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Penname: mountainlion718 [Contact]
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Member Since: June 24, 2009
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Coincidental Major by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 716]
Summary:

A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 185715
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2011 Updated: July 05, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35: The Proposal - A Future-shot

So happy for them, thank you so much for sharing this amazing story. I look forward to reading more from you in the future

 
Misery Business by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

When snarky lead singer Bella falls for a sexy bartender, is it a match made in heaven? Or will his girlfriend throw a wrench into the works?  A One Shot Soundtrack Contest entry based on Paramore's song, Misery Business.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5091
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2011 Updated: January 27, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Misery Business - One-shot

Great one shot! Love Bella's attitude, she knows what she wants and goes for it!

 
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As the 2011 awards season begins R/K find the time for some sweet lovin' behind the scenes. The People's Choice Awards are written in RPOV. The Golden Globes are written in KPOV.

Robsten RPF as always. NC-17 for lemons and language!

 


Categories: Other Characters: Kristen Stewart, Robert Pattinson
Challenges:
Series: Robsten Lemon Shots
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4354
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2011 Updated: January 31, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: People's Choice Awards and Golden Globe Awards

GREAT JOB AS USUAL! lol love you little insights ;)

Author's Response:

Oh wow, thanks! I appreciate that a lot! :)

 
Summary:

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Bella finds herself in a position she'd never dreamed of - homeless and panhandling with her daughter on a street corner praying for a miracle on Christmas Eve. Will her prayer be answered? AU/AH, ExB. A little holiday gift to you all.

~ Beautiful banner by Robrator ~


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward, Renee
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6011
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2011 Updated: January 28, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

beautiful story! great job!

Author's Response:

Thanks mountainlion718 for stopping by long enough to read and review! I'm so happy to hear that you found it a beautiful story and think I did a great job. I really appreciate your words.

Hugs,
Mal

 
Adeste Fideles by KitsuShel Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Bella returns home for Christmas for the first time in 5 years. Who awaits her when she arrives?

My one shot written for The Southern FanFiction Review's Countdown to Christmas.

Rated M for lemony goodness.

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6089
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2011 Updated: January 30, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Adeste Fideles

great one shot! was he waiting for her all that time!? he's so sweet!

 
Wild by PeppahLouie Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1688]
Summary:

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A recently widowed Bella moves to Seattle to start a new life. Upon reconnecting with her friend Alice Cullen, Bella meets her brother and business partner, Chef Edward Cullen. Celibate by choice for two years, what will happen when Edward finds himself undeniably attracted to the sexy new Bella that Alice helps create?
**WINNER OF 5 SUNFLOWER AWARDS: Best Bella, Best Alice, Best All-Human, Best Drama, Best Romance**
**Fic of the Week at The Lemonade Stand, September 2011**


Categories: Twilight, AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 49 Completed: Yes Word count: 435439
[Report This] Published: January 29, 2011 Updated: December 11, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: 10 - Slumber and Awakening

Alice planned this all very nicely...lol. Now I can't wait to see how Edward is going to act around her....

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: 13 - Moving Forward

Things are heating up, I love his 180, he's so expressive now :). James better keep his filthy paws to himself!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 22, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: 17 - Sunflower of My Life

nope, i wouldn't either....lol

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: 9 - Small World

these girls are so evil!....i love it, wait till Alice finds out what happened with Mike.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: 7 - Why He is the Way He is

Yeah, Edward is screwed, and Alice is the little devil with the pitchfork....lol

Author's Response:

Ya can't fight fate...

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 48: 48 - Outtake 2: Shopping for Bella's Birthday Gift

love the outtake! good luck in the vote!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 41: 41 - Caught

No way! Charlie and Jake paid Renee back! She just grazed Edward in the head right....that was scary! Jazz was awesome, but i'm dying to know what whas in his wallet!!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: 15 - Anticipation

3 weeks!?!?! is he out of his ever-lovin mind!? she's gonna think he's having 2nd thoughts, Jared is coming to dinner, this should be a dinner to remember.......

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: 8 - The Things You Learn at Brunch

poor boy is being tortured....lol, can't wait for the pool party

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 09, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: 6 - The Reveal

yes!, just the reaction i was looking for....lol! i can just see him avoiding her to keep fighting the attraction

Author's Response:

Oh, he will try... but some forces are irresistable :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: 28 - Goodbye Renee

omg!, is there any way to recall the transfer!?!?! talk about an uber BITCH!!!! so glad Bella saw her true colors 1st hand

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 36: 36 - Big Balls

Loved the proposal!!! I dare any of those yahoos to even think of interrupting!!!! The only one left to round out the undesirables is Renee..... Wonder where she is??????

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 35: 35 - Adding Thickener

Renee?!?!?! How'd she get in?? That's freaking scary......

 
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Date: December 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 47: 47 - Outtake 1: Emmett Meets Rosalie

omg! poor Rose! thank god for Emmett

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 18, 2011 Title: Chapter 39: 39 - Mise en Place

The Swan was Charlie!!!!! yes? omg Edward! Hurry!!!! those 2 are the sickest people ever!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: 14 - Celebrations and Epihpanies

awesome chapter! ok what is Renee's deal, Bella can't ask a question without her getting all defensive???? what's she hiding? and i got a little freaked out with the person watching Edward by his car and whoever opened Bella's door . they had such a good time at the game and the party!!! i think Jazz will be a big help in the future......just saying ;)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 29: 29 - Pay Up, Pixie

Damn, I can't believe Renee found and took her tip stash...... There's no way to get that back right?........:(. Can't wait fornthe trip to Forks!!!!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: 12 - Smooth Moves

I'm going to kill whoever walked in there!...lol OMG! Edward has finally seen the light!...lol damn, i love his total 180!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 40: 40 - The Chase

i'm so worried for Bella, those 2 are serious mental cases!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 42: 42 - To the Plate, and Garnish With Lemon

great chapter, so sad Billy is going to die :( i knew Edward would freak if Bella was away from him or he couldn't find her

Author's Response:

Thanks! Billy's death became inevitable for me after the accident... but he will be in a better place with his wife and son and Charlie.
I've really appreciated all your reviews :)
Peps

 




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