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A Toxic Lullaby by miralin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 182]
Summary:

After a twisted tale comes a toxic lullaby…

Edward admittedly needed a change in his life -  but when said change comes in the form of a temperamental toddler he is forced to turn to his ex for help. Can Special Agent Swan, with a past in law enforcement, find the rightful “owner” of the child. Does she even have to look that far?

THE WARNINGS FOR THIS FANFICTION HAVE CHANGED.  Please be advised that this story is rated NC-17 for language and content, including references to sexual exploitation (photography without consent) and sexual contact involving intoxication (lack of informed consent) that may be construed by some as sexual assault.  Reader discretion is advised.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 81604
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2010 Updated: March 12, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 -...and the result is in!

so what's next i guess we get to see some mad parenting skills right well this ought to be very interesting

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Shaky Hands, Spinning Head, Racing Heart

sometimes with out an Alice there would be no story....with her ploting to get them together they don;t stand a chance ...i just hope the  child survives a few weeks with a bumbling  father and a mother who clearly has better raport with her hand gun than with a diaper ......and the mystery of the real mother ....you know I am hooked right??????



Author's Response:

Alice’s character is a hoot to write and so is Anthony's. Kids are more durable than we give them credit for! Edward needs to smarten up though, before that kid become a sugar addict for real!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - A pitbull terrier and a trembling Chihuahua

so Anthony is edward  and bellas baby right????????    oh please say right if not I will scream cause I feel like I am in the middle of a game of twister



Author's Response:

Nope sorry, Anthony is not Bellas child at all. But sometimes biology is just a minor detail.

 

Thank you for taking the time to rad and review!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 -Clueing in the Clueless

well we all know that you can not keep anything wawy from alice    so tell him already he will be fine with it one kid 3 kids he will be fine    his mama is gonna kick his ass

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Judgement day

oh my yes if he came to my door beging i give him the shirt off my back   lol

 
Summary:

All Human.  Bella gets knocked up during her senior year of high school, but Edward doesn't believe her.

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
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Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 96724
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2010 Updated: September 09, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well that was just too sweet but i just have not leared to trust him yet either what happens when Tanya finds out he has his own place and shows up and you know she will....... will his horney alter ego surface and his will power to have easy sex  surface

I hope he realizes that one more stike and she will write him off her list of future plans



Author's Response:

We'll have to see if Tanya shows up or not. I don't think she will, but you never know.  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I really would like to hear a conversation between james and Edward  james need to tell him that it was all lies   and maybe let him know just what a wondeful thing he messed up   maybe even that when he comes home on leave if bellas willing he would try to work things out with her    since the twins will need a father figure in their lives   bet that will put a fire under our boy  let him feels the jelousy of someone wanting o be everyhing to the family he was trying to throw away 



Author's Response:

that would be an interesting conversation! You never know, though, it may be coming down the road. no promises, though.

Thanks so much for reading! My One Shot, Honor Thy Father (which is here and on ff) has been nominated at the Single shot Awards. I would love it if you would please read and vote for me. http://thesingleshotawards.blogspot.com/

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

there are so many stories where she runs away never telling poor edward about the babay only for him to find out and become a wonderful daddy  this is just so different  i love it

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

well that was an absolutly wonderful chapter ...full of so much hope  for both of them I cant wait to see how she responds to his admission



Author's Response:

I can't, either!  Thanks so much for reading :)

 
Summary:

If there’s one thing Bella Swan knows for sure it’s this; she's a wreck. Living in the shadow of her father’s death has certainly taken its toll on her. With no family and her friends on the other side of the country, her therapist is the only person she can turn to. When she finds a broken, lost little girl hiding in the subway, can they be each other’s saving grace?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 45169
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2010 Updated: March 01, 2015


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

it seems like a life time ago that I stared to read this ....dant wait to see who her daddy will be ....but I have an idea  great story

 
Summary:

 

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What if the honeymoon scenes weren't just acting? Just a little more NC-17 Robsten lemony goodness inspired by Breaking Dawn filming. This time from Rob's POV.


Categories: Other Characters: Bella, Edward, Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Robsten Lemon Shots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2076
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

its thing like this that will keep us alll  dying till next november caue i really believe he would do just thst



Author's Response:

How will we survive until then? Fanfic I guess! ;)

 
Taking Flight by marissa64 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 273]
Summary:

Taking Flight Banner

I just wanted to get home from my latest business trip.  But with layovers and flight delays, it was taking much longer than I had planned.

What could I do to occupy my time? A quick trip to the airport shop and a conversation with a stranger and my whole outlook on things took a turn for the better.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 173209
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2010 Updated: November 08, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Call Back

i could never imagine meeting him in person ......my  boyfriend braved the crowds when he was filming WFE... i got my people magazine signed   and yes gah!!!!!that would be my  choice of comments    this is lovely by the way

 
Do Over by tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 304]
Summary:

Do Over Banner

Every Christmas Eve, Edward Cullen sits in a bar and regrets the decision he made ten years earlier that tore Bella from him. But when a chance encounter with a mysterious stranger gives him a second chance to right that wrong, it's not quite what he expected.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 60308
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree

wow what a dream huh  i wanted to read a good hoilday story and this is great

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Home for the Holidays

well thats about the sweetest thing ...hope he means it

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - City Sidewalks, Busy Sidewalks

oh god I was holding my breath there for a while   usually when t arrives its down hill for E/B and they seem to have already reached below sea level

 
Summary:

Grecian Memories Banner

Thanks to candykizzes24 for the banner!!!!

