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Summary:  
Bella and Edward have been pen pals (the traditional kind, pen and paper stuff) for over a decade, but they never met for reasons even they didn’t know. After fourteen years of “courting through the postal service” and not realizing it, Bella gets engaged to Emmett, a fellow lawyer at the prestigious firm of Ateara, Call, and Uley. They move fast, and a wedding is set for a mere four months after they get engaged. Bella invites Edward to the wedding, wanting to finally meet her longtime friend, and when things go sour the night of the rehearsal dinner, Bella, in her shock, ends up in Edward’s arms. And this is all just the tip of the iceberg for these two…
Rated NC-17 for mature sexual content. Little to no bad language.
*banner by enchanted-mind*
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 45 Completed: Yes
Word count: 239223
[Report This] Published: September 21, 2010 Updated: August 27, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Ateara, Call, and Uley
doing a reread trying to remember just when Emmett met with Rose...glad that he did we are also trying to firuer out whos baby this really is since you are being so tight liped about it lol Author's Response: It's not being "tight lipped" lol. I did some research on the topic, and from what I was able to learn, a prenatal paternity test can only happen after about week 18. I didn't want to rush the story, so there was just no way to have the test done yet. It's coming, I promise! Won't be much longer now. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28: Flutters
no what i really thought you would do was not tell us the results this week....... I was holding my breath clear down the page ....this makes me very happy but i knew no matter what that test said that he was still going to be the father .... even if it wasn't biological they keep readin and it will tell you the babys sex too... i hope they do let emmett know i bet he is freeking out wandering yea for you....we are all happy
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: April 02, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: When You Say Nothing At All
well after reading this again I still dont have a clue who this baby belongs to and If edward said the biology doesn't matter than I am willing to let it go ....and you know I am lying right? Look up the word anal in Websters I am so sure that my picture is right next to the word Lol This is making me nuts I just hope Edward wont chang his mind or Emmett wont activly persue this but that what males a good story all the twists and turns Author's Response: I'm torn between being sorry that you're so hung up on this (and I don't mean that in a bad way... I'm thrilled that I've evoked such a strong emotion in you!) and glad that you're so wrapped up in my story. I promise you that results are coming soon. Two or three more chapters at the most and you'll know for sure :). Oh, and everything will wrapped up and explained before I'm done, I promise you that! So stick with me... I don't think you'll regret it.
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: More than Friends
well that went well I was hoping it woild be love at first sight Guess I was wrong
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 19, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: What Happens at SeaTac
well when you start comparing cd mixes to how your heart feels that boys got it bad ...and just where was emmet ???( i hope out with rose) now did i say that out loud
if your going to take thet jump forever i would cringe if the man I was marring say I think whoa stop take a look at the big pitcure the letter the sparks the happy in the eyes dont settle think which man would give it all and shes right she will be ok alone giving her self space to see where this thing with our edward will take her think who is comparing you to a celine dion song yea I thought so do the list compare who knows you the best and dont forget who is the best at sex well you make have to take edward for a spin first but what the heck you want to be fair right did I say that ????
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 03, 2011
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: The First Time
oh god I hate when you do this I will be dying until next update .... but just so we are clear she was still on the pill up to the wedding right cause she was with our boy Emmett and I do remember the last time sex they had so is there a chance it might be Emmetts i know go back aand read the first few chapters right
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Changes
oh he really is being a good sport about this ...most men would yell and blame her for being so careless ....i am sure she didnt think her life is headed in that direction...new home new job new boyfriend this is so exciting ...
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 08, 2011
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Changes
I am so glad he is really coming ...this is a hugh shock to all ..to much to soon but I love stories where they are having a baby can't wait are you going to let us help pick out baby names for them that is so much fun
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: When You Say Nothing At All
oh now come on lets not all panic,,,not sure how the fail rate applies aftern the first missed pill but I really feeel sick that there is this kind of trouble in their newly found happiness.......emmett could be right omg what a beautiful thing for him to say but facts....they have no way of knowing right now none of them I though she said she was with edwards during her most fertil time come on Dr Cullen offer us some insite and I am pretty sure that Em will want to know ...omg again I love this story please up date soon I will go out of my mind till I know
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 14, 2011
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: When You Say Nothing At All
ok so I may be a little more upset about this that I first mentioned and I knew ...I don't know why i am in such schock I knew it was possible lets give Dr cullen all the detailes and she if he can give a clear pictiure if no well we wait
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Forgiveness
well real friends are hard to come by and they are like sisters bellaswarning will hopefully keep her in check ....I am wondering if Emmett will be a problem down the road in some cannon stories our /Rose is infertile this baby could be a problem down the road but in the begining she did say she was withEdward during the days she was ovulating I hope she was acurate I would hate for her to be tied to emmett forever thru a baby emmett could be a big prick and make her life hell till the baby is born what Edward is doing is very noble but if a dna match with emmett it could get ugly
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: June 19, 2011
Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36: Surprise!
that is so beyond being sweet and we know she will love everything
Summary: 
Bella longs to be loved by Edward in every way before she is changed. Edward has agreed to try. On the verge of marriage and forever together, Bella wants to explore their physical love. Will Edward let her?
