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Save Tonight by ahommel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Bella and Edward

Banner created by: ahommel (me)

 

AU - It's been nine months since Edward fled the woods in Forks, fled from her for her. Each day his willpower crumbles a little more, feeling the insistent pull to return to her side. Upon returning, Edward is unable to locate Bella ... she's not with her friends, not at home, not even at the Cullen home. Upon finding the shell that once was Bella, Edward feels his heart ache for the pain he has caused her. Promising himself that she will not see him, he steals one kiss from her. The night explodes into a passionate reunion leaving both significantly changed. Will Edward convince Bella that it was all a dream? Has she really gone crazy, pushed herself to the limit?


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 13361
[Report This] Published: December 03, 2011 Updated: July 11, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Everything

I like your direction  until your next update ...cant wait to see how she reacts when she opens her eyes and realizes she is not dreaming 



Author's Response:

Well, this is Bella we're talking about .... I don't think it'll be TOO easy for her to accept she's NOT dreaming. But don't worry, I won't draw it out too long. ;-)

 
Summary:

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Bella didn't like surprises. Her life was safe, predictable and she knew what to expect.... until fate brought her breast cancer and everything changed. This is not a tragedy; it's a story about love and hope because that's what life is all about.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 62697
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2012 Updated: July 02, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One. Now.

I SURE WANT TO BE IN ON THAT CONVERSATION HE HE FINALLY EXPLAINS TO HER WHY HE DID THAT WITH AOTHER WOMAN ...



Author's Response:

It should be interesting....

Thanks for eading and reviewing. 

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 18, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Seven. Then.

YOU NEVER REALIZE JUST HOW MUCH YOUR FRIENDS AND FAMIY LOVE YOU UNTIL YOUR FACING THE WORST DAYS OF YOUR LIFE ...MY COWORKERS ALL BOUGHT SHOES WITH PINK RIBBONS AND A FIGHT CANCER SHIRT ...WE ALL WENT ON THE CANCER WALK TOGETHER ...WE ALL WORE THE SAME BRACELET...I HAD TO TRAVEL  TO SEE A OBGYN ONOCOLOGIST BUT HE BECAME LIKE A BROTHER TO ME ...I REMEMBER ASKING HIM BEFORE OR THAT DAY ...NOT TO LET ME DIE ....HE SAID  I PROMISE...HE KEPT HIS PROMISE ......I JUST HOPE SHE LETS THE FAMILY IN SO THEY CAN BE AN EXTENDED SUPPORT SYSTEM FOR HER ...SHE WILL NEED ALL THE SUPPORT SHE CAN GET ....I JUST HOPE e HAS HAD TIME TO PUT HIS SELF TOGETHER TO BE  ABLE TO BE A ROCK FOR HER THIS TIME



Author's Response:

That support you speak of from friends and family is everything, isn't it?  I'm glad things are good with you.

Thank you for your review and for reading!!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve. Then.

I am hoping i am on th right track with who ended up being her loving husband ...if i am wrong i will be really unhappy ...so when will he make a move he alresady has charlie seal of approval and mine of course  lol



Author's Response:

Oh, I would never make you unhappy!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Judy

xoxoxo

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter Twenty Seven. Now.

that was amazingly perfect .....i was only hoping they could end this tale with a new begining .....



Author's Response:

I'm glad you are happy!!  It wasn't a perfect ending, but life is never perfect.  It was a happy ending though. 

Thank you so much for reading and your reviews.  I really appreciate it.

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter Twenty Three. Now.

my helper was the elipictal machine ..they help regain my rom ...after a few brake downs



Author's Response:

Everyone has to find their own way, right?

Thank you for reading!!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two. Now.

see I found the hidden key  ....I just wasn't looking hard enough



Author's Response:

Sometimes you just have to keep looking!

Thanks for reading and reviewing.

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter Five. Then.

omg ...that turned me into an emotonal basket case ....i know what he did was a terrible thing ...but loveing someone wont stop because they hurt you ...this  was one one of the best chapters  so far.... full of what and why and just how this tragic seperation came to be ...and how he suffered as well...but my book club thinks there is a mystery behind the fact you never told us the husband name well duh why didn't  i think of that .....oh god I so need one more chapter of how Edward handles the news of his beloved bella and the fight she is in for her life ....i know I wont be able to sleep until the next chapter of now from epov updated ...hint hint ......



Author's Response:

Edward did suffer - it turned his world upside down.  The stupid things you do when you're young....

A mystery, huh?  We shall see.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Judy

xoxoxo

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six. Then.

judy that was amazing ...the fact that he never stopped loveing her for one minute all these years ..then to find she made her way into the safety of his mothers arms ...some one who loves her as much as he does ...well i do believe in fate oh and this came just in time for book club tonight there are three in the group with me that are dealing with a new onset of cancer ...this story has been like a life line to a  happy ending... we know how happy she was and getting better... your hope for her recovery jumps off the pages to us and our group who is our supportive link ...are just as excited to read this as we are so girl if your ears are burning tonight ...you will know why ...lol   ...any scaps of info you want to thow our way feel free ....I will share this with all tonight



Author's Response:

Wow.  Thank you.  Your reviews make my day.   

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven. Then.

well this really did brighten my day considerably



Author's Response:

Well, that's always a good thing!!  I'm glad.

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter Four. Then.

I FELT THE LOVE ESME AND CARLILE HAD FOR HER RIGHT FROM HERE ....



