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Labels by samekraemer Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 212]
Summary:

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“Everyone has labels attached to them that they acquire over a lifetime... mother, daughter, wife, lover, friend, co-worker.  I happen to have all of those labels attached to me, plus one in particular that I’m not happy about…widow.  I have a daughter who never met her father, and parents who try to help me out but drive me crazy, along with a father-in-law who I take care of in the absence of his son.  Along with the label of “widow” came another label that I’m not happy about and it’s one I assigned to myself…crazy.  The reason I’m crazy is because every night in my dreams, I talk to my dead husband as if he was still alive.  I was perfectly content to live with those labels until someone showed up in my life that caused me to add another label to my seemingly never ending list…screwed." –Bella Black

 

AH/OOC.  Canon couples, eventually.  This is a story of a woman trying to deal with a devastating loss, so there will be sadness, but there will be humor and there will be love.  There’s foul language, eventual lemons, and it’s told in Bella’s POV.  It’s rated NC-17 for a reason.  It’s a love story at its heart, but it’s not an easy one.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 125316
[Report This] Published: January 04, 2012 Updated: June 19, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well good for her ...he went off no word and with no thought of her feelings he may  of been trying to find his daughter but her left a broken hearted 3 year old behind greeving for him ...no word a few weeks for a small child is like a life time ..poor little girl ...but he has mad skills and once he has his daughter back he will remember how to use them on her I am sure ...it will get better between them ...right ????

 
Summary:

On the left, Edward grimaces and says,

 

When Edward takes Bella into the forest after her disastrous birthday party in New Moon, Bella's reaction is nothing like he expected. Will this be the end of their love or will they find a new path to forever? A canon-based but very different AU approach to New Moon. Some OOC and OC.


Categories: New Moon Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 47 Completed: No Word count: 206889
[Report This] Published: February 01, 2012 Updated: July 03, 2014


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 14, 2016 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: The Ultimate Gift

that was perfect....very well written

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Charlie Comes to Dinner

you made charlie wonderfully  real I was kind of nervous my self he may have been the cheif but he was a dad first blood disordthat was epic

 
The Silver Lining by kimpy0464 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 195]
Summary:

The Silver Lining

 

Divorced Bella meets widowed Edward one afternoon in a Laundromat, and an instant attraction results. When you meet your soulmate after your spouse dies, do you allow yourself fall in love again?


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 92171
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2012 Updated: August 21, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

that just cracks me up ....I di that before sent a message to my kids that made me red faced



Author's Response:

You're not the only reader who experienced textfail! I'm surprised, actually, how often that happens. :)

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

and i though once you hit fifty your sex life was over ...maybe i should re think that and find my self a sliver fox ...one who still has his shit working ....



Author's Response:

Nooooo, sex life does NOT end at age 50! I wanted to craft a story that helped people see this subject  differently, you know? Everyone deserves their own Silver Fox, even if he might need some viagra every now and then. :P

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 12, 2013 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I always know I am in for a wonderful time when ever a new chapter of this pops up ...its amazing every time wonderful writing great story

 
Mount Olympus by jakeward Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 230]
Summary: Feature

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Falling for your best friend is never easy. Asking your best friend to be in an unconventional relationship while fighting your feelings is something entirely different.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 91530
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2012 Updated: March 28, 2014


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Not Your Momma's Mythology

and so it begins ..issue 1..... sex is now on the table for discussion lol



Author's Response:

LOL- yup. On the table for sure! Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review! I hope you like the story.

Xo

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 25, 2012 Title: Chapter 13: Eros Unspoken is like a Minotaur in a China Shop

well thats just sad and painful and now I kind of want to cry ...shame on you

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 18: The Gorgon & Pandora's Box

i love the key story .oh please let him be alone and not have some mysterious house guest answer the door ...maybe we might even get a lemon next time ...I love your lemoms and it been a while ..right

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 17: The Aceron, The Cocytus, & The Styx

that was just too cool ...hoping our girls is at the door ...he needs a soothing touch

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: If the Gods Had Wifi

oh yea... that was a hell of a second chapter ...and a wonderful addition to  my boring monday ///cant wait to se how they are in the flesh together ...they can talk a good game on line ..lets see how they do with a few drinks and in the flesh



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the chapter! I hope you like it when they finally are together in the same room! ;)

xo

 
The Loving Kind by thimbles Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 120]
Summary:

 

 

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There were nine words on the square of paper.

Nine simple words that I have waited over a year to hear: "I was wrong. I miss you. I love you."

 

My biggest mistake was falling in love with Bella. My second was telling her.

 

Please be advised: this story contains language, sex and will deal with themes of severe depression and suicide.

 

My stunning banner was made by the amazing Frozen Soldier!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 76253
[Report This] Published: March 27, 2012 Updated: September 04, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Fear

i am just excited you have a new story i love reading you



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks so very much, my dear.

