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Sins of my Past by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1932]
Summary:

Banner by the awesome angelgoddess1981!  You rock babe!

Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?

TwifanfictionRec's - Top 10 Favourite Fics - October 2012


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 91 Completed: Yes Word count: 421991
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Deceit

why is it every other person involved her can see and hear how much he still loves her i think even Carlie know that its the real deal ....but that is one bull headed female  and its gonna take a ton of bricks falling on her head for her to get a clue ....this game she is playing with the new man in her life is not sitting well with anyone is it  ?

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Wrong

Emmett never fails to make me smile ...he has done something no one else ca to give her comfort and make her smile

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: White Christmas

that was the perfect gift and it did not even need a bow



Author's Response:

Probably better than a bunch of the gifts I got!  ;)

Aro sent to you directly

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Confessions

i live to see an update of this story ...and am so excited that they made their declaration to each other it will help speed up his healing process

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Beginnings

how absolutly perfect ...they are never going to make it ...good thing they are in  the hospital with prying eyes all about ..or that spong bath could have cause him a hugh set back ...feed him his soup and give him a few days and he will be locking the door ...I love that she was so jelous ...i wish we could have seen Carlies reaction to seeing her there ...and thinking she was tring to win her dads affection from her mom I bet the real claws would have come out



Author's Response:

Snicker...yeah...Carlie is a little more reactive than Bella.  Ah...the joys of youth.

Aro and Tanya to you directly!

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Thawing

i read your last out take and i was amazed by it even if it chilled me to the bone ...Tanya's evilness know no bounds    ...I think we will find D will have met his match in elizabeth .......and if jake is willing to be nice well i would say Edward is golden

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 41: SOMP Demetri Outtake

my god there are so many twists and turns going down this road you shold offer dramine for the  trip ....his character just keeps getting deeper and deeper

 
Summary:


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There is danger in pursuing what your heart desires. A seductive and mysterious stranger leads Bella into a path of unsettling self-discovery. How much can she sacrifice to find out what she wants, what she needs? AH Darkward BxE Sexual Themes

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 84250
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2011 Updated: June 18, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

no fight for this ....this story is hot and sexy and brings out the tingle of fear i feel for her ...I have a feeling that they neither one will come out of this night the same ...how can you go back to plain old plain after having the delux version

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

here is hoping I can hold my breath till the next chapter ...this is riviting

 
Summary:

Edward left Bella almost a year ago, upending her whole world. What happens when Bella receives a phone call that just might shatter it? "Wait, Alice…Edward is dying?" I choked out.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 74206
[Report This] Published: November 10, 2011 Updated: March 13, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: As Long As We're Here

i took this story to book club with me to share and every had just about the same idea that he left because he did not want to burden her with his illness he may of thought that his tumor was cancer he left her right after his MRI assuming it was really bad news he went home for his parents to care for him and let her go so she could learn to move on when he died ...but by his phyical actions he stillwasnt ready to tell her the truth ...this turn of events just blew my mind so I don't know what to think now ....and your saying next week it be more drama   yikes

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: I Won't Let You Go

i spent a while in the medical library at work looking up this condition ...15 months to five years prognosis ...then i saw that this story  is based on you and what you have been through ...if your husband is this story ...my god ... i am so sorry you have to go through this ...most information suggest go to he mayo clinic .... if he is still with you ...if not ...my heart is with you ....you story will be  our topic at book club this friday ...we have a thing we do 20 questions ...everbody submits 1 and if you get all 20 right you win the door prize ....i reread the story to find the correct answers ....just unsure  of one ...how many weeks is she in the story ....i went through and i come up with 14 or 15 weeks ....since you are alwys one to respond I thought i would ask ...question..... how many weeks was she when she told him while she thought he was asleep ??????

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: I Won't Let You Go

so well ....shit ....I have been dying with antisipation for days now ...telling him while he was asleep ...coward...but maybe she thought she was doing a pratice run before she had the courage to do it for real ...please tell me you have another chapter ready i will die until i know if he is upset with the news ...main concern during book club was since he was taking meds for his condition will it efffect the fetus is there danger for the baby or was he post op enough for there not to be any side effects ...and shit is he happy about this news when his life is so uncertain   i have about a hundred more questions ...I could keep going ...or you could give me answeres in another chapter soon ....this is my way of begging without looking stupid

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Rescue Me

I think I would like to scream ....when I see an up date notice I think its a new chapter but its the one i read on ff ...i will die if you dont up date soon...what happened to him if you let him die i will never forgive you ...i have almost no nails left ...

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Not Enough

i know thats not what we all wanted to hear but she has been hurt beyond what her heart can take ..they need to get to  ground zero where all the bullshit ends I can't imagine being hurt  like that and still being able to breath but she got through all that and came to be at his side and was there for the whole family while her heart was still tender from the beating she took from him leaving her he need to be honest with her no more bullshit games ...I want to cry with her ..but I am afraid its going to get worse huh ....looks like he moved on with some one else ....but the sex ...and the pain maybe space will help her ...I dont want her to go either but how will he stop her what could hew do or say to make her stay and listen to him  ....

