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Member Since: June 29, 2009
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Lifted by Looby Luscious Rated: R starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 416]
Summary:

Lifted

Thanks to the amazing frozensoldier for the banner

 

Bella Swan has lived in fear for five years. Her worst nightmare is just about to begin, but will the stranger beside her be able to lift her out of her terror and show her a brand new world?

WARNING: The rating for this story has been changed due to violence in later chapters. I am sorry if this affects some of my readers - I honestly didn't envisage it turning out quite like this when I started it!


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 35648
[Report This] Published: November 13, 2010 Updated: May 11, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

this is kind of getting scary who is bothering her....her x maybe stalking her ....maybe some one that is after edward an old flame   perhaps ....the black rose is a bad omen and the feather oh and thr phome calls     just keep updating  dying to know more   waiting on their first kiss so come on quit holding out on us

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

i can nit ever imagine being hunted like that that was such a neat idea made my heart race but I am so glad someone helped save her from being brutilized and I reallyneed some edward...what that was stressfull



Author's Response:

Don't worry - Edward is back next!!!

Funny how a story runs away - I had no intention of writing a scene like that when I started! And of course, we had to have a wolf save her in the meadow when Edward wasn't around :)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

the holidays were wonderful...so now i can take a deep breath of relief she safe and he loves her ahh.......one more oh!!!!! pleas tell me there is something else brewing in that head of your    i d love to hear about it



Author's Response:

I just uploaded the last chapter today, then there is an epilogue and that's it :(

I have got a couple of stories in mind, but they are both vampire ones, The first is an AU Twilight, which was actually one of the first ideas I ever had, but I kind of got lost part way through. I have finished it in rough and have 10 chapters already beta'ed, so I will probably start putting it up before the summer.

The second one spans the wealth of human history. I have been quite excited about it, but I have told myself that I can't do anything with it until I finish Cimmerian Dawn. That hasn't stopped me writing a couple of chapters though!! lol

I am currently in a bit of a block and struggling to get through the chapter I am writing, but as soon as I figure it out, I'm home and dry!

I would be honoured if you would try them out. I know people have preferences about the stories they read, and I don't know if it's something you would normally look at.

I also have a oneshot that I have written for Fathers Day in June. A Charlie/Billy moment. I was quite pleased with how it turned out.

Hope you like the next chapter!!! x

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg i read every thing..but I have a soft spot for Bella had a baby after edward left her  stories....... i will never forget the banner i saw for PUTP I was a goner....I fell in love with that story & never looked back . i wanted them to use that little girl on your banner for the movie so bad ...but ....we shall see.....I hope you did something for the fandom for tsunimi....that is like the greatest deal in the world ...if not maybe you can join the next auction and i can bid on you to do a story I have great ideas just no time....i do 60 hours a week and 5 kids   i write laundry  list and shopping lists you write books    that ok your a pro   i love your work   and your charcter developement    



Author's Response:

That banner was something else, wasn't it? I couldn't believe it when Paula sent it through to me. Apparently she had so many people talking about that one - more than any other she's done.

I don't know anything about the fandom for tsunami. I see things from time to time on other stories, but I don't know how or where you get involved in something like that. Perhaps you could send me a link?

As for what you do, I think guiding five precious lives into adulthood is about as great as you can get. No-one will ever have a greater influence on them as you, and it's so hard to do it right. I only have one son, who is incredibly precious to me. Sometimes I wish I could do it all again and erase the mistakes I made, but in the end, you do the best you can. Make the most of every day you have with them. They grow up and leave you before you know it. :)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

please tell me you have another story in the wings ready to go... I am just lost with out your beautiful stories I will never feel the same about the elevatorr ever again  see you soon hoprfully



Author's Response:

I have, but they are both vampire ones. One is an AU Twilight, which is the one I shall be posting in a month or so called Cimmerian Dawn. It is all written in rough, 17 chapters in full of which 14 have been beta'ed, so it shouldn't be too long in coming.

The other one will be called the Vampyre Queen, but that is still in the early stages yet.

At least you have an epilogue to look forward to!

As for the elevator - oh to be stuck with Edward (or Rob Pattinson - I'm not fussy!!!)

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

You know how much i will miss spending the day with you but ...as soon as your ready i will be first  in line to read the new work of art   soon.....



Author's Response:

Bless you! I look forward to seeing your name pop up.