 

Shell x

 
Summary:

When celebrity life gets to Robert Pattinson, he takes a weekend to recharge his batteries and meet his all-time favorite author.  What happens when the author turns out to be nothing like he suspected.  RPF / Robert Pattinson / Romance / M-Rating

One Nightstand by Writing4Roses & SparklingWand - banner by Candykizzes24

 

Banner by candykissez24

 

One Nightstand by Writing4Roses & SparklingWand - banner by fallanydeeper

 

Banner by fallanydeeper

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Blinkie by: Raum


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 17492
[Report This] Published: May 02, 2012 Updated: May 12, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: One shot

well that was really hot ...i hope there will be more to come ...another mothers day treat ...how nice ...your always amazing s/w

 
Coming Home by Sarges Girls Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2048]
Summary:

Coming Home by Sarge's Girls

School teacher Bella sends a care package and letter to Army sergeant Edward, who is stationed in Afghanistan. They begin a relationship through letters, phone calls, and video chats. There's love, there's language, and there's adult situations, plus a strong, independent Bella and the Edward we all know and love.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 176 Completed: Yes Word count: 253104
[Report This] Published: June 03, 2012 Updated: August 16, 2014


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 05, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: Chapters 3 & 4: Bella & Edward

here is me feeling guilty over my morning trip to ///////////starbucks .....they seems to enjoy their chats ...here is hoping she sends him a pillow case with her favorite perfume on it ...talk about sweet dreams



Author's Response:

Hehe We'll see. ;) Thanks!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 107: Chapter 108: Edward

the two weeks are almost gone ....my whole book club was betting that she would go home but with some kind of ring on her finger ....maybe we should have a little talk with our beloved Sarge and she what he has up his sleve



Author's Response:

Hehehe No... No ring yet. :) He hasn't even met her father yet, and that would be important to both him & Charlie. ;)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 5: Chapters 5 & 6: Bella & Edward

thank you for the pillow case ....its a know fact smells can create a comfort that not even the softest cottton can create .the  peace it gave me knowing when his head rested at night with the comfort of soft sweet smells and dreams of home and the memory of the sweet girl that sent it .....simple everyday pleasures we never think about ...they are giving him somthing to hold on to ...this story is amazing



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :) We so appreciate it. :)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 23, 2012 Title: Chapter 173: Chapter 174: Epilogue

WHAT A BEAUTIFUL WAY TO END THIS ....ITS HAS OWNED ME SINCE THE FIRST CHAPTER ...KNOWING THAT THERE IS LOVE OUT THERE LIKE THAT ....I HOPE YOU ARE PLANNING ANOTHER WONDERFUL TALE ....I WILL MISS MY DAILY DOSE OF UNDYING LOVE AND HAPPINESS    

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 8: Edward

THE LETTERS FLOW SMOOTH BETWEEN THEM ....YOU CA FEEL THE BOND GROWING WITH EACH LETTER ...THIS STORY IS SO CALMING AND FULL OF HOPE ..KNOWING HE HAS NO ONE BREAKS MY HEART 



Author's Response:

Thank you! Yeah, it was kind of heartbreaking for us to write, too! :)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 7: Bella

OH GOD ...I CAN IMAGINE HOW HE FEELS OVER THERE SHE WAS MAKING ME HUNGRY ...BEST THING ABOUT LA.... IN AND OUT BURGERS ....BUT MY OWN GRILL GIVES THEM ALL A RUN FOR THE MONEY ..ESPICALLY ON BOOK CLUB NIGHT WHEN WE COOK OUT...WE MEET ON FRIDAY AND I AM SO EXCITED TO BRING THEM YOUR STORY THEY WILL LOVE IT AS MUCH AS I DO



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 142: Chapter 143: Bella

here is sending my love and respect to you ....this story is the high light of each morning I know you keep the drama to a minimum...but i keep waitng for the other shoe to drop...I cant wait to see how he like what she did with his stuff and see what our Charlie thinks of him ...and if that b----h of an x shows u on his door step for one last try to get him back ....I am so excited ...and please a 4 chapter day soon ...i have been really good

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 11, 2012 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 10: Edward

OH!!!!! SKYPE ....THAT WILL BE SO EXCITING TO READ ....I HOPE SHE TELLS THE GIRLS AND THEY BABIE HER UP FOR HIM SEEING HER WILL BE THE ICING ON THE CAKE FOR HIM I THINK I KNOW IF I SAW HIM AND HIS BEAUTIFUL GREEN EYES I WOULD BE IN LOVE AT FIRST SITE /////OR BOY IS A HOTTIE



Author's Response:

Hehe She will, and they will. ;) Thank you!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Chapter 84: Edward

or we can all just sit her just like this and wait for the word next to appear ....and your going to post how early ..sex with my breakfast ...I will strap my self to  the bar stool and just sit here and wait .....and wait ...and wait .....

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 171: Chapter 172: Edward

SARGENT PEPPER ....CUTE .....PLEASE NOT YET ,,,DONT ...END THIS i WILL HAVE NOTHING TO LOOOK  FORWARD TO EVERY MORNING ......BUT HE DID NOTICE   AHHH

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 170: Chapter 171: Bella

I REALLY THOUGHT HE WAS GOING BACK IN FOR THE PUPPY ...BUT HE MUST NOT OF NOTICED HER BEING SO EXCITED ABOUT THE KITTEN

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 59: Chapter 60: Edward

ph god i don't know whem  I have been more excited ...for him getting home safe and her ...well she about to meet her forever

 




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