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Summary: Bella and Edward try to one-up each other with romantic surprises. Who will win the upper hand? A series of one shots, all fluff.
Categories: Post-Eclipse Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 4916
[Report This] Published: September 04, 2011 Updated: November 29, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 30, 2011
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
now that was just too damn funny
Summary: Bella and Edward were ready to become parents as seniors in high school, but tragedy ended their dreams and pulled them apart. Ten years later, they reunite, but all is not what it seems. ExB
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Word count: 169508
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2011 Updated: November 11, 2012
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 29, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13
I hope the first visit goes well and its the first of many i cant wait to see how ryan take the news of meeting his biological parents for the first time
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 10, 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
I really hope that they have a wonderful day with him ...letting him help decide on a house will hopefully make him see how much they want him as a part of their lives ....it was so cute that he and Edward bonded over base ball in the last chapter ...I wanted to cry when he went to the field to speak with him and he got a hit ....and i know E/C heart have to be breaking seeing that the genetic are there even if they were never together father and son in looks and likes and dislikes ....its a beautiful story .... Author's Response: There's so much with nature vs. nurture. I have a friend who's brother was adopted. From an early age, he showed interest in motorcycles--something that his birth father was into, but no one in his adoptive families was.
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 10, 2012
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
its kind of scary that the proof is there that their infant son was kidnapped from them andthe court systems wont help ..... but with evidence like their signed documents it makes sense now why the courts would drag this out ...but having adoptive kids of my own i know how much it hurts when they decide to seek out the birth parents who absused them as children ...but how wise she is to realize that they are strangers to Ryan and that he loves his other parents and it will take time..... putting his needs in front of her own desire Author's Response: It's only been a month since Bella saw him for the first time and only a couple of weeks since the DNA results came back. Courts do take a little longer than that, but they will act . . . eventually.
Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 25, 2012
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
what could have possibly gone wrong ..unless Carlile has been up to somethng underhanded
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 18, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
time money and tears ....that what custody fight involve I hope they are patient with the Cullen they are not at fault here either and this child doesnt know them at all what a mess
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 31, 2012
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
i think its wonderfu lthat they are thinking of what rayn needs first ...shows what good parents they will be ...poor Carlie he means well right ..10 years of being the only father ..but he will be sorry if his conseren for ryan shows him that his dad was being dihonest and lied to keep B/E away ....usually T worries me when she shows up but un this story they are pretty much on solid ground but you could really make me wrong if E shows some intrest ...no way he would never do that right ....right ....see your killing me here ...just when I was so sure
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
lets hope not but I think I would have never been able to take another step until i was at least able to see my baby ever if he did not know i was his mother just to see him up close to see what his face looked like the color of his eyes the slant of his nose the shape of his fingers ....not way i could walk away with out something Author's Response: She has seen him, though. She saw him at the ball field. I wouldn't be able to pull myself away either. Thank you!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
painful memories .....is he not sure about them or he just did not want to drag up old painful memmories of what the family went through after the baby was gone ....parents some time think they know whats best for their child some time they dont think of the wrong they are doing i hope she takes a breath and looks at this hard before she acts
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
damn hot head ....but they have been his parents and obviously love him beyond reason ....theyare probally devastated with this but she took him in for testing she is doing the right thing esp putting c in his place I am just sorry you dont have more reviews this story is wonderful
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 13, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
now that he knows that he wasn't unloved and not wanted he may find a place in his heart for them he is so like his birth father ...they have so much in common to bond them together ...and the atmosphere is calm and not threatening ......I have 3 adopitive children I know how much I love them and how much pain I would be in if they were taken from me
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 21, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16
being on the other end of adoption ...taking in kids that nobodys wanted it still hurts when you raise them and when they are older the burning need to see their birth parents arises ...most people are in a better place years later regretful and willing to make a connection ....it still is a wonderful feeling when they return from a visit and when they walk back in the door from a vivit you are still mom poor esmme .....but they didnt give him away and he needs to be with them ...to see just how wonderful they really are I wnated to cry when he said Charlie was a stranger ...I hope it wont stay that way ...
Summary: 
It was perfect, almost too perfect, to believe that their young, intense love would continue on forever, as most young lovers do. What happened between Edward and Bella that broke their genuine and beautiful relationship?
Prequel to "Anhelo Amarte".
Bella's POV. Lemons and some angst because breaking up is hard to do.
