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Sins of my Past by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1934]
Summary:

Banner by the awesome angelgoddess1981!  You rock babe!

Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?

TwifanfictionRec's - Top 10 Favourite Fics - October 2012


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 91 Completed: Yes Word count: 421991
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2011 Updated: January 14, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Velathri

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I wonder who said that Dreams are the window to the soul ...??????.....at least her sleeping mind wants him needs him desires him ....lets just hope that it bleeds into her waking mind ...I was so hoping that thats was real and he siad all thies things to her ...but its a start and just the thought of her thinking of him that way makes me smile ...we all kbiw the heart wants what the heart wants     .......he wont burn that letter will he ??????on mo he needs to get her to listen ......and whats up with the stranger in her bed ....it can't be Edward can it he is swith Carlie >>>>>oh not another week with me going crazy trying to figure things out

 

 

 

 

 

i wonder who said that dreams are



Author's Response:

Answer to at least one question already up for you!

Marcus POV sent directly

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 29: Family

this is such a happy time for them all i am hoping Carlie went out to call her dad and keep him in the loop ...since he is not included in the famliy gathering I bet he is about to bite his fingers off ..so by that your saying its going to be bad right ...i want happy again ..but i refelect to your briliant crazy mind ..so hit me do your worst ...she can see and I am happy

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 06, 2012 Title: Chapter 49: Prison and Jail Birds

well with 5 at home I know what being busy is ...happy mothers days to you ...where do you find the time ...and then write this beautiful story ....I wonder if it somthing silly like glow in the dark condoms ....that would be emmett ..I am glad they are young enough to give carlie a sibling ..that would be wonderful if they are are every able to get past his rules of earning her trust back ...she may have to be a little more insistant with him



Author's Response:

:)  I promise they'll make headway!  It's coming...

For now, I'm sending Esme/Carlisle to you directly!

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 64: Meadow

Please dont you ever again feel the need to explaine yourself or the plot line you follow ...my dear you have had my heart since the first chapter ...there are evil spite full people out there that reak havoc on other lives and this story has been a wonderful expression of that ....that it relates to the sorrowful drama going on in the lives of 2 people gives me hope that maybe they can get past this like our couple here is trying to do ...I LOVE THIS STORY AND AM A HUGE FAN OF YOUR WRITTING ....THIS CHAPTER WAS PERFECT

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 27: Fences

your story  contains a wonderful mix of emotions and though i want to get right to the heart of the matter only reading B/E there are so many other factors that need to be added to make the story well rounded just hoping for a HEA



Author's Response:

I promise it is moving quickly to it now.  ;)

Demetri sent to you directly.

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Green Eyed Monster

WELL I THINK THAT IT WENT WELL ...WE KNEW IT WAS NOT GOING TO BE ALL SUNSHINE AND PUPPIES RIGHT...BUT CARLIE IS A BRIGHT GIRL AND SHE CAN SEE THE LOVE IN HER FATHERS EYES FOR HER MOTHER ...AND MOST YOUNG CHIDREN HAVE A DREAM OF THEIR PARENTS BEING TOGETHER   LETS HOPE SHE IS HAVING THAT DREAM SOON



Author's Response:

HA!  Well, it might not be immediate, she still has to rake him over the coals.  ;)

Rose sent to you directly.

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 14, 2012 Title: Chapter 32: Orders

SHE DIDNT HURT HER EYES DID SHE ????   THAT WAS KIND OF SNEEKY ON HER PART I SURE HOPE SOMEBADY CAN FIX THIS MESS ....OH THAT WOULD BE YOU RIGHT

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Directives

and we all say ... that was a shitty place to stop ..we may all die in antisapation of what will happen next

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 13, 2012 Title: Chapter 50: Receiving

I was praying that soon em would let him know that the braclet they both cherished so much  was not lost forever ....after everything today ....this really brough out the tears.... happy tears .....with a promise of healing them both

this was amazing



Author's Response:

:)  Hopy your Mother's and Grandmother's day was good!

Samantha sent directly to you!

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 35: Directives

well last chapter I really though my heart would break . but knowing the damage the gun did to him i did not have high hopes for recovery but after the harsh words from his daughter and his loss of hope that B was finally happy and knowing the dark place his mind was in ....he must of heard her through all the pain ..knowing he is  loved  and wanted by thse 2 women in his life would give him a fierce desire to get well ...and thank you for getting this chapter out in time for our book club tonight we have a all been holding our breath for  news of an update

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Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 22, 2012 Title: Chapter 63: Union

the nurse in me wants to yell at the both of them to rest but the romantic in me says oh hell yea ....again ......

