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Lifted by Looby Luscious Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 416]
Summary:

Lifted

Thanks to the amazing frozensoldier for the banner

 

Bella Swan has lived in fear for five years. Her worst nightmare is just about to begin, but will the stranger beside her be able to lift her out of her terror and show her a brand new world?

WARNING: The rating for this story has been changed due to violence in later chapters. I am sorry if this affects some of my readers - I honestly didn't envisage it turning out quite like this when I started it!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 35648
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2010 Updated: May 11, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

oh I was almost afraid to open this chapter.....not knowing what danger she was facing from this man....and reading about r--e is not something I really care to do ...but this hunted thing  that was totally unexpected .....good for Charlie ...teaching her about the woods...   you always keep me trans fixed dying for the next chapter   oh and Edward  returning its always good ...maybe we can clear the tention between them up a little



Author's Response:

I have to say, this chapter just seemed to write itself. When I started this story, I didn't ever envisage this happening. I thought I would keep the tracker theme with James and started to wonder how things might have gone had the Cullens not been around in Twilight. Its just the kind of thing his twisted mind would dream up.

All will be well in the next chapter - Cuddleward is back!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

just wanted to tell you I have curled up with PUTP more times than i am willing to admit

I get long stretches of days off and while some people have comfort foods I have comfort reads that is one of my favorite ...her willingness to give up everything to let him have a full life and keep his family from disappointment in him was amazing ...when alice came back to help i was breathless when she was hurt I cried    when he has the one to save her   I cried harder ......HEA   ....I was as lost as you when it was over   but its all good  it brought us here and things are devoleping nicely    I never miss an update



Author's Response:

So you are the reason the read counter keeps going up!!! lol. I am more thrilled than I can say to hear you say that. And to think, it very nearly didn't get written! The first chapter was rejected and I misread the email. I thought it got rejected for loads of reasons and was all ready to ditch the whole thing. Then I re-read it and realised that it was only punctuation that was actually ticked. I scanned through it and resubmitted and the rest is, as they say, history!

I also think it's quite weird how stories end up having a life of their own. When I started writing this one, I didn't have much idea other than their becoming friends in the lift, and then not wanting to upset the status quo. The stalker just crept in there and suddenly I was in a totally different place! I hope this one hits all the right spots for you too!

Incidently, if I ever get round to publishing anything for real, I'll let you buy as many copies as you want!!! hehe

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 12, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

oh yea !!!!!    If i were you I would really go hide now.....well we know who and why now ...Oh God  poor Alice ....what she must of went thru ....but our rose is one smart cookie if she doesnt call her back she will panic and call back then i bet she will call to see if it was Edward at the door.......keeping in mind that good always win and our hero Edward always arives in time ......right he will arrive in time before that sick f--k gets a chance to scar her further  ....i just hope she has enough left to hold on and fight for her life ....sound like you have other plans for her....dont make her suffer   ah!!!!!   this is heartbreaking



Author's Response:

Digging a big hole right now! lol

James has grown up since he tormented Alice, but his need to inflict pain and fear have grown up with him. You see now why I had to put the rating up!

As to what else is going on, well you know me. I'm keeping mum about all that, but you will get your HEA, don't worry. Did you and the others guess that it was James in the end?

Anyway, poor Bella ... I did say in the intro that her worst nightmare was going to happen, and this is it!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

no that's a new one....lol     but I have a tiny little dog named  Cerburus and a hugh dog named Orthros ....big dog barks   very scary...little one will bite your leg off   I hope you notices your read count go up on PUTP...every time I turn  one of my coworkers on to fan fiction I suggest they read you first   and they love it like me ...but I am really getting into the intrigue into lifted and something that never happens  I DON'T HAVE A CLUE WHO IS AFTER HER   and I have read every thing you have posted x 2    but never fear I have a book club we meet friday and we are going to brain stom over your story then to see what we can come up with    ....so if you smell smoke   don't be alarmed it's just us all thinking at once LOL



Author's Response:

lol - I think my favourite dog names have to be Fluffy - big three-headed guard dog, and Fang, super soft coward from Harry Potter. Big dogs can be so much dafter than little ones. I think it's because they have nothing to prove.

