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Summary:

Rosalie is content to live her vampire life to its fullest, regardless of her resentment of her immortal situation. One day while hunting she comes across a dying man with an innocent face that she cannot resist. In an act of strength, she brings him home to change him into one of them.

How does the vain and selfish Rosalie deal with an irrational newborn vampire who can’t see past his lust for blood to even notice her? Will she be able to swallow her pride and have the patience to stand by him? Will Emmett be the man who can change her life for the better?

All Chapters are Rosalie's POV

Warning: Rated NC-17 for a reason. Some chapters may contain adult language, violence, assault, and sexual content. Lemons in future chapters.

Thank you to my super-efficient Twilighted Beta, Texbelle!

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V&P Awards and Recognition:

  • Mentioned on The Lazy Yet Discerning Ficster Blog
  • Indie Twific Award Finalist Best Canon (WIP) 
  • Sparkle Awards Alice Award Best PreTwilight Second Place
  • Golden Chocolate Awards Best Rosalie and Emmett Runner Up
  • Rec'd and Reviewed on the Altered Lions and Sacrificial Lambs Blog

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Categories: Pre-Twilight Characters: Carlisle, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles, The Vanity and Patience Series
Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes Word count: 192931
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: December 28, 2011


Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: August 06, 2009 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Return

Thanks for this amazing chapter! Oh, the heartache! I can really identify with Rose, showing Emmet the cold shoulder and hurting both him and herself is pure torture!

Her lovebird-comments to piss Edward off are hilarious; though I'm surprised that Edward doesn't feel the need to play Amor for Rose and Emmet. Or not yet? ;)

I'm really excited for what will happen in the next!



Author's Response:

Edward will step in when it is necessary, believe me. Thank you so much for reviewing and enjoying the story!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: August 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Scheming

Naughty Rosie! I really like the way she's teasing Emmet with her new dresses and his reaction wasn't bad either! *g*

The Hale/King pregnancy was quite a wicket twist, though I expected Rose not to let it go so soon after her talk with Edward.

As always I'm waiting to read what's happening next, especially with the dance lesson! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for loving my naughty Rose and playfull Emmett!

as for rose and her human family, she may not take edward's advice so quickly, and realize it too late, but that's all i can say about that. :)

Currently writing chapter 16, as im running a bit behind, but i submitted Emmett's sideshot last night, so keep a look out for Strength and Remorse. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: Lessons

As much as I liked softie-Rose, she's even better when she's plotting against Emmet. Wicked! I supposed she would tease Emmet for the flowers and candles, not just ignore him.

I'm wondering: is Esme using her motherly nature to push Rose a little bit or is she just concernded for her daughter? :)

The "private lesson" and its outcome are great scenes. Poor Thomas, if Emmet gets him. Mean cliffhanger ;)

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you like my Rose! I'd say Esme is doing a little bit of both. :) poor thomas indeed. i hope to not keep people hanging for too long. THanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 28, 2009 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Revelations

Fantastic chapter! Great process of discovering each other's feelings, thoughts and bodies step by step. Great lemons.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the step by step process of their emotional, thoughtful, and physical discoveries! Thank you also for liking the lemons!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: October 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Firsts

Edward with two elks - made me think of naughty Santa... I had tears of laughter in my eyes.

Very romantic chapter and quite realistic concerning Roses nervousness. I love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Edward as a naughty santa!! thats a great idea for that holiday writing contest! lol i'm glad to make you laugh!! and htank you for agreeing w/ my nervous rosalie!

If you haven't already, please vote for your favorite fics such as V&P (up for the Alice Award Best PreTwilight) at the Sparkle Awards. Visit: http://thesparkleawards.webs.com/vote.htm

 

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: Broken Walls

Amazing chapter! You're a genius!

 



Author's Response:

Aww thank you! And htanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: The Question

Only Emmet could think of such a proposal. He's quite the hero. ;)



Author's Response:

yes he is! thank you so much for the great review!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstar
Date: March 05, 2010 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26: Vows

 

 



Author's Response:

thank you!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 13, 2010 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 28: Demolition

Great chapter!

I like the encounter with the werwolves, though Rose seems to me too little concerned for Emmet.

"How to destroy a house in less than one day"...



Author's Response:

thank you so much!

she's concerned when i think she needs to be, but she's overconfident about their chances against the wolves. she hates them to the point that they're not too much of a threat to her.

Glad you liekd the destruction! Thanks for being such a devoted reader!

 
Summary:

Edward leaves Bella, much like the beginning of 'New Moon', however, this time, they are all human and there is quite the twist.  Why did Edward leave Bella?  And what secret is Bella keeping when he leaves?

Can they make a nightmare turn into a dream?

THANKS TO EMERALD_ROSALIE FOR THE ABOVE BANNER AND ATHENALOVE FOR THE BELOW.

 

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Angela, Bella, Ben, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 155064
[Report This] Published: April 14, 2009 Updated: August 05, 2010


Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 47 - Silent Conversation

Great chapter!

Esme definitely is a perfect mother, telling Bella about the uglier parts of motherhood and comforting her.

And there is hope for the little family! Yeah!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!  Esme's wisdom was definitely needed!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 46 - Equals

Charlie is great! Once he opens up, he does much better in showing his feelings than he thinks of himself.

Keep writing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: August 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 35 - Resurfacing

Great chapter! I'm looking forward for Bella's meeting with Charlie, Elizabeth and Edward. :)



Author's Response:

And they are all coming, one by one....  Well, almost.

Thanks so much for reviewing!

 

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 37: Chapter 36 - Throw the Truth

Fantastic chapter! But much too short ;)

Thanks for the update!



