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Penname: twilightgma1954 [Contact]
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Member Since: June 29, 2009
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Last Night In Forks by Rushed Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 442]
Summary:

On the last night of her annual trip to Forks to see her father, Bella finds herself a gorgeous distraction from ex boyfriend James.  Thinking she’ll never see the gorgeous Edward again she goes further than she ever thought she would with a complete stranger.   Will this be the last time they ever see each other or does fate have other ideas?

Thanks to the fabulous Mkystich for my lovely banner!!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: No Word count: 94747
[Report This] Published: July 26, 2009 Updated: May 31, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: It Is What It Is

oh god yes I love it when you have two views on the same chapter and when one wins out ..please send it to me  i would love to read the other point of view

 
Summary:

As Edward and Bella celebrate their 100th anniversary, Bella looks back over everything that she, the Cullens, the wolves, and the vampire world have been through.  A Finalist in the TwiCon Fan Fiction Contest.


Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn, TWICON 2009 FINALISTS Characters: Alice, Aro, Bella, Caius, Carlisle, Edward, Eleazar, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Maggie, Marcus, Renesmee, Rosalie, Zafrina
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3005
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2009 Updated: August 16, 2009


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Our Forever

I read every thing you write but I some how skipped over this .....100 years with the most prefect man in the world   doesn't get any better than that

 
Summary:

***Nominated for the Indie TwiFic Award for "AH Story that Knocks You Off Your Feet (WIP)"***

I know what Bella wants.  And, even though I know it means nothing to her... God help me, I want to give it to her. I thirst for her body almost as much as I thirst for her heart. It is undeniable; I want all of her. But I will hold onto this small piece of her if this is all she is willing to give.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 63662
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: July 14, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: A Kiss is Not Just a Kiss...

I think almost every one has a memory from growing up that dramaticly breaks your heart you have done a beautiful job of putting it to words through this story with our favorite charcters it a bonus    sentement  is great but I also cant wait for the smut to continue   bring on the next chapter

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 29, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: A Kiss is Not Just a Kiss...

wonderful story keep at it

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Seducing Edward Cullen

i started reading this a while ago  and i loved the first few chapters but rl stepsin and i got lost so when i got to your new chapters i was having a hard time following your plot line so i decided it was time to start back at chapter 1 and i am so glad i did you really have the touch   its been a wonderful way to spend a rainy sunday     you go girl    

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 21, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: The Black Widow Strikes Again

well your smut is amazing so i will just wait right her

 
Summary:

 

They come unbidden. Dreams of desire. Dreams turned to nightmares from which she cannot escape. They will change her life in ways she never could imagine. Will she be able to merge madness with reality? AU, The usual suspects.

 