I am flattered that you would recommend PUTP to your coworkers. I have noticed the count going up, and I occasionally get a new review too, which is fabulous. I shall have to start paying you commission soon for pimping me out!!!

My beta has just read the chapter of the big reveal and she said it was quite scary. The one after is even worse. As I suspected, I am going to have to raise the rating to R. (I never know what is moderate or mild.) Hopefully, it won't affect too many people.

Enjoy your book club, and say Hi to everyone from me!!!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

one thing about reviewing   I love the communication with the author as much as I do reding the story ...i love your characters...your last story well I was captured by them and i know now when you wite something new i willl always be pleased   I love a good drama and i am a faithful reader ....i so love your slow build ups



Author's Response:

You are a wonderful reviewer too! After Picking up the Pieces finished, I felt quite lost! It was as if I had met a whole load of new people and they had all disappeared, so I was thrilled when familiar names, like yours, began to pop up on this one. It was like a reunion!

It's so wonderful when people review, especially if they enjoy what you've written. It just makes me want to keep on writing!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

that is kind of scarey     my defence is a really big dog....and a reallylittle very loud one to they are a perfect security team  .......let him in you twit ..he just wants to keep you safe  .....



Author's Response:

That reminds me about a joke - stop me if you've heard it... (Oh you can't!)

A thief breaks into a house. As he is rummaging through the drawers a voice says "Jesus is watching you." He stops, thinking he has been caught, but then notices a parrot in the corner who then repeats, "Jesus is watching you."

He sneers and says, "I'm not scared of Jesus, Polly"

The parrot says "My name is Moses."

"What stupid people would call their parrot Moses?" he asked.

Just then a huge Rottweiler comes into the room. "The same ones that call their dog Jesus," replied the parrot.

 

Poor Edward - he should come round to me. I wouldn't say no!!!!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

you are such a tease.....bad girl.....you know i was expecting him to just show up....and  fix this .....I know the apin you are trying to show here I lost my dad and i have his house I know how hare it was to go theough boxes and drawers of a life time of memories ....but to do it with such a heavy heart ....putting the love of her father to rest at the same time trying to file away the love she has for E ...and this story is called Lifted because??????    i don't feel lifted I just want to cry and hold her I hope when she goes to the river to say goodbye to her painful loss of her father that there is someone ther to lift her     hint    hint    ignore me i enjoy crying chapter after chapter     LOL  oh god yes rose tell him draw him a damn map   help me out here our writter her is killing me slowly



Author's Response:

I have yet to have to go through that experience, so I can only try and sympathise. The nearest I can get is finding a box of stuff after my divorce and having to go through that.

She will be lifted eventually, but, as I'm sure you might guess, she has a bit more to go through yet. The river is going to bring her a lot of closure and peace. She'll need it.

I will try and update soon, but I have family staying all weekend, so getting to the computer for any length of time is going to be difficult. Sunday night might be the first opportunity I might have. :(

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

you know me I can forgive you anythimg....but her heart thinks it is doing the right thing

she loves him and she THINKS that that is something he would never want with her ...I bet she is wrong      please go to Emmett and Rose tell them yu love her back just as much rose might not bend but Emmett will ... follow her .....take off a few day go to her learn her past tell her you want to have a present and a futurw with her



Author's Response:

Have you been sneaking peeks at future chapters? lol

I think Rose might definately be a good place to go. Not saying any more!!!!

I love your comment about a past, present and future. If it wasn't already written, I might have pinched that for the story!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

i love the way you do the slow burn....just enough to keep it interesting i love your development of each character .....



Author's Response:

You are so quick off the mark! I only just got notification that it was up!!!

Glad you are still enjoying it. I have to warn you, things are going to go downhill for a while! Sorry :)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

this was a wonderful way to give them both a new begining.....and you know i will follow your storys anywhere



Author's Response:

Bless you! If I could give out stars for fans you would have hundreds! Only one more chapter and an epilogue to go though :( I hope you like the way it finishes.

