Edward are next door neighbours, and since childhood best friends. Bella is the shy and clumsy girl at school, picked on by the other students in her class; Edward the popular jock with flocks of girls who like him. How can Bella ever express her feelings of more than just friendship for him?
AU/AH Canon Couples.
Thanks to Ellashy for help with the banner.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 43391
[Report This] Published: October 28, 2009 Updated: March 08, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Sweet Dreams
being in love with your next door neighbor is bad cant ever get away from it cant tell you parents but its time to man up you would think waking up in his lap with his obvious errection would make her happy she should of said something witty like does this mean your happy to sse me????closed her eyes and pretented to go back to sleep while beathing her hot breath onto his bulge hint hint he would be able to make her dream come to life then no teenage boy has that much control dont let her date mike yuck give them a moment let her go to the medow let him follow i will happly squeese the lemons if you want to make lemonaide hurry back
Summary: 
Best friends, a freak snowstorm, and a blackout. Throw in some board games and nice sheets, and who knows what will happen?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 106661
[Report This] Published: October 30, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
yea edward he really does love her and i think our alice could really whip up something so cute tell her to find out about the details of what does get payed for and jump what a wonderful honeymoon it would make
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
I like being kept on the edge of my seat that is what keeps us coming back
Summary: Set in Breaking Dawn during Bella's change. Edward's meets his new daughter for the first time. Fluff. One-shot.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Edward, Jacob, Nessie, Renesmee
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1478
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: October 31, 2009
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed 
Date: October 31, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
i have askd every one to write this subject sorry its just a one shot it has potential to be a chapter story
Summary: 
Bella is a family attorney & Edward seeks her help. Friendship abounds, maybe more? AH, AU, OOC,
Rated M for later, they are adults & will do adult things!
Canon Couples
My BFF is Twitter: Mrs_Robward
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Other Character
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 92216
[Report This] Published: October 31, 2009 Updated: December 27, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18, FfP Outtake, "No More Sadness"
this has to be one of thr most beautiful chapters i have ever read what a beautiful Christmas Miracle
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17, Forever & The Rest of Forever
I have personaly spent months following your story. I have enjoyed each and every word that you wrote. your charecters were real to me and I felt every dip. but the passion you put in to writting this has taken my breath away and the last half hour I spent sobbing I dedicate to your talent
there is no book store anywhere that could sell the perfection of this story I truely am a devoted fan
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5, Mr. Whitlock, Rose, & Esme
adoption is something very close to my own heart so this story has had me in tears since the first chapter having given birth first then adding to my wonderful family thru adoption this legal process is familar and it is a beautiful love story your have given us a warm heartfelt tale tale thats been a pleasure to read what a wondrful way to spend a snowy sunday afternoon this is beautiful
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12, Lyrical Flowers
that is so not fair to do this to me so early in the morning you better be quick dying here
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12, Lyrical Flowers
that is so not fair to do this to me so early in the morning you better be quick dying here
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13, Cause & Effect
please dont ever doubt your importance in this world of fan fiction i hang on every word every time someone clicks you as favorite that means what you wrote is important to them for me when i am at my job and my phone buzzes and i see its you with an update i cant wait to get home to a hot tea a warm bed and a wonderful tale to read your important to me every word i have such a busy life but this is my passion reading waiting each week for new material and some times influenceing the story line with suggestions my greatest joy was making suggestion about a chapter to an author who was stuck and seeing my thoughts brought to life i come here to read your thoughts i am important and your important to me
Summary:
WINNER of Indie Twific Award: Best Use of a Parent. Congratulations to all nominees.
Mimiteh = Native American word meaning "New Moon". Thanks to Lorne for the banner!
