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Reviews by twilightgma1954
 
Summary:

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A NYC barman views his mind reading as an isolating cancer, until he meets the lonely 28yr old trying to escape her heartbreaking reality.  Edward has had a life full of harsh lessons.  He trusts nobody.  Bella is faced with an uphill battle in her day-to-day existence.  She never complains about the hand life has dealt her, including when a beautiful boy treats her badly, because she doesn't believe she deserves anything better.  AH ExB

 

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 173858
[Report This] Published: September 20, 2011 Updated: July 28, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: The Muppets

i love Miss Piggy .....i love that she loves kermit ....go figure she is a pig and has better clothes than i do .......

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Batman & Robin

oh honey that would really be telling my age  espically if you knew i watch the original episodes new each and every week   LOL    this is killing me I dont know whae I have ever laughed this loud    

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Sugarlips and Cupcake

well I have to say that this was delightful and very refreshing .....angst and a little drama filled with sweet creamy sexual inuendio ....my kind of story .......so we knoe our boy sugar lips can read her mind and we know what kind of lustful thoughts she was having from the minute she saw his ass   this is just to funny

I dont know if I want her to run out dying of embarresment or jump up on the bar .....yea the bar that my choice

this is wonderful



Author's Response:

Welcome and thank you so much for your kind reviews. I'm glad you were a fan of Batman and Robin. And, i'm so happy that you are enjoying this and it's made you laugh. Thanks.

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: The Thunderbirds

well i was doing ok ubtil the thunderbirds reference   but i am having a great time reading this



Author's Response:

Don't worry - The Thunderbirds isn't as popular as i thought. There is a teaser over at The Fictionators.

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Cocktail

well i guess he cant read my mind right now cause he head would explode i am so mad at him right now i think i would of rather he just hit her that tear her heart out i am surprised that em would let him any where near her and rose will she will pull his brain out through his nose



Author's Response:

It will be interesting to see what you think after this chapter. Thanks for reviewing.

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Smurfs

well Just when I thought I could not be any angrier at some one ......Mike knows how much she wants this .....3 hours once a week and he will make all her dreams come true ...but at what cost ...just her self respect I dont think she could ever do it ....please let her have these thought some where near E ....I know he is trying but I just am not ready to forgive him yet ....but she is she would forgive him for anything  I am proud she has had as much restrait as she did ....poor alice and Jasper ...what a mess he has created .....so whats next how do we start to fix this mess ...lets start with mike ....heheh  ....

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: The Smurfs

finally something i know ....i love the Smurfs we just spent the day watching the new movie with my grand kids ....but after giving it alot of thought as to what would she do to help her dad ...it keep him happy and content in a room with a view  would she sacrafice her self and her self respect for him ...I think she might try but this is not going to be a one time affair this man is planing out its a weekly committment that would break her phyically and mentally...a man in the seat of power in her world who is abusing his power beyond words .....where is the hero when you need one   ...so where are we going from here.................. i am so hooked on this story .....I know want him to be the hero even if he says he is the villan  we know there has to be something out there she can do to shut this curse off so  they can have some kind of happy life

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Shrek

oh i have been holding my breath for days now since the end of the last chapter i though em was a goner ....I amglad she was able to make him understand this was not his fault ...its a good thing that em's abs are as hard as his head



Author's Response:

Hi, i couldn't kill of Em! Thanks for reviewing. There is a teaser over on the Twilighted Forums.

 
Summary:

EAC: The Journal of Edward A. Cullen

 

 

FIRST PLACE WINNER in THE CANON TOUR CONTEST.

What if Edward, through Alice's visions, knew about Bella before he met her? 

What if he had a chance to avoid the bloodlust? Would he take that chance? 

PRE-Twi AU


Categories: Pre-Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 44204
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2011 Updated: December 31, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: September 13, 1987 & March 7, 1989

OH WHAT I WOULD NOT GIVE TO BE ABLE TO CURL UP ON A RAIDNY DAY WITH A HANDFULL OF HIS JOURNELS  OR HIM  



Author's Response:

That's a lovey visual!  If I ever find them I'll send them over!

Thanks for reading, twilightgma1954!

Kathie

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: April 3, 2005 What Does Alice Know?

seeing inside the mind of          EC    is amazing



Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate that!

Kathie

 
Sins of my Past by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1932]
Summary:

Banner by the awesome angelgoddess1981!  You rock babe!

Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?

