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Penname: twilightgma1954 [Contact]
Real name: cris
Status: Member
Member Since: June 29, 2009
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avid reader    career nurse  loving mother and grandmother        love to travel   enjoy reading and support new authors    host  a wonderful reading group that love to discuss twilght and fanfiction which has become our newest passion

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Reviews by twilightgma1954


Jacob stopped Bella from jumping off the cliff in New Moon and Edward never returned.

After 22 years, the Cullens move to Seattle for yet another fresh start and Edward winds up with yet another surprising lab partner... Bella's daughter.

She's so like her mother and yet so different. Is it possible to love both a memory and its reincarnate?

And does Bella's daughter have a few secrets of her own?


*Rated for language, sexuality and awesomeness.

SM owns Twilight but check me out if you're into sex and sarcasm.

Sloppy wet kisses to Kris (aka Mkystich) for the new banner!

Categories: AU Characters: Edward, Other Character
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No Word count: 86339
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2011

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Bait and Switch

omg you are such a bitch    you can not do this to me not the day before christmas when I know there will only space and days before another up date  I had just had the thought when i got the update on my phone i wonder how she is keeping all of this from  her mother    well now there is a thought  bet our bella could give emma a few tips on how to make our lover boy growl

Author's Response:

hahaha THATS a conversation id like to be in the room for!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 15: Bait and Switch

itsa good thing you cam review her more that once     ive been waiting for this the first word of your story waiting for her mother to find out and show up to kick his ass nevern  thought she would be this calm   so please waiting her dying     plesae !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!           hurry more soon

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 19: Bella's Bed

this masterpiece deserved another read   i really dont know what I want to happen next   I thought Id like to read him and bella together just once but then again maybe its the only way he will be able  to move on but if emma catches them a war might begin  and our fair bella might not end up so well  but i am glad you didnt just blow off how he felt about bella   it kinna cheapens the whole twilight saga maybe since he is so torn in his head now maybe a small kiss between old lovers would be nice   go for it i am with you no matter what   you still on my favorites

Author's Response:

ah, our poor boy has quite a bit on his plate, thats for sure. thanks for stickin around :)

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 17, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Unchained Melody

that was utterly amazing    i so wanted  him to be with her one lqst  time  that was just to perfect and to be  caught in the act wow i am speechless

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: Humanity

this story has had me since chapter 1   I loved that you put him with her daughter but omg i never expected you to let  them actually be together  then to have mom show up  I never though she would forgive him for leaving or being with her daughter  wtf was she thinking what was he thinking some one has to loose   could our poor bella live through loosing him again   dear god  update soon    I can hardly stand it

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 19, 2010 Title: Chapter 24: Ten Things I Hate About You

dying here with suspence    what happened to bella   did she go home to jake edward needs to pick one and stay with it 

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 25: Full Moon

damm i wish I had said that                           that was excelent  emotional slap acrosed the face


Edward is a teenage boy who finds his life instantly changed when his family moves to Forks, WA.  He is intensely drawn to the mysterious girl in his biology class whose mind he discovers he can read.  It doesn’t take long for him to find the truth behind her dark and painful secret but it is already too late “ his life is forever altered by his intense physical and emotional connection to the beautiful girl.   

 Innocent Heart of Darkness Banner 

My excellent banner by the talented m81170


My incredible new banner by BeanFlikn247.  This is her first banner!  Isn't it great?

Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 120460
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2010

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this is a real twist    i often wondered what he would feel like if he was the one being tormented and hunted      good twist to the plot

Author's Response:

I'm glad that you are enjoying my twist.  I hope that you continue to read the story and find it interesting as well as intriguing.  I do love to see Edward pine and suffer a little and to see Bella strut her confident stuff.  Thank you for your thoughts!


Bella and Edward

 It has been 20 years since Edward left Bella in the forest. After a birthday celebration, Bella finds herself lost in her memories of Edward. What would happen if he returned "after all these years?" 

Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 34637
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2009 Updated: January 19, 2010

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 15, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

just  a taste  but i like it  he always said she would be beautiful to him  wonder what he will think of her now in all his 17 year old glory

Author's Response:

He of course is still glorious...and still so very Edward!

Summer of Salt by lola_pop Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 776]

The heat wave lingers. Sweet, savory and slick.  Jasper, Rose and I wade through the humid days, content in our relative isolation. We spend June through August at our family lake property, and this summer is like any other.

Until it's not.

An unexpected guest, new neighbors and a few stiff drinks collide to make the year we turn 19 sometimes better, often worse, but infinitely more interesting.



Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 84353
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: PBR and Pills

we all love summer and you have started out with a wonderful plot line  easy to read racy enough to want to follow you from chapter to chapter

Author's Response:

Glad you like it!  xoxo

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Annie Hall

well your have really out done it with this chapter  I love it when they banter he can be such a dream even with his prick hat on  lol

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 7: Stranger Danger

that was just painful to read     god what a dick   but she knew right  em warned her from the get go but she jumped anyway   she is strong and beautiful and she will rebound right   i want to SLAP him   and I HATE TAYNA  

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Home


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 15: Lotions and Potions and Lists


Author's Response:

I'm glad you're reading!  Thank you for reviewing!!  Update tomorrow...