Author's Response:

I'm glad you did...there is definitely a lot of love there!

Thanks for reading and your review!!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two. Now.

BAD EDWARD ....BUT THIS IS AN AMAZING FULL OF HEART STORY ...GOING THROUGH CERVICAL CANCER NOW WITH METS TO THE BREAST I KNOW THE FEELING OF HOLDING YOUR BREATH AFTER EACH TEST   WELL WRITTEN



Author's Response:

Lots of hugs to you!  I'm so happy you like this story, especially because of what you are going through.  It means a lot to me.

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine. Then.

oh my god ...how  can someone who has been through so much pain be so selfless ....but she see it for what it really is ...a terrible act in bad judgment on the part of a man who loved her.... doesnt mean he loved her any less just that he made a very bad choice that cost them both their happiness cause  he was in as much pain from his mistake as she was ...cancer does make you see things differently makes you want to fix thing that are broken make thing work ...I rethough my work ethic ...changed shift spent more time for me and my family and guess what the place didn't fall down with out me ....this chapter made me smile .....and i think we are figuring out who her wonderful husband might be ....wonder if I am close



Author's Response:

I get you.  I changed a lot of things that I thought I 'should' be doing also. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Eight. Then.

well that was kind of perfect ...but i wish it would go on and on and on ....I think she must have a wondeful heart to forgive him so easily i hope he can forgive himself now and not ruin this new begining



Author's Response:

Forgiveness is good for the soul!

Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One. Now.

SO DONT MISS ME.... WRITE  ME A NEW STORY .....I HAVE A MILLION IDEAS FOR THEM ...AND I LOVE YOUR WRITING   SOOO MUCH



Author's Response:

Awww...so email those ideas to me!  Please?

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue.

I AM IN AWE OF THE SIMPLE BEAUTY AND TRUTH OF YOUR STORY ..NOT ALL GET THAT HAPPY ENDING BUT I AM GLAD THEY DID



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  I will miss you and your reviews - I always looked forward to them.

Keep dancing! 

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter Thirteen. Then.

that was so perfect i just want to cry ....it was perfect and her heart knows and its telling her to catch up



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 08, 2012 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter Twenty Four. Now.

what makes me think that one of them is not going to make it much further ,,,but i know how they feel you get to that point where your not afraid to die you might hate the fact your leaving  will cause your family so much pain but you ready your self for it .....its easier that you think ....i know i am ready ,,



Author's Response:

It's hard sometimes to face what is real, isn't it?

More hugs to you!!  Thanks for reading!

Judy

xoxoxo

 
Labels by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 212]
Summary:

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“Everyone has labels attached to them that they acquire over a lifetime... mother, daughter, wife, lover, friend, co-worker.  I happen to have all of those labels attached to me, plus one in particular that I’m not happy about…widow.  I have a daughter who never met her father, and parents who try to help me out but drive me crazy, along with a father-in-law who I take care of in the absence of his son.  Along with the label of “widow” came another label that I’m not happy about and it’s one I assigned to myself…crazy.  The reason I’m crazy is because every night in my dreams, I talk to my dead husband as if he was still alive.  I was perfectly content to live with those labels until someone showed up in my life that caused me to add another label to my seemingly never ending list…screwed." –Bella Black

 

AH/OOC.  Canon couples, eventually.  This is a story of a woman trying to deal with a devastating loss, so there will be sadness, but there will be humor and there will be love.  There’s foul language, eventual lemons, and it’s told in Bella’s POV.  It’s rated NC-17 for a reason.  It’s a love story at its heart, but it’s not an easy one.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 125316
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2012 Updated: June 19, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well i see 3 three chapters and i really like it she has some real isssues and i think our boys wit is so funny

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

this was great i like quick pace and lots of action ...and kids love the kid aspect ..it doesnt hurt that i talk to my dead husband in my sleep too

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well good for her ...he went off no word and with no thought of her feelings he may  of been trying to find his daughter but her left a broken hearted 3 year old behind greeving for him ...no word a few weeks for a small child is like a life time ..poor little girl ...but he has mad skills and once he has his daughter back he will remember how to use them on her I am sure ...it will get better between them ...right ????

 
The Silver Lining by kimpy0464 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

The Silver Lining

 

Divorced Bella meets widowed Edward one afternoon in a Laundromat, and an instant attraction results. When you meet your soulmate after your spouse dies, do you allow yourself fall in love again?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 92171
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2012 Updated: August 21, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

that just cracks me up ....I di that before sent a message to my kids that made me red faced



Author's Response:

You're not the only reader who experienced textfail! I'm surprised, actually, how often that happens. :)

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

and i though once you hit fifty your sex life was over ...maybe i should re think that and find my self a sliver fox ...one who still has his shit working ....



Author's Response:

Nooooo, sex life does NOT end at age 50! I wanted to craft a story that helped people see this subject  differently, you know? Everyone deserves their own Silver Fox, even if he might need some viagra every now and then. :P

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I always know I am in for a wonderful time when ever a new chapter of this pops up ...its amazing every time wonderful writing great story

 
Mount Olympus by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 230]
Summary: Feature

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Falling for your best friend is never easy. Asking your best friend to be in an unconventional relationship while fighting your feelings is something entirely different.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 91530
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2012 Updated: March 28, 2014


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Not Your Momma's Mythology

and so it begins ..issue 1..... sex is now on the table for discussion lol



Author's Response:

LOL- yup. On the table for sure! Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review! I hope you like the story.

Xo

 




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