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 68: Everything

I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER FOREVER ...THE REGRET DRIPPING FROM THIS GIRLS HEART ..SHE NEEDED TO GET IT OUT ...TO LET HIM KNOW HOW ANGRY SHE WAS THAT HE SHOVED HER MOTHER OUT OF HIS LIFE ...AND NOW THEY ARE REALLY READY TO BE A FAMILY  ...THIS WAS WONDERFUL

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 33: Peace

OMG THAT WAS INTENSE ....AND  OF COURSE I HAVE TO CRY FOR A MINUTE BEFORE I CAN RESPOND .....AND YOU KNOW I THINK HIS DUMB ASS WOUND BE AT PEACE KNOWING  THE TWO WOMEN HE LOVE MOST IN THE WORLD ARE SAFE AND HAPPY ...AND THAT HE WAS ABLE TO STEP IN AND MAKE SURE THAT THE EVIL WAS GONE FROM THEIR  LIVES..... CARLIE WILL NEVER FORGIVE HERSELF IF THE LAST WORDS SAID TO HER FATHER WERE FILLED WITH HATE ....ALICE IS PROBALLY IN SHOCK ....AND I HOPE THAT THIS WAS NOT THE END FOR HIM I WILL BE HERE BITING MY NAILS ALL DAY WAITING

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Roses and Freesia

he is trying we have to give him that much lets just hope its not a little to late



Author's Response:

:)  Yeah...long road to travel.  Hopefully the next chapter will help a little! ;)

outtake sent directly

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 12, 2012 Title: Chapter 73: Nirvana

but where is sam ...who took her ...when are you gonna let us in on what happened

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Cold Hard Facts

so I was right her fall at the hands of alice blinded her ....and of corse Tanya knew some one should really kill that bitch off once and for all but even if jake is so not  my favorite his presence is easier to take if he is married to someone else .......and we know even if his sins are in vast numbers she always forgives him ....right.......so lets focus her ....and she what dr. cullen Sr can do to right this medical condition



Author's Response:

:) HA!  Its all coming - promise.  But the fall is not at the hands of Alice - you'll see. 

Outtake send privately.  Content1

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 15, 2012 Title: Chapter 44: Whiplash

even I feel good after her talk with jake he will alwys hold the daddy card for her he holds all her child hood secrets in his heart ...but there are many new memories  to be be had with dad growing up and moving on into a new blended family life with mom and dad   ..its all good and sam 2 ...almost make you want to be adopted by them  

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 83: Unafraid

this has been like riding the waves of a hurricane leving me breathless and quaking but I have enjoyed every word whether it made me laugh or cry ..such a beautiful story

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 69: Five Reasons

this has been an amazing ride and I have enjoyed each and every word ...this was wonderful i hate to see it end

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 30: Seth Outtake

well kudo to jake for raising such a smart and thought ful child.... children see the truth clearly they are born without  blinders on  they see into the heart and want the heart to be happy .....edward is what makes  bellas heart happy ...carlie wants this for them you can tell and hearing her mom call out for him will make her double her effort to see it happen make it happen   seth want carlie to be happy too ...he will help her make this happen   a lovely chapter I though it might be lacking but it was full of hope and promise

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 47: Need

this story owns me and I have been dying for them to head in the direction of forgiveness .....well forgivness for her... redemption for him ...and acceptance for Carlie

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 28, 2012 Title: Chapter 36: SOMP Outtakes Chapter 35

THE FACT THAT HEE EVEN WOKE UP IS AMAZING THE FACT THAT HE IS SO CONFUSED IS UNDERSTANDABLE CAUSE HE THOUGHT HE WAS DEAD  HEARING HIS ANGEL  CALL HIM AND BEING CALLED DADDY BY HIS LITTLE GIRL AND PAIN WELL I BET HE FEELS LIKE A TRAIN WENT THROUGH HIM   HOPE WE ALL HOPE FOR THE BEST THE THING WITH THE BRACELET MADE ME CRY KNOWING HE WENT BACK TO FIND IT AND SEEEING HOW MUCH EMMETT LOVES THEM BOTH

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: SOMP Outtakes Chapters 26-31

this was so kick ass i never saw any of it coming 40 cal close range i know the odds but i have hope his death will kill his daughter send bella back into the darkness of her pain ...we need hope here the  praying thing crushed me but i will pray with them if it helps

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Forgiveness

to carry that heavy of a burden all that time know in that one act she was the one to distroy all thoes lives ...but it is al  in the past now and all  has been forgiven ....i wonder what E will think  of the painting ......now for more of that

HEA you promised

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Carlie

I am one of those fans who is truely devoted to each and every story I read since like many I have such a busy life and such limited free time I  have a certian kind of story I hunt for and this subject matter is my favorite ... the plot in your first chapter was filled with pain and regret I really enjoyed all the angst but you really made the I HATE Edward meter go off the chart .....and trust me it really hard to do ....we have a Twilght book club with 18 members and we try each week to bring a new book and a twi fan fic to read and share each week i found this story and I was so impressed with the graphic art work for the banner I had to share this with them and they were as equally impressed .....that he choose to listen to Tanya over her was bad that his family joined in with him was terrible that she was hurt by Alice (I hope she was not blinded by her fall) well that hate meter just keeps going up ...but that she goes on and paints a loving picture for a daughter he will never know so she won't hate him for not loving her enough and abandoning her I really just want to cry then help jake hit him or let Emmett have at him for a few ....so i am hooked and so is my whole book club   wonderful job  this story  is amazing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Your review was just too kind.  Feel free to email me any questions!  I hope I can keep you and your club intrigued.  Jake will get a little piece of him soon!  ;)  

Just remember.  Not all is as it seems.   I sent the next outtakes to you directly!

April  aka content1

 

 




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