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

i was having s wonderful time on a snowy day trapped inside and decidedto read putp i love that ....and read you  had other stories thought I would give this a try still reading enjoying my day



Author's Response:

Thank you for giving this one a try too! I am updating fairly regularly, so if you want to read on, you won't have to wait too long between updates. :)

I can't think of a better way to enjoy a snowy day!!!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I just bet that James and Jim will be one and the same...oh I hope he doesnt try to catch and tourture Bella like he did Alice   Edward will break more than his nose this time



Author's Response:

Not telling...not telling! My lips are sealed! lol.Hope you enjoy the way it pans out!!

 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

i loved his little comment about not stopping her from scratching him some place else 

oh my ....he is hot even stuck in the elevators    i love the way you develope there characters   they are so different than your last story  which I LOVE BY THE WAY AND WISH IT STILL HAD OUTTAKES UPDATING    but this is nice i like it so far

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

this is kind of getting scary who is bothering her....her x maybe stalking her ....maybe some one that is after edward an old flame   perhaps ....the black rose is a bad omen and the feather oh and thr phome calls     just keep updating  dying to know more   waiting on their first kiss so come on quit holding out on us



Author's Response:

Don't forget the missing hairbrush...and where is Rose these days?

No problem with the updating. It's all written, so I won't be abandoning you halfway through! But kisses...be patient!!!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

this is kind of getting scary who is bothering her....her x maybe stalking her ....maybe some one that is after edward an old flame   perhaps ....the black rose is a bad omen and the feather oh and thr phome calls     just keep updating  dying to know more   waiting on their first kiss so come on quit holding out on us

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i can nit ever imagine being hunted like that that was such a neat idea made my heart race but I am so glad someone helped save her from being brutilized and I reallyneed some edward...what that was stressfull



Author's Response:

Don't worry - Edward is back next!!!

Funny how a story runs away - I had no intention of writing a scene like that when I started! And of course, we had to have a wolf save her in the meadow when Edward wasn't around :)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

the holidays were wonderful...so now i can take a deep breath of relief she safe and he loves her ahh.......one more oh!!!!! pleas tell me there is something else brewing in that head of your    i d love to hear about it



Author's Response:

I just uploaded the last chapter today, then there is an epilogue and that's it :(

I have got a couple of stories in mind, but they are both vampire ones, The first is an AU Twilight, which was actually one of the first ideas I ever had, but I kind of got lost part way through. I have finished it in rough and have 10 chapters already beta'ed, so I will probably start putting it up before the summer.

The second one spans the wealth of human history. I have been quite excited about it, but I have told myself that I can't do anything with it until I finish Cimmerian Dawn. That hasn't stopped me writing a couple of chapters though!! lol

I am currently in a bit of a block and struggling to get through the chapter I am writing, but as soon as I figure it out, I'm home and dry!

I would be honoured if you would try them out. I know people have preferences about the stories they read, and I don't know if it's something you would normally look at.

I also have a oneshot that I have written for Fathers Day in June. A Charlie/Billy moment. I was quite pleased with how it turned out.

Hope you like the next chapter!!! x

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg i read every thing..but I have a soft spot for Bella had a baby after edward left her  stories....... i will never forget the banner i saw for PUTP I was a goner....I fell in love with that story & never looked back . i wanted them to use that little girl on your banner for the movie so bad ...but ....we shall see.....I hope you did something for the fandom for tsunimi....that is like the greatest deal in the world ...if not maybe you can join the next auction and i can bid on you to do a story I have great ideas just no time....i do 60 hours a week and 5 kids   i write laundry  list and shopping lists you write books    that ok your a pro   i love your work   and your charcter developement    



Author's Response:

That banner was something else, wasn't it? I couldn't believe it when Paula sent it through to me. Apparently she had so many people talking about that one - more than any other she's done.

I don't know anything about the fandom for tsunami. I see things from time to time on other stories, but I don't know how or where you get involved in something like that. Perhaps you could send me a link?

