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Sins of my Past by content1 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1948]
Summary:

Banner by the awesome angelgoddess1981!  You rock babe!

Bella was left by Edward to clean up the ruins of her life after his betrayal. What happens when Edward finds out that not all was as it seems. What are the consequences of his sins and what will he do to get her back?

TwifanfictionRec's - Top 10 Favourite Fics - October 2012


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Leah, Rosalie, Seth
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 92 Completed: Yes Word count: 431753
[Report This] Published: September 30, 2011 Updated: February 10, 2015


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: SOMP Outtakes Chapters 26-31

this was so kick ass i never saw any of it coming 40 cal close range i know the odds but i have hope his death will kill his daughter send bella back into the darkness of her pain ...we need hope here the  praying thing crushed me but i will pray with them if it helps

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 03, 2012 Title: Chapter 70: Forgiveness

to carry that heavy of a burden all that time know in that one act she was the one to distroy all thoes lives ...but it is al  in the past now and all  has been forgiven ....i wonder what E will think  of the painting ......now for more of that

HEA you promised

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Carlie

I am one of those fans who is truely devoted to each and every story I read since like many I have such a busy life and such limited free time I  have a certian kind of story I hunt for and this subject matter is my favorite ... the plot in your first chapter was filled with pain and regret I really enjoyed all the angst but you really made the I HATE Edward meter go off the chart .....and trust me it really hard to do ....we have a Twilght book club with 18 members and we try each week to bring a new book and a twi fan fic to read and share each week i found this story and I was so impressed with the graphic art work for the banner I had to share this with them and they were as equally impressed .....that he choose to listen to Tanya over her was bad that his family joined in with him was terrible that she was hurt by Alice (I hope she was not blinded by her fall) well that hate meter just keeps going up ...but that she goes on and paints a loving picture for a daughter he will never know so she won't hate him for not loving her enough and abandoning her I really just want to cry then help jake hit him or let Emmett have at him for a few ....so i am hooked and so is my whole book club   wonderful job  this story  is amazing



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!  Your review was just too kind.  Feel free to email me any questions!  I hope I can keep you and your club intrigued.  Jake will get a little piece of him soon!  ;)  

Just remember.  Not all is as it seems.   I sent the next outtakes to you directly!

April  aka content1

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 20, 2012 Title: Chapter 34: SOMP Outtakes Chapters 26-31

THIS JUST ABOUT KILLED ME ...HOW LONG TILL WE GET THE NEXT CHAPTER I NEED TO SEE HOW LONG I CAN HOLD MY BREATH

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Karma

well I think that went well at least no one was arrested or killed but they are right the seed was planted so just let it grow maybe through how the family treats Carlie  bella will see a change in the man he has become maybe if she sees that there was a force beyond all of there control guiding this disaster she will forgive some of the family someday   what he did was horrible and the fact that he believed tayna over her and then refused to listen to her pleas   he is getting a taste of what she got 14 years ago 

 

this story has me on the edge of my seat



Author's Response:

:)   I must say that Edward is very aware of his sins!  :)  Yes he is paying the piper already.

outtake sent directly

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Love Surrendered

ok I admit ..... my feeling over this are all over  the place with this Farce ....she is no where ready to deal with Edward on any level other than him being the father of her child  right now ....and it would make the rest of the matchmaking friends back off thinking she is ready to move forward with some one ....but....what if.....he forgets this is only a game and falls in love with her when we all know her heart is still in the hands of edward ....what if this news of thr new budding releationship ....which we know is bound to happen ...lands opon Edwards ears ?????  it will effect him clear to his soul ...i think he plans on the whole package mother and child   ....how much further will this break him ....really how much more pain can he take before it becomes too much for him to bear ?????I can't stand to see him any more broken .....i hope his happy times with his daughter will be enough for now ....god girl your killing me with this  .....and you know I really want then together E/B that is ....



Author's Response:

:)  JUST hang in there with me...

Nothing comes without work...

Felix sent to you directly.

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Welcome

well that was a wondeful start off to there first meeting ....i wonder if Bella kept her old photos of the two of them she seems like the type to have a show box full of memories hidden in the top of her closet ....full of memories and pieces of her broke heart ...well how about we go get the gorilla glue out and start putting some of that broken heart back toghther....... sounds like esme is planing a mission capture Bella bring her back home ....when she finds out what happened to Alice she is going to be devastated .......looks like our Carlie is fitting right in ....Emmett has enough love to fix them all



Author's Response:

You know she has to have some...just hidden away...not even seen since the whole fiasco...

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Regrets

the pain she went through will take a lot of healing and the story is the journey they take while trying to mend the break he caused i love every word  i hope ypou don't change your path



Author's Response:

Working hard to get there...as soon as the beta returns, I'll get it posted.  :)

Carlie POV sent to you directly

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Deceit

why is it every other person involved her can see and hear how much he still loves her i think even Carlie know that its the real deal ....but that is one bull headed female  and its gonna take a ton of bricks falling on her head for her to get a clue ....this game she is playing with the new man in her life is not sitting well with anyone is it  ?

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Wrong

Emmett never fails to make me smile ...he has done something no one else ca to give her comfort and make her smile

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: White Christmas

that was the perfect gift and it did not even need a bow



Author's Response:

Probably better than a bunch of the gifts I got!  ;)

Aro sent to you directly

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 37: Confessions

i live to see an update of this story ...and am so excited that they made their declaration to each other it will help speed up his healing process

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 19, 2012 Title: Chapter 39: Beginnings

how absolutly perfect ...they are never going to make it ...good thing they are in  the hospital with prying eyes all about ..or that spong bath could have cause him a hugh set back ...feed him his soup and give him a few days and he will be locking the door ...I love that she was so jelous ...i wish we could have seen Carlies reaction to seeing her there ...and thinking she was tring to win her dads affection from her mom I bet the real claws would have come out



Author's Response:

Snicker...yeah...Carlie is a little more reactive than Bella.  Ah...the joys of youth.