The first seven chapters are the memories of Delia Gallo from October 2003 to present. The story starts out with her memory of being seventeen and revealing some big news to her single mother, Eleni. The chapters will be her memories as the months and eventually years pass until she is reunited with her Grecian summer love, a now infamous Robert Pattinson, though when she knew him he was just plain Rob Pattinson. He was a seventeen year old boy spending the summer with his best mates family in Greece while attempting to hide from the local girls that knew him from the fashion magazines. They had bonded when she hid him in a fishing boat and soon fell into a deep summer love never to speak again, or so they thought. Seven years later when Delia returns to Greece to tend to her grandmother's estate she runs into Rob's best mate who recognizes her. Serendipity leads her back to Rob and into a heap of trouble in the process.

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moral support during the craziness goes to jlhorky without whom I'd LOSE my mind!!!!

 

 

 

 


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 21998
[Report This] Published: December 25, 2010 Updated: January 27, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 7-April 2010 Final Memory

well we just never know how our boy will act but i hope you add clare and his sister to  meet josh at some point   then he will have real live gma 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 6- June 2009

well if she had made it to the dock that day maybe history would have been different he would be a devoted dad I am sure and not some mega movie star...but i bet he would have be happier just to be a dad ...sorry he never got the chance to be there for her... and her mother came shining through for them both this is so sad bit I am sure its get better ...we all know any child of robs would be awesome

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 11-August 2010 Present Day

thing are moving so fast with them.....I like how up front and honest they have been with each other..but all the drama being a new mother that is going to be hard for her to take....having a child in the middle of the press and fan frenzie that is Rob Pattinson.....I hope you stop and give them some one on one bonding before the crazyness drives them apart...

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 11-August 2010 Present Day

ah I knew his parents would be wonderful   but oprah.....girl you do have some vivid ideas  this is lovely

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 9-Rob's Memory of Greece in August of 2003

painful ending but some time thies things are just fated to happen....but now they all are on the same page I hope lets see how they handle all this news now  

 
Arranged Vows by ange de l aube Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 71]
Summary:

 

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Edward's father, the Duke of Devonshire, dies leaving very specific conditions on his will. In order to take possession of his inheritance Edward must marry a woman with a title.

Lady Isabella Swan, daughter of the Earl of Bridgewater is facing serious monetary problems after her father's death. All she has to her name is her title and the house she and her mother inhabit. She's desperate to find a solution to her problems which comes in the form of Edward's marriage proposal. Set in England, 1850.

Banner made by me :)

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 28776
[Report This] Published: December 30, 2010 Updated: January 04, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 17, 2012 Title: Chapter 4: A Storm Is Brewing

historical romances are my favorites ..and so hard to find espically good ones ..this is excelent

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: One Step Forward and Two Steps Back

I have a hug soft spot for historical romance ...its hard to find a good one especialy in the Twilight venue but this has an amazing plot and I am sure it will be worth the wait update when you can and i promise to be a faithful reader and reviewer

 
Summary:

 

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This is the sequel to How to Win Back the Love of Your Existence. It's been nearly two years since we last saw Bella and Edward.  As you may remember, at that time, Bella had just accepted Edward's marriage proposal under the condition they would have a long engagement.  The proverbial honeymoon period of their relationship is coming to an end and with that, some deep seated problems with their relationship are starting to surface. Edward has a hard time telling Bella no--even when he should. Throw in some of those other things that all couples have to get over, i.e. jealousy inducing admirers, differing tastes in music and politics, horny bisexual friends, and a fight for dominance in the bedroom, and you have the background in which Edward is going to have to figure out HOW TO GET YOUR BALLS BACK. And of course all of the Cullens will be there to help him find his way.  EPOV.


Categories: AU Characters: Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 53351
[Report This] Published: January 02, 2011 Updated: June 27, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Turning Point

you always seem to know when I am up and cant sleep...tell her E just how hot and steamy Vampire sex can be then he could really get his vamp on with her and quite being so up tight  

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- The Embargo

with all 4 women putting together a plan to make poor Edward suffer he doesn't stand a chance i cant wait to see who wins this embargo where their sex life hangs in the balance 

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - I'm Mad As Hell...

i say chapter aptly named.....its about time he did something to get his ball back out of her pocket....he has been so afraid of offending her afradi to loose her again he puts up with a lot of her shit  .....i like his new found don't fuck with me attitude ...and angry /Edward sex oh yea I am so in ...he need to bring her to heal and she need to see that she could loose him by taking him for granted ....I hope she care more about him that she is showing right now....she needs a dose of dominate Edward to shake her out of her stupitidy

 




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