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Penname: twilightgma1954 [ Contact]
Real name: cris
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Member Since: June 29, 2009
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Summary: 
Jacob stopped Bella from jumping off the cliff in New Moon and Edward never returned.
After 22 years, the Cullens move to Seattle for yet another fresh start and Edward winds up with yet another surprising lab partner... Bella's daughter.
She's so like her mother and yet so different. Is it possible to love both a memory and its reincarnate?
And does Bella's daughter have a few secrets of her own?
*Rated for language, sexuality and awesomeness.
SM owns Twilight but check me out if you're into sex and sarcasm.
Sloppy wet kisses to Kris (aka Mkystich) for the new banner!
Categories: AU Characters: Edward, Other Character
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: No
Word count: 86339
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2009 Updated: January 16, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Unchained Melody
that was utterly amazing i so wanted him to be with her one lqst time that was just to perfect and to be caught in the act wow i am speechless
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 25, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Humanity
this story has had me since chapter 1 I loved that you put him with her daughter but omg i never expected you to let them actually be together then to have mom show up I never though she would forgive him for leaving or being with her daughter wtf was she thinking what was he thinking some one has to loose could our poor bella live through loosing him again dear god update soon I can hardly stand it
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 24: Ten Things I Hate About You
dying here with suspence what happened to bella did she go home to jake edward needs to pick one and stay with it
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 25: Full Moon
damm i wish I had said that that was excelent emotional slap acrosed the face
Summary: Edward is a teenage boy who finds his life instantly changed when his family moves to Forks, WA. He is intensely drawn to the mysterious girl in his biology class whose mind he discovers he can read. It doesn’t take long for him to find the truth behind her dark and painful secret but it is already too late – his life is forever altered by his intense physical and emotional connection to the beautiful girl. Â
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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Word count: 120460
[Report This] Published: September 22, 2009 Updated: December 23, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 08, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
this is a real twist i often wondered what he would feel like if he was the one being tormented and hunted good twist to the plot Author's Response: I'm glad that you are enjoying my twist. I hope that you continue to read the story and find it interesting as well as intriguing. I do love to see Edward pine and suffer a little and to see Bella strut her confident stuff. Thank you for your thoughts!
Summary: 
It has been 20 years since Edward left Bella in the forest. After a birthday celebration, Bella finds herself lost in her memories of Edward. What would happen if he returned "after all these years?"
Categories: New Moon Characters: Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Word count: 34637
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2009 Updated: January 19, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 15, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
just a taste but i like it he always said she would be beautiful to him wonder what he will think of her now in all his 17 year old glory Author's Response: He of course is still glorious...and still so very Edward!
Summary: The heat wave lingers. Sweet, savory and slick. Jasper, Rose and I wade through the humid days, content in our relative isolation. We spend June through August at our family lake property, and this summer is like any other.
Until it's not.
An unexpected guest, new neighbors and a few stiff drinks collide to make the year we turn 19 sometimes better, often worse, but infinitely more interesting.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 84353
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2009 Updated: July 25, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: PBR and Pills
we all love summer and you have started out with a wonderful plot line easy to read racy enough to want to follow you from chapter to chapter Author's Response: Glad you like it! xoxo
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Annie Hall
well your have really out done it with this chapter I love it when they banter he can be such a dream even with his prick hat on lol
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 7: Stranger Danger
that was just painful to read god what a dick but she knew right em warned her from the get go but she jumped anyway she is strong and beautiful and she will rebound right i want to SLAP him and I HATE TAYNA
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Home
OH NO!!!! DONT GO THERE WITH THAT MIKE SHIT THATS LIKE EATING DOG POO WHEN SOMEONE OFFERS YOU STEAK NO NO NO
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 26, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Lotions and Potions and Lists
BRAVO I AM ACTUALLY PISSED THAT THERE IS NO NEXT TO CLICK TO THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SENDING MIKE AWAY FOR ME CANT WAIT Author's Response: I'm glad you're reading! Thank you for reviewing!! Update tomorrow...