Aro and Tanya to you directly!

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 26, 2012 Title: Chapter 40: Thawing

i read your last out take and i was amazed by it even if it chilled me to the bone ...Tanya's evilness know no bounds    ...I think we will find D will have met his match in elizabeth .......and if jake is willing to be nice well i would say Edward is golden

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 30, 2012 Title: Chapter 41: SOMP Demetri Outtake

my god there are so many twists and turns going down this road you shold offer dramine for the  trip ....his character just keeps getting deeper and deeper

 
Summary:


This story will be removed September 15, 2013, so if you want a copy, please get one soon!

There is danger in pursuing what your heart desires. A seductive and mysterious stranger leads Bella into a path of unsettling self-discovery. How much can she sacrifice to find out what she wants, what she needs? AH Darkward BxE Sexual Themes

 

 This awesome banner by PawsPeaches


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 84250
[Report This] Published: November 05, 2011 Updated: June 18, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 04, 2012 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

no fight for this ....this story is hot and sexy and brings out the tingle of fear i feel for her ...I have a feeling that they neither one will come out of this night the same ...how can you go back to plain old plain after having the delux version

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 07, 2012 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

here is hoping I can hold my breath till the next chapter ...this is riviting

 
Summary:

Edward left Bella almost a year ago, upending her whole world. What happens when Bella receives a phone call that just might shatter it? "Wait, Alice…Edward is dying?" I choked out.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 74206
[Report This] Published: November 11, 2011 Updated: March 13, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: As Long As We're Here

i took this story to book club with me to share and every had just about the same idea that he left because he did not want to burden her with his illness he may of thought that his tumor was cancer he left her right after his MRI assuming it was really bad news he went home for his parents to care for him and let her go so she could learn to move on when he died ...but by his phyical actions he stillwasnt ready to tell her the truth ...this turn of events just blew my mind so I don't know what to think now ....and your saying next week it be more drama   yikes

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 01, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: I Won't Let You Go

i spent a while in the medical library at work looking up this condition ...15 months to five years prognosis ...then i saw that this story  is based on you and what you have been through ...if your husband is this story ...my god ... i am so sorry you have to go through this ...most information suggest go to he mayo clinic .... if he is still with you ...if not ...my heart is with you ....you story will be  our topic at book club this friday ...we have a thing we do 20 questions ...everbody submits 1 and if you get all 20 right you win the door prize ....i reread the story to find the correct answers ....just unsure  of one ...how many weeks is she in the story ....i went through and i come up with 14 or 15 weeks ....since you are alwys one to respond I thought i would ask ...question..... how many weeks was she when she told him while she thought he was asleep ??????

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 31, 2012 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter Fourteen: I Won't Let You Go

so well ....shit ....I have been dying with antisipation for days now ...telling him while he was asleep ...coward...but maybe she thought she was doing a pratice run before she had the courage to do it for real ...please tell me you have another chapter ready i will die until i know if he is upset with the news ...main concern during book club was since he was taking meds for his condition will it efffect the fetus is there danger for the baby or was he post op enough for there not to be any side effects ...and shit is he happy about this news when his life is so uncertain   i have about a hundred more questions ...I could keep going ...or you could give me answeres in another chapter soon ....this is my way of begging without looking stupid

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 24, 2012 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Thirteen: Rescue Me

I think I would like to scream ....when I see an up date notice I think its a new chapter but its the one i read on ff ...i will die if you dont up date soon...what happened to him if you let him die i will never forgive you ...i have almost no nails left ...

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Not Enough

i know thats not what we all wanted to hear but she has been hurt beyond what her heart can take ..they need to get to  ground zero where all the bullshit ends I can't imagine being hurt  like that and still being able to breath but she got through all that and came to be at his side and was there for the whole family while her heart was still tender from the beating she took from him leaving her he need to be honest with her no more bullshit games ...I want to cry with her ..but I am afraid its going to get worse huh ....looks like he moved on with some one else ....but the sex ...and the pain maybe space will help her ...I dont want her to go either but how will he stop her what could hew do or say to make her stay and listen to him  ....

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Chains

first I want to say I am really sorry you don't have hundreds more reviews ...this is a wonderful story ..well writen and easy to ready and esentially heartbreaking ...he is so mean to her ... but having lived through a husband with a brain tumor I know why he acted this way ...to save me from having to care for him as an invalid or worse while he lay dying ....luck for me I ran into our Insurance agent who told me he had made sure his life Insurance was up to date so i would be taken care of after he was gone ....so i went after him and brought him home despite personality changes and fits of anger and finally death ..his was cancer .....and i know no matter what he said or what he does she won't quit  loving him  ..she may need to go back and regroup to make her self strong again to be able  to tolorate his bitcheyness but even if she goes she will take the love for him away in her heart .....is she really going yep I bet she will she need s to go to think and to remember what there love was and to check to see if she has the  strength to hold on till he is whole again ....my book club thinks he left to spare her pain but I think while they may be on to something there is some other reason he was so mean to her when she came to see him    ....we shall see right   until next chapter

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter Six: Don't You Remember

MASEN IS THE NAME OF THE MNA IN HER BOOK HUH .....AND THATS JELOUSY I WOULD KNOW THAT ANY WHERE

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: We All Need Saving

I THINK I WOULD DIE IN PAIN BEING THAT CLOSE TO SOMEONE I LOVED SO MUCH AND COULD NOT REACH OUT TO HIM FOR FEAR OF REJECTION

 




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