As for what you do, I think guiding five precious lives into adulthood is about as great as you can get. No-one will ever have a greater influence on them as you, and it's so hard to do it right. I only have one son, who is incredibly precious to me. Sometimes I wish I could do it all again and erase the mistakes I made, but in the end, you do the best you can. Make the most of every day you have with them. They grow up and leave you before you know it. :)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

please tell me you have another story in the wings ready to go... I am just lost with out your beautiful stories I will never feel the same about the elevatorr ever again  see you soon hoprfully



Author's Response:

I have, but they are both vampire ones. One is an AU Twilight, which is the one I shall be posting in a month or so called Cimmerian Dawn. It is all written in rough, 17 chapters in full of which 14 have been beta'ed, so it shouldn't be too long in coming.

The other one will be called the Vampyre Queen, but that is still in the early stages yet.

At least you have an epilogue to look forward to!

As for the elevator - oh to be stuck with Edward (or Rob Pattinson - I'm not fussy!!!)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

You know how much i will miss spending the day with you but ...as soon as your ready i will be first  in line to read the new work of art   soon.....



Author's Response:

Bless you! I look forward to seeing your name pop up.

I have finished typing the new story, so I just need the last half betaing, although a chapter I struggled to get through needs reworking. My lovely ladies said the writing was fine, but it needed more originality - too much like cannon at the moment, so back to the drawing board!! I'm waiting for inspiration to hit! Once I have that sorted, I shall start to post it.

Until then, take care!

x

 
Summary:

bannerEntry for the Scene Stealers contest.  After James phones Bella and tells her that he has her mother, she tells Alice about the call.  They pick up Edward as planned, and he takes her away to a remote cabin...


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8191
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2010 Updated: December 27, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

you hit the target dead on ...no fade to black or inuendo this was a perfect way to tell the story just a bit different



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! I'm so glad you liked it.

 
Disrepair by chy3 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary:

She had the perfect life. Perfect Job. Perfect house. Perfect husband and a baby on the way. She had it all. That is, until one singular moment took it all away...

A story about a love lost and the rocky journey to a new one through trying twists and turns of depression and the lows that go along with it. The path to love was never easy. 

[This is a Bella story. Eventual B/E. Rated M for dark themes and swearing. OOC. If you're not a fan of dark themes, including depression, thoughts of suicide, anything often accompanies depression, graphic descriptions, etc., then this story is not for you. There will be very, very little fluff. Move on if that is your thing.]

 


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Huge thank you to Readergoof for making me such an awesome banner!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Chelsea, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 93520
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2010 Updated: July 15, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Heaven

well that wasnt so bad ...they seem happy and excited to be having a boy



Author's Response:

That they are. :)

M.

 
Sexual Healing by wmrcaz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 263]
Summary:

Man-whore Edward Cullen is forced into seeing a therapist by his father. When he sees psychologist Dr. Isabella Swan to "deal" with his issues, sparks will fly. What will happen when the only woman Edward's ever really wanted is the one he can't have?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 129835
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2010 Updated: November 10, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

how bout that he does know how to  be on time



Author's Response:

He does, indeed... when it's important to him ;). Thanks for reading!!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Parlez and Parties

ah thats so not fair stopping here we are all dying to know what he has to say



Author's Response:

It may not be fair, but it's necessary. It wouldn't be fair to E to hear his story from B's POV. We need to be inside his head and hear his thought processes as well as his words for the full effect. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
A Toxic Lullaby by miralin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 182]
Summary:

After a twisted tale comes a toxic lullaby…

Edward admittedly needed a change in his life -  but when said change comes in the form of a temperamental toddler he is forced to turn to his ex for help. Can Special Agent Swan, with a past in law enforcement, find the rightful “owner” of the child. Does she even have to look that far?

THE WARNINGS FOR THIS FANFICTION HAVE CHANGED.  Please be advised that this story is rated NC-17 for language and content, including references to sexual exploitation (photography without consent) and sexual contact involving intoxication (lack of informed consent) that may be construed by some as sexual assault.  Reader discretion is advised.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 81604
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2010 Updated: March 11, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 -...and the result is in!

so what's next i guess we get to see some mad parenting skills right well this ought to be very interesting

 




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