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Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2048]
Summary:

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan. They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats. There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 176 Completed: Yes Word count: 253104
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2012 Updated: August 16, 2014


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 87: Chapter 88: Edward

THAT WAS AN ABSOLUTLY PERFECT FIRST KISS .....AND DON'T WORRY    SHAM WOWS AT THE READY

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 103: Chapter 104: Edward

these 2 weeks are flying by and its going to be so sad when they have to part ..i hope afert thinking about all the trouble moving to washington is going to be i hope he dont get cold feet it would kill her to looose him now

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 175: Chapter 176: Outtake 2

i would be happy if this cont thru till they became grandparents.....

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 159: Chapter 160: Edward

my favorite jake is when he is a dog I mean of the 4 legged varity....or maybe gay jake ....lol

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 81: Chapter 82: Edward

I am holding on as good as I  can but 8 days will kill me ...its hard  waiting but you have taking sexting to a whole new level ...hot   hot hot ......

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 18: Edward

oh I think i am more excited about this then the both of them



Author's Response:

LOL I dunno...They're pretty excited. ;) Thanks!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 24: Edward

i love that you always do 2 chapters ....each chapter just makes me love the story more ...its hard holding your beath waiting for word from the mans who owns your heart ,,and with jasper and em both with him casuality could mean devastation for all 6 of them

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 28: Edward

oh dear god noW I won't be able to sleep  ...what a leave called tdy yea he has been a good boy lets get him one of those and fast

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 21, 2012 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 32: Edward

a fsvorite of my husbands was mint julip surprise   a cc cookie minus the cc chips place a mint mint in side and bake garnish with half a walnut it travles well and the choc stays whole in side the cookie hope he likes mint

the next surprise that was a favorite was after a fresh wax bath and lotion his favorite was jasmine send hin the panties wrapped in tin foil in side the cookie box my husband said  he opened it on the cot and tried to hid it from his men and they thought it was special cookies he said they tried to attack him and take his special cookie he was hiding from them ..it all seems funny now ...but he said he was willing to end the conflict all by his self to get home to what was inside the panties i sent ...lol

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Chapter 64: Edward

you  go Edward......tear her ass a new one for even thinking that .....shame on her for doubting him

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 71: Chapter 72: Edward

I would really love to have some of the shit he says right in my next birthday card ...cause he really doesn't hold back I sure hope 6/20 comes quick

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 10, 2012 Title: Chapter 75: Chapter 76: Edward

this story is what I read over breakfast every morning ..but today after reading her email and listinenigng to both of thoes songs I had a lump stuck in my throat for a while i can only imagine the emotion he felt waking up to her most heartfelt words and the beauty of music I hope this moves fast , cause i am dying inside to read the first time he sees her my whole book club is reading this with me some suggested dress her up and let her go to the door to deliver the cake see if he knows its her ....I want something just a little more romantic and sexy but its all been perfect i cant wait

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 131: Chapter 132: Edward

it would be more but I can never stop myself between chapter  to  review and forget about it when its a 4 chapter day I zoom through....she will just die when she sees him on her birthday ....i am so excited for him to see how she fit him into her home and her life but I think if he made it to the house and saw  everthing ....there  would be not getting him to leave and he is so close to getting out...... i am so excited

 
Ginnungagap by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 131]
Summary:

 

 

Ginnungagap Banner: the castle, the servant, the Queen, and the land.

Forced into a marriage with a man she fears, Izabel must choose between changing him or falling in love with a stranger.

 


Ginnungagap has been

  • Nominated for the TwiFanfictionRecs Top 10 Completed fic in May. Vote here! Polls close on June 30th!

  • Rec'd by The Other Realm.

  • Featured on Fic Central as an "Under the Radar" fic.

  • Listed on TWCS under "Featured Stories"

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Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward, Jasper
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes Word count: 149241
[Report This] Published: July 23, 2012 Updated: June 04, 2016


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Servant

a eunech...... ah what a waste...ive been wantimg to read this for ywars

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Nightmare

and someone sent her this treasure ...i want one for christmas ...minus the enuch thing

 
Summary:

"Last night, I got my best friend drunk, and we had sex. Last night changed everything. Those stupid feelings I had for him have now grown tenfold."

Bella Swan, eighteen, makes a stupid decision to seduce her best friend. How will Edward feel when he realizes that he's been violated by the person he loves the most? 

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3107
[Report This] Published: August 02, 2012 Updated: August 29, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well there... the light finally went on over his head ...wonder if that will bring last night into focus for him ...nad i wonder if he will smile or scream ....

 
It Will Rain by jakeward Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 179]
Summary:

 

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"The saddest kind of sad is when your tears can't even drop and you feel nothing. It's like the world has just ended. You don't cry. You don't hear. You don't see. You stay. For a second, the heart dies."

by unknown

 

R/K five-shot


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 23063
[Report This] Published: September 05, 2012 Updated: March 29, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Part Three

dear god dont stop there I beg you

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

this was written by a true fan who feels the intense pain and sadness that her  so called momentary laps in  judgement has caused us all ...what a wonderrful outlet ...when i saw him on the talk curcit so raw and in so much pain I wanted to cry i saw  the phots and hoped  that it was a stunt but watching their faces as they push on and through I know true sadnessess

 
Summary:

 

For ten years, Edward Cullen has had a secret desire. Isabella Swan is in the business of making fantasies come true. Together, they'll discover more than they ever expected. 1st place winner for Public Vote and Judge's Choice in the LDA anonymous contest.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 25218
[Report This] Published: May 08, 2013 Updated: May 29, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 01, 2013 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ah the link wont work ...that is so sad



Author's Response:

Sorry it's taken so long to reply to your review.  Also sorry the link wouldn't work for you, it did for most people.  It was of a bride and groom, taken from the back, and she's reaching over to grab his ass.  We thought it was just perfect for this E&B.  

-Karenec & Discordia

 
Encounter by O2Shea Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

New Moon. An encounter not covered in canon, but one that could have happened... maybe.


Categories: Crossover Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2388
[Report This] Published: August 27, 2014 Updated: August 28, 2014


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I have een every episode of buffy and angel...i love twilght ...and i love this spike needs to drag our boy back to forks ...lol



Author's Response:

I have had a couple of requests asking me to continue this story & have Spike do just that. What do you readers think? Shall I attempt it or would it ruin the one-shot? Please let me know what you think...

Thanks for the wonderful review!

:) Patricia

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 28, 2014 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

that was just to funny



Author's Response:

Ah, but did you like it? (It is the only crossover I have ever written...)

 

:) Patricia

 

 




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