 

~~~Disclaimer~~~

Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and any text reference associated with theTwilight plotline. 

 


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 60537
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2009


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

I was actualy checking on an update for your other story of squallor and ashes which i am obsessed with and founf you hav edone anothe ff so here I am  not quite sure where your going with this yet but thought Id travle  along with you until  i could figure  it out    did I mention I d   love and upadte on osaa     it kinda ooc for him to tormet her but maybe thats your point??????   but I am hanging in here



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with the story!

~R

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue

i would not of fit onto a good movie but it had a lovely ending



Author's Response:

Yep this was my very first fic. I wrote it for my daughter. I tend to write a bit out there and with SA I wanted to write a more down to earth realistic tale.  Glad you enjoyed the story in all it's tweakiness.... and an update on the other story is in the works.

~R

 
Summary:

 

The summer before her junior year in college, Bella moves to be closer to her father. All the while adding some much needed space from her crazed frat-boy ex-boyfriend. Being there for her father comes with the fresh start she needs. (One without men to complicate it) Until, one evening after her shift the most gorgeous man she has ever laid eyes on...comes to her aid. He causes Bella to almost forget the vow she's taken against the opposite sex. Almost. That is until the realization that he's a frat boy and she's never going there again. No matter how those intense green eyes make her feel.

What will happen when Bella transfers to the University of Washington and meets a handsome coed, Edward? Will she find peace from her past or be stuck playing the part?

 

(thanks to ekimmuh for her help with the summary)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 177757
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Chances & Choices

dark mysterious  dont like the stalker much but to put the powerfully wham into the plot guess it unavoidable   like that you have made you charcters smart funny with real flaws   everyone needs flaws   dont like to much pain  and suffering stalking ok but we have our mighty emmit to help edward  save the day just thinking out loud



Author's Response:

Thanks...And I promise it won't be too bad with the ?POV. I'm glad you are sticking with me and that makes my week!!! Team E&E will def keep our girl safe...:)Thanks again for the review it rocks!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Sex Therapy

this is and has always been a lovely story               love the board game romp  love her unknown poet thing   love it when u update all the time

 
Summary:

Bella Swan has moved home to Forks. It's only a matter of time until she crosses paths with Edward Cullen, her former best friend and first love. They parted on bad terms years ago, and both thought that they had moved on... All-human, LEMONS.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No Word count: 132849
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: A Fair Warning

love hate they are both on the same emotonal playing field  things are so end of the world when your a teenager but i am truly interested now  what  kind of sex relationship could there be between 14 year old that would cause this kind of hate/love  

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: A Family Breakfast

It was a pleasure to go over to vote for you and  this story the tremendous effort put into these beautiful works of art time care of writtting and editing and rewrittting only to give the readers another look or a different prespsctive of our beloved charcters a real life given to fictional charcters which in turn gives them back to us as real    you truly have  a shot at winning cause this  story has more than once made my heart ache    hope to see you in the update page soon cant wait to see if the baby is really his or if she really is with child like she claims hope carlile  steps up his exam and  make some sence of this mess  finally

 
The Best Man by Whitney Love Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 392]
Summary:

Womanizer Edward meets Maneater Bella let the sheets fall where they may. It's not the average every day lover story between Edward and Bella. He's not into the one woman kind of deal and she's not into the one man kind of deal. The meet at a wedding, Edward is the Best Man and Bella is the Maid of Honor. Anything goes with these two so hold on tight and enjoy the ride.

Out of Character, All Human, Cannon Pairings.

Potty mouth and lots of lemony goodness included.

First chapter is kind of risky but I gotta show you just how naughty my Edward is. Give it a chance you won't regret it!

This banner is by Readergoof. I have another one that was up before but I'm switching to just this one for now.

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: Always Human
Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 41376
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

these are my favorite stories ah your plot line has us all licking our lips in s

antisapation   nice twist with their fianicial statis  i look the car up   seems like lemonade could be made in the car in later chapters   like your making such a bad girl 



Author's Response:

Glad you like the twist and the plot. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2

WELL YOU REALL HAVE OUTDONE YOUR SELF FOR THIS CHAPTER  THIS IS A WONDERFUL COME BACK   DONT STAY AWAY SO LONG NEXT TIME



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I promise to try not to say away so long anymore. RL kicks my butt sometimes but I love writing this and hearing that everyone likes it. Thanks so much for the support and noticing that I was gone ;) XXX Whit

 
Married at 18 by AimeeBass Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 364]
Summary:

Bella wakes up married to Edward Cullen, who she’s only just met. The problem? She’s still a senior at FHS. The other problem? The judge orders them to stay married for a year as punishment for abusing the sanctity of marriage.

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(The beautiful new banner was made by hoping4more!)


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 13829
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: March 10, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 6: Breakdown Bella Style part: one

alls forgiven just come back this time

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:2

its really nice when you become involved in a story to get regular updates but when i find something i like  i stay true to the story and mark it under favorites and check in often   i glad i marked this story and i have enjoyed each word  will stcay with you till the end

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I ve had this bookmarked for a while tried to read it before but just wasn't in to it  but marked it for another try   and its cute your first chapte was well thought out and easy to follow  left a map of what was to follow and gave your readers a funny twist on our charcters     I am glad I came back to it 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: There's Something About Edward

thanks for putting you music selections in the front of the chapter  like to listen as i read   story is put together well really enjoyed it so far

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:1

just keep in mind that you do have faithfull readers andkeep you update at a steady pace   

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:2

its been like forever patiently waiting for you to update

 
Wonderwall by tuleangel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 297]
Summary:

This takes place after Edward leaves in New Moon.  Jacob and Bella get married and then after 5 years together, Jacob imprints and leaves Bella heartbroken. While at her dad's house Bella finds the items Edward left under her floorboards that Bella thought were gone forever.  All of this drives her to take charge and go after Edward.  But after 5 years, what will happen when she finds him?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 25624
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not

its really hard to condence the details  and put all the information  you want  us to know in a summary to make it breif to the point but still leaving it with all th details before moving on with the plot for the story   you have done this very wll i have all details of the psat  and understad everthing with out having to read 10 chapter of past   its well written and i am ready to read on all  very well informed    like the inprinting  glad for him e.b need to be together minus the guilt over jake   I like it so far

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Five Carlisles and a Wedding

enjoying this    keep up the good work    

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Five Carlisles and a Wedding

enjoying this    keep up the good work    

 
Summary:

When Bella moved to Forks, she thought her biggest problems would be finding a job, buying a car, and surviving highschool.  Until one day, she begins working for the dashing Dr. Cullen and spots a lonely boy in a photograph who inexplicably calls to her cautious heart and leads her into a world of myth she can scarcely comprehend. 

For the past century, Edward has lived a sort of half-life.  Gifted with immense power, but forever alone, he has come to loathe his very existence.  A vision of a beautiful girl holds promise of a better future, but how could he ever claim to truly love her if he is willing to corrupt her soul?

She's afraid of rejection.  He's afraid to commit.  Will it take a tragic accident to prove that love can both create and heal the deepest wounds?

This is a re-telling of Twilight centered around the assumption that Alice DID predict the fateful meeting in Biology.  I have tried hard to maintain the integrity of the central characters, so we do have insecure Bella and angsty Edward, but the plot will take us to very different places. 

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All canon pairings.  Some characters slightly OOC.  Told from alternating Bella/Edward POV's in each chapter.  Rating is for language, violence, and mature themes in later chapters.


Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 35596
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Wheels

love all the new twist and turns you are making



Author's Response:

Thanks!  It's a fun excerise in creative writing.  I absolutely adore Twilight as it is, so I'm not trying to exert my agenda, just having fun re-imagining things:)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ Game Show Contestants

love the path your charcters are on   love e&B  STORIES  



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  E and B are my favorite too. :)

 




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