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 38 - Band Aid

Charlie's doing great!

You're really making it hard for your readers to be patient until the meet-the-baby/meet-Edward-chapters are up.

Late happy birthday! ;)

Alice and I would give you a huge cake and watch the other Cullens' faces when we tell them that they will be forcing it down ;) And some jewelry with the Cullen crest on it might be nice...



Author's Response:

I am so glad you liked the Charlie chapter.  Don’t worry – not long to E/B now!  Chapter 41, here we come…

Thanks so much for reviewing and for the birthday wishes!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 39 - Happy Town

Yeah, Jasper is really... lovely :-D Considering the shit he's been through, he is in fact the one who can get Bella back on the road, though his methods are, let's say, unconventional.

Esme is a great confidant for Charlie.



Author's Response: Jasper truly knows how to get to the heart of the matter in his own special way! And Esme and Charlie both feel somewhat helpless - they needed to join forces. Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 40 - Taste My Tears

Great chapter. I admire how you switch between writing styles with each character. Emmet is adorable :)

I don't think Bella will forgive Edward right away; there's too much hurt and misunderstandig between them, too many things to make up. Frankly, I'd be pissed if you and Bella make it easy for him ;)



Author's Response: Wow! Thank you! I am glad you can tell the differences... Try not to panic on the next chapter! It will be ok!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: October 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 41 - Pulled Apart/Held Together

I think, I absolutely got what I wanted ;) You found the perfect way for the first meeting of mother and child, and the way you included Edward was just right. Super-Mom Esme is lovable.



Author's Response: I am so glad you feel I did this chapter justice and I'm glad you got what you wanted:) I love me some Esme. You'll get more from her, that I'm sure... Thanks so much for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44 - Fight

Fantastic chapter! I love the sinister desperate mood and I absolutely adore Jasper.



Author's Response:

Jasper knows how to get his point across like nobody’s business!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 20, 2009 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 50 - My Forever

Your cutest chapter ever! Fantastic!



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it!

 

Have a wonderful holiday!

 

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 26, 2010 Title: Chapter 54: Epilogue the Third - Us Together Always

Wow! Emmet is absolutely fantastic! This chapter makes the top three of all the wedding scenes I've ever read.



Author's Response:

Like Bella, I am simple.  We all know what a wedding looks like - I just wanted you to get the gist of this one and concentrate more on the characters.  I'm glad you enjoyed it!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 08, 2010 Title: Chapter 55: Epilogue the Fourth - From Paris to Milan

Jasper is hilarious as always!



Author's Response:

I hope he's half as fun to read as he is to write!

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 57: Epilogue the Sixth - World of Magic

Daddy C is the coolest of the whole family. I love his POV!



Author's Response:

Daddy C rocks out:)

 

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Fractured Hearts by cfmom Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2410]
Summary:

We've all turned the pages on the four blank months in New Moon. Edward left Bella in the woods and told her didn't want her anymore; his arrogance expected that she would just move on with her life. What he never expected was that she wouldn't be able to move on any more than he would. An angry Bella is something he couldn't fathom. What he didn't take into account is that Bella believes that true love is worth fighting for, and she's going to fight to keep Edward and her family. The Cullen abandonment hurt her deeply, but she's turned that pain into rage. What will happen when Bella decides to let them know she's not willing to let them walk away and leave her behind? How will they handle one mere human girl that's extremely pissed off, and willing to do whatever takes to bring them back? The saying "hell hath no fury like a woman scorned" has never rang more true. Bella's angry and on the warpath. Not even a clan of vampires will be able to stop her.

Fractured Hearts

"My heart may have fractured when he left me, but I adamantly refuse to let it shatter. I'm stronger than that, and I'm ready to get nasty. This is going to be a side your family has never seen out of me. I hope you're prepared, because when I'm done taking your stupid, arrogant brother down a few notches, I'm coming after you. Yes, you heard me correctly. You may be small, fast, and graceful, but I'm filled with enough rage at this point to go vampire on your pixie, ballerina ass!"  ~Bella - Chapter 2: Voicemails

Special Thanks to achelle131 for the amazing banner!


Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Alice, Bella, Carlisle, Charlie, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Jacob, Jasper, Laurent, Quil, Rosalie, Victoria
Challenges:
Series: The Dirty, Horny Girls Chronicles
Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 225614
[Report This] Published: April 16, 2009 Updated: October 25, 2010


Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: Guys and Dolls

"Closed until further notice" - how great is that!!! Emmet and Rose are the best!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. You gotta admit - he kinda deserved it at that point. ;) I appreciate the review. :)

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Blue Balls

The girl talks was more than necessary ;)

Jasper bringing Alice coffee is the cutest thing ever, though they're pretending.

Great job with the end of the chapter.



Author's Response:

Can you tell I have a special place in my heart for Jasper and Alice? I just adore them and feel they never get enough love. :) I'm so happy you enjoyed the chapter and thank you so much for the review. I completely appreciate it.

~Lisa

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Rounding Second

The Badass-Bella-show is getting better and better! (At first, I tipped Bedass... I guess, Emmet would have loved this typo lol)

The handcuffs are an excellent idea, and as for Edward to loosen up and let Bella have her way on his body: yammie!

I can't wait to read the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Is it wrong that I'm sad you're all caught up now? Your reviews have been a delight and I hope I see more of them in future chapters. I'm thrilled you enjoyed the handcuffs and the fact that Bella is forcing Edward to observe before he can participate. The next chapter is well under way and has already surprised me a few times. :) Thank you so much for your dedication to this story and for leaving me your thoughts along the way. I appreciate it more than you know.

~Lisa

 




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