I have finished typing the new story, so I just need the last half betaing, although a chapter I struggled to get through needs reworking. My lovely ladies said the writing was fine, but it needed more originality - too much like cannon at the moment, so back to the drawing board!! I'm waiting for inspiration to hit! Once I have that sorted, I shall start to post it.

Until then, take care!

x

 
Summary:

bannerEntry for the Scene Stealers contest.  After James phones Bella and tells her that he has her mother, she tells Alice about the call.  They pick up Edward as planned, and he takes her away to a remote cabin...


Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8191
[Report This] Published: November 17, 2010 Updated: December 27, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 27, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

you hit the target dead on ...no fade to black or inuendo this was a perfect way to tell the story just a bit different



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! I'm so glad you liked it.

 
Disrepair by chy3 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 187]
Summary:

She had the perfect life. Perfect Job. Perfect house. Perfect husband and a baby on the way. She had it all. That is, until one singular moment took it all away...

A story about a love lost and the rocky journey to a new one through trying twists and turns of depression and the lows that go along with it. The path to love was never easy. 

[This is a Bella story. Eventual B/E. Rated M for dark themes and swearing. OOC. If you're not a fan of dark themes, including depression, thoughts of suicide, anything often accompanies depression, graphic descriptions, etc., then this story is not for you. There will be very, very little fluff. Move on if that is your thing.]

 


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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Chelsea, Edward, Emmett, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 93520
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2010 Updated: July 15, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 29, 2012 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Heaven

well that wasnt so bad ...they seem happy and excited to be having a boy



Author's Response:

That they are. :)

M.

 
Sexual Healing by wmrcaz Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 263]
Summary:

Man-whore Edward Cullen is forced into seeing a therapist by his father. When he sees psychologist Dr. Isabella Swan to "deal" with his issues, sparks will fly. What will happen when the only woman Edward's ever really wanted is the one he can't have?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 129835
[Report This] Published: November 22, 2010 Updated: November 10, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Decisions, Decisions

how bout that he does know how to  be on time



Author's Response:

He does, indeed... when it's important to him ;). Thanks for reading!!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Parlez and Parties

ah thats so not fair stopping here we are all dying to know what he has to say



Author's Response:

It may not be fair, but it's necessary. It wouldn't be fair to E to hear his story from B's POV. We need to be inside his head and hear his thought processes as well as his words for the full effect. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
A Toxic Lullaby by miralin Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 182]
Summary:

After a twisted tale comes a toxic lullaby…

Edward admittedly needed a change in his life -  but when said change comes in the form of a temperamental toddler he is forced to turn to his ex for help. Can Special Agent Swan, with a past in law enforcement, find the rightful “owner” of the child. Does she even have to look that far?

THE WARNINGS FOR THIS FANFICTION HAVE CHANGED.  Please be advised that this story is rated NC-17 for language and content, including references to sexual exploitation (photography without consent) and sexual contact involving intoxication (lack of informed consent) that may be construed by some as sexual assault.  Reader discretion is advised.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Completed: No Word count: 81604
[Report This] Published: November 28, 2010 Updated: March 12, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 -...and the result is in!

so what's next i guess we get to see some mad parenting skills right well this ought to be very interesting

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Shaky Hands, Spinning Head, Racing Heart

sometimes with out an Alice there would be no story....with her ploting to get them together they don;t stand a chance ...i just hope the  child survives a few weeks with a bumbling  father and a mother who clearly has better raport with her hand gun than with a diaper ......and the mystery of the real mother ....you know I am hooked right??????



Author's Response:

Alice’s character is a hoot to write and so is Anthony's. Kids are more durable than we give them credit for! Edward needs to smarten up though, before that kid become a sugar addict for real!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - A pitbull terrier and a trembling Chihuahua

so Anthony is edward  and bellas baby right????????    oh please say right if not I will scream cause I feel like I am in the middle of a game of twister



Author's Response:

Nope sorry, Anthony is not Bellas child at all. But sometimes biology is just a minor detail.

 

Thank you for taking the time to rad and review!

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 -Clueing in the Clueless

well we all know that you can not keep anything wawy from alice    so tell him already he will be fine with it one kid 3 kids he will be fine    his mama is gonna kick his ass

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Judgement day

oh my yes if he came to my door beging i give him the shirt off my back   lol

 
Summary:

All Human.  Bella gets knocked up during her senior year of high school, but Edward doesn't believe her.