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010 Title: Chapter 20: Finding Purchase

The crazy old next door neighbor was the perfect touch to this wonderful story  I hate  to see it come  to an end

Author's Response:

I'm with you on both! Love Mrs. M and will shed actual tears when I'm done with this. Sigh! Thank you so much for reading! xo

Bedtime Story by love-tart Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 310]




Two strangers, one kiss.

Since this would probably be the only time I’d ever get to kiss this gorgeous creature, I decided to make the most of it... 

A chance meeting + a slightly devious plan =  Happily ever after?

Not your average bedtime story, this is the tale of Bella and Edward.

**Thank you so much to the amazing Readergoof for making both of those gorgeous banners up there! Perfection! **

Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 98200
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: June 17, 2012

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

could you just not love him more   ..leaving to save  a hurt dog ...i bet she was not even mad ...i would be in tears

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

wedding cake for rpatz well that is just to funny ....and very creative .....we could sub title this as............. it started with a kiss....... heheh

Author's Response:

:) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

now I want to see a recipe  for the Brownie bits ,,,







We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?


What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?


This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.


All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.


Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.


And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. Renesmee. No pregnancy.


I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.


I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!



twilight gypsy



Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 29, 2010

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 8: Fantasy


Author's Response:

Well, I think that is a positive review! Breathless is what I was going for! Seriously, you are going to be breathless after the next chapter, don't ya know...

Thanks for continuing to read and for giving great reviews! Giving good reivews is KARMIC! good things come to those who leave good reviews!


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 9: Misery


Author's Response:

That's a good one! This story is writing itself! I didn't know she was going to be bitten till it happened! I am just glad he didn't kill her!

Thanks for reading and for continuing to follow the story!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Brilliant Disguise

i think the best review i can give you is to let you know i have followed you from chapter one to here without fail i understand being witten for teens sm let the graphic detail of sexual contact to a minimum  but being an adult reader i love the fan fiction versions  cause the take inuendo and make it into graphic sex   but i like a solid plot and good writting style with my sex lol  i enjoy your tale telling its fresh and the being bent over the desk shit was just to hot   i seach out a good soild story and stay  with it till the end  I ahve become great friends with some of the other writters  some of the other stories i truley love are  Breaking Trinity   I don't exist  my personal favorite      the list   I added you cause your words flow your charcters are true and and you update on a regular basis  you dont realize how important that is to die hard fans as your time is consumed by wrtting I take my free and presious time to write and review   i like your version of e/b  you make them real to me  you keep me interested and wanting more (esp bent over something)  lol

Author's Response:

Thank you very much for reading from the start and continuing to follow the story. I think I have built a strong relationship between them and have foreshadowed the sex to come. But scary Edward returns, he is just too sexy and hot to become too safe. I appreciate your kind words about the characters. I know them personally. I feel like we should be trading emails. I have not read Breaking Trinity, but The Lists is one of my fav stories ever. Ch 8 is almost ready, maybe early next week. I get up super early on the weekends, like at 5am, and write until breakfast.

Thanks again


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Run For Your Life

i love holding my  breath when i am reading     love the fear and excitment you put into your plot    i love dark edward  no one likes to let him out  our bella has needed a reality check for along time   hes is a other world being  but  he needs  release from all the tension she has put him through    like your comparison to his being an addict    like seeing the other side of the coin

just maybe this taste he got will encourage him over the honneymoon   cant wait for more        not brave enough to write love to read my personal favorites

the list

breaking trinity

i dont exist

of squallor and ashes 

i paln my week around their update

but you will have to be added the list

Author's Response:

I am touched and a little awe-inspired at your generous and wonderful review. Thank you so much! Did you hold your breath? Excellent! I loved SM's Edward, but he was too perfect. He never showed us his dark side, and it can be so sexy, right? Do you want to read the menstrual blood chapter? What shall I call it?

I have only read 'The List' from your list, but I will check them all out. And I am truly truly honored that you will be placing my fic on your list.

I read a new one called 'Drawing Lines' about the scene in Port Angeles. Edward is too late to save Bella from the attackers. Only a ouple chapters so far, but really well done. Another is 'Open to Interpretation', listed under other, as it is a fic about Robert Pattinson falling for his older sexy interpreter on a trip to Italy. Oh, one more great one about Robert Pattinson is called'One Week'. It is very sexy and really fun to read!

Again, you absolutely made my day. I am going to go have some Tiramisu and celebrate with my husband!

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: I Can See For Miles and Miles

the suspence has become overwhelming   I never thought she would make it this far  and i will have to give you kudos on the Lemons from the beginig chapters they were some of the best I have read and belive me I read alot   the charlie chapter was  very imforming I like him   you can tell from this chapter he loves his daughter but its always been easy to tell that he has a hard time with the parent factor   I cant wait till the wedding    

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words about the tangy bits! THey are hard to write...especially from someone who has never done this before!
Thanks for reading!


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: With a Little Help From My Friends

this is one of  the stories I will read over and over  evry time you post a new update i love the raw animal like passion you put into these first few chapters there is something so sexy in him loosing control   i think you could call this a classic

Author's Response:

thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words and your very generous review of 5 stars!

A classic! Excellent!


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Help!

the issue with her period was never addressed in the book only in other fanfiction with is a wonderful story I was grateful you were willing to break new ground 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! When I initially had the idea for the tasting of the chapter, I hoped that it wouldn't gross anybody out, so I took a poll. Turns out that everybody who responded was okay with it, seeing that it was Edward and all. And SM never mentioned it.

Thanks for your reviews~ Keep 'em comin'!




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