*Alternate Ending to New Moon* Consumed by worry about Bella’s depression, Charlie drags her to counseling with a Quileute psychologist, Dr. Nina Carlton. Unbeknownst to Bella, Nina has wolfish relatives in Forks, a past with Charlie, and a shield of her own. When Alice sees Bella throwing herself into harm's way, Edward races back to Forks. He is torn between staying out of Bella's life, as promised, and saving her from peril. Through a journey forged in therapy, friendship, and the support of their parents, Bella and Edward will learn important lessons about themselves and their love.
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Mike, Quil, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 90771
[Report This] Published: November 02, 2009 Updated: April 14, 2013
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 17, 2011
Title: Chapter 24: Grounded
now think... grounded.... dad gone all day.... no where to go but to your room .....hot ass boy friend that can climb in your bed room window with out being scene .....the choices are endless Author's Response: Ha ha ha! Doesn't sound like much of a punishment at all now, does it? Thanks for leaving a review. Jen xx
Summary:     
  They must keep their love a secret from everyone. Especially the ones they're married to.
Entry for The "I Love 80’s Music" NaughtyHeels Anonymous One-shot Contest
E/B, O/S, Rated: NC-17 for a reason, kiddies.
One-shot to be continued as a multi-chaptered story with the title, "Anhelo Amarte". Look out for in May of 2010.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 9082
[Report This] Published: November 03, 2009 Updated: November 05, 2009
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 16, 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Secret Lovers
I am so glad you continued with this its been amazing Author's Response: Thank you!
Summary: 
A look at the relationship & love of Edward and Bella, two self-aware teenagers who are forced to grow up quickly. Together, they battle problems and find their inner strength. No love triangles. Fluffy beginning, drama ensues, no dark themes. AH AU OOC All canon pairings E/B, J/A, Em/R, C/E
Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 32007
[Report This] Published: November 04, 2009 Updated: May 15, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: For Whom The Mind Melds
i usually review before 8 chapters but i have beeen waiting for the other shoe to drop so to speak some thing you guy always throw in ther to tear our lovers apart i was so caught up that I didnt know 8 chapters had flown by good job i will follw you this has been a lovely story Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're interested. :)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Sound of Love
this has been perfect sweet and pure like first love and first kisses should be every young couple should have memories like the one you are discribing this was absolutly beautiful i almost hate to read on because i know like all good plots there is going to be the preverbial bump in the road for them i hate to see smething so perfect be tainted by doubt so i guess i better ready my self huh
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 15, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Winter's Walk
oh my holding my breath waiting for the other shoe to drop just dont stay away so long this time
Summary: 
Sequel to BRANDED-It's now six years later; Bella is graduating from Dartmouth, Edward is in Med School. How have their lives changed over the years and what's to come down the road?
AU-Human, rated NC-17 for mature language, mature subject matter, talk of abuse.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Word count: 149860
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: February 18, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Hormonal Horrors
this has been a delightful journey i love that you up date on a regular and i so happy that the baby is coming soon hav ebeen following you since the first chapter Author's Response: Thanks so much, twilightgma, thanks so much for the love. I really appreciate it. :) You can thank my beta for the fast updates. She is SUPERWOMAN!
Summary: 
Stephenie’s cut-away during the honeymoon left many of us extremely frustrated! What exactly happened from that touching moment in the bay until morning, when Bella woke up with feathers in her hair? Did the rest of the honeymoon proceed smoothly?
No honeymoon is completely perfect—especially when the two people involved have never done anything like this before. And especially when the couple is Bella and  Edward, with all their unique problems.
Join me as I explore Edward's thoughts and feelings during his most intimate moments with Bella. Watch these two grow and learn about each other as they fall deeper in love. I hope you will agree that I have treated their love with the utmost respect and good taste that it deserved.