Thank you to Mehek18 for the banner. Her site can be found here: www.Mehek18.tumblr.com

Recently Reviewed on Indy Fic Pimp - http://indieficpimp.blogspot.com/2011/03/ladytazzs-rec-of-week-328-43.html 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Angela, Bella, Billy, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, James, Jasper, Jessica, Mike, Other Character, Renee, Rosalie, Tanya, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 96724
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2010 Updated: September 09, 2012


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 19, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

well that was just too sweet but i just have not leared to trust him yet either what happens when Tanya finds out he has his own place and shows up and you know she will....... will his horney alter ego surface and his will power to have easy sex  surface

I hope he realizes that one more stike and she will write him off her list of future plans



Author's Response:

We'll have to see if Tanya shows up or not. I don't think she will, but you never know.  Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I really would like to hear a conversation between james and Edward  james need to tell him that it was all lies   and maybe let him know just what a wondeful thing he messed up   maybe even that when he comes home on leave if bellas willing he would try to work things out with her    since the twins will need a father figure in their lives   bet that will put a fire under our boy  let him feels the jelousy of someone wanting o be everyhing to the family he was trying to throw away 



Author's Response:

that would be an interesting conversation! You never know, though, it may be coming down the road. no promises, though.

Thanks so much for reading! My One Shot, Honor Thy Father (which is here and on ff) has been nominated at the Single shot Awards. I would love it if you would please read and vote for me. http://thesingleshotawards.blogspot.com/

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: May 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

there are so many stories where she runs away never telling poor edward about the babay only for him to find out and become a wonderful daddy  this is just so different  i love it

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

well that was an absolutly wonderful chapter ...full of so much hope  for both of them I cant wait to see how she responds to his admission



Author's Response:

I can't, either!  Thanks so much for reading :)

 
Summary:

If there’s one thing Bella Swan knows for sure it’s this; she's a wreck. Living in the shadow of her father’s death has certainly taken its toll on her. With no family and her friends on the other side of the country, her therapist is the only person she can turn to. When she finds a broken, lost little girl hiding in the subway, can they be each other’s saving grace?

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Renee, Rosalie, Seth, Tanya
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: No Word count: 45169
[Report This] Published: December 14, 2010 Updated: March 01, 2015


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: July 30, 2014 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

it seems like a life time ago that I stared to read this ....dant wait to see who her daddy will be ....but I have an idea  great story

 
Summary:

 

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What if the honeymoon scenes weren't just acting? Just a little more NC-17 Robsten lemony goodness inspired by Breaking Dawn filming. This time from Rob's POV.


Categories: Other Characters: Bella, Edward, Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Robsten Lemon Shots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2076
[Report This] Published: December 15, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2010


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

its thing like this that will keep us alll  dying till next november caue i really believe he would do just thst



Author's Response:

How will we survive until then? Fanfic I guess! ;)

 
Taking Flight by marissa64 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 273]
Summary:

Taking Flight Banner

I just wanted to get home from my latest business trip.  But with layovers and flight delays, it was taking much longer than I had planned.

What could I do to occupy my time? A quick trip to the airport shop and a conversation with a stranger and my whole outlook on things took a turn for the better.


Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 173209
[Report This] Published: December 16, 2010 Updated: November 08, 2013


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - The Call Back

i could never imagine meeting him in person ......my  boyfriend braved the crowds when he was filming WFE... i got my people magazine signed   and yes gah!!!!!that would be my  choice of comments    this is lovely by the way

 
Do Over by tkegl Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 304]
Summary:

Do Over Banner

Every Christmas Eve, Edward Cullen sits in a bar and regrets the decision he made ten years earlier that tore Bella from him. But when a chance encounter with a mysterious stranger gives him a second chance to right that wrong, it's not quite what he expected.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 60308
[Report This] Published: December 23, 2010 Updated: December 20, 2011


Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Rockin' Around the Christmas Tree

wow what a dream huh  i wanted to read a good hoilday story and this is great

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Home for the Holidays

well thats about the sweetest thing ...hope he means it

 
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - City Sidewalks, Busy Sidewalks

oh god I was holding my breath there for a while   usually when t arrives its down hill for E/B and they seem to have already reached below sea level

 




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