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Penname: twilightgma1954 [ Contact]
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Summary: 
School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan. They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats. There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 175 Completed: Yes
Word count: 252603
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2012 Updated: October 06, 2012
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 11, 2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10: Edward
OH!!!!! SKYPE ....THAT WILL BE SO EXCITING TO READ ....I HOPE SHE TELLS THE GIRLS AND THEY BABIE HER UP FOR HIM SEEING HER WILL BE THE ICING ON THE CAKE FOR HIM I THINK I KNOW IF I SAW HIM AND HIS BEAUTIFUL GREEN EYES I WOULD BE IN LOVE AT FIRST SITE /////OR BOY IS A HOTTIE Author's Response: Hehe She will, and they will. ;) Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 13, 2012
Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 84: Edward
or we can all just sit her just like this and wait for the word next to appear ....and your going to post how early ..sex with my breakfast ...I will strap my self to the bar stool and just sit here and wait .....and wait ...and wait .....
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 172: Edward
SARGENT PEPPER ....CUTE .....PLEASE NOT YET ,,,DONT ...END THIS i WILL HAVE NOTHING TO LOOOK FORWARD TO EVERY MORNING ......BUT HE DID NOTICE AHHH
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 171: Bella
I REALLY THOUGHT HE WAS GOING BACK IN FOR THE PUPPY ...BUT HE MUST NOT OF NOTICED HER BEING SO EXCITED ABOUT THE KITTEN
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 60: Edward
ph god i don't know whem I have been more excited ...for him getting home safe and her ...well she about to meet her forever
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 25, 2012
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 40: Edward
I also live in an island I know the fear ...so you better not wash away i will be devastated ....I am so hooked on this story
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 18, 2012
Title: Chapter 97: Chapter 98: Edward
I love it no matter what the story line for the day is.... I look forward to both new chapters each day I think this is wonderful
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 24, 2012
Title: Chapter 115: Chapter 116: Edward
oh my ...he gave her a ring ...a solid circle of gold to promise her when he gets out he will be able to offer her forever ......after coming home metting the parent....and asking her dad .....our boy is a stickler for tradition ....
and a kitten omg he is so romantic some times I could just cry ...and her cooking for days so he won't have to eat take-out or cooking for days so she doesnt have to think about leaving him ....will tommorow be a tissue alert day my heart is breaking for both of them but they both are being responsible the both have jobs to go back to and she has to go home and make her home ready for him to come back to ....there that in its self should keep her super busy....finding a place for his baby grand ....sexing up her bedroom and the photos ....the white dress is perfect to send to his lawyer as an engagement photo ...oh hell yea ...lets send one to the super bitch and say.....bet ya wish this was you .....mean huh ....
thanks so much for the 2 double postings I was having a bad day and although it made me cry I loved every word of this beautiful story
tommorow will have me crying right along with the girls as they say goodbye to their men ...is it tommorow yet
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 11, 2012
Title: Chapter 153: Chapter 154: Edward
knowing this beautiful story will be waiting for me when i wake up is worth an early wake up ...I can hardly wait for new chapters to come each and every day
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 23, 2012
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 36: Edward
find this each morning is soon becoming one of the highlights of my day .....you two writing together is perfection
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 04, 2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapters 1 & 2: Bella & Edward
ahh...that makes me want to go out and send some care packages myself ..we do it for christmas through work now I feel like its just not enough Author's Response: That's awesome. :) Thanks!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 23, 2012
Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 35: Bella
the photo of him and his towel......Priceless
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 14, 2012
Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 88: Edward
THAT WAS AN ABSOLUTLY PERFECT FIRST KISS .....AND DON'T WORRY SHAM WOWS AT THE READY
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 104: Edward
these 2 weeks are flying by and its going to be so sad when they have to part ..i hope afert thinking about all the trouble moving to washington is going to be i hope he dont get cold feet it would kill her to looose him now
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 06, 2012
Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 176: Outtake 2
i would be happy if this cont thru till they became grandparents.....
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 14, 2012
Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 160: Edward
my favorite jake is when he is a dog I mean of the 4 legged varity....or maybe gay jake ....lol
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 12, 2012
Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 82: Edward
I am holding on as good as I can but 8 days will kill me ...its hard waiting but you have taking sexting to a whole new level ...hot hot hot ......
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 15, 2012
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 18: Edward
oh I think i am more excited about this then the both of them Author's Response: LOL I dunno...They're pretty excited. ;) Thanks!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 17, 2012
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 24: Edward
i love that you always do 2 chapters ....each chapter just makes me love the story more ...its hard holding your beath waiting for word from the mans who owns your heart ,,and with jasper and em both with him casuality could mean devastation for all 6 of them
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 19, 2012
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 28: Edward
oh dear god noW I won't be able to sleep ...what a leave called tdy yea he has been a good boy lets get him one of those and fast
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 21, 2012
Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 32: Edward
a fsvorite of my husbands was mint julip surprise a cc cookie minus the cc chips place a mint mint in side and bake garnish with half a walnut it travles well and the choc stays whole in side the cookie hope he likes mint
the next surprise that was a favorite was after a fresh wax bath and lotion his favorite was jasmine send hin the panties wrapped in tin foil in side the cookie box my husband said he opened it on the cot and tried to hid it from his men and they thought it was special cookies he said they tried to attack him and take his special cookie he was hiding from them ..it all seems funny now ...but he said he was willing to end the conflict all by his self to get home to what was inside the panties i sent ...lol
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 05, 2012
Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 64: Edward
you go Edward......tear her ass a new one for even thinking that .....shame on her for doubting him
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 09, 2012
Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 72: Edward
I would really love to have some of the shit he says right in my next birthday card ...cause he really doesn't hold back I sure hope 6/20 comes quick
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 10, 2012
Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 76: Edward
this story is what I read over breakfast every morning ..but today after reading her email and listinenigng to both of thoes songs I had a lump stuck in my throat for a while i can only imagine the emotion he felt waking up to her most heartfelt words and the beauty of music I hope this moves fast , cause i am dying inside to read the first time he sees her my whole book club is reading this with me some suggested dress her up and let her go to the door to deliver the cake see if he knows its her ....I want something just a little more romantic and sexy but its all been perfect i cant wait
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 31, 2012
Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward
it would be more but I can never stop myself between chapter to review and forget about it when its a 4 chapter day I zoom through....she will just die when she sees him on her birthday ....i am so excited for him to see how she fit him into her home and her life but I think if he made it to the house and saw everthing ....there would be not getting him to leave and he is so close to getting out...... i am so excited
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