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Word count: 72625
[Report This] Published: September 16, 2011 Updated: August 30, 2012
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 30, 2012
Title: Chapter 15: Outtake
Dear God how could she have ever left him ....obviously she could have never forgot this ...i am dyiny to find out if they can recapture this again
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 16, 2012
Title: Chapter 1: Cuando Nos Conocimos
Whem I read this before it was hard to understand the emption of their meeting but since following the prequel I know where the deep pain and heart ache are coming from ...just keep saying.... happy ending happy ending ... Author's Response: Happy ending... Happy ending... Happy ending...
:D
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 16, 2012
Title: Chapter 14: El Ultimo Adios
that was really hard to read ....you could hear both of their hearts break from the page .....but I cant wait to start reading Anhelo Amarte again ...please tell me it all has a happy ending Author's Response: It was really hard to write. But, things should start looking up from here when we restart Anhelo Amarte. Thank you!!!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 10, 2012
Title: Chapter 5: El Cambio de Temporada
I think mom and dad have have made other plans for our boy and he is afraid to let her in on it..... all these sad poems and distantant mood swing from him he knows pain is coming and he doesnt know how to stop it from tearing them apaprt Author's Response: You're definitely in the right direction. :)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 10, 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Pesadilla
oh god how i love a mystery ...and mixed with hot perfect sex ...wonderful Author's Response: :)
Thank you very much. I do, too! ;)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 03, 2012
Title: Chapter 8: Aceptacion
i am so sorry that you only had 8 reviews i think that this is a beautiful story
going back filling in the gaps you put the pain she is in ight there in the page for all forr all to feel and it breaks your heart ...she should be proud of him
but if she loves him she will let him go ...its not his fault ...his parent have a dream for him too ....i bet he could have made this work if she would have just given him some time Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your encouraging words and your review. You're definitely in the right direction. She loves him. She's gonna have to let him go. Unfortunately, the way she goes about it, might not be the smartest way. We will find that out in the next couple of chapters.
Once again, thank you very much. :)
Summary: 
A NYC barman views his mind reading as an isolating cancer, until he meets the lonely 28yr old trying to escape her heartbreaking reality. Edward has had a life full of harsh lessons. He trusts nobody. Bella is faced with an uphill battle in her day-to-day existence. She never complains about the hand life has dealt her, including when a beautiful boy treats her badly, because she doesn't believe she deserves anything better. AH ExB
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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 173858
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2011 Updated: July 28, 2012
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 24, 2012
Title: Chapter 19: X-Men
omg this is awful///// they were so happy
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 22, 2012
Title: Chapter 23: The Wombles
one old show sticks in my mind hr pufenstuf .......sid and marty kroft 1979 maybe ..jimmy and the magic flute witchie poo talking trees it was so cute...emmett would be a perfect pufenstuf ...large brave loyal Author's Response: It's funny b/c HR Puffenstuff was on my list but I just couldn't fit it in. It was a great show too. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 20, 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Looney Tunes
I never though that this would be the end of the chapter ...our beloved animal hurt who would do such a thing ...lind of wish somebody there had vampire speed right about now ....right
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011
Title: Chapter 11: The Groovie Goolies
my edward makes a drink at christmas ...calles it reindeer balls..... godiva choc liquior ... cream de cocao ....half and half.... vodka 2 black olives kicks your ass blended with ice but all jokes aside this thing with mike ....i love the fact that his character isnt rich and just cant throw money down to fix everything ...but i cant see edward letting this go one reguardless of how much she want her dad to have the best .....I think some how her dad knows what is going on the fact that he said he is ready..... speaks volumes to me ...wonder if our Dear Carlile has any pull on the medical ethics board ...i have worked in this feild for 30 plus years and I am still angry over what this man is doing to her really hope you fixing it involves mike with a broken jaw .....or a broken dick emm will brake him into tiny pieces if rose ever finds out cause you know she will tell him
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 22, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: The Banana Splits
5 stars thats all huh .....i hate that the critics were so harsh .....I will mever read another rolling stones Magazine ever again he was so brutal my favorite scene just like in the book was when he first heard his babies voice and realized he loved her .....my personal favorite ...... her death face was so real we all cried ........ I love this story I keep hoping E will get close enough whaen she is thinking to her self about her money woes ....and her delema with Charlie...... maybe its going to happen .....
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 12, 2012
Title: Chapter 18: Top Gun
It doesnt make sense ...he wants to be sure why is he leaving ...he has it all now love respect a wonderful life it sounds like he is leaving it behind ...oh god I hope not ....i thought for sure he was ready to take that next step with her make her his forever
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 23, 2011
Title: Chapter 4: The Muppets
i love Miss Piggy .....i love that she loves kermit ....go figure she is a pig and has better clothes than i do .......
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