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Emily is throwing Sam a surprise party for his 30th Birthday. Against everyone's better judgment, Leah's on the guest list, and she doesn't plan on coming quietly. When she starts to disturb the order of the party, Jacob takes it into his own hands to reign Leah in before she can ruin everything and make a fool of herself. However, Leah doesn't plan on making anything easy, and Jake soon finds that he may be getting in over his head. Sam's birthday cake won't be the only casualty when Leah's provoked.

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Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob
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Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 77282
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2010 Updated: March 09, 2011


Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 06, 2010 Title: Chapter 22: She Said Maybe Never Saves the Day

As always I'm amazed how angry Leah is. Crazy.

The shed behind the Clearwater's house must be some magic make-out place...

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 14: Party Favors

Nessie and Jake pretending to date is defenitely an interesting turn of events. Crazy. Jealousy makes Leah and Jake do very strange things.

I'm waiting for the moment in which Edward gets his hands around Jake's neck and starts to strangle him.

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: June 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 16: "V" Marks the Spot I Want to Be

The fighting between Jake and Leah is great, as always. All the anger and tension breaking free, they even get physical this time.

Hm... I'm starting to question Renesmee's motives for helping Jake. I can't help wondering if she could hear Jake's and Leah's arguement and she nonetheless planned the double-date because she wants a date with Jake for herself...

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 30, 2010 Title: Chapter 21: Icing on the Cake

Jake's conversation with Nessie - he seems to be a bit beside himself.

Leah - she's so angry, even when she's contend with her situation. I can so imagine Sue's reaction to everything. Great!

"Leah, we should get married." - I really laughed my ass off! Jake always has to exaggerate!

Keep writing; I love your story!

 
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Cake For Three

Great chapter title. Even better chapter.

I always love how the emotions rise between Leah and Jake, how they seem to be fighting even in peaceful situations.

Sam's attempt to apologize - nice move, shows that he's sorry and actually a nice guy who didnt't have a choice in whom he loves; but he's way too late.

I'm sitting here, already nervously awaiting the next chapter. Please let her be pregnant!

 




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