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Penname: twilightgma1954 [ Contact]
Real name: cris
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Member Since: June 29, 2009
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Summary: ***Nominated for the Indie TwiFic Award for "AH Story that Knocks You Off Your Feet (WIP)"***
I know what Bella wants. And, even though I know it means nothing to her... God help me, I want to give it to her. I thirst for her body almost as much as I thirst for her heart. It is undeniable; I want all of her. But I will hold onto this small piece of her if this is all she is willing to give.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Word count: 63662
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: July 14, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 21, 2010
Title: Chapter 14: The Black Widow Strikes Again
well your smut is amazing so i will just wait right her
Summary:
They come unbidden. Dreams of desire. Dreams turned to nightmares from which she cannot escape. They will change her life in ways she never could imagine. Will she be able to merge madness with reality? AU, The usual suspects.
~~~Disclaimer~~~
Stephenie Meyer owns any Twilight characters and any text reference associated with theTwilight plotline.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 60537
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2009 Updated: November 25, 2009
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
I was actualy checking on an update for your other story of squallor and ashes which i am obsessed with and founf you hav edone anothe ff so here I am not quite sure where your going with this yet but thought Id travle along with you until i could figure it out did I mention I d love and upadte on osaa it kinda ooc for him to tormet her but maybe thats your point?????? but I am hanging in here Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with the story!
~R
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 13, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Epilogue
i would not of fit onto a good movie but it had a lovely ending Author's Response: Yep this was my very first fic. I wrote it for my daughter. I tend to write a bit out there and with SA I wanted to write a more down to earth realistic tale. Glad you enjoyed the story in all it's tweakiness.... and an update on the other story is in the works.
~R
Summary:  
The summer before her junior year in college, Bella moves to be closer to her father. All the while adding some much needed space from her crazed frat-boy ex-boyfriend. Being there for her father comes with the fresh start she needs. (One without men to complicate it) Until, one evening after her shift the most gorgeous man she has ever laid eyes on...comes to her aid. He causes Bella to almost forget the vow she's taken against the opposite sex. Almost. That is until the realization that he's a frat boy and she's never going there again. No matter how those intense green eyes make her feel.
What will happen when Bella transfers to the University of Washington and meets a handsome coed, Edward? Will she find peace from her past or be stuck playing the part?
(thanks to ekimmuh for her help with the summary)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes
Word count: 177757
[Report This] Published: August 03, 2009 Updated: September 03, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 19, 2009
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Chances & Choices
dark mysterious dont like the stalker much but to put the powerfully wham into the plot guess it unavoidable like that you have made you charcters smart funny with real flaws everyone needs flaws dont like to much pain and suffering stalking ok but we have our mighty emmit to help edward save the day just thinking out loud Author's Response: Thanks...And I promise it won't be too bad with the ?POV. I'm glad you are sticking with me and that makes my week!!! Team E&E will def keep our girl safe...:)Thanks again for the review it rocks!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 Sex Therapy
this is and has always been a lovely story love the board game romp love her unknown poet thing love it when u update all the time
Summary: Bella Swan has moved home to Forks. It's only a matter of time until she crosses paths with Edward Cullen, her former best friend and first love. They parted on bad terms years ago, and both thought that they had moved on... All-human, LEMONS.
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 36 Completed: No
Word count: 132849
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: April 11, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed 
Date: December 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: A Fair Warning
love hate they are both on the same emotonal playing field things are so end of the world when your a teenager but i am truly interested now what kind of sex relationship could there be between 14 year old that would cause this kind of hate/love
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 20: A Family Breakfast
It was a pleasure to go over to vote for you and this story the tremendous effort put into these beautiful works of art time care of writtting and editing and rewrittting only to give the readers another look or a different prespsctive of our beloved charcters a real life given to fictional charcters which in turn gives them back to us as real you truly have a shot at winning cause this story has more than once made my heart ache hope to see you in the update page soon cant wait to see if the baby is really his or if she really is with child like she claims hope carlile steps up his exam and make some sence of this mess finally
Summary: Womanizer Edward meets Maneater Bella let the sheets fall where they may. It's not the average every day lover story between Edward and Bella. He's not into the one woman kind of deal and she's not into the one man kind of deal. The meet at a wedding, Edward is the Best Man and Bella is the Maid of Honor. Anything goes with these two so hold on tight and enjoy the ride.
Out of Character, All Human, Cannon Pairings.
Potty mouth and lots of lemony goodness included.
First chapter is kind of risky but I gotta show you just how naughty my Edward is. Give it a chance you won't regret it!
This banner is by Readergoof. I have another one that was up before but I'm switching to just this one for now.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Word count: 41376
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2009 Updated: February 27, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 28, 2009
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
these are my favorite stories ah your plot line has us all licking our lips in s
antisapation nice twist with their fianicial statis i look the car up seems like lemonade could be made in the car in later chapters like your making such a bad girl Author's Response: Glad you like the twist and the plot. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Heaven Part 2
WELL YOU REALL HAVE OUTDONE YOUR SELF FOR THIS CHAPTER THIS IS A WONDERFUL COME BACK DONT STAY AWAY SO LONG NEXT TIME Author's Response: Thank you so much. I promise to try not to say away so long anymore. RL kicks my butt sometimes but I love writing this and hearing that everyone likes it. Thanks so much for the support and noticing that I was gone ;) XXX Whit
Summary: 
Bella wakes up married to Edward Cullen, who she’s only just met. The problem? She’s still a senior at FHS. The other problem? The judge orders them to stay married for a year as punishment for abusing the sanctity of marriage.