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Chains

first I want to say I am really sorry you don't have hundreds more reviews ...this is a wonderful story ..well writen and easy to ready and esentially heartbreaking ...he is so mean to her ... but having lived through a husband with a brain tumor I know why he acted this way ...to save me from having to care for him as an invalid or worse while he lay dying ....luck for me I ran into our Insurance agent who told me he had made sure his life Insurance was up to date so i would be taken care of after he was gone ....so i went after him and brought him home despite personality changes and fits of anger and finally death ..his was cancer .....and i know no matter what he said or what he does she won't quit  loving him  ..she may need to go back and regroup to make her self strong again to be able  to tolorate his bitcheyness but even if she goes she will take the love for him away in her heart .....is she really going yep I bet she will she need s to go to think and to remember what there love was and to check to see if she has the  strength to hold on till he is whole again ....my book club thinks he left to spare her pain but I think while they may be on to something there is some other reason he was so mean to her when she came to see him    ....we shall see right   until next chapter

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Don't You Remember

MASEN IS THE NAME OF THE MNA IN HER BOOK HUH .....AND THATS JELOUSY I WOULD KNOW THAT ANY WHERE

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: We All Need Saving

I THINK I WOULD DIE IN PAIN BEING THAT CLOSE TO SOMEONE I LOVED SO MUCH AND COULD NOT REACH OUT TO HIM FOR FEAR OF REJECTION

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Not Enough

I am anxious almost fearful of whats to come next ....please hurry and update before I go crazy  

 
What I Wished For by thimbles Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 290]
Summary:





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Bella and Jacob married young, and their life together has been much more of a challenge than Bella had anticipated. She’s battling depression and he’s increasingly frustrated that his wife is no longer the same girl he married. Bella is able to find brief moments of peace and happiness in the music she surrounds herself with. She finds particular joy in the raw and powerful music of Edward Cullen, and when she takes the opportunity to see him perform live, the pair strike up an instant friendship.

As Edward and Bella become closer, it throws her struggles in her marriage to Jacob into sharp relief, and Bella begins to daydream about being romantically involved with Edward.

Banner by the AMAZING enchanted-mind! Visit: enchanted-mind-artist.blogspot.com


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 168722
[Report This] Published: November 15, 2011 Updated: May 08, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 23: June - July 2012

are there any more at home like him ....he is so sweet he makes my teeth ache .....any more surprises from him and I may swoon ....coming off their meds toghther may not be such a good idea one of them need to be stable and in control but they have a wonderful support system and they both have faith in each other to be there to pick up the broken pieces



Author's Response:

Yes, there a few issues they'll have to deal with in terms of their depression and it's treatment.

 

I'm so glad you like my Sweetward; I'm very fond of him too. He has a few more surprises up his sleeve, though I can tell you that Bella will produce at least one herself, a bit further down the track.

 

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 17: June 7th, 2011

WELL SEEMS JACOB LEARNED WELL FROM HIS FATHER ..GOOD THING SHE HAS HER DAD AND E THERE MAYBE BILLY WOULD HAVE NOT BACKED DOWN SO FAST



Author's Response: Yes, it's not so surprising Jacob was the way he is was, knowing what his Dad is like; if anything, Bella's lucky she left him before things escalated any further. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Shell xx

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 24: October - December 2012

wow ..who knew our boy had that in him ....that was wonderful how her dad put that ass in his place defending her they all need to to know the extent of abuse she had to suffer ...so glad she got out and into a loving releationship



Author's Response:

It was very satisfying to write Bella's defense; it felt good to vindicate her publicly. And yes, she's in such a better place with sweet Edward now.

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8: August 2010 Part 3

my heart breaks for her having to endure his cave man like sexual advances.. just wish she had more time to vent her martial anxietys to rose ,,,,how much she is missing out on ....is there nothing jake is willing to do to make her feel good E has been nicer to her in their 3 meeting than her own husband ....but knowing what is to come of him ...i know where her guilt will come from



Author's Response: Thanks for the review! It's really lovely to hear people are investing in Bella as character. Cheers, Shell xx

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3: late June 2010

i feel like you followed me around the first 5 years of my horrible marriage ..never thin enough never smart enough never good enough for him according to his family ...my heart breaks for her .....



Author's Response: I'm really sorry to hear you've also endured this experience :( Thanks for reading and reviewing. Shell xx

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 21: March - April 2012

usually statements like that...so prolific in nature  would signal the end of the story I almost looked  for the words the end after I was done reading ...so please tell me that i  am wrong that you wont end it there ...there is so much more I want to read and see happen for them ....



Author's Response:

Definitely not the end! You don't think I'd end it without them making love, do you? I couldn't do that!

 

There will be 33 chapters. This is the 26th. Then I have at least two outtakes to write.

 

Shell xx

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 18: June - August 2011

OMG i AM SO AFRAID TO READ WHAT SHE PUTS HER SELF THROUGH THAT PUT HER IN THE FRAME OF MIND HE FINDS HER IN ON HIS RE



Author's Response:

I guess you've seen what happens when Bella's left to her own devices - guilt, self-loathing and more guilt.

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

 

Shell xx

 




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