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 16, 2010
Title: Chapter 20: Finding Purchase
The crazy old next door neighbor was the perfect touch to this wonderful story I hate to see it come to an end Author's Response: I'm with you on both! Love Mrs. M and will shed actual tears when I'm done with this. Sigh! Thank you so much for reading! xo
Summary: 
Two strangers, one kiss.
Since this would probably be the only time I’d ever get to kiss this gorgeous creature, I decided to make the most of it...
A chance meeting + a slightly devious plan = Happily ever after?
Not your average bedtime story, this is the tale of Bella and Edward.
**Thank you so much to the amazing Readergoof for making both of those gorgeous banners up there! Perfection! **
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Word count: 98200
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: June 17, 2012
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 21, 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
could you just not love him more ..leaving to save a hurt dog ...i bet she was not even mad ...i would be in tears
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
wedding cake for rpatz well that is just to funny ....and very creative .....we could sub title this as............. it started with a kiss....... heheh Author's Response: :) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 21, 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
now I want to see a recipe for the Brownie bits ,,,
Summary:
We all believe that Edward and Bella are meant to be together...but what if there’s more to that than meets the eye?
What if there are forces at work that they don’t understand? How will they cope with events that have no discernable meaning?
This story starts out two weeks before Bella and Edward’s wedding. But, right away, things go wrong. They struggle with mishap after mishap, all the while wondering if they’re destined to be at the center of conflict and angst.
All the major characters of Twilight appear. Canon couples. Lemons in various chapters. This is a more realistic view of Edward and Bella’s relationship before the wedding. He certainly wouldn’t carry her off to a desert island alone, having never even touched her. They would have experimented a bit.
Eventually all characters get their Happily Ever After. I just drag them through hell before we get there. No characters die before their time.
And I’ve adhered to canon up until the story starts—Post Eclipse. After that, it diverges from SM’s version. So...no Renesmee. No pregnancy.
I’ve poured my heart and soul into this story. It took me over a year to complete. I thought about it constantly. For that hard work and diligence to form, grammar and style, I’d like just one tiny thing from you, the reader.
I’d like a review. If you love it, if you hate it, if you’re just indifferent and will never look at it again, I’d like to hear that. It’s not a lot to ask. So...I’ll say thanks in advance for the wonderful reviews you’ll leave after you read each chapter!
Maria
twilight gypsy
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Embry, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jared, Jasper, Paul, Quil, Renee, Rosalie, Sam, Seth
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes
Word count: 178339
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2009 Updated: November 28, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Fantasy
WELL THATS PROBALLY BECAUSE YOU LEFT US ALL BREATHLESS I KNOW I AM TO MUCH IN A HURRY TO GET ON TO THE NEXT CHAPTER TO SEE IF SHE IS GOING TO HELP HIM OUT WITH HIS FANTASY AND OURS Author's Response: Well, I think that is a positive review! Breathless is what I was going for! Seriously, you are going to be breathless after the next chapter, don't ya know...
Thanks for continuing to read and for giving great reviews! Giving good reivews is KARMIC! good things come to those who leave good reviews!
Maria
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Misery
SHE SHOULD HAVE A WARNING LABLE ON HER ASS SHE KNOW HOW FAR GONE HE HAS BEEN WHY PUSH HIM OVER THE EDGE SHE CANT BLAME HIM SHE TOOK HIM TO THE EDGE AND THEN PUSHED Author's Response: That's a good one! This story is writing itself! I didn't know she was going to be bitten till it happened! I am just glad he didn't kill her!
Thanks for reading and for continuing to follow the story!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed 
Date: December 17, 2009
Title: Chapter 7: Brilliant Disguise
i think the best review i can give you is to let you know i have followed you from chapter one to here without fail i understand being witten for teens sm let the graphic detail of sexual contact to a minimum but being an adult reader i love the fan fiction versions cause the take inuendo and make it into graphic sex but i like a solid plot and good writting style with my sex lol i enjoy your tale telling its fresh and the being bent over the desk shit was just to hot i seach out a good soild story and stay with it till the end I ahve become great friends with some of the other writters some of the other stories i truley love are Breaking Trinity I don't exist my personal favorite the list I added you cause your words flow your charcters are true and and you update on a regular basis you dont realize how important that is to die hard fans as your time is consumed by wrtting I take my free and presious time to write and review i like your version of e/b you make them real to me you keep me interested and wanting more (esp bent over something) lol Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading from the start and continuing to follow the story. I think I have built a strong relationship between them and have foreshadowed the sex to come. But scary Edward returns, he is just too sexy and hot to become too safe. I appreciate your kind words about the characters. I know them personally. I feel like we should be trading emails. I have not read Breaking Trinity, but The Lists is one of my fav stories ever. Ch 8 is almost ready, maybe early next week. I get up super early on the weekends, like at 5am, and write until breakfast.
