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Summary:

After a business arrangement leads to marriage, Bella is shocked to find her husband wishes for her to give him an heir. Will Bella consent in hopes that he will return the love she has for him or will she leave before her heart is beyond repair?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 65991
[Report This] Published: August 04, 2011 Updated: September 21, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

well this is a step in the right direction they both seem to want the same thing now ....he said they both only showed affection in the bedroom then the masks went back on ....we all kind of want to  see what kind of face they put on if they are out of that bedroom ...lets say in the car on the way home from diner how bad would he freak out if she drug him into the back set of his car and took him ....he would probally ahve a heart attack   lol   just thinking out loud

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

baby steps   I hope she sees how hard it is for him to be so open and hinest with her and a child would be the one thing I think could melt his outer shell and let her in   i hope she will try



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Baby steps is definitely the key - they have much more work to do :-)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

well maybe this is the only way he is able to show her he wants and need more for their relationship to want to have a life long bond with her like a child should  send up a flag that he may want to be in this for the long haul cause with him being the king of over thinking  he knows that a commitment like this is forever and can't be reviewed on an annual basis

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

and that i am totaly with her on this ...go home tell him to tear up the agreement and be a real man and wife or pack and leave  or wait  to see what jem you have come up with my money  is on you   

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

ouch i felt  that from here

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

ok I admit it I relly thought when he did notanswer the door right away that a woman would answer  good I so glad I was wrong

 
The Walls of Dreaming by hmu Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 302]
Summary:

Edward left Bella in a misguided attempt to save her. Years later, Bella crosses paths with the Cullen family during her University studies and her world is turned upside down with the potential of her love's return and a renewed danger that threatens to end it all. Will Edward have to save her, or will she manage to save herself?

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Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
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Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 124132
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2011 Updated: March 22, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Nine: At My Most Beautiful - Gray Matters - Cracking

GOOD LETS HOPE ALICE CAN SEE SOMETHING OE ESME HEARS THROUGH THE GRAPEVINE THAT SHE WAS HURT AND I HOPE WHEN SHE SAID SHE HAD FAMILY SHE MEANS THE CULLENS



Author's Response:

Nah, when she said she had family she was just lying out of desperation :) But I truly hope the Cullens can become family for her again :) 

Thanks so much for reading! 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One: Freefall / Restless / Unaware

i love that despite the pain and emptyness he left her with you made her strong enough to rebound....we all have that one experience that leaves us weak and helpless ...him leaving her caused every one pain just watching her fall into dispair with out the strength to try again this story...... show has that fire we all know she had in her ......its neat that you use this location i live near the campus and work  for a branch of upmc maybe i will check on bella and let the cullens know how bad she was hurt and mabye they could visit..... Edward needs all the help he can get  ...big team edward fan here ......i love the pet names you have created for them that is so different .....when edward finds out she was so close to taking her life   well  a angry edward is a hot edward   right



Author's Response:

Wow, I almost missed this one because I hadn't checked for reviews on earlier chapters. I'm so glad I looked! Thank you so much! (and it's always awesome to have a 'burgher reading! Please keep in touch as the story progresses—I love to find out when folks recognize all the places I reference! 

 

Thanks again for reading! 

-Mella

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: Viva la Vida or Death and All His Friends

well at least we know Emmett will get a big kick out her MC and her climbung gear   not so sure how E will handle the danger she puts her self in  she will have to forgive Alice or she will drive her nuts

 
Summary:

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A jilted bride and a jilted groom decide to go on their respective honeymoons.  When fate brings them together at the same resort in the Bahamas, how much will they have in common besides broken hearts?  Can you start over on your honeymoon?  What do they each bring to the table?  It all starts with a white bikini…where will it end?

 

 

 

AH/Canon couples.  NC-17 for a reason (I mean, it’s me for crap’s sakes!).  Language (again, it’s me).  Shifting perspectives, and unusual twists.  Who doesn’t love a beach getaway?

 

 

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 57554
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2011 Updated: October 20, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Lure of a White Bikini

what a unusual way to meet  but they seem to have a connection of sorts and the honest way they talk to  each other might be something worth looking into

I sure hope there will be wild honeymoon sex involved here

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - History Repeating Itself

WAY TO GO ALICE YOU GET YOUR DREAM WEDDING FOR FREE AND YOU GET YOUR BEST FRIEND AND HER HUSBAND BACK TOGETHER YOU GO GIRL

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - The Rest of the Story

oh yea I would do that and fast

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Another Bride...Another Groom

+well I wonder what he will have to go through to get the ring back >>>>she will want to see im one on one I bet seems fate is trying to throw wood chip onto  this fire I hope they both steer clear of the smoke and they trust each other for one more week

 
Summary:

He thought he had it all. The perfect job, the perfect house, the perfect girl, the perfect life. After almost five years together, she can no longer stand by and be taken for granted. She warned him...and now she's left him. Sometimes being in love isn't always enough.

