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Penname: kalanthia [ Contact]
Real name: kalanthia
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Member Since: June 27, 2009
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Summary: 
Bella didn't make it to Edward in time in Voltera. After faking her death and moving in with the Cullen's, Bella shuts down and buries herself in her grief. Will the Cullen's be able to pull her out? When her feelings change for a certain Cullen, how will she handle it? Will she be able to pull herself out of the darkness or will the guilt tear her apart?
Categories: New Moon, AU Characters: Bella, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Word count: 47131
[Report This] Published: September 02, 2009 Updated: November 21, 2009
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Bliss
Cute and funny chapter!
"Did you kids have fun?" - Clueless Esme and Carlisle are great.
Always count on Emmet to embarrass Bella :D
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: October 02, 2009
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: And the Walls Cave In
Great chapter!
Alice returns! I knew something like this would happen! So I guess she's now with this Stefan, having foreseen that Jasper would move on with Bella.
You had me close to tears at the beginning *sigh*
But we all know there is a cure for Bella in a house full of vampires... :)
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: October 18, 2009
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Newborn
Bella inheriting Edward's gift? LOL
I hoped for a longer conversation between Alice and Bella...
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed  
Date: October 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Family Problems
Interesting twist.
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: October 30, 2009
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14: The Meadow
Great chapter! Nice appearance of Jake.
I'm just as anxious as Bella to find out what Alice and Jasper decided.
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: November 01, 2009
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Decisions
Great chapter with intense emotions. I like it.
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: November 04, 2009
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Getting a Grip
In-the-middle-of-sex-cliffie? Mean.
But I like the chapter anyway ;)
Summary:
Summary: Bella Swan has seen more than any human is allowed to. She had once been the target of a bronze haired vampire. That one time she was saved. But that was long time back…
Now the vampire is back, more determined than ever.
The deadly game of predator and prey begins again on the night of Halloween. Bella is out for a bit of fun and dancing, but it soon turns into a dance with death…
(NOTE: The title is in French, so no typos there. It Is Danse, not Dance).
WARNING: Contains explicit sexual situations, profanity, some violence, and a Dark Edward.
Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Word count: 20300
[Report This] Published: November 29, 2009 Updated: April 22, 2010
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: January 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Fantastic, each of the three parts. Scary and erotic at the same time.
Please continue writing!
Summary: Now Complete!
Bella’s blood was just too tempting to be ignored. In this version of Twilight, Edward takes Bella on a sadistic journey with his monstrous side. While Edward drags her around the world, barely keeping a step ahead of his frantic family, Bella battles the monster for possession of the gentler vampire inside her captor. EPOV.
Winner of the Faithful Shipper Awards for best Alternate Universe.
Winner of The Vampies, Twilight Vampfic Awards for Best Dark Vamp.
Winner of the Immortal Sin Awards for Best Darkward and Hottest Dark Vamp Fic!
Thank you Lace for the Banner!
“There was no other blood like this. Once she was gone, it would no longer be within my grasp. But if I stopped now, she would heal. Her body would make more. The blood would replenish. I could drink again. The promise of more – it was the only incentive that could have caused me to stop.”
Categories: Twilight, AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes
Word count: 249263
[Report This] Published: December 21, 2009 Updated: August 28, 2010
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: April 11, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Desperation and Despair
I'm impressed who much crazier Edward gets with every chapter.
If Torture Bella was his imagination - wicked!
The fight between Fantasy Bella and Sand Bella is great - I'd give a point to Sand Bella for being made of microscopic stone fragments - that brings her closer to a vampire's stone like skin. Author's Response: Excellent point! Thank you for your review!
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: April 02, 2010
Title: Chapter 1: Bite and Run
Very interesting so far. Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: April 03, 2010
Title: Chapter 5: Touch and Take
Amazing!
I love how you capture Edward's mood swings. Great suspense and great chapter endings! Author's Response: He is a moody thing, isn't he? Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: April 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 6: Fight and Flight
I love Edward all desperate and evil! Great chapter! Author's Response: Isn't he a fun little nutcase? :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: April 09, 2010
Title: Chapter 17: Choose and Lose
Emmet - great. Rose - even better. I think I can guess what story she will tell Bella.
In the end I even felt sorry for Edward. I might be the one having Stockholm syndrome...
Author's Response: That's 'cause he's so cute when he's sad! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: May 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 22: Mend and Bend
Great chapter! I love how you describe all the facettes of Edward's insanity and irrationality. Poor Carlisle, but in Edward's mind it made sense to attack him. Author's Response: There's not a lot of sense in that head. :)
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: June 20, 2010
Title: Chapter 27: Pause and Persuade
Amazing how you describe Edward's mind falling more and more apart and you're able to enhance his memory loss.
I like the scene best in which he can't remember the song he wrote for Bella.
But still he is able to plot an escape from his family.
Will he remember that he's not allowed to kill a human or will he try to hurt Charlie?
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: July 14, 2010
Title: Chapter 30: Regain and Resign
An almost cute guest appearance of Demetri... Who would have guessed one of the Volturi guards could be a nice guy? (I have to admit I like him too...)