Set at the beginning of Breaking Dawn.
Banner made by ange de l'aube.
Categories: Breaking Dawn Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Word count: 23067
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2010 Updated: December 01, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 23, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Part III
i am ready now...please hurry back... Author's Response: *giggle* Well you might have to wait a week, but I promise to deliver a full lemon :)
Thanks,
Rhian
xx
Summary: 
Seventeen year old Bella Swan is fascinated by the elusive and mysterious Edward Cullen. Will he be everything she dreamed of? Or more than she bargained for? And how will they find their way when one night changes everything?
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Word count: 75114
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2010 Updated: November 27, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Explanation
well that was a totally different way to view her change ...not jumping right into his arms and jumping him litrally .....I hope she gets him into the woods and throws him up against a tree then shows him really how strong she can be...
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 27, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Transformation
that was amazing very detailed very real Jasper was always my hero
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: August 10, 2011
Title: Chapter 23: Desperation
poor charlie...the opain he must have gone through thinking she was dead all this time ...and her and Jasper well thats just yuck thanks so much for not going there but i really thought the passion and need it both of them woud have taken over ...oh I sure it will happen soon
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Reflection
realyy liking this Edward he seems to want to fill in some of the fade to black places sm put in the story can't wait
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 7: Saturation
what a nice idea waking up in a home you share woih e/c
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Assimilation
i hope she has a change of heart soon...are we alowed to make suggestions on what we want to happen in the future ...on their next hunt together I always thought it would be so sexy after they fed together if she let her new vampire disere take over and take him on the ground she can stay mad at him a while longer but I think once she gets a taste of sex vampire style he will have a hard tim keeping up with her new born needs i am sure he can keep up and well angry sex in the woods ...just thinking out loud Author's Response: The story is actually already written- though I am reworking it a bit as I go. But fear not...the chapter after next has a lemony, steamy release of some of the sexual tension between them. :)
Thanks for the review :)
-Tammy
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 12, 2011
Title: Chapter 12: Assimilation
I really think that the best part of some stories is the personal contact with the Author ..I have had this stored away to read since chapter 3 just gathering chapters when real life lets me I pull these wonderful stories our and catch up...sometime I only have time to read on my I pad from work and forget to review...you sharing your stories with us its such an honor and I feel you deserve a review ...I only save really good stories to read and this has been wonderful....but lemoms are nice and you do them so well Author's Response: Awwww you've made me all smiley lol Thank you so much. And there will be more lemony-ness coming soon :)
-Tammy
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: February 27, 2011
Title: Chapter 13: Assumption
there is never any better chapter that spending time with emmett he is so funny i wish i had a brother just like him always makinf someone laugh and she is right a Volvo with all that money make her tell him she wants the astin Martin that will be to funny
Summary: Bella is Alice's adoptive mother. Edward is her science teacher. What happens when Edward notices something strange about Alice's doodling and calls Bella into a meeting to discuss it? Rated for future chapters and language. 
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Word count: 36020
[Report This] Published: October 01, 2010 Updated: April 11, 2013
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: December 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- A Meeting
this has been a wonderful staring point and the almost kisses a good touch leave us wanting always Author's Response: well a full on kiss wouldve been too good of me! x thanks for reviewing :)
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: January 01, 2011
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Suspicions and Memories
reakky would like to see that drawing i bet she was shocked to her knees Author's Response: yep i'm sure she was. lol. thanks for reviewing x
Summary: A wild ride with a surprising twist.
Categories: Other Characters: Robert Pattinson
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Word count: 1767
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2010 Updated: November 13, 2010
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: In Sleep (Oneshot)
I have had the very same dream just lucky for me his name really is edward lol Author's Response: You're VERY lucky!!
Summary: 
When Edward & Bella's son, Nathan, goes missing it turns their lives upside down. This is the journey they take to find him, & in the process realize everything isn't what it seems. M for language, themes, & future lemons EPOV E/B Eventually NO CHEATING!
Banners by ange_de_l'aube
Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Word count: 152943
[Report This] Published: October 10, 2010 Updated: April 12, 2011
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 Signed
Date: November 18, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Every time I see an update I am hoping for a new chapter i am so anxious to see if there are any sparks left betweeen them once they are living together and to what extent his crazy mother will go to to seperate them for good poor Nathen i hope he can get better with the help of them both Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!
Edward~
First let me start by saying I miss you. Being apart from you is making my
heart break everyday, but I have to stay away, at least until the truth is
out. I know the cops came looking for
me, but I swear to you I didn't do this. I don't know who has set me up, but I
swear it wasn't me. Honestly, if I had to guess, I'd say Bella is behind all
of this. She's so starved for attention she'd kill her own child to get it,
maybe you could refer to someone for that. You shouldn't listen to anything
Garrett has to say, first he confesses and now says it's my fault. It wasn't
me!
I've been away getting more evidence together and once I can prove my
innocence we can be together again. We can start that family you always wanted
to have together.
I love you Edward and I hope you're missing me as much as I'm missing you!
Yours forever, until death do us part, wait for me Edward,
Tanya
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