Hang on for the ride!

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***Rated for language and sexual content.***

Inspired by the song "She Wouldn't Be Gone" by Blake Shelton. Take a listen.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
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Chapters: 19 Completed: No Word count: 69188
[Report This] Published: August 15, 2011 Updated: December 19, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 24, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12 :: Show Me

i don't think it was just the sex ...allthough it was amazing they both need to connect on that basic level that only people in love can make  ok so lets see if they can both open their mouths at the same time with out one of them yelling and another round of hot lets  make up sex would be ok with me



Author's Response:

LOL Yes they did...let's see where it leads shall we? ;) xoxox

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue :: Gone

not saying anything should change but my sister was 32 weeks and when we went for her 32 week ultra sound she had a smaller baby gril hidden  behind

the boy we already knew about we thought she was just getting  a really big baby ..... he will be the most over protective dad on the planet ...he will borrow one of charlies guns   lol



Author's Response:

Hmmm...decisions, decisions...lol  And Geez...I think I would have DIED to get that far in my pregnancy and THEN find out there were TWO?!?!  Yeah, they'd have to peel my ass off the floor!!  lol

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue :: Gone

Big Fan of yours thats why I am here ....love it when I am on the ground floor of a new story love to be on of the first reviws you get this is a switch up its usually him that walks away     so i am ready for this new tale so go ahead and wow me



Author's Response:

You're so awesome!!  Thank you!!  No pressure huh?  lol  xoxox

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 :: Space

oh at least i feel better now  my heart has been aching all week this is hope I am feeling right not some false sense  of secutiry you have lured me into before you kick my feet out from under me right



Author's Response:

Awe!  lol  Ok, maybe the next chap will help you heal your heart!!  xoxox  I'm not THAT mean!!  :)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 :: Deep Trouble

I wanted a boy but this is ok too.....next time maybe ......if you see him we better get photos   you lucky girl



Author's Response:

Girl is was SO close! (& there were 87 votes!) I even debated a while on the idea of twins with all the requests...but it didn't play into what was already written. ;) And Holy Mother Of GOD...if I get pics...let's just hope I have enough brain power left to make my flight home! LOL Thanks babe!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 :: Fight or Flight

well I am no expert on grand justures but he has chased her called everyone she knows  to find her........ begged and pleaded with everyone who will listen to him  .....

and after seeing his memories of her he always seemed to tell her he loved  her ...but we all know how hormones work and i dont thik she wants just words so   think man think ...i just hope what Charlie said to her is sinking in right now  ..take her to the medow and show her how much you love her and want this new life with her ....show her you want to be a husband and father first ...just don't have a melt down when it all hits you husband and father  ...that the next step in this drama



Author's Response:

LOL Thanks so much!!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 ­:: Crazy Dreams; Sordid Reality

no i know you would never kill our joy that way ...but I was still amess for days waiting



Author's Response:

So sorry to leave you a mess!!  I hope you're resting better now!! xoxox

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: October 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13 :: Don't Fight It

boy or girl  lets have a boy first    then work on the girl next ....



Author's Response:

LOL  Thanks so much!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 :: Home

ok so whats in the box ......still a mystery       .......where is bella ....still wont tell us

home   his home..... back to Forks   we love Alice she has such a big mouth  and we are so mad at you right  now but i know you can make it up to me  !!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I will, I will, I WILL make it up to you!!!  Promise!!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue :: Gone

or maybe it was an box with ovulation sticks and she had thought about having a baby and his constant working and ignoring  her were just to much for her..... any way you go you have me on the adge of my seat wondering what the heck is going on............... it must of been bothering her for a while for her to have spilled her guts to both Rose and her mom then took the time to plan to get away and he never even noticed  I know he was doing a good service  to the people and doing his job but his mate  probally felt lonely and left out of his life .....cause if she was having a baby she would I hope choose to have a solid home  running away would be so stresssful ....unless she is running to another man  oh then we will really be mad cause we dont like her when she cheats on our Edward no matter what he did  



Author's Response:

Hmm...theories, theories....I'll give you this...no cheating...promise!!  xoxox

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 :: Journey

I thought it was just perfect ...thats the first place I run to when ever I was hurt or afraid to my daddy he was always the voice of reason ...my mom she was always the voice of anger ...she would stay mad longer that I would  



Author's Response:

Yep me too. My daddy is my rock...but he's a lot like canon Charlie...gruff and to the point...no huge, deep conversations, which makes his words all that much more powerful when he does use them.  xoxox

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: September 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11 :: Gestures

yea he is every womans dream .....and if the sex happens we wont be mad right everybody      see I told you   will he buy bands for them I wonder   it might show her he is committed if he has a outward sign of his committment to  their marriage



Author's Response:

AHAHAHAHA!!!!  I think he may have a few tricks up his sleeve!!  ;)  XOXOX  Thank you so much for reviewing!!

 




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