TwifanfictionRec's - Top 10 Favourite Fics - October 2012


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 91 Completed: Yes Word count: 421991
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Electricity

well at least she is awake now and we can begin to sort some thing out ....i wonder why she lied you would think she would not care that her daughter knew he abandonded them but something tells me even if she was angry with him she never wanted Carlie to see her father as a bad man  ...he was aleady feeling guilty I bet he feels like shit huh ...please  hurry with the next chapter so we can see what caused her blindness and just how far our E is willing to go to make this right



Author's Response:

Well the seeing how far he would go...gonna take awhile, because she will realistically pissed! :)

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Outtake sent directly

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 27, 2012 Title: Chapter 52: Extra

wow...didn't see that one ....I love all these little secret chapter

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 28: Light

well if this means anything to you I love this and I think its amazingly well written and so do all the members of my book club ...some people read but dont know how to expreass how they feel I do not have that problem ...people like you who are so selfless and take the time to write and share this us ...this is one of my personal favorites

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 36: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

no thoughts ... just tears.... thats the only thing I can give you back right now

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 16, 2012 Title: Chapter 74: Chase

TTHAT WAS ONE OF THE BEST CHASE AND RESCUE SCENES I HAi STILL WANT VE EVER READ ....I KNOW ITS TO SOON BUT I HOPE THERE IS A BABY BROTHER OR SISTER FOR CARLIE.....SO CHILDBIRTH WILL BE A JOY FOR THEM BOTH THIS TIME ......

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Monster

i am thinking he has need to get the posin of the past out of his system before he can ever start to heal his broken heart ..this was the right place to start i am glAD HE DIDN'T WATER DOWN THE TRUTH OF HIS BETRAYAL TO HER MOTHER he can make this right    if Carlie can learn to love him now maybe her mother can learn to forgive him as well



Author's Response:

He has a long way to go yet, but he is trying! ;)

Carlie's outtake sent directly!

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 09, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Torn

I WAS SO EXCITED THAT HE HAD THE NERVE TO GO TO HER AND IT WAS JUST WHAT I WANTED BUT IF HE HAD MADE HIS PRESENCE KNOW SHE WOULD NOT OF HAD TIME TO EVEN THINK ABPUT DEMETRI ....HES LIKE JAKE ...I WANT TO DRAG HIM AWAY FROM THE BUMPER OF MY CAR ...THEY DONT FIT ...SHE HAS HER PERFECT FIT AND SHE WAS A BREATH AWAY FROM FINDING HIM

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Five Reasons

I stand with the few that never want this to end but I am hoping you will alow her visions to become a reality that they have the gift of more children together this time and he can be a part of all of it ...I have enjoyed every angsty chapter this was wonderful

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: SOMP outtakes chapter 2-8

wow that was alot of imfo to take it but the pieces are falling into placed....boy omg who is in the bed with her i am dying here  pleas ease my pain tell me tell me

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 23: Kisses of Acid

WILL SHE EVER FORGIVE HIM ....THESE TEASER ARE ABSOLUTLY WONDERFUL ...EVEN  IF I HAVE THE HEAD ACHE FROM HELL TODAY WE HAD A WONDERFUL TIME LAST NIGHT

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Velathri

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wonder who said that Dreams are the window to the soul ...??????.....at least her sleeping mind wants him needs him desires him ....lets just hope that it bleeds into her waking mind ...I was so hoping that thats was real and he siad all thies things to her ...but its a start and just the thought of her thinking of him that way makes me smile ...we all kbiw the heart wants what the heart wants     .......he wont burn that letter will he ??????on mo he needs to get her to listen ......and whats up with the stranger in her bed ....it can't be Edward can it he is swith Carlie >>>>>oh not another week with me going crazy trying to figure things out

 

 

 

 

 

i wonder who said that dreams are



Author's Response:

Answer to at least one question already up for you!

Marcus POV sent directly

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Family

this is such a happy time for them all i am hoping Carlie went out to call her dad and keep him in the loop ...since he is not included in the famliy gathering I bet he is about to bite his fingers off ..so by that your saying its going to be bad right ...i want happy again ..but i refelect to your briliant crazy mind ..so hit me do your worst ...she can see and I am happy

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Prison and Jail Birds

well with 5 at home I know what being busy is ...happy mothers days to you ...where do you find the time ...and then write this beautiful story ....I wonder if it somthing silly like glow in the dark condoms ....that would be emmett ..I am glad they are young enough to give carlie a sibling ..that would be wonderful if they are are every able to get past his rules of earning her trust back ...she may have to be a little more insistant with him



Author's Response:

:)  I promise they'll make headway!  It's coming...

For now, I'm sending Esme/Carlisle to you directly!

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Meadow

Please dont you ever again feel the need to explaine yourself or the plot line you follow ...my dear you have had my heart since the first chapter ...there are evil spite full people out there that reak havoc on other lives and this story has been a wonderful expression of that ....that it relates to the sorrowful drama going on in the lives of 2 people gives me hope that maybe they can get past this like our couple here is trying to do ...I LOVE THIS STORY AND AM A HUGE FAN OF YOUR WRITTING ....THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECT

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Fences

your story  contains a wonderful mix of emotions and though i want to get right to the heart of the matter only reading B/E there are so many other factors that need to be added to make the story well rounded just hoping for a HEA



Author's Response:

I promise it is moving quickly to it now.  ;)

Demetri sent to you directly.

 




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