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Penname: twilightgma1954 [Contact]
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Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2016]
Summary:

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan. They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats. There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 175 Completed: Yes Word count: 252604
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2012 Updated: October 06, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 64: Edward

you  go Edward......tear her ass a new one for even thinking that .....shame on her for doubting him

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 72: Edward

I would really love to have some of the shit he says right in my next birthday card ...cause he really doesn't hold back I sure hope 6/20 comes quick

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 76: Edward

this story is what I read over breakfast every morning ..but today after reading her email and listinenigng to both of thoes songs I had a lump stuck in my throat for a while i can only imagine the emotion he felt waking up to her most heartfelt words and the beauty of music I hope this moves fast , cause i am dying inside to read the first time he sees her my whole book club is reading this with me some suggested dress her up and let her go to the door to deliver the cake see if he knows its her ....I want something just a little more romantic and sexy but its all been perfect i cant wait

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

it would be more but I can never stop myself between chapter  to  review and forget about it when its a 4 chapter day I zoom through....she will just die when she sees him on her birthday ....i am so excited for him to see how she fit him into her home and her life but I think if he made it to the house and saw  everthing ....there  would be not getting him to leave and he is so close to getting out...... i am so excited

 
Summary:

Bella is an executive on her way home from an overseas business trip. Edward is a popular actor on his way to meet a director about his next movie. When the two of them are literally thrown together, their lives change forever, and they realize that what they had before is not what’s in store for the future. Love, loss and lotsa lemons! 

 

 


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 62 Completed: Yes Word count: 244759
[Report This] Published: July 18, 2012 Updated: November 02, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 24, 2013 Title: Chapter 44: : Chapter 44: The Appointment

well come tell us is daddy cut or not ...he is just too cute

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 18, 2013 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40: Christmas in London Part II

OH  OH PICK ME...I GOT TO PICK THE NAME OF MY LATEST GRAND CHILD ...I LOVED THE NAME TRISTAN SO WE GOT A TRISTAN EDWARD ...AND  WE ALSO GOT A SURPRISE BABY SISTER BEHIND OUR BIG BOY ...SO SHE GOT TRINITY ELISE AND OUR EDWARD CAN HAVE HIS COWBOY NAME... TRISTAN WAS BRAD PITTS CHARACTRS NAME IN LEGANDS OF THE FALL ...LOVE THAT MOVIES ..THIS STORY BECOMES MORE WONDERFUL EACH CHAPTER

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Airport

i love your stories and this already has me excited to read more ....what there wont be any more teachers pet ??????

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43: The List

waiting to have it confirmed by the doctor and making sure everything is good ....thats why everybody waits ...just for that doctor to say its all good ...they would both be devastated if it was a false alarm .....this is a lovely story and I am enjoying every word

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 09, 2013 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: Christmas in London

oh please please lets have a baby naming contest I have so many wonderful ideas

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 05, 2013 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34 The Visit

soon we want them soon

 
Summary: Feature

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San Francisco lawyer, Bella Swan, struggles to cope with the loss of her long-term boyfriend, Riley. Lonely and grief-stricken, she loses herself in a string of one-night stands, convinced she'll never find love again. Museum curator, Edward Cullen, may be the man to change Bella's mind. Could he be her second chance for love?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes Word count: 206225
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2012 Updated: October 17, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter Thirty-Four: Uncertainty

oh my god ...he met a man ....omg   tell me

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 28, 2013 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter Thirty-Six: Distortion

well finally ...she sees the light

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter Twenty-Three: Learning

he is giving her space ...she has to quit bolting all the time ....I admire  him....he is so wonderful ...dont hurt him ..or i will help Heah kick your ass ...lol

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 27, 2013 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty-Two: Growth

this story is amazing ...my heart is breaking for both of them ...i want her to go to DC and find out her Dream  Reily is living with someone and let it break her from the hold he has on her heart so she can just move on

 
Summary:

"Last night, I got my best friend drunk, and we had sex. Last night changed everything. Those stupid feelings I had for him have now grown tenfold."

Bella Swan, eighteen, makes a stupid decision to seduce her best friend. How will Edward feel when he realizes that he's been violated by the person he loves the most? 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3107
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2012 Updated: August 29, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well there... the light finally went on over his head ...wonder if that will bring last night into focus for him ...nad i wonder if he will smile or scream ....

 
It Will Rain by jakeward Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 178]
Summary:

 

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"The saddest kind of sad is when your tears can't even drop and you feel nothing. It's like the world has just ended. You don't cry. You don't hear. You don't see. You stay. For a second, the heart dies."

by unknown

 

R/K five-shot


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 23063
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2012 Updated: March 29, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three

dear god dont stop there I beg you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

this was written by a true fan who feels the intense pain and sadness that her  so called momentary laps in  judgement has caused us all ...what a wonderrful outlet ...when i saw him on the talk curcit so raw and in so much pain I wanted to cry i saw  the phots and hoped  that it was a stunt but watching their faces as they push on and through I know true sadnessess

 
Summary:

 

Home for Thanksgiving, Bella wakes up in her childhood room . . . but, much to her surprise, she's not alone. The man she's unknowingly shared a bed with just so happens to be the source of her fantasies for years . . . and her dad's closest friend. Can her fantasies finally become a reality?

 

 

 

Romance/Drama/Humor

 

 

 

WARNING: This story will contain drama. This could be, but may not pertain to, the drama surrounding a couple entering a relationship with a twenty-two year age gap. Please consider this before continuing. 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 99627
[Report This] Published: February 04, 2013 Updated: February 18, 2014


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. Through the Grapevine

how cool would it be to have her for  a mom ...my mom would have come in guns a blazin

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 10, 2013 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17. Through the Grapevine

how cool would it be to have her for  a mom ...my mom would have come in guns a blazin

 
Summary:

 

For ten years, Edward Cullen has had a secret desire. Isabella Swan is in the business of making fantasies come true. Together, they'll discover more than they ever expected. 1st place winner for Public Vote and Judge's Choice in the LDA anonymous contest.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 25218
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2013 Updated: May 29, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ah the link wont work ...that is so sad



Author's Response:

Sorry it's taken so long to reply to your review.  Also sorry the link wouldn't work for you, it did for most people.  It was of a bride and groom, taken from the back, and she's reaching over to grab his ass.  We thought it was just perfect for this E&B.  

-Karenec & Discordia

 




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