(The beautiful new banner was made by hoping4more!)
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jane, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 13829
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: March 10, 2013
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 10, 2013
Title: Chapter 6: Breakdown Bella Style part: one
alls forgiven just come back this time
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:2
its really nice when you become involved in a story to get regular updates but when i find something i like i stay true to the story and mark it under favorites and check in often i glad i marked this story and i have enjoyed each word will stcay with you till the end
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Prologue
I ve had this bookmarked for a while tried to read it before but just wasn't in to it but marked it for another try and its cute your first chapte was well thought out and easy to follow left a map of what was to follow and gave your readers a funny twist on our charcters I am glad I came back to it
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: There's Something About Edward
thanks for putting you music selections in the front of the chapter like to listen as i read story is put together well really enjoyed it so far
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 26, 2009
Title: Chapter 4: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:1
just keep in mind that you do have faithfull readers andkeep you update at a steady pace
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Not in Kansas Anymore Part:2
its been like forever patiently waiting for you to update
Summary: 
This takes place after Edward leaves in New Moon. Jacob and Bella get married and then after 5 years together, Jacob imprints and leaves Bella heartbroken. While at her dad's house Bella finds the items Edward left under her floorboards that Bella thought were gone forever. All of this drives her to take charge and go after Edward. But after 5 years, what will happen when she finds him?
Categories: New Moon Characters: Alice, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emily, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie, Sam
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Word count: 25624
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2009 Updated: November 23, 2009
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not
its really hard to condence the details and put all the information you want us to know in a summary to make it breif to the point but still leaving it with all th details before moving on with the plot for the story you have done this very wll i have all details of the psat and understad everthing with out having to read 10 chapter of past its well written and i am ready to read on all very well informed like the inprinting glad for him e.b need to be together minus the guilt over jake I like it so far
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Five Carlisles and a Wedding
enjoying this keep up the good work
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 06, 2009
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Five Carlisles and a Wedding
enjoying this keep up the good work
Summary: When Bella moved to Forks, she thought her biggest problems would be finding a job, buying a car, and surviving highschool. Until one day, she begins working for the dashing Dr. Cullen and spots a lonely boy in a photograph who inexplicably calls to her cautious heart and leads her into a world of myth she can scarcely comprehend.
For the past century, Edward has lived a sort of half-life. Gifted with immense power, but forever alone, he has come to loathe his very existence. A vision of a beautiful girl holds promise of a better future, but how could he ever claim to truly love her if he is willing to corrupt her soul?
She's afraid of rejection. He's afraid to commit. Will it take a tragic accident to prove that love can both create and heal the deepest wounds?
This is a re-telling of Twilight centered around the assumption that Alice DID predict the fateful meeting in Biology. I have tried hard to maintain the integrity of the central characters, so we do have insecure Bella and angsty Edward, but the plot will take us to very different places.
All canon pairings. Some characters slightly OOC. Told from alternating Bella/Edward POV's in each chapter. Rating is for language, violence, and mature themes in later chapters.
Categories: Pre-Twilight, Twilight Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Eric, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Phil, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Word count: 35596
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2009 Updated: February 10, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ~ Wheels
love all the new twist and turns you are making Author's Response: Thanks! It's a fun excerise in creative writing. I absolutely adore Twilight as it is, so I'm not trying to exert my agenda, just having fun re-imagining things:)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 ~ Game Show Contestants
love the path your charcters are on love e&B STORIES Author's Response: Thank you very much! E and B are my favorite too. :)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 22, 2009
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 ~ Anxiety Wears a Blue Sweater
WONDERFUL STORY CANT WAIT FOR MORE ALICE IS GREAT MORE PLEASE Author's Response: Thanks! :)
Summary: Who ever loved, that loved not at first sight. Edward and Bella’s families knew they would be perfect for each other. But will the two of them see it?
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Word count: 45492
[Report This] Published: August 10, 2009 Updated: January 06, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 05, 2009
Title: Chapter 1: Falling Slowly
bullseye
Summary:
When Bella and Edward meet the first day of High School, he is a chubby misfit with no friends in a new town, aside from his popular cousins. He meets Bella Swan, a well-liked, if uncoordinated, local with problems of her own. This is the story of their friendship, their loss, their love and destruction. Can they find their way back to each other? And can they survive the changes they have both gone through since the fateful day they met?
HUGE THANKS TO ATHENALOVE and READERGOOF FOR THE AMAZING BANNERS!
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Edward Masen, Sr., Elizabeth Masen, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: Always Human
Chapters: 41 Completed: No
Word count: 164271
[Report This] Published: August 12, 2009 Updated: December 03, 2012
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 38: My love
after them being in so much pain for so long that was like the a breath of fresh spring air her inocence made it all the more perfect i though of hindreds of ways for her to show him her need but seems to me she has let her need take over without much help from anybody a few more hot chapters like this would be ok with me
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 36: It Won't Seem Like Christmas Without You
Oh my yes there is a god, finally something good for them i was begining to loose hope that they would ever be in the same room together again .....fun......you...mean like sexy fun.... you mean like she quit her job and has come to be in his life for good fun........and naked in front of a roaring fire fun ......like christmas prests and singalon fun.......or breakfast in bed fun without the food fun.... I cant decide..........what do I want to see happen first......I dont care just just put a blanket on the pony and let them ride off together at least for a few chapters contain your evil cliffys for a a few chapter ......
you guys aere amazing
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 29, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: 2001-Grand Gesture
perfect hs angst remember it wiell Author's Response: Shudders and curls into fetal position....me too......
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