Categories: Breaking Dawn, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Word count: 64151
[Report This] Published: November 07, 2009 Updated: January 14, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
I read alot of fan fiction but that was one of the most romantic love scenes that i have read,i hate that they took out that scene out of the movie about taking a taste i thought it was so hot thank you for using it it was perfect cant wait to your next chapter Author's Response: Thanks for the awesome compliment! I thought the "taste" scene was a little too early for Twilight because they barely knew each other. But in the Honeymoon?? It was perfect! He's used to her blood, the frenzy isn't as bad as at first, so I thought it was the ideal time for him to "taste" her.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
this chapter was the most perfect i have ever read thisis just how i would like the scene in the movie to be no screenwritter can do it the perfection you just have bravo Author's Response: Oh my....what a compliment!! Thank you so much!!!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
this chapter was the most perfect i have ever read thisis just how i would like the scene in the movie to be no screenwritter can do it the perfection you just have bravo
[Report This] Published: November 08, 2009 Updated: July 23, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Need
this man has to be at a 25 on the asshole meter .....good thing we all really love him
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: Repercussions
WELL I HAVE BEEN SITTING HERE READING THIS WONDEFUL STORY I LIKE IT ALOT IT WAS GOING SO WELL BUT WHAT IS HE THINKING DUNB ASS HOW COULD HE DO THAT TO HER JUST BECAUSE HIS MOM AND DAD DONT APPROVE OR DIDNT BEFORE THEY HAD ALL THE FACTS JUST TOSS IT ALL AWAY HE NEEDS AN EMMETT SMACK RIGHT ON THE BACK OF HIS THICK HEAD I HOPE SHE PUTS HIM THROUGH HIS PACES SO I AM READY TO SEE WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am glad that you are enjoying it. Much more to come!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29: Recovery
YEA THAT WOULD NOT HAPPEN IN MY UNIT VISITATION IS VERY STRICT NO MORE THAN 2 AT A TIME AND ONLY 4 HOUR A DAY NO HUSBANDS AT THE BED SIDE EITHER I DONT KNOW IFF HE REALIZES IT BUT I AM SURE SHE CAN HEAR HIM THIS IS A GOOD THING RIGHT BUT WHY ALWAYS NEAR DEATH TO MAKE THEM FELL AND DO THE RIGHT THING Author's Response: I think it depends on the hospital; I've been in some strict ones and some not so strict ones. Also depends on the severity of the patient.
At least this time, they were both in love beforehand and were in the process of making the move back to each other when it happened. This was just the catalyst to get them there.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Summary:  This is Breaking Dawn from Edward's POV, using the same scenes and dialogue but with new scenes added as well -- the latter of which are entirely the product of my over-active imagination. New scenes include the lemons sorely lacking from the original.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: None
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 194511
[Report This] Published: November 16, 2009 Updated: September 07, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Engaged
just wanted to say hello and let you know that you have avid readers here that love a good story i come here alot and love a good read this has a lot of potential i come here give my thoughts share ideas since you seem to be staying close to the story plot from the book can i suggest when u get to the birth of their child we have all been asking for some additional bonding time with edward and renesseme something that some writters leave out we are patent and kind with our review but remember us when you update waiting patiently please dont get mid story and forget your fan base leaving us for months with no upadte i always tell my favorites we book mark u for a reason we want to read your words cause your only as good a writter as your next chapter good luck see you soon Author's Response: Definitely will do! Thanks! :)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Burning
i love the bonding your doing with father and daughter every one leaves that part out this was wonderful
Summary: Bella and Edward are "buddies" and while Bella wants more, Edward pulls away every time she tries to make things more official. Then one evening, she meets a tall, dark, handsome man out in a club, and he promises her everything she always wanted. Will Bella take it, even if it's not with the person she thought it would be with? And what will Edward do when his friend is suddenly no longer available?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Word count: 36646
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: February 11, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Ch. 2: Unwanted Memories
intense proving that you dont have to be in love to be lovers but there is something about these two that always brings them together being just lovers is never enough for them
|
© 2008, 2009 Twilighted Enterprises, LLC. All Rights Reserved.
Unauthorized duplication is a violation of applicable laws.
Privacy Policy | Terms of Service
All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the intellectual property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of Stephenie Meyer. No copyright infringement is intended.
|
|