Edwards state of mind seems to become clearer, but he also feeds the monster inside his mind. His addiction to Bella's blood has definitly become worse.
Evil cliffhanger. I like it!
Have a nice vacation!
Summary: Jane has been the Volturi's loyal servant for centuries. She is feared by vampires throughout the world for her ability to inflict unbearable pain with a thought. Jane was only ever concerned with maintaining her position as Aro's favorite among the Guard--until she saw a human who stole her heart at first sight. David Cain is a hardened soldier who knows the horrors of war. He copes by never looking back and never planning ahead.
Jane and David meet under extraordinary circumstances, and their souls are irrevocably intertwined. Can two lost souls find redemption, or will their collective pasts destroy them both?
Rated NC-17 for language, graphic violence, references to torture and some sexual content.
Big thanks to *Beautiful Liar* for my awsome new banner!
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Alec, Alice, Aro, Bella, Carlisle, Demetri, Edward, Emmett, Esme, Felix, Jacob, Jane, Jasper, Other Character, Renesmee, Rosalie
Challenges: Series: The Volturi Series
Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Word count: 107454
[Report This] Published: December 28, 2009 Updated: July 28, 2012
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: December 06, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Debriefing
Great chapter!
Jane and Emmet fighting, Bella thinking about Edward without his messy hair - hilarious!
Summary:  Jasper is a war weary soldier burdened by the weight of eternity. Edward is an uncomplicated high school student content to hide his sexuality. Together can Jasper find something to live for and Edward discover some things are worth dying for? E/J Slash AU/M.
Nominated for Best Overall in The Vampies: http://twificpics.com/vampawards/
Winner of Best Slash and Best Non-Canon Pairing in The Vampies!
Nominated in 8 categories for the 2nd round of the Slash Awards:
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WINNER of Best Vampire in the Slash Awards!
Rated M for language, sexuality, graphic violence.
Categories: AU Characters: Edward, Jasper
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes
Word count: 165328
[Report This] Published: January 19, 2010 Updated: January 24, 2011
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: May 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Eternity in an Hour
The first move! Yes! Very beautiful angsty chapter. Author's Response: Thank you so much! Sweet brash Edward is hard to resist!
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: April 24, 2010
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: When You Wake Tomorrow
Oh, wow. I've just finished reading all chapters at once.
I love the story and how your writing style both captures the teenager character of Edward and Jasper's more mature personality. Author's Response: I'm glad you found the story and are enjoying it! I'm on an every other week update schedule so far, so you should be getting the next chapter fairly soon. Thank you for reading and taking the time to review! I appreciate it!
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: May 10, 2010
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Sniffing the Twilight
Yeah, the first touches and the sort-of first exchange of feelings :)
I like that Jasper knows the limits of his self-control, but is willing to test the limits and to give friendship and love a chance. Author's Response: What a nice way of putting it. :) Thank you.
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: June 05, 2010
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Burning Bright
I love how you describe Jasper's emotional confusion and his fright that he may hurt Edward. Author's Response: Thank you. :) Jasper really struggles. I'm always yelling in his ear: give in!! ;-) I appreciate you taking the time to review!
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: June 22, 2010
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: It Shall Be You
Nice twist to start using Twilight scenes. I like what you've made out of them.
It's great that Jasper's getting more couragous and decided to tell Edward his secret. Though after the ending he hasn't really got a choice.
Author's Response: Thank you. I've actually snuck in Twilight scenes before, plus will again in the future. I'm glad you're liking them. (I couldn't resist the ravioli! Haha.) As Carlisle says, we always have a choice. I can't say anything more at this point, but more coming soon!
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: July 31, 2010
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Savage Blood's Obscenity
I absolutely love the way you describe Jasper's angst and despair. My favorite part of this chapter is Carlisle's attempt to reason with him.
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: September 04, 2010
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: The Multiplying Universe
Yes, finally he's made up his mind!
I think the true beauty of Jasper's character only shows when he's desperate and suffering. Great chapter!
Summary:
Emily is throwing Sam a surprise party for his 30th Birthday. Against everyone's better judgment, Leah's on the guest list, and she doesn't plan on coming quietly. When she starts to disturb the order of the party, Jacob takes it into his own hands to reign Leah in before she can ruin everything and make a fool of herself. However, Leah doesn't plan on making anything easy, and Jake soon finds that he may be getting in over his head. Sam's birthday cake won't be the only casualty when Leah's provoked.
*Banner by Reachingasifall
Categories: Post-Breaking Dawn Characters: Jacob
Challenges: Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Word count: 77282
[Report This] Published: March 11, 2010 Updated: March 09, 2011
Reviewer: kalanthia Signed
Date: June 01, 2010
Title: Chapter 15: Don't Forget the Mix
Hilarious! Great chapter!
I love how angry Leah is and how she reacts to what Jake sort of made Sue say. In contrast to that Jake seems to be a careful plan maker though he has help.
Are Bella and Edward also going to be at the party? I'm still wondering how Edward copes with his daughter being Jake's girlfriend, even if it's fake.
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