Thanks again
Maria
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Run For Your Life
i love holding my breath when i am reading love the fear and excitment you put into your plot i love dark edward no one likes to let him out our bella has needed a reality check for along time hes is a other world being but he needs release from all the tension she has put him through like your comparison to his being an addict like seeing the other side of the coin
just maybe this taste he got will encourage him over the honneymoon cant wait for more not brave enough to write love to read my personal favorites
the list
breaking trinity
i dont exist
of squallor and ashes
i paln my week around their update
but you will have to be added the list Author's Response: I am touched and a little awe-inspired at your generous and wonderful review. Thank you so much! Did you hold your breath? Excellent! I loved SM's Edward, but he was too perfect. He never showed us his dark side, and it can be so sexy, right? Do you want to read the menstrual blood chapter? What shall I call it?
I have only read 'The List' from your list, but I will check them all out. And I am truly truly honored that you will be placing my fic on your list.
I read a new one called 'Drawing Lines' about the scene in Port Angeles. Edward is too late to save Bella from the attackers. Only a ouple chapters so far, but really well done. Another is 'Open to Interpretation', listed under other, as it is a fic about Robert Pattinson falling for his older sexy interpreter on a trip to Italy. Oh, one more great one about Robert Pattinson is called'One Week'. It is very sexy and really fun to read!
Again, you absolutely made my day. I am going to go have some Tiramisu and celebrate with my husband!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: I Can See For Miles and Miles
the suspence has become overwhelming I never thought she would make it this far and i will have to give you kudos on the Lemons from the beginig chapters they were some of the best I have read and belive me I read alot the charlie chapter was very imforming I like him you can tell from this chapter he loves his daughter but its always been easy to tell that he has a hard time with the parent factor I cant wait till the wedding Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words about the tangy bits! THey are hard to write...especially from someone who has never done this before!
Thanks for reading!
Maria
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: With a Little Help From My Friends
this is one of the stories I will read over and over evry time you post a new update i love the raw animal like passion you put into these first few chapters there is something so sexy in him loosing control i think you could call this a classic Author's Response: thank you so much. I appreciate your kind words and your very generous review of 5 stars!
A classic! Excellent!
maria
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 4: Help!
the issue with her period was never addressed in the book only in other fanfiction with is a wonderful story I was grateful you were willing to break new ground Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! When I initially had the idea for the tasting of the chapter, I hoped that it wouldn't gross anybody out, so I took a poll. Turns out that everybody who responded was okay with it, seeing that it was Edward and all. And SM never mentioned it.
Thanks for your reviews~ Keep 'em comin'!
Maria
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: When You're Alone
i think shes the asshole kinda like poking a snake with a stick stupid do it long enough and your gonna get bit doesnt mean he loves her any less that that he has limits i bet carlile would have snapped given the situation Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! yeah, Bella is not so smart sometimes when it comes to pushing Edward!
Maria
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Inevitable
i always had a theory about what might happen with her he she ever got another bite the human body can only take so much but i am really anxious to see how you write this chapter just remember you have fan out here anxious for an update dying actually Author's Response: thank you so much for continuing t read and review! Ch 14 is about three fouths done. What do you think is going on with her leg?
Maria
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 07, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Wicked Game
i have beem a fan since your first chapter and love when i see an update to my phone this story is so very different for others and it gets beeter each up date and your right you kicked ass on this chapter you have had me as a captive since he bent her over the desk your my hero i love this story Author's Response: Thank you so much for your great reviews! I really appreciate it! What were your fav lines?
Maria
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