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Penname: mountainlion718 [Contact]
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Summary:

Seventeen year old Bella Swan is fascinated by the elusive and mysterious Edward Cullen. Will he be everything she dreamed of? Or more than she bargained for? And how will they find their way when one night changes everything?


Categories: AU Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 75114
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2010 Updated: November 27, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Fusion

:) great ending! I'm gonna miss this though......I love the reaction to the mark and his venom.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Fusion

:) great ending! I'm gonna miss this though......I love the reaction to the mark and his venom.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Fusion

:) great ending! I'm gonna miss this though......I love the reaction to the mark and his venom.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: October 25, 2011 Title: Chapter 27: Fusion

:) great ending! I'm gonna miss this though......I love the reaction to the mark and his venom.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 25: Devotion

i totally agree with you A/N. now she can let her new family in to help her thru all this. Does Edward also now understand the way Alice understands about Bella and Jasper????

 
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Date: May 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 19: Desolation

Poor Charlie :(. I hope he'll be ok

Author's Response:

Hang in there- things will work out for Charlie and Bella in the end. And not in the way you might think :) 

 

Thanks for the review!

 

Tammy

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 11, 2011 Title: Chapter 24: Emancipation

heartbreaking........ :( is Edward coming back??? please tell me he left just to cool down....

 
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Date: May 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Fascination

great beginning! love this!

 
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Date: May 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 2: Possession

um....he kinda left out some key info......

 
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 4: Transition

is she going to reject him after her change? i hope not, he loves her so much, yes he went about it the wrong way, but vamps senses are so heightened he just went on instinct

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 6: Explanation

yup.....she hates him.....:(

 
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Saturation

he's trying....... :( she's not gonna let him off the hook though anythime soon

 
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 9: Confrontation

DAMN, talk about a knife in the heart!

 
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 11: Connection

but will she be play hard to get or will she be malicious about it

 
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 14: Friction

HUH? What does he mean????

 
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Date: May 17, 2011 Title: Chapter 17: Convocation

i'm gonna cry :( she needed to cry and mourn...

Author's Response:

Thank you SO MUCH for all the reviews :) Its awesome that you took the time to let me know your thoughts. Glad you are enjoying it- the next chapter is just awaiting approval.

 

Warmly,

 

Tammy

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 23, 2011 Title: Chapter 18: Fabrication

he's calling Charlie?!?!!? can't wait to hear that conversation. has Bella sofeten up at all towards Edward???

Author's Response:

She is slowly getting there- but dont get too excited yet. They still have a few major bumps in the road to get through before they will be able to truly see eye to eye. 

 

Thanks for the review :) 

 

Tammy

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 20, 2011 Title: Chapter 20: Progression

Progress, progress, progress!!! Now if can only continue :). She must be so happy with her things :)

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 10, 2011 Title: Chapter 23: Desperation

omg, i have no words......talk about confusion and pain. Did Alice see this happening, Is Edward going to forgive her, Is Bella EVER going to forgive him. and now add Charlie......he's not going to go away quietly....

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28, 2011 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue

great ending, that was such a sweet moment with Charlie *sniff* wonderful story!

 
Summary:

After being dragged to a baseball game by her best friend, Bella Swan meets handsome first baseman, Edward Cullen with the help of a rogue foul ball. There's something about him that she can't put out of her head, and apparently neither can he.


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Bella, Edward
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 16412
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2010 Updated: November 20, 2010


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 20, 2010 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes! Very good 1st date!!! He's so sweet, they should have a good time on Wed.

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 03, 2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

great story, so glad i took bellamarie117's rec! can't wait for the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I'm glad she's going for it! Their texting is too cute. Can't wait for the date !!

 
Crash Into Me by eibbil Rated: NC-17 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 128]
Summary:

A long overdue trip back home turns into something unexpected for Bella Swan, Hollywood's It Girl. Finally, the tireless PA Alice is able to get her best friend and boss to get some much needed rest and relaxation. Well, as much relaxation as one can get between hospital visits. And what does Alice's wickedly handsome surgeon of a brother have to do with things?

 


Categories: AU-Human Characters: Alice, Bella, Edward, Emmett, Jacob, Jasper, Rosalie
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 50940
[Report This] Published: October 07, 2010 Updated: April 12, 2011


Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02, 2010 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Angela is great...lol now Edward can really turn up the charm

Author's Response:

And he is a charming little bugger, isn't he?

Thanks for reading, and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 16, 2011 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

oh no Edward! Jacob, you better not hit him back!!!!!! so just because Alice doesn't want Esme to gloat, she's gonna dump Jasper??? is she mental!

Author's Response:

Heheheheehee! Only time will tell!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 




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