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Penname: mountainlion718 [Contact]
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When Bella opens her dance studio right next to Edward's bar, will Edward hate her...or will he fall for the girl next door? BxE, AH, OOC, rated M for naughty language and behavior.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: No Word count: 161165
[Report This] Published: January 16, 2011 Updated: May 08, 2012


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

woo hoo, go Edward!....lol now what's Bella gonna do? bet she won't be avoiding him anymore

Author's Response:

Next chap up soon.... yeah, it's hard to avoid someone who works next door ;)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 31, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

ARO'S A DEAD MAN! how is she gonna keep him away, both their places are in jeopardy if they retailiate against Aro....... Edward was so sweet with her, please tell me this changes things!

Author's Response:

Aro....he's a nonfactor for now.  He won't come up much for a while.  This changes things....but slowly.  Keep reading, you'll see.  ;) 

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Bellerina & Barman.....so cute!! good the friendship is starting :) can't wait for those drunk texts....lol!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for being a faithful reviewer!  :)  Drunk texts coming up in a couple of chaps....lol

xoKathy

 
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Date: February 03, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

ok, that went better with Kate than i thought it would. now we just have to declaw and muzzle Tanya......lol that was such a nice gift he gave her, very sweet!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 04, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

ugh!, see, he's trying to be good and be her friend 1st and then it back fires on him, he should have just grabbed and kissed her again ;) i hope he wond do anything stupid with another girl. But she's at fault too cause if she has feelings for him and didn't say anything or act on them, how's he supposed to know!

 
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Date: February 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

omg, these girls are devious! poor Edward's head is gonna spin, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hi, bb!  Thanks for continuing to review!  You are the most faithful and I really appreciate it!  Yeah, Edward's in for it next chap.... just put it in the queue, so it should be up soon!  :)  Happy weekend!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 05, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

dammit Edward! this better spur you into action. Boy is Emmett pissed!, i wonder if Edward will find out where they were before Emmett gets his surprise.... love this updates!

 
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Date: February 07, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

hmmm, talk about temptation...lol, She's crying about Seth?!?! isn't that her one and only??? i guess he'll tell her his feelings in the morning? another great chapter :)

Author's Response:

Thanks for always reviewing!  Next chap is up.... hope you like it

 
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Date: February 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

YES!!!!! he did it! i hope now she understands why he did all those things for her. and oh now I understand about Charlie. he took such good care of her, Rose would be impressed :)

 
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Date: February 14, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

:) YAY! very nice 1st date. I think Bella will go back and get him those other pictures from Pikes Place right??? He doesn't like blue???? really? omg is Edward gonna walk in on the girls pole dancing tomorrow?! i think he'd pass out...lol!

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading & reviewing!  Edward won't see her pole dancing... tomorrow. ;)  xxKathy

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 01, 2011 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

lol...take that Tanya! :D i was about to smack him for acting like that with her! ugh, Mr, jump to conclusions! Happy 40th! hope you had a great time!

 
She Waited For Me by Rage88 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

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Edward has been in prison for four years. He made sure not to keep Bella hanging on, not allowing any contact, but now he has been released and wants to know what is waiting for him on the outside.

AU - Human

Romance/angst - Bella/Edward


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3008
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2011 Updated: January 24, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: She Waited for Me (One-shot)

Great story, I do hope you continue it, would love to know why Edward was sent to jail, and how B & E's talk went

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing :)

I'm in middle of exams at moment but I do have back story and future story so hopefully post them soon

 
Summary:

Finally graduating with her Ph.D., Bella needed to shed her dull sneaker and flats image.  She wanted heels. Roberto Cavalli heels. Stillettos.  Would they be enough for even her friend Edward to notice?  One-shot written for the PostSecret Prompt Contest. AH

 

The Cavalli Connection

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Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6443
[Report This] Published: January 22, 2011 Updated: February 25, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The Cavalli Connection

great job on this! loved it!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

 
Summary:

Isabella struggled to make a name for herself as a sports reporter. Edward worked hard to make it to the professional level. But somehow, along the way they fell.

Included in Smut Monday compilation


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5632
[Report This] Published: January 24, 2011 Updated: February 12, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 21, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The One that got Away

love this! so hot! i'm glad they found each other again

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: The One that got Away

great one shot! especially with Edward he hockey player..lol! great job! loved it!

 
Coincidental Major by m7707 Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 716]
Summary:

A tale about a hockey-playing boy who loves his girl. This is Edward's story from Major Misconduct.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 35 Completed: Yes Word count: 185715
[Report This] Published: January 25, 2011 Updated: July 05, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 29, 2011 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Ringing The Pipe

:( i hate that he's hurting so much.....but glad he has the positive outlook and determination to recover

 
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Date: March 30, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: Breakaway

he finally got his wish :) i can't tell you just how much i love this story and of course the original! love it!!!!

 
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Date: April 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Shutdown

Yeah, he'd be crazy to try and kiss her in front of the chiefs house....lol

 
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Date: June 26, 2011 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32: Delay Of Game

Ugh, that's the worst when you are trying to fight in you dreams and can't get your body to do what you want....

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 15, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Face Wash

these 2 are so perfect for each other. their fumbling and stammering are too cute

 
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Date: April 06, 2011 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Dangler

Love his internal ramblings....lol. he handled Charlie's questions well ;)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Apple

ok Edward, now you got your advice, go put it to good use......go get your woman :)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 13, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Flow

i don't think he could've asked for a better 1st date, well the kiss yeah, but all in good time....;)

 
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Date: March 02, 2011 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Grinder

nothing can go right for this boy...lol

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 27, 2011 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Sauce

that boy is a puddle of goo....lol even spending time doing little everyday this can mean so much :)

 




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